1. Inhuman (5 stars, 679 notes)
2. Insane (4.85 stars, 680 notes)
3. Normal (2.67 stars, 277 notes)
4. Pereira's Hard (4.84 stars, 486 notes)

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

I saw you post leorda's Queue So I will help you

General

01:01:955 Prevew Point is here for all diff (Normal,Insane,Devil)
Pleasse !!!! make diff "hard" is important
http://puu.sh/3Opu this is bigger weird combo pleasse change like this http://puu.sh/3OpB this is better play you can change color if you wanna

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[easy]

00:14:123 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsiente spacing and why? HOLD ALT and you see "Beat Snap Divisor" change "Distance Spacing" so you use 0.8x
now click at 00:14:962 (2) look this http://puu.sh/3OoC the prev (00:14:123 (1) ) is 0.67x so tha mean you need fix like this
http://puu.sh/3OoR this is correct spacing because you are use 0.8x So only Normal and Easy you cannot make random spacing and NEVER make stream and NEVER make jump only Normal and easy This call is Spacing
00:20:207 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3Opj Ugly overlaps and i not like pleasse change place
00:32:060 (1) - Spiner the start is 00:32:165
00:22:095 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/3OpF This is call "Stack" but this is weird stack maybe like this http://puu.sh/3OpQ this is better pleasse fix
01:02:794 (1,2,3) - Inconsiente spacing
01:07:829 (3,4,5) - this is hard to play maybe like this http://puu.sh/3Oq7 ?This is better play and easy carefully you will fix spacing at 01:08:878 (1)
01:21:571 (3,4) - Again weird play bit change to slider pleasse
01:21:885 (4,1) - Incosiente spacing
01:53:983 (3,4) - Incosiente spacing
02:06:046 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Weird play pleasse change better play
02:09:927 (1,2,3) - Again weird play maybe change slider?
02:15:801 (4) - Put New combo
02:23:354 (1,2,3) - Again weird play maybe change slider?
02:27:550 (1,2,3,4) - Weird Stack
02:32:899 (3,4,5) - Again weird play maybe change slider?
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[Insane]

Somewhere the jumps is 4.50x example this 02:51:046 (2,3) - click and look this http://puu.sh/3OrV the next combo is 4.28x this is unrank
I think jump higer is only 2.0x or 2.5x you shold avoid somewhere evil jump

00:45:592 (2,3) - Inconsiente spacing?
01:31:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Veeeeeryyyyyyyyyyy hard I suggest use this http://puu.sh/3Orz With 0.1x this is better play stream
01:34:053 (4,5) - I not like this ugly overlaps change place?
03:05:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should remap this because the Bar life is quickly dowm that is very hard

i play this is very hard because somewhere note and slider are blue tick that is very weird but this insane imo
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[Devil]

I not have questions here this very hard imo and evil jump lol
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Sorry I can't write korean i hope you understande my poor english
Any Questions? PM me or in-game and pleasse make Diff hard
Ho also pleasse give me kudosu lol if my mod is help xD
STAR ! and good luck

Elize wrote:

（한국어）

그러니까 Kudosu감사합니다··

Kudosu 은 그 보면에 어드바이스,혹은 무엇인지 도와 주신 분에게만 드는 시스템으로 한다

별을 던진 것 뿐어라고, 단순히 기입에는 누를 필요는 없습니다 나온다.

이러한 기입 등에 Kudosu를 드는 것입니다

한국어 몹시 서투름으로 미안합니다

（English）

Thank you for Kudosu.

Kudosu is a system that gives it only to the person who is advised the music score or helped somehow.
It is not necessary to push to only a throw of the star, and a free writing.

Kudosu is given to such writing etc.

I'm sorry ..poor Korean it...

Copter-kun wrote:

Ok modding after reading plenty of posts in #modreqs

General
Remove 'Pereira006' into tags
Map a hard, it's an important difficulty for osu.

Normal
01:32:893 (1) - End spinner to 01:34:677?

Insane
01:09:292 (3,4,5) - Spacing is weird, fix it please.
02:32:159 (1,2,3,4) - Again, Spacing is weird

Non-Human

Name it to In-human, it's better English
00:31:949 (3,4,5) - make it look like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124886
01:15:166 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - You really should fix this, it doesn't make sense
01:30:481 (6) - Space it closer
01:44:327 (4,5,6) - Space it properly please

Copter-kun wrote:

Ok modding after reading plenty of posts in #modreqs

General
Remove 'Pereira006' into tagsHuuh? The Tag is only add name anime or character and Who make Diff just add you don't see Diff "Pereira'sHard" ?

Copter-kun wrote:

One more thing: take kim jim sook off the tags. It's unnecessary to add that here.

Tenshi wrote:

Lol, thanks for the star; have one in return. －(´・∀・)╯彡☆

General
Title should be all lowercase: "only my railgun".

Non-Human
Since people are suggesting to change it, maybe "Esper" might be a good name?

00:28:802 (5, 1) - Too close.->fixed
00:31:110 (1) - Too far away; connect to slider stream.->fixed
00:49:991 (5, 6) - Too close.->fixed
01:06:565 (2, 3) - ^->fixed
01:08:453 (3, 1) - ^->fixed
01:16:215 (1) - Same as 00:31:110.->fixed
01:46:844 (4, 1) - Too close.->fixed
01:54:397 (4) - ^->fixed
01:56:495 (1, 2) - Connect.->fixed
02:02:474 (6, 7, 8) - Connect.->fixed
02:10:551 (3, 1) - Too close.->fixed
02:13:907 (6) - New combo?->fixed
02:15:376 (12, 1) - ^
02:33:418 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Connect all of them; 3 and 4 are too far apart.->fixed
03:58:593 (3, 1) - Too far.->fixed
03:58:802 (1, 2) - Connect.->fixed
03:59:537 (4, 5) - Too close.->fixed

Insane
00:17:474 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Uneven spacing.->fixed
00:23:453 (4, 5) - Random jump?->fixed
00:24:607 (9, 1) - Too close.->fixed
00:55:026 (4, 1) - Way too far; connect.->fixed
00:56:495 (5, 6) - Too far.->fixed
00:56:809 (7, 8) - Too close.->fixed
01:11:495 (4, 1) - Too far; you could invert slider.
01:30:061 (2, 1) - Connect.->fixed
01:32:684 (14, 1) - ^->fixed
01:38:453 (5, 1) - Overlap.->fixed
01:47:893 (3, 4) - Not connected.->fixed
01:53:767 (3, 4, 5) - Way too far apart.->fixed
01:54:921 (2, 3) - Too close.->fixed
02:21:670 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - Funfunfun.
02:25:865 (1, 2, 3) - Same as 01:53:767.->fixed
02:26:916 (4, 5) - Too close.->fixed
02:31:530 (1, 2) - Too far.->fixed
02:55:026 (10, 1) - Too close.->fixed
03:32:159 ~ 03:34:886 - Inconsistent spacing.->fixed
03:40:970 (3, 4) - Too far.->fixed
03:45:586 (2, 3) - Way too far; connect.->fixed
03:46:425 (5, 6) - ^->fixed
03:48:942 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Same as 03:32:159 ~ 03:34:886.->fixed
03:52:089 ~ 03:53:453 - ^->fixed
03:55:446 (8, 9) - Too far.->fixed

You really need to work on consistent spacing and spacing in general in these two difficulties; it's too random to read. The other two seem okay.

Good luck.

Tenshi wrote:

Lol, thanks for the star; have one in return. －(´・∀・)╯彡☆

General
Title should be all lowercase: "only my railgun".

Non-Human
Since people are suggesting to change it, maybe "Esper" might be a good name?

00:28:802 (5, 1) - Too close.
00:31:110 (1) - Too far away; connect to slider stream.
00:49:991 (5, 6) - Too close.
01:06:565 (2, 3) - ^
01:08:453 (3, 1) - ^
01:16:215 (1) - Same as 00:31:110.
01:46:844 (4, 1) - Too close.
01:54:397 (4) - ^
01:56:495 (1, 2) - Connect.
02:02:474 (6, 7, 8) - Connect.
02:10:551 (3, 1) - Too close.
02:13:907 (6) - New combo?
02:15:376 (12, 1) - ^
02:33:418 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Connect all of them; 3 and 4 are too far apart.
03:58:593 (3, 1) - Too far.
03:58:802 (1, 2) - Connect.
03:59:537 (4, 5) - Too close.

Insane
00:17:474 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Uneven spacing.
00:23:453 (4, 5) - Random jump?
00:24:607 (9, 1) - Too close.
00:55:026 (4, 1) - Way too far; connect.
00:56:495 (5, 6) - Too far.
00:56:809 (7, 8) - Too close.
01:11:495 (4, 1) - Too far; you could invert slider.
01:30:061 (2, 1) - Connect.
01:32:684 (14, 1) - ^
01:38:453 (5, 1) - Overlap.
01:47:893 (3, 4) - Not connected.
01:53:767 (3, 4, 5) - Way too far apart.
01:54:921 (2, 3) - Too close.
02:21:670 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - Funfunfun.
02:25:865 (1, 2, 3) - Same as 01:53:767.
02:26:916 (4, 5) - Too close.
02:31:530 (1, 2) - Too far.
02:55:026 (10, 1) - Too close.
03:32:159 ~ 03:34:886 - Inconsistent spacing.
03:40:970 (3, 4) - Too far.
03:45:586 (2, 3) - Way too far; connect.
03:46:425 (5, 6) - ^
03:48:942 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Same as 03:32:159 ~ 03:34:886.
03:52:089 ~ 03:53:453 - ^
03:55:446 (8, 9) - Too far.

You really need to work on consistent spacing and spacing in general in these two difficulties; it's too random to read. The other two seem okay.

Good luck.

Chocopikel wrote:

Thank you for star in my map
It returns it!!
message is too short lol

Pereira006 Kim Jin Seok

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

Tags
• Make the comma a space so it looks like:

Pereira006 Kim Jin Seok

General
• Could you use a different background or one without the black edges? Because that is in another map with the same song.

[Insane]
00:21:460 (x) - Add a note here.->fixed

00:22:299 (x) - ^->fixed

01:44:746 (1) - New combo->fixed

01:57:753 (5) - It looks odd being the only slider with a Red Waypoint in this section.->fixed

03:52:509 (x) - Add a note here. Otherwise the gap will be 3/4 and throw people off and likely rate your map low.->fixed

04:03:208 (1) - New Combo->fixed


[Inhuman]
01:31:530 (1,2,3) - Spacing changes between these notes

04:03:208 (14) - New Combo->fixed


Good map
Star~

BakaHuang wrote:

Hii mod time !
just suggestions

[InHuman]
00:19:781(3)-add whis?->fixed
00:21:145(4)-add note?->fixed
00:41:809(1,2)-make 2 silders' shape the same?->symmetry
00:53:767(4)-return back once, end in 00:54:187-->fixed
00:56:914(4)-one grid on->fixed
01:21:250(1)-one grid on->fixed
01:37:194(2,3)-use whis->fixed
02:56:914(7)-new combo->fixed

make silders more smooth like 00:56:075(1)-

other diffs no problem

1. I see only a pic named "%BE%DE~1", but no the pic you used in your map like "bgbgbg.jpg" and "Taiko BG 4.png", did you lost them? Add these 2 pic and delete "%BE%DE~1.jpg then full submite
2. PreviewTime on [Kim's Taiko] is 13599 while others are 61949, use the same one please
3. This map need no audio lead-in

1. 01:02:788, 02:04:886 - KIAI starts here

1. 01:32:893 spinner - This spinner starts at a werid place, starts at 01:32:579 or 01:32:264 would be better
2. Map is too short, map to the end please

1. 00:34:257 (1) - Add finish
2. 00:40:131 (5), 00:40:970 (1) - Add finish, and suggest you add a note at 00:40:551, these 3 plot use normal hitsound with finish sounds nice IMO
3. 01:21:460 (2,3,4) - Does not fit music IMO, here should put notes at 01:21:565 and 01:21:879
4. 02:23:558 (2,3,4) - ^, Same issue, put notes at 02:23:663 and 02:23:977
5. 03:10:656 (1,2) - Delete (1,2) then add note here
6. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here

1. 02:57:124 - Another break just after a long break? Maybe you should map this part, these 2 break are too close
2. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here
3. 04:10:656 spinner - Use 5% soft sound here might be better IMO

1. 02:57:124 - Same to [insane] map this break part better IMO
2. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here
3. 04:10:656 spinner - Use 5% soft sound here might be better IMO

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[General]->fixed

1. I see only a pic named "%BE%DE~1", but no the pic you used in your map like "bgbgbg.jpg" and "Taiko BG 4.png", did you lost them? Add these 2 pic and delete "%BE%DE~1.jpg then full submite
2. PreviewTime on [Kim's Taiko] is 13599 while others are 61949, use the same one please
3. This map need no audio lead-in

[All diffculties]

1. 01:02:788, 02:04:886 - KIAI starts here

->fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:32:893 spinner - This spinner starts at a werid place, starts at 01:32:579 or 01:32:264 would be better->fixed
2. Map is too short, map to the end please

->fixed

[Pereira's Hard]

1. 00:34:257 (1) - Add finish
2. 00:40:131 (5), 00:40:970 (1) - Add finish, and suggest you add a note at 00:40:551, these 3 plot use normal hitsound with finish sounds nice IMO
3. 01:21:460 (2,3,4) - Does not fit music IMO, here should put notes at 01:21:565 and 01:21:879
4. 02:23:558 (2,3,4) - ^, Same issue, put notes at 02:23:663 and 02:23:977
5. 03:10:656 (1,2) - Delete (1,2) then add note here
6. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here

[Insane]

1. 02:57:124 - Another break just after a long break? Maybe you should map this part, these 2 break are too close->fixed
2. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here->fixed
3. 04:10:656 spinner - Use 5% soft sound here might be better IMO

->fixed

[Inhuman]

1. 02:57:124 - Same to [insane] map this break part better IMO->fixed
2. 03:32:159 - KIAI starts here->fixed
3. 04:10:656 spinner - Use 5% soft sound here might be better IMO

->fixed

Notes are all fine, I just don't like the sound you used
Here I add some hitsound at the first part of [Pereira's Hard], if you like , you could put hitsound like that
[attachment=0:6fc03]fripSide - only my railgun (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu[/attachment:6fc03]
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
Remove the "," Pereira006 & Kim

[Normal]
- 00:29:642 (1) -
- 00:30:900 (5) - I believe you meant to stack this under (3)
- 00:50:201 - Add a note here, do that an it will flow better. The way you have it now it plays awkward with the combo ending so...suddenly.
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.
- 01:16:635 - Add a note here, do that an it will flow better.
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.

[Hard]
- 00:29:642 (1) - Perhaps start this spinner on 00:29:537 and end it on 00:32:579.
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.

[Insane]
- 00:23:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is awkward in my opinion. I recommend just using 1/2 after 1/2 here to match the lyrics.
- 00:43:068 (6) - Remove finish it's very unfitting.->fixed
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed

[Inhuman]
00:59:327 (2,3) - This jump is very unfitting.->fixed
01:24:816 (4,1) - THIIIIISSSS SPPAAAACING. Too close.->fixed
[/color]

Good night~

akrolsmir wrote:

Kim's Taiko:
I don't know how to mod Taiko, but why is this only 1:30 long? That's even shorter than Normal

CMP wrote:

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
Remove the "," Pereira006 & Kim

[Normal]
- 00:29:642 (1) -
- 00:30:900 (5) - I believe you meant to stack this under (3)->fixed
- 00:50:201 - Add a note here, do that an it will flow better. The way you have it now it plays awkward with the combo ending so...suddenly.->fixed
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed
- 01:16:635 - Add a note here, do that an it will flow better.->fixed
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed

[Hard]
- 00:29:642 (1) - Perhaps start this spinner on 00:29:537 and end it on 00:32:579.
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.

[Insane]
- 00:23:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is awkward in my opinion. I recommend just using 1/2 after 1/2 here to match the lyrics.
- 00:43:068 (6) - Remove finish it's very unfitting.->fixed
- 01:02:788 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed
- 02:04:886 - Kiai time should start here. Where you start it is way too early.->fixed

[Inhuman]
00:59:327 (2,3) - This jump is very unfitting.->fixed
01:24:816 (4,1) - THIIIIISSSS SPPAAAACING. Too close.->fixed
[/color]

Good night~

thank you

akrolsmir wrote:

General:
Include "(Full Ver)" in your title.
Er, what's with the use of custom hitsounds in the editor when there are no hitsound files?

Normal:
00:15:795 (1,2) - Neither of these are symmetric. They don't have to be, but if you want it like that make the asymmetry more pronounced. Also, these two should be copies of each other.->fixed
00:21:670 (2,3,1) - You could easily put in a pattern of some kind here
00:23:767 (3,4,5) - ^->fixed
00:27:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^, how about a nice hexagon or star or something? Right now it lacks coherence of any kind.->fixed

00:48:103 (2,3) - see 00:15:795 (1,2)->fixed
00:50:201- place a circle here, and make this and (4) have claps.->fixed

00:50:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't quite fit the beat, try:

00:54:816 (2,3) - Here's what I would do: disable the clap at the start of (2), then delete (3) and in its place put a copy of (2) that you flip with ctrl + j and then ctrl + r.->fixed
00:58:593 (3,4) - See 00:15:795 (1,2)->fixed
01:29:642 (1,2) - ^->fixed
01:51:460 (3) - Try to get this symmetric->fixed
02:04:257 (1) - Replace with a slider like ->fixed
02:19:152 (2,3) - See 00:15:795 (1,2)->fixed
02:29:222 (1,2) - I really don't like the placement of this with regards to the previous (3)->fixed

Overall, it seemed a little messy with regards to patterns and sliders, and some of the hitsounds were off. Also, the difficulty felt a lot more like an easy than a normal. My favorite part were the two sliders at the beginning that were angled like _/- I thought they looked quite nice.

Kim's Taiko:
I don't know how to mod Taiko, but why is this only 1:30 long? That's even shorter than Normal

Periera's Hard:
00:39:711 (5) - Put a clap or finish on the end of the slider?
00:40:970- Starting here you use the soft hitsound set, but the normal hits are really hard to here over the loud portion of the music. Raise the volume, or try putting in your own soft hitsound that's more noticeable/louder
00:46:844 (6) - ^
01:08:243 (4) - Should start 1/4 beat earlier to match the song
01:14:537 (5) - ^
01:21:670 (3) - ^
02:02:369 (1) - End this 1/2 beat later?
02:17:054 (6) - Should start 1/4 beat earlier to match the song
02:23:767 (3) - ^
03:10:760 (2) - ^
03:17:474 (4) - ^
03:23:977 (2) - Start this 1/4 beat later to match the song (similar to the above)
03:37:614 (4) - Should start 1/4 beat earlier to match the song
03:44:327 (6) - ^
03:51:040 (3) - ^

This felt very clean and well-patterned, good job! My biggest issue was just the hitsounds, which were very faint throughout most of the map and hidden by the pretty loud song.

Since this song is pretty long, I'll stop here for now and come back to modding the other 2 diffs later. But before I go, here's an AIBat reading:

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[General]
Background:
bgbgbg.jpg is 743x723, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [InHuman] : 1000
- [Insane] : 0
- [Kim's Taiko] : 1000
- [Normal] : 1000
- [Pereira's Hard] : 1000

Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [InHuman] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,255,0

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,255,0

- [Kim's Taiko] :
No custom colours.

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,255,0

- [Pereira's Hard] :
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,255,0

Tags:
- Consider adding "Kim" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Pereira" to all of your tags

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [InHuman] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:788, ends on 01:36:355.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:04:886, ends on 02:36:774.
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:32:159, ends on 04:04:047.

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:788, ends on 01:36:355.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:04:886, ends on 02:36:774.
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:32:159, ends on 04:04:047.

- [Kim's Taiko] :

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:01:949, ends on 01:36:355.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:04:257, ends on 02:36:774.

- [Pereira's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:02:159, ends on 01:34:781.
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:04:257, ends on 02:36:879.
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:31:530, ends on 04:04:152.


[Difficulty: InHuman]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:40:766

Breaks:
You need a break before 02:28:488.


[Difficulty: Insane]
Breaks:
You need a break before 02:28:488.

So... you'll want some breaks in InHuman and Insane, and also add "Kim" to all tags. Fix the AudioLeadIn in Insane and think about standardizing the kiai times, too.

Raging Bull wrote:

No kds.

Put something like

Taiko -> kim jin seok in the message. So like


Pereira006's Hard->Pereira006

Normal,InHuman,Insane->CMP

Taiko -> kim jin seok

Image is changed



ready for modding