1. the BG has a strange aspect ratio, seems like you resized 16:10/16:9 image to 4:3?
2. 00:26:672 ~ 00:36:272 (T) - this part sounds empty in all diffs, try use some soft-hitwhistles? (when I beat the notes, I can't feel/hear them, that's a bit weired)
3. 01:38:672 ~ 01:48:272 (T) - ^

1. 00:12:197 (T) - move the volume/hitsounds settings to the red line and delete this one.
2. 02:40:772 (3,4) - 3 grids down?

1. Difficulty: OD-1. Streamy maps with OD8 are just ridiculous if you ask me. Don't think people will SS this, apart from the usual 2-3 ones.
2. 00:59:522 (4) - This note brings out lots of hatred from me. Even with 300s turned off it was really hard to notice. I like your patterns but if you can, please fix this so it's atleast a little visible, a 1-2 grid4 move just so you can see a glimpse of it would be really nice.
3. 01:50:372 (5) - Clap at the start of the slider?
4. 02:39:872 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are silenced. That's unrankable. Please make them hearable.
5. 02:41:147 - Add a timing section here which removes the kiai. Afaik, unclosed kiai isn't allowed. Or, if your intention was to end it on the previous timing section (which I assume so, looking at the other diffs), just end it on the previous section without adding this one, but don't forget to enable it on the timing section @spinner before.

1. Slightly hard for a hard, looks more like a standard insane diff. Looking how Insane is harder, I guess that's fine. ,_,
2. 00:56:672 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?

1. 01:49:472 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in the combo, 2 looks unsnapped in a weird way.
2. 02:08:972 (1) - Don't think you really need a new combo for this. I see you have many new combos which could be removed but they make sense more or less, this one doesn't that much.

1. 00:42:872 (3) - Maybe remove this note? It kinda feels odd because there isn't one @00:41:672.

1. While the background's dimensions are alright, the picture feels like it was widescreen and then it just got compressed to 4:3 ratio. Such slim Kyouka doesn't look that good. If possible try to find a better background for this mapset, just a suggestion (I couldn't find one ;_;).

lolcubes wrote:

Hey galvenize!
Here's some stuff. Opinions and suggestions will be in green, and you can just ignore them if you don't care.

[Insane]:

1. Difficulty: OD-1. Streamy maps with OD8 are just ridiculous if you ask me. Don't think people will SS this, apart from the usual 2-3 ones.
   The less SS there are, the better. I always prioritize a high OD. DR is at 6, allowing more people to clear the map which I think is more important than having tons of SS's.
   
2. 00:59:522 (4) - This note brings out lots of hatred from me. Even with 300s turned off it was really hard to notice. I like your patterns but if you can, please fix this so it's atleast a little visible, a 1-2 grid4 move just so you can see a glimpse of it would be really nice. Stacking notes is what makes it insane, streams aside.
3. 01:50:372 (5) - Clap at the start of the slider? nice
4. 02:39:872 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are silenced. That's unrankable. Please make them hearable. Indeed, fix'd
5. 02:41:147 - Add a timing section here which removes the kiai. Afaik, unclosed kiai isn't allowed. Or, if your intention was to end it on the previous timing section (which I assume so, looking at the other diffs), just end it on the previous section without adding this one, but don't forget to enable it on the timing section @spinner before. little mistake, fix'd

[Hard]:

1. Slightly hard for a hard, looks more like a standard insane diff. Looking how Insane is harder, I guess that's fine. ,_,
2. 00:56:672 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?

[Normal]:

1. 01:49:472 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in the combo, 2 looks unsnapped in a weird way. mkay
2. 02:08:972 (1) - Don't think you really need a new combo for this. I see you have many new combos which could be removed but they make sense more or less, this one doesn't that much. ye, removed

[Easy]:

1. 00:42:872 (3) - Maybe remove this note? It kinda feels odd because there isn't one @00:41:672. If i remove it, there would be a huge empty space.

[General]:

1. While the background's dimensions are alright, the picture feels like it was widescreen and then it just got compressed to 4:3 ratio. Such slim Kyouka doesn't look that good. If possible try to find a better background for this mapset, just a suggestion (I couldn't find one ;_;).

A short mod, because there wasn't anything to mod. Maybe try to reduce the number of new combos in Normal, but I don't think they're wrong, so...
Good luck.~ :3