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07th Expansion - haze

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Kitsunemimi
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Joined April 2009
Kitsunemimi
[Less than Three]:
02:30:924 (2,3) - Strange looking stack. You can probably reposition (3)'s tail towards the right side.
02:33:798 (2,3) - ^
02:35:235 (1,2,3) - If you did the above, you'll have to reposition this as well. Here, I would put (1) on top of the previous combo's (3), then flip (2) and put that under, and position it near the first note of the next combo.

[Lanttu is moe]:
Nothing :o

[Shiirn sucks at mapping]:
00:53:020 (4,1) - It appears you weren't mapping with distance snap, so it's okay to move this away from (3) a little, since they're touching.
Actually there are quite a few sets of notes touching in this map so it probably doesn't matter. You can go ahead and fix them if you want though, of course.
02:06:493 (1,2,3) - Overlap on these notes is sort of bad. Try spacing them out a bit.
Aside from the overlaps and (a little) inconsistent spacing, map looks fine.

[Natteke is a'trollin']:
AR seems a little high.
02:16:912 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - When you see it...

Oh... Derp, that's it. Well, that's probably one of the shortests mods I've had in a while, although I really don't think I should be getting all nazi with these anyways. Good map~
Natteke
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Joined August 2009
Natteke

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Natteke is a'trollin']:
AR seems a little high. U mad. It would be high for a 120 bpm song but not 167.
02:16:912 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - When you see it... I smile at you!
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
It's an Azuremod.

Blue = Suggestion Red = You Herped/Fix this

[Less than Three] (reminds me of a Becky Song)
00:39:546 (3) - Where it is now, it doesn't maintain the same spacing compared to the other notes in the combo. I suggest moving it down Three grids and Right two or three, to make it all lovely like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108324
00:45:295 (4) - Similar story here, but if you move it you'll need to respace everything else that follows, probably. oh, conundrum.
01:14:037 (3) - Again Here, although This is quite similar to the first one, it can be fixed moving it three grids up and two to the left.
01:27:690 (4) - New Combo Here?
01:30:744 (1) - Should optimally end on the White Tick 1/2 before it, Doesn't sound good ending on the red one, there.
01:57:151 (3) - Again with the Spacingu.


Other than that, sexy.

Three days later.....

[Lanttu is Moe]
01:30:564 (1) - Again; This slider should really end on the White Tick 1/2 a note earlier. It doesn't fit on Red. After playing it instead of sleepwatching, this actually works. Nevermind what I said earlier.

other than that, this is looking good. Went back through the map again, but there's really nothing to question here. Nice job :D

[Shiirn Sucks at Mapping]
00:56:792 (2) - Perhaps move this note a little closer to the previous Slider end? It matches in with the next combo's spacing too if you move this note down a few grids and to the right http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110041
01:04:696 (1,2,3,4) - A minor suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110044
01:17:630 (1) - I'd move the end sliderpoint left two grid points; It lines the end of the slider up with the other slider's end.
01:27:331 (4) - Sudden strange spacing change in a combo?
02:00:385 (6) - Move 6 Left two grids so it stays in line with 2 and 4.

Other than that, it's good.

[Natteke is a 'Trollin] (where's my Bonds Parts'Teke :( )
02:16:912 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - lol

Nothing to see here, really. Excellent job, as always.


It's a pretty good mapset, all it all. Nice names.
Last edited by Azure_Kite , edited 2 times in total.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Lanttu is Moe]
01:30:564 (1) - Again; This slider spinner should really end on the White Tick 1/2 a note earlier. It doesn't fit on Red.
But I think it sounds great on that tick, hear that little cute kawaii sound there? >:
lolcubes
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lolcubes
Hi there.

[General]:
  1. Not a huge deal, however I had much less mistimed hits with offset 30. Also the beats sound much more accurate (custom claps @<3 match the music much better).
  2. Missing preview point.
[<3]:(teehee)
  1. For starters I didn't like this diff very much but only cause of a few weird random sliders and chaotic combos. I will say which ones I don't like and which ones shouldn't be there in the first place as I go.
  2. AR-1. It's easy enough with AR5, but AR5 shouldn't be used in easy diffs imo.
  3. 00:40:265 (4) - New combo. Remove NC from 00:41:702 (1).
  4. 00:43:139 (2) - New combo. Also I don't like this slider. Rather split it into 2 1/1 sliders. If you do that, consider changing 00:44:576 (3,4) into a redtick returner you used already, not a necessity though, variety is good.
  5. 00:52:121 (4) - New combo. Consistency.
  6. 00:54:277 (1) - This shouldn't exist. It sounds weird and the position couldn't be more weird. Place the note 00:55:714 (2) at this timeline, and move this slider to 00:54:636. Leave the current new combos as they are now. Also place a whistle at the start of the slider. This makes much more sense to me.
  7. 00:57:511 (3) - New combo here, remove NC from 00:58:948 (1), consistency reasons.
  8. 01:00:385 (3) - New combo here, remove NC from 01:02:181 (1), consistency reasons.
  9. 01:03:618 (2) - New combo.
  10. 01:06:133 (5) - New combo. Remove NC from 01:07:930 (1).
  11. 01:09:008 (2) - New combo.
  12. 01:14:756 (4) - New combo, remove NC from 01:16:193 (1).
  13. 01:17:630 (2) - New combo.
  14. 01:26:253 (3) - New combo.
  15. 01:29:127 (6) - New combo for consistency. Also I like the new combo on the next slider, brings a change, so don't remove it.
  16. 01:57:870 (4) - New combo. Remove NC from 01:59:666 (1).
  17. 02:00:744 (2) - New combo.
  18. 02:03:618 (5) - This note looks awfully misplaced. Swap it with slider 02:03:978 (1). Leave the combos on them as they are now and don't forget to put a whistle on the slider start. Like this it should sound much better as the slider follows the melody.
  19. 02:06:852 (4) - New combo.
  20. 02:15:115 (4) - New combo.
  21. 02:20:864 (3) - New combo.
[Lanttu is moe]:
  1. AR-1? AR6 looks quite tough for a "Normal" diff.
  2. 00:33:978 (2) - Why not use claps for the start and the end? You could also make the end slightly more silent than the start though, would fit the beats nicely.
  3. 01:00:385 (1) - Whistle at start?
  4. 01:09:008 (1) - Remove the clap at the end, sounds weird. (doesn't follow the background beat either)
  5. 01:14:756 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:193 (3) - ^
  7. 01:21:942 (3) - ^
  8. 01:30:205 - Add a note?
  9. 01:42:960 (1) - Add whistle to the end as well, sounds really good.
  10. 01:47:630 (3) - This slider looks cool but I think this could be better: Try ending it at 01:47:990 instead, and add another slider at 01:48:349 - 01:48:888.
  11. 01:50:505 (3) - ^ Same deal as above, however I like the variety, so instead I suggest that you pick either that or you add a note at 01:51:762.
  12. 02:22:301 (3) - Whistle at start.
[Shiirn sucks at mapping]:
  1. 00:46:552 (3) - Mind stacking this on top of (2), looks wrong like this.
  2. 01:21:403 (5) - Whistle?
  3. 02:36:313 (4) - I see you liked these finishes here, so for consistency put them on the start and the end as well?
[Natteke is a'trollin']:
  1. Different combo colors than other diffs, not too sure if that's okay or not, so just pointing it out now.
  2. 01:02:181 (2,3) - Suggestion: reverse the sliders so they point outwards? This would look cool imo.
That's pretty much it. The combos were all over the place in <3 so I tried to fix em as much as I could. Don't worry if some combos look short, they look right and follow the music well.
@Natteke's diff, wasn't really fond of some of the triplets at the end, but meh, they looked alright and played well.
Good luck!~ :3
Lanttu
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Joined December 2008
Lanttu

lolcubes wrote:

[Lanttu is moe]:
  1. AR-1? AR6 looks quite tough for a "Normal" diff. OK~
  2. 00:33:978 (2) - Why not use claps for the start and the end? You could also make the end slightly more silent than the start though, would fit the beats nicely. Eeeh, I could swear it was there at first.. Well, added to end. Again.
  3. 01:00:385 (1) - Whistle at start? OK~
  4. 01:09:008 (1) - Remove the clap at the end, sounds weird. (doesn't follow the background beat either) Blahhh, it sounds so empty then. >: But ok..
  5. 01:14:756 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:193 (3) - ^
  7. 01:21:942 (3) - ^
  8. 01:30:205 - Add a note? OK~
  9. 01:42:960 (1) - Add whistle to the end as well, sounds really good. OK~
  10. 01:47:630 (3) - This slider looks cool but I think this could be better: Try ending it at 01:47:990 instead, and add another slider at 01:48:349 - 01:48:888. Hmm, I actually prefer it like the way it is. ;u;
  11. 01:50:505 (3) - ^ Same deal as above, however I like the variety, so instead I suggest that you pick either that or you add a note at 01:51:762. I really can't add that one note without breaking the pattern, so no~
  12. 02:22:301 (3) - Whistle at start. OK~
Download: 07th Expansion - haze (Shiirn) [Lanttu is moe].osu
y u c a
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:!:
UnderminE
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UnderminE
Didn't I give star to this map yet o: Star star!
ziin
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ziin
SLIDER MOD FOR YOU. SORTA CAUSTIC. If I don't say anything it's complaining about some slider touching some other slider in an inappropriate way.

[easy]
very nice, just remember it's only gay if the sliders touch.
00:45:295 (4) -
00:52:840 (5) -
00:53:558 (6) -
00:57:511 (3) -
01:03:618 (2) - This one's actually good, try to make the previous slider bisect it.
01:14:037 (3) -
01:14:756 (4) - This spacing is a 'lil off
01:27:690 (4) -
01:30:205 (1) - try giving it 4 red points evenly spaced so the ball squiggles with the drums
01:57:151 (3) -
01:57:870 (4) - spacing
01:59:666 (1) - if you can make the end clearly visible it will work
02:03:618 (1) - ^ and this one is a bit too close to covering up the repeat
02:16:552 (5,6) -
02:23:738 (1) -
02:31:642 (3,3) - questionable

[you suck]
00:37:391 (1,2,3) - rotate 1 by -15 degrees, 3 by 15 degrees and make it pretty
00:40:265 (1,2,3) - just a tad bit more space? http://puu.sh/3bSs
00:43:499 (2,3) - ^ or move the end node out 1 up/1 right for (3) (left down for (2)) to put the end in the center http://puu.sh/3bSy
00:45:115 (2) - a little bit more space plz.
00:48:528 (4) - curve it so it doesn't touch (1)
00:51:762 (1,3) - criss cross these so the end of both is clear.
00:56:792 (2) - down some to leave a space
01:04:696 (1,2,3) - what is this I don't even.
01:09:008 (1,2,3) -
01:10:265 (4,1) - move the (4) up left and away from the CF in the middle, and give (1) some breathing room.
01:12:421 (2) - moved to 272,124 looks good
01:12:960 (3) - 296,192
01:18:169 (2) - idk what to do with these other than stack the ends.
01:26:253 (1) - end node up 1, but this spacing sucks
01:28:409 (3) - left 1, and fix (2) after you do.
01:29:127 (1) - accelerate that spacing
01:43:499 (1,2,3,4) - curve these just enough so they don't touch.
01:46:912 (6,1) - it's so pretty
01:52:840 (1) - flip it
01:57:151 (3,2) - (3)'s hitburst might cover up the repeat on (2) if you're using crappy hitbursts
02:00:025 (4,6) - there's a space in between these which is kinda weird.
02:00:744 (1,2,3) - not feeling it
02:05:595 (4) - weird stack
02:07:031 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.
02:10:984 (4) - try to get the end in between 2 and 3.
02:14:037 (2,4) - spacing
02:17:990 (1,2,3) - just a little bit more space
02:19:606 (1) - don't cover this one
^ repeats
02:30:025 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.
02:32:361 (1) - stack the end better
02:32:899 (2) - fit the previous and next sliders in the curves of the S.


Natteke + Lanttu <3

AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[General]
MP3 Bitrate:
128

Background:
2fccad17ba1e823c12798b19cb836495.jpg is 1000x625, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

Custom Hitsounds:
Not yet implemented.


[Storyboard]
No problems found.

[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Lanttu is moe] : Lanttu Natteke
- [Less than Three] : Natteke Lanttu
- [Natteke is a'trollin'] : Lanttu Natteke
- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] : Natteke Lanttu

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Lanttu is moe] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

- [Less than Three] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

- [Natteke is a'trollin'] :
Combo1 : 17,254,176
Combo2 : 173,255,95
Combo3 : 255,88,100
Combo4 : 255,94,55

- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] :
Combo1 : 143,155,175
Combo2 : 132,138,60
Combo3 : 122,122,122

Tags:
- Consider adding "Natteke is a" to all of your tags

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Lanttu is moe] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.

- [Less than Three] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.

- [Natteke is a'trollin'] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:265.

- [Shiirn sucks at mapping] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:17:990, ends on 02:40:239.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:40:984, ends on 02:41:058.


[Difficulty: Lanttu is moe]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:33:053
01:08:982
01:09:341
01:30:538
01:40:598
01:41:317
01:43:473
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
01:54:970
01:55:329
02:40:239
02:41:058


[Difficulty: Less than Three]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473
01:52:095
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
02:40:239
02:41:058


[Difficulty: Natteke is a'trollin']
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473


[Difficulty: Shiirn sucks at mapping]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:40:958
01:41:317
01:41:676
01:43:473
01:52:095
01:52:814
01:53:532
01:54:251
02:40:239
02:41:058
If you weren't done you shouldn't have put it in pending.
Shiirn
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Shiirn
Stuff done. Most AIBat stuff can be ignored.
ziin
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ziin
It was really only combo colors and kiai which was questionable, but natteke's just a troll. And I didn't read the thread before I posted that.
NoHitter
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NoHitter
General
Rename your diffs.
Make Tags consistent between diffs.

Normal
Combo-nazi (Your current combos seem very inconsistent) You can choose to not follow this, but I highly suggest you do.
SPOILER
00:40:265 (4) - New Combo (NC)
00:41:702 (1) - Remove New Combo (RNC)
00:43:139 (2) - NC
00:52:121 (4) - NC if you add a note at 00:51:762, NC there.
00:57:511 (3) - NC
00:58:948 (1) - RNC
01:00:385 (1) - NC
01:02:181 (1) - RNC if you don't follow mod below.
01:03:618 (4) - NC if you don't follow mod below.
01:06:133 (5) - NC
01:07:930 (1) - RNC
01:09:008 (4) - NC
01:14:756 (4) - NC
01:16:193 (1) - RNC
01:17:630 (2) - NC
01:29:127 (6) - NC
01:30:205 (1) - RNC
01:57:870 (4) - NC
01:59:666 (1) - RNC
02:00:744 (4) - NC
02:06:852 (4) - NC
02:15:115 (4) - NC
02:20:864 (3) - NC for consistency. Fine as is.
00:50:684 (3) - IMO the rhythm you followed here is very unnoticeable. I had to increase the volume for me to actually hear it. I think 1/1 notes/sliders should be here.
01:00:385 (3) - Same as above? Maybe change to something like this?
01:03:259 (x) - A 3/2 slider should start here followed by one more. Like this.
01:30:205 (2) - Looks ugly IMO. A slider like this would be better?

Lanttu's Hard
01:42:960 (1) - IMO better if note is at 01:43:499 only. No need for slider starting at 01:42:960

Shiirn's Insane?
Combo-nazi again (Inconsistent combos :/)
SPOILER
00:38:828 (1) - RNC for consistency
00:41:702 (1) - NC
00:44:576 (1) - RNC
00:47:630 (1) - RNC
00:53:199 (1) - RNC
00:54:636 (4) - NC
00:56:073 (1) - RNC
00:58:948 (1) - RNC
01:04:696 (1) - RNC
01:07:570 (1) - RNC (You probably should move this closer)
01:10:445 (1) - RNC
01:21:942 (1) - RNC
01:24:816 (1) - RNC
01:27:690 (1) - RNC
01:44:936 (1) - RNC
01:46:732 (9) - NC
01:47:630 (1) - RNC
02:28:229 (4) - NC
02:14:397 (1) - Don't overlap this with 02:14:397 (3)? It gets confusing being covered up in play.

Natteke's Insane
I don't suppose you'll change the combo colors so that they'll be consistent with the other diffs?
As I've read the thread, you don't want to.
00:45:475 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this. No indication whatsoever in the music that there's gonna be a sudden spacing change. Only the combo colors.
01:30:744 (1) - End this 1/2 later?

Anyway, nothing major, so star.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu

NoHItter wrote:

Lanttu's Hard
01:42:960 (1) - IMO better if note is at 01:43:499 only. No need for slider starting at 01:42:960
Hmm, I still kind of prefer it like the way it is... çwç
NoHitter
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Bubbled
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/late

\o/
Doomsday
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Doomsday
Lookin' good

Ranked!
Shiirn
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Shiirn
\o/
Charles445
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Charles445
Aaaand the background is still the wrong aspect ratio

Why don't you listen to me god damn it
Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
I miss your old difficulty names better. :L
Shiirn
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Shiirn

Charles445 wrote:

Aaaand the background is still the wrong aspect ratio

Why don't you listen to me god damn it
you mad bro?

it still looks nice.
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
Grats :D
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
Grats Shiirn, nice map :3
ziin
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ziin
>dat aspect ratio
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
wait but the BG dimensio... is there... uh... oh well reason to everything
Shiirn
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Topic Starter
Shiirn
Let me clear this up:

There is no ranking requirement to specific background aspect ratios, only for the maximum size. I picked a slightly different ratio simply because this map is an ambient bgm, it's far more suited to a letterboxed screen (or, as ziin shows, a nice surprise for people playing under other aspect ratios).


Hush about it.
xsrsbsns
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xsrsbsns
good, congrats!
UnderminE
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UnderminE
Oh finally, congrats~
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Its my best. 8-) 676,930 Silver SS Hidden + HardRock (Proof: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NEpZjfHPTJE) Congartz. :)
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