You have been warned...
[Easy]Well yeah. It's easy
Some really nice sliders here.
Everything looks fine to me!
[Gonz]Nothing wrong here. Just some minor things with slidercurves and such (oh he'll hate me):
00:00:046 (1) - could be curved more exactly around (2) by deleting the unnecessary point in the middle and adjusting the remaining 2.
98,267,46,2,0,B|94:317|151:363|198:350,2,150,2|2|2
00:05:098 (1) - ^ (no code)
02:26:572 (1) - could be curved much nicer around 02:25:941 (2)
03:17:414 (3,1,2) - weird beatplacement imo. Does this follow the lyrics and the fading echo?
03:30:677 (1) - this is pretty much perfect even though the end is ~2px too close to 03:30:046 (4) but this is getting ridiculous
03:39:835 (1,4) - oh dem curves
This map is pretty much as good as it can get at ~3 star diff.
[Hard]00:05:098 (1,2) - Why not use the heavy keyboard sounds on the red ticks (00:05:414 & 00:06:677) to the rhythmpattern you used before? Maybe shortening the the sliders to the white ticks (scale to ~0,75%). Then place the "turning" points exactly on the mentioned red ticks. This way the transition between the first two combos beat pattern and the 4th combos beat pattern will be much better imo.
00:18:046 (1) - could be placed better to fit around 00:17:414 (3)
00:22:151 (4) - ^ around 00:21:835 (3)
00:21:993 (X) - maybe add a circle to match the same rhythm-pattern for the same sound at 00:24:361 (4,5,6)? (oh consistency)
00:27:046 (X) - ^
00:25:309 (1) - red dot (turning point) is slightly off the red tick. Fix without changing anything else:
336,272,25309,6,0,B|368:224|428:242|428:242|392:192|424:144,1,210,0|8
00:40:624 (X) - adding circles on blue and red tick makes for a much nicer transition imo (the same you used for exactly this part later on 02:01:309 (7))
00:47:888 (X) - add circle to match the mapping of the base you used before (00:44:572 (2,3,4)) and after (00:50:256 (3,4,5))
00:58:151 (3,4) - they don't make sense to me. Both should be moved back 1/4 tick to match the actual base and keep (5) in place as it fits. Maybe adjust combo afterwards.
01:15:677 (X) - feels empty. maybe add circle?
01:34:624 (X) - ^ (though not really sure about this one as the slider (4) should start here to make it fit perfectly)
01:38:414 (X) - circle could be stacked upon slider to pick up the pace and match the song
02:10:151 (2) - place the red dot on the first blue tick and add the custom slider tick to better fit the lyrics?
02:12:046 (1) - red dot on red tick to fit lyrics and rhythm
02:49:309 (1,3) - somehow the turning point fits the song perfectly when playing. just awesome
02:59:256 (X) - maybe add circle between sliders to match lyrics and beat
02:59:414 (1,2,3) - adding circles on the blue ticks might support the base but as you focus on the lyrics here I think it is not really necessary...just in case.
03:01:782 (X) - why do you leave out this beat? kinda confusing but still playable.
03:38:572 (3) - red dot -> red tick
Overall nothing gamebreaking. Just some things I thought where a bit awkward while playing it. Again a great job by louis!
~star
