Alarmable
--not sure if it's my skin or not, but the dark blue blends in with the background at times, and i misread things. well there's only two spots where this happens. You should probably make the dark blue a little lighter.
00:15:090 (5) - align this with combo 3 and 4 somehow. it looks weird atm ._.
00:47:271 (1) - remove combo
00:47:453 (2) - new combo
00:51:090 (3,4,5,6) - up 1 grid
00:51:635 (7) - up 1 right 1
01:05:453 (4) - i did not even see this note. either the color or AR needs to change imo. (however, i like his AR, so that means the color needs to change lol)
01:18:543 (1) - you can't really see this note either. change color perhaps?
01:29:816 (2) - although i actually saw this note, this could be a little confusing as well cuz of the combo color
01:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5) - i honestly don't like having one kick slider in between notes in the middle of streams. They completely break the flow of the stream imo. and I just basically play it as if the slider wasn't there hoping playing extra notes don't mess me up lol. nothing unrankable about them i guess tho ._.
02:05:815 (1) - remove combo
02:06:178 (1,2,3) - i would rather just make this three notes symmetrical about the y-axis, something like this:
Sanae00:16:362 (6) - looks like you want combo 7 to be where it is, so perhaps move this 1 grid left?
01:05:998 (1) - either remove this combo, or make the previous pattern have the same combo colors.
01:49:998 (5) - new combo
Normal has correct spacing and stuff, but the slider velocity... o_o. a little fast? slider velocities that are like almost double the spacing is fine in insane or hard, but idk about normal. i'm not the one to say anything about that tho.
..Hope you find this useful
>_>still a cool song and map tho