Mercurius wrote:

[StoryBoard]

SB is wrong.

　ま　て　せ　た　な.　 →　　待　た　せ　た　な。

　うじの　STEP　　→　　Music Start !

　このざん　　→　　このターンに、

　おれのすべとおかげ！　　→　　オレの全てを賭ける！

You should remake SB.

Go

Crimmi wrote:

Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

~[General]~

Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable, make it 192 kbps.

~[Simple]~

01:15:179 (1) - Remove this spinner and extend the previous spinner to 01:15:885.
01:17:297 (3) - Align with (2). 2 is aligned with 6 and 3 is aligned with 5.
01:18:355 (6) - Align with (5). (might have to fix (7) & (1) though.)

~[Taiko]~

There is an object that is not snapped.
Taiko diffs have to have 1.40 slider velocity. You have 1.50.
Taiko diffs mostly have an AR of 5, you have an AR of 7.

~[Hyper]~

There are 2 objects that aren't snapped, please re-snap them
00:48:002 (1) - This spinner is way to close to the streams, I suggest you place it on 00:49:238.

~[Mustaash]~

01:40:767 (10) - New combo?
01:43:238 (11) - ^
01:50:120 (17) - ^

*Star*

Natteke wrote:

Only Me or YEAHYEAHYEAHHH ARE ALLOWED TO MAP MITSURU SONGS

edit: this map is horrible

ziin wrote:

[hyper]
00:12:885 - add something in this dead space
00:18:267 (1) - delete or use the last slider, shouldn't be a new combo.
00:22:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clap pattern is messed up.
00:25:679 (4,1) - sliders
00:27:532 - add note
00:27:620 - add note, make it a stream starting here
00:28:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - use long sliders not short ones.
00:33:532 (4) - delete, add note before and after on blue tick.
00:38:826 (4,5,6) - replace with circle jumps.
00:49:414 - add note
00:51:885 (5) - replace 2 repeats with circles00:55:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - keep clap pattern (1,4,7,10,13,15)
00:57:797 (1) - delete
01:01:502 - add note, make it a stream starting here.
01:22:061 (5,6) - long sliders please
01:28:944 - more notes
01:33:797 (3,4) - boo to antijumps. Should be a slider anyway.

darck360 wrote:

Hey ~

[Simple]
STR : 2
00:39:532 : Finish
00:50:826 : ^
01:24:708 : ^

[Hyper]
STR : 2
00:49:238 : Finish
00:57:532 : ^

[Mustaash]
AR -1
01:25:061 : Break
01:56:473 : Finish

~

Mercurius wrote:

Recheck

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Mercurius wrote:

Recheck

got it fixed. Sorry, i just put a layer above the other.

CracK wrote:

[General]
Offset seems to be early
Add Mustaash to tags
Your loud custom whistle doesn't really fit =\
[Mustaash]
00:10:591 (9,10) - Feels close
00:11:120 (12,1) - ^
00:25:679 (2,3) - I am not able to see these notes due to the color similarity with BG.. Maybe change the color?
00:26:473 (7,8,9) - ^
00:41:121 (3,4) - They sound bad for me..
00:41:121 (3) - Move reverse point to 00:41:297?
And then move 00:41:826 (4) - to 00:41:649 and add a note 00:41:649
00:53:297 (4,1) - Feels close again
01:13:326 (1) - Start spinner at 01:13:502 and add the notes in the empty space
01:16:238 (3) - Why have you silenced this note? Move the timing section that changes sounds a bit farther
Or you can add a finish on it
01:19:061 (3) - Same
01:21:885 - 01:24:708 - You shouldn't have placed the notes with 1/3 signature here, they don't fit at all
01:36:532 - Probably you should add a clap here
01:43:591 (2,3) - I don't really like these.. Maybe vertical flip them at least
01:44:297 (5) - Move it somewhere to fix spacing with the next slider. Otherwise 01:44:473 (6,7) - feels close
01:47:120 (13) - New combo?

[Hyper]
00:11:685 (T) - You should place this on the start of the slider. Here - 00:11:649
00:34:767 - Add a note
Hm. I actually liked this diff starting from 01:13:061

[Simple]
00:16:944 (2,3,4) - The placement of them is really strange and velocity of the sliders is pretty high for an Easy diff

No major problems in the mapset. Have a star from me