igai na kao wo sinaide~

すた～

hello

starrrrr(*´∀`)

^^

Nice~>.<

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ありがとでーすヾ(●´∀｀●)ﾉ

good map~

star^-^

good ^^

nice map ad game o|★

moemoe

star

ぼくは星野歩くん！

Star~^0^

3 Insane diff ?

dNextGen wrote:

3 Insane diff ?

No, Aenna is Hard diff.

SnowWhite(Jump)
Aenna(Hard)
MeLLoN(Stream insane)

初めましてヽ(*´∀｀)ノ
譜面作りにかかるのが早くて驚きました

私も最近下手ながら←　譜面作りを始めたので
よければご指南ください('∀`)

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Nice maps!
難易度SnowWhite
1:13:464~1:13:728
が変な配置なきがしました！
難易度MeLLoN
1:25:37~1:28:64
のKiaimodeが抜けてるのは
暗めの雰囲気を察した配慮ですかね？
えろげ曲がんばです！
Star xD

thanks star&Mod~

KSHR>ぜひこちらこそおねがいします！

yuugeki1234 wrote:

Nice maps!
難易度SnowWhite
1:13:464~1:13:728
が変な配置なきがしました！
難易度MeLLoN
1:25:37~1:28:64
のKiaimodeが抜けてるのは
暗めの雰囲気を察した配慮ですかね？

SnowWhiteはもともとそういうスペーシングと配置なんで大丈夫です(゜∀゜)
Kiaiはわざと抜いてますー　統一感もたすため入れるかもですが･･･

Yo~

star~(●´ω｀●)ゞ

thanks star~

darinrin no tame

wahaha

:3

[General]
First offset : 443 Don't forget to resnap notes~

[Easy]
01:01:817 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and end it at the same spot it was

[Normal]
00:00:443 till 00:22:943 - Add more whistle would be better

[SnowWhite]
00:45:228 (1) - The whistle at the beginning feels a bit weird to me ._.

[Aenna]
00:24:162 (2) - Don't mute the end of this slider, Increase the HS sound by ~5 ticks

[MeLLoN]
Fine

Short mod and nice map ~ Star ♥

advice mod

you have 3 Insane difficulties in this map, this is unrankable, you are only allowed 2 insane diffs per mapset, sorry but you will need to remove one of them

Easy

sorry i dont like this diff at all, it feels like at parts your following nothing and for a Easy diff that is BAAAD, you need to go through this diff and try to make it flow to the music abit better, also theres no need to put so many fancy rythms into a easy diff, put too many in and it becomes very hard for a new player to follow

Normal
...........dont you think the spaced streams in this are abit too much for a normal >_>
bring your AR and OD up abit please, too slow for the map :/

this map has a big problem. the diff settings and the slider speed scream "Normal" at the player, but as soon as you start playing with the jumps and spaced streams this becomes more of a "hard", its like it does not kno what it wants to be,

you really need to either cool the spacing down abit and make it abit easier, that way it will become a normal. or up the diffs settings abit and speed the sliders up abit to turn this into a hard.

SnowWhite

why is the beginning of this map not mapped? its odd since all the other maps start from the beginning, please map it

becareful with some of your rythms. stuff like 00:58:111 (2,3,4,5) - does not really suit this map since the song holds a steady rythm and your trying to break it abit

this map kinda feels abit overmapped, theres too many streams where the song dont ask for them, maybe think of toning some of them down?

MeLLoN

again this diff feels overmapped, theres too many stacks and streams what the song does not ask for

my advice is to not map for making a song Insane, insted map for what seems to suit the song BEST

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prolly not the kind of mod you was expecting, but a mod of advice i think is more important than any small fix mod

Thanks Mod~

All suggestions ...sorry ,,,im late orz

MeLLoN

00:10:943 (1) - end at 00:11:393 ?
00:34:993 - 50%volume ?! too low Orz... because ...00:01:943 is 50% volume o.o
00:45:317 (8) - move to 00:45:140 ?
00:54:758 (1) - end at 00:55:022 , 00:55:111 - add note?
00:58:993 (1,2) - move farther?

Aenna

wow

SnowWhite

fine~

Normal

00:23:543 (1) - end at 00:26:523 ...? Orz
難しい:< ,i cant pass it with HR+DT Q.Q

Easy

fine~

where is Hard Q.Q

Thanks Mod~ (ﾉ∀｀●)

<Easy>
+0.5~1s to leadin time
01:47:699 (4) - replace clap with whistle?

<Normal>
AR+1~2 would make it easier to read

<SnowWhite>
The BPM 100 offset shouldn't be removed in order to keep the consistency of timing
claps feel like littered around. for example:
00:31:464 (7) - Add clap at the end
00:32:699 (2) - Remove clap
00:34:640 (9) - Add clap
00:35:523 (2) - Remove clap
and similar cases

<Aenna>
AR & OD -1 (Better do this since this will make the mapset look less like 3 Insanes)
01:08:170 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37409 <-?

nice work

[edit] Fixed. Here's bubble

thanks mod :3

[Easy]

Change the Audio Lead-In to 1 second like the other difficulties.

[Normal]

01:02:081 (1) - Don't start this spinner on the blue tick.

[SnowWhite]

Remove the unused Audio Lead-In.

That's what I can find, and btw... there are three really Insane difficulties on this mapset and I don't think it's rankable, try to make one of them more easier at least before I'll rebubble because it is too much, really.

EDIT: SnowWhite's difficulty has been removed and other things are now fixed.

Re-Bubbled~

Bubble repair.

[Overall]

Put 2 seconds of Audio Lead-In on every difficulty, since the map starts too early.

[Difficulties]

[MeLLoN]

Rename this difficulty as "Insane". There is any sense to put your name on a difficulty since you're the creator of the map.

That's all, I'll rank when you've fixed everything.

Nice song and awesome map.

thanks star~

HCG in the link <3

Yay o/

mellon pan~

fun!
so good XD

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novid版の難易度MeLLoNはInsaneになおせますか？