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Aimee B - Fallen Angel
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I could make the taiko just to be cool \o/
Topic Starter
I could make the taiko just to be cool \o/A great difference between "I can" and "i want".
So if you really want go ahead.
IceBeam wrote:
Thanks Been Waiting For A Full Version Of This 
hi
[Easy]
00:52:467 (2,2) - not symmetrical ?
01:01:309 (1,2) - spacing
01:23:414 (1,2) - ^
03:48:046 (4) - clap at starting
04:22:151 (2) - end at 04:22:624 ?
[Gonz]
00:39:519 (2) - 1 gird right ?
01:08:888 - circle ?
01:09:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little up ? 01:16:467 (2,3) nearly half out of the screen
01:38:572 (1,2,3,4) - try this :
02:29:098 (1) - not symmetrical ?
02:58:151 (4) - try this :
03:29:730 (3,4) - spacing
04:21:835 (3,4,5) - try this :
[Hard]
00:10:151 (1) - this slider around circle is not look well , do this :
00:24:677 (6,1) - ^ around better plz
00:54:677 (2) - ctrl+1 , the 3rd square 1 gird left , to make arounding better
01:39:519 (2) - 1 gird down ?
01:52:467 (3) - move to 01:52:309 ?
02:24:677 (2) - ctrl+1 , 1 gird left , 1 gird up
02:49:309 (1,2,3) - try this :
04:10:151 (1) - try this :
04:22:467 (5) - end at 04:22:624 ?
nice map
[Easy]
00:52:467 (2,2) - not symmetrical ?
01:01:309 (1,2) - spacing
01:23:414 (1,2) - ^
03:48:046 (4) - clap at starting
04:22:151 (2) - end at 04:22:624 ?
[Gonz]
00:39:519 (2) - 1 gird right ?
01:08:888 - circle ?
01:09:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little up ? 01:16:467 (2,3) nearly half out of the screen
01:38:572 (1,2,3,4) - try this :
02:29:098 (1) - not symmetrical ?
02:58:151 (4) - try this :
03:29:730 (3,4) - spacing
04:21:835 (3,4,5) - try this :
[Hard]
00:10:151 (1) - this slider around circle is not look well , do this :
00:24:677 (6,1) - ^ around better plz
00:54:677 (2) - ctrl+1 , the 3rd square 1 gird left , to make arounding better
01:39:519 (2) - 1 gird down ?
01:52:467 (3) - move to 01:52:309 ?
02:24:677 (2) - ctrl+1 , 1 gird left , 1 gird up
02:49:309 (1,2,3) - try this :
04:10:151 (1) - try this :
04:22:467 (5) - end at 04:22:624 ?
nice map
You have been warned...
[Easy]
Well yeah. It's easy
Some really nice sliders here.
Everything looks fine to me!
[Gonz]
Nothing wrong here. Just some minor things with slidercurves and such (oh he'll hate me):
00:00:046 (1) - could be curved more exactly around (2) by deleting the unnecessary point in the middle and adjusting the remaining 2.
02:26:572 (1) - could be curved much nicer around 02:25:941 (2)
03:17:414 (3,1,2) - weird beatplacement imo. Does this follow the lyrics and the fading echo?
03:30:677 (1) - this is pretty much perfect even though the end is ~2px too close to 03:30:046 (4) but this is getting ridiculous
03:39:835 (1,4) - oh dem curves
This map is pretty much as good as it can get at ~3 star diff.
[Hard]
00:05:098 (1,2) - Why not use the heavy keyboard sounds on the red ticks (00:05:414 & 00:06:677) to the rhythmpattern you used before? Maybe shortening the the sliders to the white ticks (scale to ~0,75%). Then place the "turning" points exactly on the mentioned red ticks. This way the transition between the first two combos beat pattern and the 4th combos beat pattern will be much better imo.
00:18:046 (1) - could be placed better to fit around 00:17:414 (3)
00:22:151 (4) - ^ around 00:21:835 (3)
00:21:993 (X) - maybe add a circle to match the same rhythm-pattern for the same sound at 00:24:361 (4,5,6)? (oh consistency)
00:27:046 (X) - ^
00:25:309 (1) - red dot (turning point) is slightly off the red tick. Fix without changing anything else:
00:47:888 (X) - add circle to match the mapping of the base you used before (00:44:572 (2,3,4)) and after (00:50:256 (3,4,5))
00:58:151 (3,4) - they don't make sense to me. Both should be moved back 1/4 tick to match the actual base and keep (5) in place as it fits. Maybe adjust combo afterwards.
01:15:677 (X) - feels empty. maybe add circle?
01:34:624 (X) - ^ (though not really sure about this one as the slider (4) should start here to make it fit perfectly)
01:38:414 (X) - circle could be stacked upon slider to pick up the pace and match the song
02:10:151 (2) - place the red dot on the first blue tick and add the custom slider tick to better fit the lyrics?
02:12:046 (1) - red dot on red tick to fit lyrics and rhythm
02:49:309 (1,3) - somehow the turning point fits the song perfectly when playing. just awesome
02:59:256 (X) - maybe add circle between sliders to match lyrics and beat
02:59:414 (1,2,3) - adding circles on the blue ticks might support the base but as you focus on the lyrics here I think it is not really necessary...just in case.
03:01:782 (X) - why do you leave out this beat? kinda confusing but still playable.
03:38:572 (3) - red dot -> red tick
Overall nothing gamebreaking. Just some things I thought where a bit awkward while playing it. Again a great job by louis!
~star
[Easy]
Well yeah. It's easy
Some really nice sliders here.
Everything looks fine to me!
[Gonz]
Nothing wrong here. Just some minor things with slidercurves and such (oh he'll hate me):
00:00:046 (1) - could be curved more exactly around (2) by deleting the unnecessary point in the middle and adjusting the remaining 2.
98,267,46,2,0,B|94:317|151:363|198:350,2,150,2|2|200:05:098 (1) - ^ (no code)
02:26:572 (1) - could be curved much nicer around 02:25:941 (2)
03:17:414 (3,1,2) - weird beatplacement imo. Does this follow the lyrics and the fading echo?
03:30:677 (1) - this is pretty much perfect even though the end is ~2px too close to 03:30:046 (4) but this is getting ridiculous
03:39:835 (1,4) - oh dem curves
This map is pretty much as good as it can get at ~3 star diff.
[Hard]
00:05:098 (1,2) - Why not use the heavy keyboard sounds on the red ticks (00:05:414 & 00:06:677) to the rhythmpattern you used before? Maybe shortening the the sliders to the white ticks (scale to ~0,75%). Then place the "turning" points exactly on the mentioned red ticks. This way the transition between the first two combos beat pattern and the 4th combos beat pattern will be much better imo.
00:18:046 (1) - could be placed better to fit around 00:17:414 (3)
00:22:151 (4) - ^ around 00:21:835 (3)
00:21:993 (X) - maybe add a circle to match the same rhythm-pattern for the same sound at 00:24:361 (4,5,6)? (oh consistency)
00:27:046 (X) - ^
00:25:309 (1) - red dot (turning point) is slightly off the red tick. Fix without changing anything else:
336,272,25309,6,0,B|368:224|428:242|428:242|392:192|424:144,1,210,0|800:40:624 (X) - adding circles on blue and red tick makes for a much nicer transition imo (the same you used for exactly this part later on 02:01:309 (7))
00:47:888 (X) - add circle to match the mapping of the base you used before (00:44:572 (2,3,4)) and after (00:50:256 (3,4,5))
00:58:151 (3,4) - they don't make sense to me. Both should be moved back 1/4 tick to match the actual base and keep (5) in place as it fits. Maybe adjust combo afterwards.
01:15:677 (X) - feels empty. maybe add circle?
01:34:624 (X) - ^ (though not really sure about this one as the slider (4) should start here to make it fit perfectly)
01:38:414 (X) - circle could be stacked upon slider to pick up the pace and match the song
02:10:151 (2) - place the red dot on the first blue tick and add the custom slider tick to better fit the lyrics?
02:12:046 (1) - red dot on red tick to fit lyrics and rhythm
02:49:309 (1,3) - somehow the turning point fits the song perfectly when playing. just awesome
02:59:256 (X) - maybe add circle between sliders to match lyrics and beat
02:59:414 (1,2,3) - adding circles on the blue ticks might support the base but as you focus on the lyrics here I think it is not really necessary...just in case.
03:01:782 (X) - why do you leave out this beat? kinda confusing but still playable.
03:38:572 (3) - red dot -> red tick
Overall nothing gamebreaking. Just some things I thought where a bit awkward while playing it. Again a great job by louis!
~star
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.
Some suggestions were a bit 'Nazi' but helpful, Everything fixed. Thanks.wcx19911123 wrote:
[Gonz]
00:39:519 (2) - 1 gird right ?
01:08:888 - circle ?
01:09:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little up ? 01:16:467 (2,3) nearly half out of the screen It's fine imo
01:38:572 (1,2,3,4) - try this :
02:29:098 (1) - not symmetrical ?
02:58:151 (4) - try this :
03:29:730 (3,4) - spacing
04:21:835 (3,4,5) - try this :
Thanks :3p3n wrote:
[Gonz]
00:00:046 (1) - could be curved more exactly around (2) by deleting the unnecessary point in the middle and adjusting the remaining 2. This is a symmetrical curve rotated 40° :o
00:05:098 (1) - ^ (no code) ^
02:26:572 (1) - could be curved much nicer around 02:25:941 (2) I care about curves and slider design a lot, I think it looks fine :/
03:17:414 (3,1,2) - weird beatplacement imo. Does this follow the lyrics and the fading echo? It's simple 1/1 so I guess it's easy to follow.
03:30:677 (1) - this is pretty much perfect even though the end is ~2px too close to 03:30:046 (4) but this is getting ridiculous :P D:
03:39:835 (1,4) - oh dem curves :D D:
Download: Aimee B - Fallen Angel (Louis Cyphre) [Gonz].osu
I don't think you need 'Gonz' and 'Gonzvlo' in tags.
Remove 'Gonz'?
just a minor fix, no kudo plz
Remove 'Gonz'?
just a minor fix, no kudo plz
ну значит мне дай кудосу и убери че-нибудь из тагов
Taiko map finished. Due to low BPM it's not that hard. Oni lvl. 6, I guess.
Download: Aimee B - Fallen Angel (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Download: Aimee B - Fallen Angel (Louis Cyphre) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Hard
00:23:730 (3) - delete the clap at the end of this slider
00:40:467 (8) - new combo? This is just my preference tho.
01:11:098 (x) - sounds better if you add a note here imo..
[01:40:151 (1) - remove combo?
01:41:098 (6) - new combo?]
03:19:309 (1,1,1,1) - imo, you don't need these combos...
[03:22:151 (6) - new combo
03:22:782 (1) - remove combo.]
03:54:677 (1) - delete finish at the end of this slider
Gonz
--is this supposed to be a normal? cuz i don't like anti-spacing things in normal D: o well. it's still readable, so I guess I'm fine with it.
01:15:835 (1,2,3,4) - it's so low ;_; not really a big deal tho.
02:54:993 (6,7,8,1) - eh sounds and feels weird to me. try this sort of rhythm? (i also just don't like the stacking in 02:54:993 (6,7,8) - ):
Easy
02:25:308 (x) - i'd like it better with a note here..
04:22:151 (2) - end at 04:22:624?
Awesome map! :3
Star~~
00:23:730 (3) - delete the clap at the end of this slider
00:40:467 (8) - new combo? This is just my preference tho.
01:11:098 (x) - sounds better if you add a note here imo..
[01:40:151 (1) - remove combo?
01:41:098 (6) - new combo?]
03:19:309 (1,1,1,1) - imo, you don't need these combos...
[03:22:151 (6) - new combo
03:22:782 (1) - remove combo.]
03:54:677 (1) - delete finish at the end of this slider
Gonz
--is this supposed to be a normal? cuz i don't like anti-spacing things in normal D: o well. it's still readable, so I guess I'm fine with it.
01:15:835 (1,2,3,4) - it's so low ;_; not really a big deal tho.
02:54:993 (6,7,8,1) - eh sounds and feels weird to me. try this sort of rhythm? (i also just don't like the stacking in 02:54:993 (6,7,8) - ):
Easy
02:25:308 (x) - i'd like it better with a note here..
04:22:151 (2) - end at 04:22:624?
Awesome map! :3
Star~~
Topic Starter
00:23:730 (3) - delete the clap at the end of this sliderfixed.
03:54:677 (1) - delete finish at the end of this slider
thanks for modding.
Correct Artist and Song title here:
Mitsunori Ikeda Feat. Aimee B - Fallen Angel - Short EditAlso, no kudosu.
winber1 wrote:
Gonz
--is this supposed to be a normal? cuz i don't like anti-spacing things in normal D: o well. it's still readable, so I guess I'm fine with it.
I don't get what you're trying to say, I'm pretty sure that I didn't use any "anti-jumps" or "anti-space". If you didn't get the pattern, I used 1.0x for objects in 1/2 and 0.8x for objects in 1/1 (Except for the first 40s where I used 0.6x since it was instrumental only). Please, feel free to list any non-intuitive spacing, I'll be happy to check the map again :3
01:15:835 (1,2,3,4) - it's so low ;_; not really a big deal tho. There's plenty space left imo
02:54:993 (6,7,8,1) - eh sounds and feels weird to me. try this sort of rhythm? (i also just don't like the stacking in 02:54:993 (6,7,8) - ):
You're right the spacing is a kinda iffy, fixed
There are 2 maps of this song ranked already so we should keep the consistency. ("Short Edit"? Is this correct? because this version is 4mins long, doesn't seem too short D:)Faust wrote:
Correct Artist and Song title here:Mitsunori Ikeda Feat. Aimee B - Fallen Angel - Short Edit
Download: Aimee B - Fallen Angel (Louis Cyphre) [Gonz].osu
That's a stupid excuse to not use the original artist and song title. Why should you care about being consistent with the other maps that have incorrect information. You're making it tradition to just stick to whatever came before this regardless of right or wrong. It's not very hard to make a correct change is it.Gonzvlo wrote:
There are 2 maps of this song ranked already so we should keep the consistency. ("Short Edit"? Is this correct? because this version is 4mins long, doesn't seem too short D:)
Beuchi and I had this same conversation over the artist back when she made her map. Using the full source/artist resulted in being too long on the song select screen, so we agreed to omit "Mitsunori Ikeda". I think I found that Ikeda was the composer, and since Aimee B is the singer, it made sense to only use her as the artist.
("Short Edit"? Is this correct? because this version is 4mins long, doesn't seem too short D:)If you bothered checking the album, there are two versions of Fallen Angel: the short edit (this one) and the full version (which is 11 minutes of silence with an Easter Egg at the end), so putting Short Edit is correct.
...But the song itself isn't a "short edit". The only "edit" is the actual track from the OST. There's no need to add "short edit" to the title.Firo Prochainezo wrote:
("Short Edit"? Is this correct? because this version is 4mins long, doesn't seem too short D:)If you bothered checking the album, there are two versions of Fallen Angel: the short edit (this one) and the full version (which is 11 minutes of silence with an Easter Egg at the end), so putting Short Edit is correct.
Topic Starter
I'll just add "Mitsunori Ikeda" to tags.
I did, but I only found 1 version so I supposed the "Short Edit" was the "T.V Size", my apologies.Firo Prochainezo wrote:
("Short Edit"? Is this correct? because this version is 4mins long, doesn't seem too short D:)If you bothered checking the album, there are two versions of Fallen Angel: the short edit (this one) and the full version (which is 11 minutes of silence with an Easter Egg at the end), so putting Short Edit is correct.
Also, since you added "Mitsunori Ikeda", one of the composers, to tags then you should add "LISA" too.
Reference: ED Video and Wiki
Maybe, I should regret sleeping before modding this ;_;
orz
Nothing wrong anyway <3
Good luck :3
orz
Nothing wrong anyway <3
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Thanks
:3
nice map!
Something fixed and gonna ranked.
You did it again, Louis :3
Really good map :>
Congratz
Congratz
You guys.
awesome map^^
can't stop playing this
can't stop playing this
Topic Starter
Thanks guys.
I love this song, grats
Well done! 
Wow this seems quite nice, good job, Louis Cyphre!
I want to download it D: but it says that it doesn't exist in the provided link
Topic Starter
Thanks guys again :3
I want to download it D: but it says that it doesn't exist in the provided linkI guess you are alone ...