Sprosive wrote:

触卡好像说因为18X所以不用video

tsuka wrote:

艹 聊QQ的时候点错了给了KDS

kudosu for irc mod

tsuka wrote:

艹 聊QQ的时候点错了给了KDS

kudosu for irc mod

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:lol: 求点错...

soulfear wrote:

6 級茵魚

Melancholy wrote:

tsuka chan >_<

abalee wrote:

it might need an epilepsy warning.
even the SB load doesn't overload, try to remove the background to reduce it.

Normal:
03:31:951 (1) - move the timing section to remove the hitnormal, like Expert and Insane did.

abalee wrote:

it might need an epilepsy warning.
全diffi都加上了
even the SB load doesn't overload, try to remove the background to reduce it.
overload没办法了 png图片没法改质量 一旦同一时间段出现两张图必定overload

Expert:
00:53:815 (4) - remove clap? or add clap at 00:49:239 (1) - 00:50:764 (4) - , ect.
我觉得这里没有什么问题啊 CLAP也打在第二拍上 总之我这里无论音响还是耳机都没有觉得问题
01:33:476 (4) - weird slider...
fixed
insane:
03:15:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - pretty fun, but confused anyway.
fixed

Hard:
00:23:561 (7,1) - why...?
fixed
00:49:112 (7) - slider? or circle? i am confused :<
fixed

Normal:
03:31:951 (1) - move the timing section to remove the hitnormal, like Expert and Insane did.
fixed

Breeze wrote:

General

1. Turn off countdown of [Hard] since other diff. have turned off :<

fixed

SB

1. SB\char7.png seems didn't used, have you forgot to add it?
   fixed
2. Consider removing background from the SB to reduce SB load, just add the code in your osb file, under //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) line
   

   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"2142T34148-20.jpg",0,0

fixed

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 420 (-6), if you agree with this, then use this one

fixed

Normal+

1. What? HP drain rate is lower than [Easy]? Increase it maybe 2 tick
   fixed with increased 1 tick
2. 02:24:826 (1) - Consider adding a finish sound here?
   fixed
3. 02:32:962 (1) - ^

fixed

Hard

1. HP drain rate 4 or 5?
   it's 4 now
2. 01:56:352 (9) - NC?
   fixed
3. 02:57:242 (4,5,6,1) - Consider using this, I feel 1/8 fit more, and reverse 1/8 slider isn't that hard :< Depends on you though
   sorry i wanna keep it
   [attachment=1:0820c]1.jpg[/attachment:0820c]

Insane

1. 01:19:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel they are too hard to hit, maybe just for me lol
   just a bit hard:D
2. 02:13:386 (3) - This spacing might be confusing since spacing of previous notes in this combo are larger than this
   i think it's no problem
3. 02:53:301 - I feel speed up should starts here
   the speed up start with sb effect and rhythm the meantime , i don't feel weird anyway
4. 02:59:911 (1) - ...nothing wrong, I just dislike short spinner /o/
5. 03:08:047 (3) - Slider path is hidden, if you get 300, it's kinda hard to tell it's a slider while playing
   [attachment=0:0820c]2.jpg[/attachment:0820c]

fixed

1. Storyboard: 1.jpg is really revealing and people wouldn't be comfortable with it. I think that you will have to remove this picture or edit it so it's not that revealing.

1. 01:15:674 (1) - This slider ends on a wrong tick.
2. 01:20:250 (5,6,7,8) - There is no 1/6 in the music here. Snap them to 1/4 and remove one note.
3. 01:25:843 (3,4) - I suggest you move the slider 4 a little, so its more readable. It should be alright, but it's best to prevent stuff like this if it takes no effort.
4. 01:26:225 (4,5) - This spacing is a bit too big, you should reduce it a little. Such jump is unfitting and some people could have problems with reading this pattern.
5. 02:03:216 (2) - I don't want to nazimod you, but this slider could use some work. It looks really ugly.
6. 02:23:301 (1,2,3,4) - There is no 1/6 in the music here. Snap them 1/4 and remove one note.
7. 03:09:953 (2,3) - This kind of spacing makes this combo nearly unreadable, considering how awkward the timline is. Use distance snap of 1.20x for these two notes.

1. 00:45:165 (3) - New combo.
2. 01:03:216 (2,3) - ctrl+r these two, so the spacing is better.
3. 01:05:504 (1,2,3) - Spacing, fix it.
4. 01:19:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This was awkward to play because of 5 and 6. You should ctrl+r them, or just think of something else here.
5. 01:34:742 (2,3) - Unstack these, most people will think they come as soon as the slider ends.
6. 02:08:936 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing. You did lots of this stuff in your Expert diff and I am okay with that, but this is a bit too much for an Insane in that case.
7. 03:26:351 (2) - Clap.

1. Your whistles are too loud, you should reduce the volume of your whistles.
2. 00:30:419 (9) - Add a repeat?
3. 00:30:928 - Add a note?
4. 02:34:614 (6) - This clap sounds bad, remove both of them and add a clap to 02:34:487 (5).

1. I feel that AR5 is too slow for this speed. Use AR6? Other than that, not many complaints, they are insignificant compared to the problems in your higher diffs.

1. Rename this diff to Normal, cause it plays like one.
2. 02:51:013 - What is this speed change. This is unreadable and it's the easiest diff. You should tone it down.

1. 同时请删掉black.png.
2. 将title.jpg改为png格式，白色的地方剪切为透明并将无用的透明地方删掉。
3. lyr1~lyr4无用的透明地方删掉.这样做就要重新将这4张图片定位到原本的位置。
4. 改完后full submit.

abalee wrote:

SB要大修

原本的

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"2142T34148-20.jpg",0,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\white effect.png",320,240
M,0,0,,320,240
S,0,0,216895,0.8054401
F,0,216895,,1
S,0,216895,221103,0.8054401
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.png",320,240
S,0,63603,65510,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\1.jpg",320,240
F,0,426,934,1
S,0,426,16697,0.8,1
M,0,426,29383,320,240,320,237
F,0,934,8561,1
F,0,8561,16021,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white effect.png",320,240
M,0,0,,320,240
S,0,0,,0.8054401
F,0,0,426,1
F,0,426,,1
F,0,426,1442,1,0.336022
F,0,1442,8561,0.336022,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White Effect 2.png",320,240
M,0,14663,,295,248
F,0,14663,16188,0,1
S,0,14663,16188,0.30368,0.6006398
S,0,16188,,0.6006398
S,0,16188,16697,0.6006398,3.404647
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\title.jpg",320,240
F,0,16697,16951,0,1
S,0,16697,32968,0.80544,0.9897599
F,0,16951,32714,1
F,0,32714,32968,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\title.jpg",320,240
F,0,16697,16951,0,1
S,0,16697,20764,0.80544,0.8515115
F,0,20764,21273,1,0
S,0,20764,21273,0.8515115,0.9897599
S,0,20764,21273,0.8515115,1.041598
S,0,21273,,1.041598

改了之后的:

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"2142T34148-20.jpg",0,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white effect.png",320,240
S,0,0,221103,0.8
F,0,0,63603,1
F,0,63603,65510,0
F,0,65510,221103,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\1.jpg",320,240
S,0,426,16691,0.8,1
F,0,426,8561,0,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White Effect 2.png",320,240
M,0,14663,,295,248
F,0,14663,16188,0,1
S,0,14663,16188,0.3,0.6
S,0,16188,16697,0.6,3.4
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\title.jpg",320,240
F,0,16697,16951,0,1
S,0,16697,32968,0.8,1
F,0,16951,32714,1
F,0,32714,32968,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\title.jpg",320,240
F,0,20764,21273,1,0
S,0,20764,21273,0.85,1.1

解释: @Mystica(咦怎么不是NGA)

SPOILER

1. 将white effect 移到foreground主要是因为1分40秒的break附近，原本的background会导致上下有黑边，为了美观移到foreground上.
2. 删掉black是因为只要将white effect在那一段时间取消，背景就是纯黑了. 但是我將實際語句改成了0之後發現任然還存在白色
3. 1.JPG主要是删掉看不见这个图片的时间以降低SB load以及删掉无用的语句.
4. 下一句的white effect是最无用的.原意是将覆盖在1.JPG上面的白色渐隐，但是因为你将白色设为背景，那就不如将1.JPG渐显，明显的就少了1.0x 的SB load.(记得应该可以用code直接将背景设为白色但是这算手动改osu所以我就不用了)
5. title这里也是一样，第二个为什么要一直出现呢？只要在需要的时候写出来就行了.
6. 后面的我不改了，没看也应该没问题.不过要指出的是你大概用的是SB editor，写出的code很累赘.要记住的就是如果一张图片被完全遮住的时候请去掉.

[重要]

1. 同时请删掉black.png.
2. 将title.jpg改为png格式，白色的地方剪切为透明并将无用的透明地方删掉。
3. lyr1~lyr4无用的透明地方删掉.这样做就要重新将这4张图片定位到原本的位置。
4. 改完后full submit.

1. 我不知道 aimod告诉我 Unused Image Files sb\black.png
2. aimod还告诉我http://puu.sh/xEMi colour顺序有点颠倒 虽然没啥意义但还是改了好
3. Hard:Spinner New Combo 02:08:047 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.