KuraiPettan wrote:

Easy
- Approach rate +1 for more readability ?done!
01:11:227 (2) - Begin this slider 1/1 later ? Even if the spot where it begins is fine, I think that the player will have tendency to click earlier and it will suit the lyrics~
02:12:427 (1) - This slider shoul begins 1/2 earlierdone!
02:31:627 (6) - Begin this slider 1/1 later ? If you are ok with that, add it a new combo mark and remove the new combo mark onto the next slider.
02:43:627 (2) - In my opinion, it would be better if you reduce this slider by 1/2done!

Hard
- AR 8 ?ok~

Insane
00:11:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this stream start a bit early, so in my opinion you should remove 00:11:902 (2)done!
00:16:627 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same here, remove 00:16:702 (4) ?done!
02:45:577 (1,2,3) - You don't think that the difficulty isn't already extremely hard that you make this triplet with a so huge spacing ? o_oI think too XD but, I put it

Star~

kioukiou wrote:

Lead-in is needless,remove it?

1. ffddffdfsdfsd.png 1.01MB, consider to use a jpg instead, the osz size is already large now.

1. try slider tick rate 1?

1. 00:07:627 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing
2. 00:30:427 (3,4,5,1) - might be too hard for a normal
3. 01:05:527 (1,2,3) - spacing
4. 01:37:627 (3,4,5,6) - as 00:30:427
5. 01:48:727 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
6. 01:53:077 (1,2,3) - ^ turn off grid snap may help

1. 01:54:877 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing

1. 01:17:077 (T) - suggestion: note here, start the spinner at 01:17:152, end at 01:18:202, and a new spinner from 01:18:277 to 01:19:177 (make this spinner's spinning volume 10% and 80% for the final sound)
2. 02:31:327 (3,4,5) - try to make the spacing more soft? the sudden change is not so friendly

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. ffddffdfsdfsd.png 1.01MB, consider to use a jpg instead, the osz size is already large now.

add new BG :3

[Easy]:

1. try slider tick rate 1?

Fixed

[Normal]:

1. 00:07:627 (1,2,3) - nazi spacingok
2. 00:30:427 (3,4,5,1) - might be too hard for a normalok
3. 01:05:527 (1,2,3) - spacingok
4. 01:37:627 (3,4,5,6) - as 00:30:427ok
5. 01:48:727 (1,2,3,4) - spacingok
6. 01:53:077 (1,2,3) - ^ turn off grid snap may help

ok!!

[Hard]:

1. 01:54:877 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing

done!

[Insane]:

1. 01:17:077 (T) - suggestion: note here, start the spinner at 01:17:152, end at 01:18:202, and a new spinner from 01:18:277 to 01:19:177 (make this spinner's spinning volume 10% and 80% for the final sound):D!ok.I changed here.but,It is slightly different.I put it. http://puu.sh/2A4A
2. 02:31:327 (3,4,5) - try to make the spacing more soft? the sudden change is not so friendly Anyway,i changed here.:3

rockrin, good song

star~

Colin Hou wrote:

plays quite well, this is for U

Garven wrote:

[General]
BG is 800x601 Change down to 800 x 600 please - also: Think you can find a higher-quality one too? This one is rather fuzzy...I add super BG!!
minusP -> source
Vocaloid -> tagsAlldone!

[Easy]
00:11:977 (3) - Kind of plays awkwardly. Maybe delete?ok
01:06:727 (3) - I really don't recommend repeat sliders this short with notes so soon after them in Easy difficulties. It's hard for new players to tell when it's going to end. You have A LOT of these kinds of sliders in this difficulty. It would play a lot more newbie-friendly if you tried something else with those.lol done!
01:05:527 (1) - Speaking of, though, a possible change is maybe a rhythm like this? It'll help reduce the star rating a little along with making the map not quite as repetitive rhythmically.

You could simplify a lot of the rhythms you use in this manner that would be overall much better towards new players imo without sacrificing how you follow the music too much.done!

[Normal]
00:21:877 (1) - Waaaay too soon after a spinner for a Normal at this BPM.I just noticed in this xD I put Break time.
00:40:627 (5,6) - Maybe unstack these? Was weird to have a repeating slider on top of a note like that.done!
00:55:027 (5,1) - ^ There are a lot more throughout the difficulty, if you're going to change them.done!
01:28:027 (1,2) - Spacingok

[Hard]
Big difficulty jump, but plays fine.:D

[Insane]
00:55:477 (8,1) - That jump. ;_;sorry,I keep it.

Main thing is that Easy really needs some toning down. A difficulty between Normal and Hard would be ideal, but I don't know if you want to put one in this late into the map set's life. It'd be easy to name the new one Hard, Hard -> Insane and Insane -> Rebel or something.. Anyway, let me know what you decide!i changed diff name.

Garven wrote:

Had a short IRC chat about a couple other things. There were a lot of changes, and I'd like someone else to make sure I didn't miss anything. x_x

Rebubbled!

:U

log

04:32 <val0108> : I revised MOD.But I don't know whether this is all right
04:33 <Garven> : What do you have questions with?
04:33 <val0108> : n-
04:33 <val0108> : Probably I think that the diff name changes is no.
04:33 <val0108> : how
04:33 <val0108> : ?
04:34 <Garven> : It wasn't quite what I was saying, but it works
04:35 <val0108> : yeah,sorry ;_;
04:35 <Garven> : No worries
04:35 <Garven> : Is the difficulty name the only thing you were worried about?
04:36 <val0108> : yes
04:36 <Garven> : Okay
04:36 <val0108> : Which thinks it to be good?
04:37 <val0108> : after name or before name
04:37 <Garven> : Mmmm
04:37 <Garven> : I think it'll be fine.
04:38 <Garven> : It woul dhave been best to have something between what is now Normal and Hard because the difficulty jump from those two is HUGE
04:38 <Garven> : I actually got a PM from someone offering to make you a guest diff between
04:38 <Garven> : But I don't know if you want that or not
04:40 <val0108> : oh
04:40 <val0108> : who?
04:40 <val0108> : guest
04:40 <Garven> : Metro
04:40 <val0108> : wwwwwwwwwwww
04:41 <val0108> : okok.I know he
04:41 <Garven> : Want me to wait for that then?
04:41 <val0108> : no
04:41 <Garven> : Haha, okay.
04:42 <val0108> : I want to go keep
04:42 <val0108> : I want to keep*
04:42 <Garven> : No new difficulties then? Or you want do it yourself?
04:43 <val0108> : Must I make a new difficulty...?
04:44 <val0108> : 5diff...;_;
04:44 <Garven> : It's not required: I am only suggesting.
04:44 <val0108> : xD
04:44 <Garven> : It would be better overall, but you don't have to do it
04:47 <val0108> : I want to leave this untouched
04:47 <Garven> : Very well.
04:47 <Garven> : I'll check back when I can~
04:48 <val0108> : ok
04:48 <val0108> : thanks
05:21 <Garven> : oy
05:21 *Garven is editing (Kagamine Rin - Black Rebel)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28425]
05:21 <Garven> : Easy:
05:21 <Garven> : 01:46:027 (1,2,1) - Spacing
05:21 <val0108> : n
05:22 <val0108> : !?
05:22 <Garven> : Due to timing section
05:22 <Garven> : Er, I guess it's Normal now
05:23 *val0108 is editing (Kagamine Rin - Black Rebel)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28425]
05:23 <val0108> : ah
05:23 <val0108> : http://puu.sh/3767
05:23 <val0108> : here?
05:24 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/3768
05:24 <Garven> : This is the reason distance snap is off there
05:24 <Garven> : There's no slider here though, so it's pointless
05:26 <val0108> : ah
05:26 <val0108> : 1.0?
05:26 <val0108> : slider velocity.
05:26 <Garven> : Yeah
05:26 <val0108> : ok
05:27 <Garven> : In Hard: 00:19:477 - I guess since you renamed this to Hard, it'd be okay to put that spinner back in. It might be better to map
05:27 <Garven> : through this small break though, or at least add a note at this point.
05:28 <val0108> : hmm
05:28 <val0108> : add note
05:28 <val0108> : then,no break
05:28 <val0108> : ?
05:29 <Garven> : Hmm
05:29 <Garven> : It could work with a break or without
05:29 <Garven> : The HP drain isn't very high, so no break is possible
05:30 <val0108> : yeah
05:30 <val0108> : ok.I put no break~
05:30 <val0108> : ahh
05:31 <val0108> : May I let Blake time...?@A@
05:31 <Garven> : What do you mean?
05:31 <Garven> : Add it back in?
05:31 <val0108> : My preference
05:32 <val0108> : if you say "no". I don't add break.
05:32 <Garven> : Oh, do whichever you want. :3
05:33 <val0108> :
05:35 <Garven> : In Insane: Compare 01:19:477 (1) - to 03:01:477 (1) -
05:37 <Garven> : In 0108 Rebel: 00:42:427 (5) - Maybe move this away from 00:41:827 (3) - a little bit? It gets difficult to see with the default hitburst.
05:37 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/376M
05:37 <val0108> : insane done!
05:38 <Garven> : 01:01:027 (4) - This keeps confusing me because you almost never go back like this, so I'm not expecting it. Might be better to keep it
05:38 <Garven> : visible instead of stacked.
05:38 <val0108> : i try
05:40 <Garven> : 01:38:227 (3) - Control + R? Maybe readjust 4 if you do this
05:41 <Garven> : 02:21:952 (8,9) - Delete? There are no more drums at this spot
05:42 <val0108> : delete? I still hear the drum
05:43 <val0108> : IMO
05:43 <Garven> : It's lingering, but there are no more hits
05:43 <Garven> : If you listen at 25% speed
05:43 <Garven> : But not important
05:44 <Garven> : Everything else looks fine
05:45 <val0108> : i change something now~
05:45 <Garven> : Let me know when you update~
05:45 <val0108> : ok
05:47 <val0108> : done!
05:50 <Garven> : Normal: 01:46:027 (1,2) - Spacing still
05:50 <val0108> : lol
05:50 <Garven> : You changed the timing section but not the notes ><
05:50 <val0108> : xd
05:51 <val0108> : ok~
05:54 <val0108> : a
05:54 <val0108> : 01:17:227 (1) - unrank spiner?
05:54 <val0108> : 0108 rebel
05:55 <Garven> : It's okay
05:55 <Garven> : Gets 2000 bonus
05:55 <val0108> : ok
05:56 <val0108> : well,I got good BG xD
05:56 <val0108> : lucky
05:56 <Garven> : I saw.
05:58 <Garven> : Ok, everything looks good.

Garven wrote:

04:38 <Garven> : I actually got a PM from someone offering to make you a guest diff between

Metro wrote:

Garven wrote:

04:38 <Garven> : I actually got a PM from someone offering to make you a guest diff between

This is not what I said. I asked you if the difficulty spread would prevent this from getting ranked and if so, I could try to help. I didn't offer to make a guest diff just for the sake of making it. I only want to see all val0108's maps ranked/approved, that's all.

Metro wrote:

Do you think that the difficulty spread will be a problem for ranking?

I'd like to know so I can help val.

Garven wrote:

Metro wrote:

This is not what I said. I asked you if the difficulty spread would prevent this from getting ranked and if so, I could try to help. I didn't offer to make a guest diff just for the sake of making it. I only want to see all val0108's maps ranked/approved, that's all.

Metro wrote:

Do you think that the difficulty spread will be a problem for ranking?

I'd like to know so I can help val.

Not sure how else to interpret that, but oh well.

Wishy22 wrote:

And why isn't this ranked already?

whymeman wrote:

[0108 Rebel]

00:11:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - At least take out the clap hitsounds on (3) and (5). The whole stream sounds terrible in all claps.
00:16:777 (4,5,6,7,1) - Remove claps from (5) and (7).
00:23:677 (9,10,11,12,1) - Remove claps from (10) and (12).
00:26:077 (4,5,6,7,1) - Remove claps from (5) and (7).
00:28:477 (8,9,10,11,1) - Remove claps from (9) and (11).
00:33:277 (4,5,6,7,1) - Remove claps from (5) and (7).
00:35:677 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:38:077 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:55:177 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:28:627 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remove claps from (4) and (6).
01:30:877 (4,5,6,7,1) - Remove claps from (5) and (7).
01:33:127 (2,3,4,5,1) - Remove claps from (3) and (5).
01:35:677 (4,5,6,7,1) - Remove claps from (5) and (7).
02:21:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stack sounds odd. First off, try cutting out the last two notes, then add a clap to (7).
02:28:102 (6,7,8,1) - Remove claps from (6) and (8).
02:32:452 (9,10,11,1) - Remove claps from (9) and (11).
02:33:652 (6,7,8,1) - Remove claps from (6) and (8).
02:34:852 (6,7,8,1) - ^
02:35:977 (6,7,8,9,1) - Remove claps from (7) and (9).
02:37:252 (6) - Remove clap.
02:51:652 (8,9,10,1) - Remove clap from (8) and (10).
02:52:852 (6,7,8,1) - Remove claps from (6) and (8).
02:54:052 (6,7,8,1) - ^
02:55:252 (6,7,8,1) - ^
02:56:452 (6) - Remove clap.
ALL DONE!
The map is nice, but the heavy overuse of the clap hitsound just stands out too much.

Garven wrote:

Changed a couple new combos in 0108 Rebel

Ranked!

NatsumeRin wrote:

congrats!

whymeman wrote:

The map is nice, but the heavy overuse of the clap hitsound just stands out too much.