As per request~
[Hard]
This is a pretty easy 15M, I would say.
00:24:539 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to put this so close to the end of the previous comboset.
00:28:381 (4,5) - Make these two sliders instead of a note and a long slider.
00:30:393 (1) - Same as 00:24:539 (1)
00:40:636 (5,6) - Make this look like the picture below to better fit the music.
01:02:679 (X) - Add a note here.
01:11:003 (1) - Same as 00:24:539 (1)
01:26:368 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I don't see a logic in the spacing in this part, I think it might be better if you just stacked notes like these rather than potentially making them confusing.
01:43:564 (1) - Same as 00:24:539 (1)
01:44:479 (4,5) - Make these two sliders instead of a note and a long slider.
01:47:953 (5) - Add a note here, and push the slider back as shown.
01:56:002 (3) - Add a note here, and push all the sliders that follows ( 01:56:185 (4,5,6,7) ) back by one red tick.
01:59:661 (5) - Remove all repeats from this slider, then add a spinner from 01:59:935 to 02:01:124.
02:56:368 (3,4,5) - Are these really necessary? In a 0.5x section too?
02:57:831 (3,4,5) - ^
02:59:295 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:197 (X) - This is a long break you have here, try mapping from here to reduce the break.
Promising for a first map, but still some improvements to be made. I am interested in doing a normal guest diff if you're okay with it.
Star!