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Mercurius
8-)
OnosakiHito
May I make a Taiko guest diff. again? :3
Jupiter
star!!!!! 8-) 8-) 8-)
Potofu
tanoshii 8-)
romchan67
:)
Kyonko Hizara
:)
val0108
:) :) :)
dNextGen
wwww
Hakeru
8-)
Medicine Melancholy
Nice~ :)
LandS_old_1
Star ~ ^^
Rigeru_old
8-)
OnosakiHito
やーほー!
二つ太鼓ヂッフは今出きったです。
使うを本当にありがとうございます! :)
太鼓ヂッフのSBは取り去るをお願いします。

P.s.: If you want I can make one more Taiko diff. on a really hard lvl.




Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece (Chocopikel) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece (Chocopikel) [Ono's Muzukashii].osu

Topic Starter
Chocopikel

OnosakiHito wrote:

やーほー!
二つ太鼓ヂッフは今出きったです。
使うを本当にありがとうございます! :)
太鼓ヂッフのSBは取り去るをお願いします。

P.s.: If you want I can make one more Taiko diff. on a really hard lvl.


Thanks!!! ;)
Sakura
I randomly saw this map on the pending list and since it brings back memories i decided to mod it \o/
[General]
Why do you have 2 identical SB images called SB.jpg and SB2.jpg? png format is better for Storyboard elements, aditionally SB.jpg is over the Storyboard dimmensions, i highly suggest you just remove SB.jpg or if you're gonna use it, it needs to be resized to 640x480 (as it covers the whole playfield anyways) or at most 800x600.
what do those tags mean?, and anime will appear in Genre so no need to include it, also 7 is a way too general tag, remove it too.
Add OnosakiHito to tags.

[Storyboard]
Please make the cut/paste the .osb scripts into the .osu files except the Taiko Oni and Taiko Muzukashii, because otherwise it looks awkward: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111137
This will make storyboard appear on all diffs except the Taiko Oni and Taiko Muzukashii diffs, with this, the background will also go down properly.
SB.jpg http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111144 appears for a split second at the beginning and then it's loaded, this keyframe is unnecessary i suggest removing it.
02:01:445 - Kind of an awkward place for the pulsing to stop, why not keep it pulsing here together with the next section?
03:08:112 - ^

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I think 2 seconds is too much of an audio lead-in, use either 1500 ms or 1 second.
I recommend increasing hitsound volume, since katsus are barely hearable most of the time.
More than 3 slider speeds.
01:40:112 (2) - Maybe use a big don?.

[Ono's Muzukashii]
Once again i suggest reducing audio lead-in.
Maybe rename to Ono's Taiko Muzkashii? or is that too long.
Same comment about hitsound volume.
01:40:112 (1) - Big don?

[Insane]
Do NOT use red lines to change slider speeds, i recommend you remove all the red lines at the start except the real BPM that every other diff is using.
Also since you are copy/pasting, i can also say that anything i say if it repeats on another pattern later, change the other pattern too, since its most probably wrong too.
01:10:611 (6) - Sliderbody whistle doesnt fit, i suggest you remove it.
01:18:778 ~ 01:22:778 - This section feels overmapped
01:26:778 (5,6) - Sliderbody whistle doesnt fit.
01:53:778 (2) - Sliderbody hidden by hitburst.
01:41:444 (5,6) - Kind of deceiving since the previous sliders didnt have any repeats.
02:03:444 (2) - Slider doesnt follow the music, please dont use symmetry for the sake of doing symmetry, also the jump size doesnt fit the music.
02:46:445 (2) - needs to be 1/2 earlier. Once again dont put notes only for the sake of symmetry, otherwise it's gonna be really hard to follow them with the song.
02:46:778 (1) - If you really want this spinner, it should begin at: 02:46:611 and end at, 02:47:444, otherwise you can make the previous note into a slider that ends at 02:47:444.
02:47:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This isnt following the song at all, the rythm in the song isnt even constant D:

[Normal]
00:49:279 (5,6,7,8) - Are you seriously only using red ticks here? all sliders feel kind of off >.<
00:54:279 (X) - Add a note?
00:56:445 (1,2,3,4) - The timing for this section feels odd, try this? (you may link some with a slider if you prefer):

02:51:945 (6,7,8,9) - These arent following the music at all either, all sliders feel off >.<

[Easy]
I'm not even sure what you were going for here, but this diff just feels lazy and weird, i recommend you drop this difficulty.

Well you must start mapping more to the rythm and less to symmetry, many places in Normal and Insane felt awkward, i really recommend you drop Easy, Normal is easy enough for new players and Easy just felt mapped lazily and in an uninteresting way as if you were forced to map it for the sake of having an Easy, i'd really recommend you include a Hard so that your map can be enjoyed by more skill levels of players, last but not least your hitsounds need more work as well.
Good Luck with the map!~
OnosakiHito

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I think 2 seconds is too much of an audio lead-in, use either 1500 ms or 1 second. Agreed.
I recommend increasing hitsound volume, since katsus are barely hearable most of the time. Agreed.
More than 3 slider speeds. Uuuh, I don't know what AIMod mean. I have just one slider in the map.
01:40:112 (2) - Maybe use a big don?. It's okay.

[Ono's Muzukashii]
Once again i suggest reducing audio lead-in. Agreed.
Maybe rename to Ono's Taiko Muzkashii? or is that too long. I was thinking about the same, but as you said, name would be too long.
Same comment about hitsound volume. Agreed.
01:40:112 (1) - Big don? It's okay.
Thank you for mod.

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece (Chocopikel) [Ono's Muzukashii].osu

Download: Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece (Chocopikel) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Sakura

OnosakiHito wrote:

Uuuh, I don't know what AIMod mean. I have just one slider in the map.
That basically means you're using more than 3 BPM multipliers across the map, like for example if you have 1.0x, 0.75x, 0.5x, 2.0x that's 4 different slider speeds.
OzzyOzrock
Well first of all, none of that rule applies to taiko.

Secondly, inherits are fine. It's uninherited sections that we don't want affecting sliders.
Sakura

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Well first of all, none of that rule applies to taiko.

Secondly, inherits are fine. It's uninherited sections that we don't want affecting sliders.
First of all, it applies to all maps, second of all, it's less of a problem to fix on taiko since it only affects the speed of the notes, if you'd like my opinion taiko shouldnt even have speed ups/slow downs, and third, just because they are green lines doesnt mean they are fine, they are still speed changes, that's all that matters. In either case i dont really wanna argue about this, its up to Ono to fix or not.
Topic Starter
Chocopikel

Sakura Hana wrote:

I randomly saw this map on the pending list and since it brings back memories i decided to mod it \o/
[General]
Why do you have 2 identical SB images called SB.jpg and SB2.jpg? png format is better for Storyboard elements, aditionally SB.jpg is over the Storyboard dimmensions, i highly suggest you just remove SB.jpg or if you're gonna use it, it needs to be resized to 640x480 (as it covers the whole playfield anyways) or at most 800x600.
what do those tags mean?, and anime will appear in Genre so no need to include it, also 7 is a way too general tag, remove it too.
Add OnosakiHito to tags.

[Storyboard]
Please make the cut/paste the .osb scripts into the .osu files except the Taiko Oni and Taiko Muzukashii, because otherwise it looks awkward: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111137
This will make storyboard appear on all diffs except the Taiko Oni and Taiko Muzukashii diffs, with this, the background will also go down properly.
SB.jpg http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111144 appears for a split second at the beginning and then it's loaded, this keyframe is unnecessary i suggest removing it.
02:01:445 - Kind of an awkward place for the pulsing to stop, why not keep it pulsing here together with the next section?
03:08:112 - ^

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I think 2 seconds is too much of an audio lead-in, use either 1500 ms or 1 second.
I recommend increasing hitsound volume, since katsus are barely hearable most of the time.
More than 3 slider speeds.
01:40:112 (2) - Maybe use a big don?.

[Ono's Muzukashii]
Once again i suggest reducing audio lead-in.
Maybe rename to Ono's Taiko Muzkashii? or is that too long.
Same comment about hitsound volume.
01:40:112 (1) - Big don?

[Insane]
Do NOT use red lines to change slider speeds, i recommend you remove all the red lines at the start except the real BPM that every other diff is using.
Also since you are copy/pasting, i can also say that anything i say if it repeats on another pattern later, change the other pattern too, since its most probably wrong too.
01:10:611 (6) - Sliderbody whistle doesnt fit, i suggest you remove it.
01:18:778 ~ 01:22:778 - This section feels overmapped
01:26:778 (5,6) - Sliderbody whistle doesnt fit.
01:53:778 (2) - Sliderbody hidden by hitburst.
01:41:444 (5,6) - Kind of deceiving since the previous sliders didnt have any repeats.
02:03:444 (2) - Slider doesnt follow the music, please dont use symmetry for the sake of doing symmetry, also the jump size doesnt fit the music.
02:46:445 (2) - needs to be 1/2 earlier. Once again dont put notes only for the sake of symmetry, otherwise it's gonna be really hard to follow them with the song.
02:46:778 (1) - If you really want this spinner, it should begin at: 02:46:611 and end at, 02:47:444, otherwise you can make the previous note into a slider that ends at 02:47:444.
02:47:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This isnt following the song at all, the rythm in the song isnt even constant D:

[Normal]
00:49:279 (5,6,7,8) - Are you seriously only using red ticks here? all sliders feel kind of off >.<
00:54:279 (X) - Add a note?
00:56:445 (1,2,3,4) - The timing for this section feels odd, try this? (you may link some with a slider if you prefer):

02:51:945 (6,7,8,9) - These arent following the music at all either, all sliders feel off >.<

[Easy]
I'm not even sure what you were going for here, but this diff just feels lazy and weird, i recommend you drop this difficulty.

Well you must start mapping more to the rythm and less to symmetry, many places in Normal and Insane felt awkward, i really recommend you drop Easy, Normal is easy enough for new players and Easy just felt mapped lazily and in an uninteresting way as if you were forced to map it for the sake of having an Easy, i'd really recommend you include a Hard so that your map can be enjoyed by more skill levels of players, last but not least your hitsounds need more work as well.
Good Luck with the map!~
・Perhaps, everything was able to be fixed.
・Because the problem was variously caused when SB was added, it removed it.
・Because Hard diff had been completed, upload was done.
・Because I am not so good at English, it is not likely to be able to understand.

Please recheck
Thank you for modding!! ;)
Sakura
[General]
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all diffs (not sure if it affects taiko, but if it does, then leave taiko alone since it's fine)

[Insane]
00:29:444 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These star shapes arent perfect, try making a single star in the center, so it's easier to make a more perfect shape, then rotate it, and then copy/paste it and rotate it again.
00:30:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really dont see why you would use doubles here, the rythm doesnt feel like using double notes, more like a steady rythm.
01:08:778 (3) - So many hitbursts make this barely visible.
01:10:111 (3,4,5) - I dont find any reason for this sudden increase in spacing, jumps dont fit here.
01:20:945 (3,4,5) - can you tell me where are the jumps in the music?
01:31:445 (8) - New combo to hint for spacing change.
01:22:779 (1,2,3) - Now HERE's some notes where jumps could fit better.
01:27:778 (7) - Slider repeat is hidden
01:02:111 (9,10,11,12) - The positiioning of these notes is really awkward and makes them hard to predict.
01:37:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, why the doubles?
01:52:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:59:444 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Again, these jumps dont fit like that.
02:26:112 (4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped.
02:40:611 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped.
02:42:611 (2,3,4) - This would be a good spot for jumps.
02:45:778 (1,2,3) - huh, why is this still not fixed?
02:47:445 (5,6,7) - I can see what you're going for here, but it's misleading since you were just following the lyrics and this sudden instrument change can be misleading.
03:06:112 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Once again, i dont see the reason for this sudden increase in spacing.
03:21:446 (1) - I recommend a hitsound finish
Mostly putting jumps when they dont fit, or when the map is contradicting itself in the way it's mapped, make sure you make your map more consistent, the music doesnt change at all, but your map suddenly jumps, which is what making me believe the jumps dont even fit

[Hard]
00:30:779 (1,2,3,4) - I dont hear any hitsounds in this section.
00:22:779 (1) - Really weird spot for a slowdown, since this place feels actually higher intensity in the music.
02:02:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These doubles feel really awkward with the song.
02:09:445 (1,2,3) - I dont see why the 2nd and 3rd sliders are longer, since the song is going at the exact same rythm.
02:31:445 (3) - This should probably start at: 02:31:612
02:33:445 (1,2,3,4) - I cant even hear these hitsounds.

[Normal]
00:30:779 (5) - New combo.
00:49:279 (5,6,7,8) - What i meant is remove this sliders and map them differently because they dont fit the song at all D:
00:54:112 (4) - New combo.
01:54:779 (5) - New combo.
02:01:445 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i recommend you turn these into sliders, and also start a new combo at (3), 1/2 stream is kinda long for this level of difficulty.
02:51:945 (6,7,8,9) - same comment as 00:49:279 (5,6,7,8).
02:56:445 (5) - New combo.
03:01:446 (3) - New combo.
03:08:112 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same comment as before.

I still think you should get more mods here, since i seem to be the only one modding this map so far =/

@Ono: your slider speeds arent fixed yet o.o
OnosakiHito
I understand.
Well, what Ozzy mean is that the osu! warnings in the AIMod are not effecting the Taiko diff.. This means it's not a bug in Taiko.
And if I would delete some of the timelines it would not look nice anymore with the speed up.
So I will keep it how it is.

Also the BAT/GMT's or peppy didn't said anything agains it yet. Otherwise there wouldn't be so many Taiko diff's with more then three slider speeds.
Sakura

OnosakiHito wrote:

I understand.
Well, what Ozzy mean is that the osu! warnings in the AIMod are not effecting the Taiko diff.. This means it's not a bug in Taiko.
And if I would delete some of the timelines it would not look nice anymore with the speed up.
So I will keep it how it is.

Also the BAT/GMT's or peppy didn't said anything agains it yet. Otherwise there wouldn't be so many Taiko diff's with more then three slider speeds.
There's a difference between 3 slider speed changes and 3 unique slider speeds

3 slider speed changes --> 1.0x > 1.5x > 1.75x
3 unique slider speeds --> 1.0x > 1.5x > 1.0x > 0.75x > 1.0x > 0.75x > 1.5x > 1.0x > 1.50x (the total slider speeds were 1.0x, 1.5x, 0.75x, that's 3)

Shouldnt be too hard to change some speeds to match another and keep 3 unique throughout the whole map.

And if peppy hasnt said anything, why was it even implemented on AIMod as an "error" then
Topic Starter
Chocopikel

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all diffs (not sure if it affects taiko, but if it does, then leave taiko alone since it's fine)

[Insane]
00:29:444 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These star shapes arent perfect, try making a single star in the center, so it's easier to make a more perfect shape, then rotate it, and then copy/paste it and rotate it again.
00:30:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I really dont see why you would use doubles here, the rythm doesnt feel like using double notes, more like a steady rythm.
01:08:778 (3) - So many hitbursts make this barely visible.
01:10:111 (3,4,5) - I dont find any reason for this sudden increase in spacing, jumps dont fit here. If jumps is removed too much, will you become easy too much?
01:20:945 (3,4,5) - can you tell me where are the jumps in the music? Same comment
01:31:445 (8) - New combo to hint for spacing change.
01:22:779 (1,2,3) - Now HERE's some notes where jumps could fit better.
01:27:778 (7) - Slider repeat is hidden
01:02:111 (9,10,11,12) - The positiioning of these notes is really awkward and makes them hard to predict.
01:37:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, why the doubles?
01:52:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:59:444 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Again, these jumps dont fit like that.
02:26:112 (4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped. Really? I do not think it is so
02:40:611 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped.
02:42:611 (2,3,4) - This would be a good spot for jumps.
02:45:778 (1,2,3) - huh, why is this still not fixed?
02:47:445 (5,6,7) - I can see what you're going for here, but it's misleading since you were just following the lyrics and this sudden instrument change can be misleading.
03:06:112 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Once again, i dont see the reason for this sudden increase in spacing.
03:21:446 (1) - I recommend a hitsound finish
Mostly putting jumps when they dont fit, or when the map is contradicting itself in the way it's mapped, make sure you make your map more consistent, the music doesnt change at all, but your map suddenly jumps, which is what making me believe the jumps dont even fit

[Hard]
00:30:779 (1,2,3,4) - I dont hear any hitsounds in this section.
00:22:779 (1) - Really weird spot for a slowdown, since this place feels actually higher intensity in the music.
02:02:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These doubles feel really awkward with the song.
02:09:445 (1,2,3) - I dont see why the 2nd and 3rd sliders are longer, since the song is going at the exact same rythm.
02:31:445 (3) - This should probably start at: 02:31:612
02:33:445 (1,2,3,4) - I cant even hear these hitsounds.

[Normal]
00:30:779 (5) - New combo.
00:49:279 (5,6,7,8) - What i meant is remove this sliders and map them differently because they dont fit the song at all D:
00:54:112 (4) - New combo.
01:54:779 (5) - New combo.
02:01:445 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i recommend you turn these into sliders, and also start a new combo at (3), 1/2 stream is kinda long for this level of difficulty.
02:51:945 (6,7,8,9) - same comment as 00:49:279 (5,6,7,8).
02:56:445 (5) - New combo.
03:01:446 (3) - New combo.
03:08:112 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same comment as before.

I still think you should get more mods here, since i seem to be the only one modding this map so far =/

@Ono: your slider speeds arent fixed yet o.o
I do not think that jumps somewhat seems to be insane because the origin is easy and becomes it if it doesn't put it
Thank you for mod
Please recheck
I'm sorry many times
Norn_NNN
ya- :D
YuMeO
star ;)
val0108
全体的にもっと音欲しかった
[Normal]
OD3~4 AR4
slider tick rate 1
00:42:612 (3,5) - 両方とも赤線に置いて修正
00:53:112 (3) - ^
00:54:445 (3) - ^
00:54:445 (3) - 00:55:945 - 終わりここ
01:37:445 (1) - 01:39:445 - 終わり
02:35:112 (1) - スピン短いから何かに変更
03:21:779 (1) - ^
02:38:779 - ブレイクタイムここに移動
02:57:445 (4,1) - 近いからどこかに移動するとべたー

[Hard]
STR 1
00:18:779 (8,9) - 重ねない
00:20:112 (1) - 00:22:445 - スピン終わり
00:32:112 (1) - 00:34:445 - ^
01:30:112 (7) - new combo
01:37:445 (1) - 01:39:779 -
01:49:445 (1) - 01:51:779 -
01:59:112 (1,2,3,4) - 微妙に重なってる部分を重ねないように
03:05:779 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:612 (6) - new combo
03:20:279 (6) - ^

[Insane]
STR1
00:29:445 (5) - new combo
00:32:111 (1,2,3,4) - スライダーに重なって見えないから修正
01:06:778 (1,5) - しっかり重ねる
01:10:611 (6) - 赤点消す?
01:22:779 (5) - renew combo
01:23:445 (7) - new combo
01:23:611 (1) - renew combo
01:24:111 (4) - new combo
01:39:444 (9) - 赤線で終わり
Topic Starter
Chocopikel

val0108 wrote:

全体的にもっと音欲しかった
[Normal]
OD3~4 AR4
slider tick rate 1
00:42:612 (3,5) - 両方とも赤線に置いて修正
00:53:112 (3) - ^
00:54:445 (3) - ^
00:54:445 (3) - 00:55:945 - 終わりここ
01:37:445 (1) - 01:39:445 - 終わり
02:35:112 (1) - スピン短いから何かに変更
03:21:779 (1) - ^
02:38:779 - ブレイクタイムここに移動
02:57:445 (4,1) - 近いからどこかに移動するとべたー

[Hard]
STR 1
00:18:779 (8,9) - 重ねない
00:20:112 (1) - 00:22:445 - スピン終わり
00:32:112 (1) - 00:34:445 - ^
01:30:112 (7) - new combo
01:37:445 (1) - 01:39:779 -
01:49:445 (1) - 01:51:779 -
01:59:112 (1,2,3,4) - 微妙に重なってる部分を重ねないように
03:05:779 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:612 (6) - new combo
03:20:279 (6) - ^

[Insane]
STR1
00:29:445 (5) - new combo
00:32:111 (1,2,3,4) - スライダーに重なって見えないから修正
01:06:778 (1,5) - しっかり重ねる
01:10:611 (6) - 赤点消す?
01:22:779 (5) - renew combo
01:23:445 (7) - new combo
01:23:611 (1) - renew combo
01:24:111 (4) - new combo
01:39:444 (9) - 赤線で終わり
All fixed!!
まじ神MOD
ほんとありがとー!!
なすちさん絶対MAT/BATの素質というかなんていうかそういうのあるわ
Komeiji Yuki
Hi :3
Some suggestion

[General]
You have SB which include sb.jpg and sb2.jpg

but I didn't find them in the folder . Try to full-sub ?
If it's just a mistake , plz delete the .osb

I see the "7/11 SB deleted" , you should delete .osb then full-sub

[Hard]

00:57:445 - 21sec break :l I think it's fine but add a spiner like Insane if you want

01:27:779 (12) - Add a repeat ?

[Insane]

01:57:278 (1) - NC?
03:03:946 (5) - ^
Topic Starter
Chocopikel

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Hi :3
Some suggestion

[General]
You have SB which include sb.jpg and sb2.jpg

but I didn't find them in the folder . Try to full-sub ?
If it's just a mistake , plz delete the .osb

I see the "7/11 SB deleted" , you should delete .osb then full-sub

[Hard]

00:57:445 - 21sec break :l I think it's fine but add a spiner like Insane if you want

01:27:779 (12) - Add a repeat ?

[Insane]

01:57:278 (1) - NC?
03:03:946 (5) - ^
All fixed!! ;)
Thx mod!!
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