~ :3Gonzvlo wrote:
[Lan's Normal]
- The offset used in this diff is not the same used in the other diffs, fix this please. Oopsie, fixed~
- 00:38:172 (2,3) - I see that you're following the piano until: 00:38:973 - so I didn't expect those 2 circles there, consider removing them. (Perhaps replace them with a slider like you did with the 2nd verse?) Slider it is, then~
- 00:51:793 (3) - The music change starts here, so it would be great if you start the New Combo here. OK~
- 01:14:227 (2) - Hmm slider speed change, it's barely noticeable, you should add a New Combo. OK~
- 01:59:096 (3) - I suggest to use an Horizontal flip here to improve the flow. (You will also need to flip the next patterns). I thought It flows better when it goes in this direction... >: I'll wait for more opinions about this.
- 02:11:916 (3) - I still here that the music changes here, so I'll suggest again to start the New Combo here. OK~
- 02:34:350 (2) - Use New Combo here to re-mark the slider speed change. OK~
- 02:39:158 (1) - The "spinner-end" seems random, you should keep the consistency with the first spinner and make this spinner end here: 02:43:965 - OK~
- 02:59:989 (3) - I feel that it's New Combo time, maybe ? OK~
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