miku wrote:

offset:1115 (?

支持一下

sherrie__fay wrote:

[general]
所有对于+note的建议都是个人觉得这里应该有节拍而其实没有放。可以凭个人意愿自行斟酌增加或不加=w=但是加星号的地方是强烈觉得得加一个……凭个人意愿。
我自己也不太会加nc……只是几个地方大致断了一下
[Easy]
Beat Snap Divisor:1/4 -check 这个没什么影响
[Hard]
01:06:858(6) 对齐 -check
方法：按住shift再移动note
[INSE7EN]
00:17:012 -- +note
00:32:012(5,6)改成折返
00:34:089 -- +note
00:34:550 -- ^
00:36:627(12) -- nc
00:40:781(5,6,7,8,9)5-hits
00:41:704(9)--nc
00:49:550(1)这折返的倾斜角好诡异……转一下就好了
00:56:242 -- +note
00:57:627(5)下移一格
00:58:550(8)--nc
00:59:935 -- +note
01:01:550(7)折返转一下
01:09:396 --nc
01:11:242 -- +note*
01:17:242(8)--nc
01:34:781(3)右移一格
01:37:089(6)--nc
01:42:165(8) ^
01:48:974(2)右移一格
01:57:165--最后这个7就可以掺点短滑条了 全连打太膜疼了
01:59:242 --+note*
-All checked

看得我泪流满面，现在的新人mapper一个比一个牛叉……
我至今做不出AImod挑不出毛病的E……做N总能做成H……
曲子很燃……打起来也很好……
修葺一下……有望rank……

Air_kannabi wrote:

This is my GD

first! star@

1. Add "Air_kannabi" to the tags of all difficulties.
2. I think it'd be better for consistency to use only standard diff names.
3. Add kiai time for Easy, Normal and Hard ?
4. Remove countdown on all diffs because it doesn't have the time to display.
5. Add an audio lead-in of 3000ms to all diffs but Easy (which already has it).

1. 00:15:914 (1) - Unneeded new combo ?
2. 00:40:837 (1) - Remove this new combo to stay consistent in your comboing.
3. 01:07:145 (1,1) - I think it'd be better to remove these two new combos, I don't really see why they're here
4. 01:38:529 (1,1) - Same.
5. 01:40:837 (4) - New combo on this one as well to be consistent with 01:41:760 (1,1) -
6. Overall, I think the difficulty has room for improvement. It's acceptable as is, of course, but you used the same rhythms for the whole song, and these rhythms are quite generic. Also, there are weird "little breaks" (like 2 or 3 white ticks without any circle), and these feel weird. The sliders could be improved as well (nicer curves and less overlaps ><). Don't give up ! Feel free to ask me any question you feel is necessary to ask. Good luck !

1. Here again, the sliders could be a bit better. Nicer curves play and look a lot better.
2. I like what you did with the normal-hitnormal hitsound, but at times it sounds weird (I'll point that out). Also, you need other hitsounds to go with it (add normal claps as well ?) or the map will sound bland. I'll go pretty nazi with hitsounds, but it's important, because these claps give the rhythm to the difficulty and are important in the flow.
3. 00:38:991 - here and 00:39:914 - the lack of note here felt weird. You installed a certain rhythm with the normal hits, then you break it for apparently no reason. :/
4. 00:57:452 (2,3) - Add clap on (2) and remove the one on (3) ? I think it sounds a lot better.
5. 01:03:683 (4) - Add clap ?
6. 01:05:529 (4) - Add clap on first beat ?
7. 01:07:375 (8) - Add clap if you added the two pervious ones for consistency.
8. 01:11:068 (2) - This clap souds really weird. It's offbeat and doesn't match the clap pattern you've been using so far. Move it to (1) ? (and add a note after (2) to add the missing clap too)
9. 01:32:991 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The claps here are offbeat and it sounds really weird.
10. 01:42:683 (1) - Add clap on first beat ?
11. 01:48:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Claps are offbeat, it sounds weird.

1. The sliders could use nicer curves ><
2. Too many - way too many - added 1/4s to my taste. It sometimes proved confusing.
3. Here again, the clap is missing at times, and it sounds weird and somehow breaks the flow.

1. 00:02:298 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Extremely confusing pattern. Nothing in the song calls for such jumps here...

Nymph_ wrote:

Nymph's mod.

General:
OFFSET 1130？现在的OFFSET我MISS率50% 换成1130 13%.我也不会TIMING 但是还是试一下吧.
被楼顶的2 years ago雷了一下..
Offset重新改过了

Easy:
SV1.3对于EASY来说明显偏快 -这点还好吧...不是很影响 --Checked
音量明显太吵 建议加绿线控制各部分音量 使给人的感觉更和谐 比方说：
00:15:894 (1) - 这之前音乐很轻 用80音量肯定太吵 用30试试
00:45:452 (1) - 这之前就可以用60 比较适合歌曲
00:45:452 (1) - 这之后是唱的部分 可以试一下45
最后高潮部分再回到60 觉得声音低再提高点. -Checked

Hard:
00:35:068 (2,4,6) - 这3个FINISH很别扭 -Checked
音量控制同EASY -Checked

SEVEN:
00:23:068 (9) - 这里怎么有个FINISH.. -Checked
00:44:991 (17) - 去掉FINISH？ 这点没影响到和谐啦:D -Checked
00:45:452 (1) - 去掉CLAP？ 这点也一样哦~-Checked
节奏挺好的

AIR:
开头太扯了 2到3是1倍距离 好的. 3到4变成2倍 好吧...算大跳. 5到6 3.32倍....这 太凶残了！ 这里读图好难 建议推倒重新弄...(是吧...这不是我做的...当时我就给他说扯得半死...) --Checked
00:14:068 (1) - 结尾CLAP --Checked
00:41:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个好丑 --Checked
00:45:683 (2,3) - 这种组合用的太多了 打着不是很舒服[/color] -这点还好啦= =能接受...-Checked

嗯 先这么多吧

wcx19911123 wrote:

._.

[General]
use custom combo color
-yes
[Easy]
CS+1 HD-1 OD-1 -Checked
00:06:884 (4) - slider 00:06:884 - 00:07:345 -Checked
00:56:499 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - not Easy -Checked
01:56:268 (2,3,1) - unreadble -Checked

[Normal+]
CS+1 OD-2 I made it as a hard -Checked
00:11:981 (1) - back arrow is hidden -Checked
00:35:981 (4,5,6,7) - not Normal+ -Checked
00:44:981 - circle ? -Checked

[INSE7EN]
SV is too low for an Insane Just ok -Checked
other seems fine

._.

kazumikos wrote:

hhi~

[General]
Volume in 3 diffs r different, [Easy] is 80%, [Normal+] 90%, while [INSEVEN] 100%, set all of them 70% (or 80% if u want). And yea, i think u should use soft hit sound on [Easy] in stead of normal (like [normal] and [inseven]) yes i think so:D Thanks for that
And no break? u should add some break (even though the song is short) I think it's not necessary for a break -Checked

[Easy]
CS + 1? yes i changed -Checked
combo and hitsound r quite messy, i guess u havent done this diff? i ve done it , but some rhythm is not nice -Checked

[Normal+]

SPOILER

00:01:145 (1) - add whistle instead of finish? Finish?I didnt add a Finish(? -Checked
00:08:529 (2) - ^ so this is right -Checked
00:04:375 (1,2,3) - add whistle? No Whistle maybe -Checked
00:15:914 (2) - add finish? Checked
00:30:221 (5) - add finish at the end Checked
00:35:068 (2,4,6) - remove finish? Checked
00:38:068 (1) - finish? Checked
00:39:914 (x) - i was expecting a note here Checked
01:14:068 (1) - remove new combo? Checked
01:32:991 (2) - clap? -Checked

[INSEVEN]
combo needs to be fixed x_x -Checked

SPOILER

00:01:145 (1) - whistle? -Checkednot nece
00:04:375 (1,2,3) - ^ -Checkednot nece
00:08:529 (1) - ^ -Checkednot nece
00:15:914 (2) - add finish? -Checkednot nece
00:23:068 (9) - remove finish -Checked
00:23:298 (1) - finish? -Checkednot nece
00:30:221 (1) - add finish at the reverse -Checked
00:34:375 (1) - finish -Checkednot ne
00:38:068 (1) - ^ -Checkednot ne
01:50:298 (6) - remove finish -Checked
01:55:606 (1) - finish -Checkednot ne
01:56:529 (3) - ^ -Checkednot ne
01:59:298 (1) - ^ -Checkednot ne

star~ good luck[/color]

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. Add "Air_kannabi" to the tags of all difficulties. Checked
2. I think it'd be better for consistency to use only standard diff names. Checked
3. Add kiai time for Easy, Normal and Hard ? Checked
4. Remove countdown on all diffs because it doesn't have the time to display. Checked
5. Add an audio lead-in of 3000ms to all diffs but Easy (which already has it).

Checked

Easy

1. 00:15:914 (1) - Unneeded new combo ? Checked
2. 00:40:837 (1) - Remove this new combo to stay consistent in your comboing. Checked
3. 01:07:145 (1,1) - I think it'd be better to remove these two new combos, I don't really see why they're here Checked
4. 01:38:529 (1,1) - Same. Checked
5. 01:40:837 (4) - New combo on this one as well to be consistent with 01:41:760 (1,1) - Checked
6. Overall, I think the difficulty has room for improvement. It's acceptable as is, of course, but you used the same rhythms for the whole song, and these rhythms are quite generic. Also, there are weird "little breaks" (like 2 or 3 white ticks without any circle), and these feel weird. The sliders could be improved as well (nicer curves and less overlaps ><). Don't give up ! Feel free to ask me any question you feel is necessary to ask. Good luck !

Hard

1. Here again, the sliders could be a bit better. Nicer curves play and look a lot better.
2. I like what you did with the normal-hitnormal hitsound, but at times it sounds weird (I'll point that out). Also, you need other hitsounds to go with it (add normal claps as well ?) or the map will sound bland. I'll go pretty nazi with hitsounds, but it's important, because these claps give the rhythm to the difficulty and are important in the flow.
3. 00:38:991 - here and 00:39:914 - the lack of note here felt weird. You installed a certain rhythm with the normal hits, then you break it for apparently no reason. :/ Checked
4. 00:57:452 (2,3) - Add clap on (2) and remove the one on (3) ? I think it sounds a lot better. Checked
5. 01:03:683 (4) - Add clap ? Checked
6. 01:05:529 (4) - Add clap on first beat ? I will Change the Slider tick's sound so... Checked
7. 01:07:375 (8) - Add clap if you added the two pervious ones for consistency. Checked
8. 01:11:068 (2) - This clap souds really weird. It's offbeat and doesn't match the clap pattern you've been using so far. Move it to (1) ? (and add a note after (2) to add the missing clap too) Checked
9. 01:32:991 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The claps here are offbeat and it sounds really weird. Checked
10. 01:42:683 (1) - Add clap on first beat ? Checked
11. 01:48:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Claps are offbeat, it sounds weird.

Checked

INSE7EN

1. The sliders could use nicer curves >< Checked
2. Too many - way too many - added 1/4s to my taste. It sometimes proved confusing. But...I think it;s nice :<Checked
3. Here again, the clap is missing at times, and it sounds weird and somehow breaks the flow. Checked

Air's La La La

1. 00:02:298 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Extremely confusing pattern. Nothing in the song calls for such jumps here... Checked

ouranhshc wrote:

AIR - On this diff, there are some 1/1 sliders that I feel could look better
00:42:683 (4,5) - i was kinda expecting (4) to be where (5) currently is
00:49:145 (7) - new combo here instead of 00:49:375 (1) - ?
01:10:375 (1,2,3) - 1/3 snap?
01:15:683 (2) - move this from out under (1)
01:58:837 (3) - place note on (1)

-----He checked0.0

Insane - i'm not too crazy about how new combos were done at the end of the song
00:01:837 (3) - maybe like this:
00:48:683 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:145 (2) - new combo
00:49:606 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:106 (5) - new combo
00:53:760 (3) - I wanna discuss this on IRC
01:26:529 (5) - I don't think slow down is necessary about this i think it;s all right
01:47:760 (8) - new combo
01:59:298 (1) - I don't think this is a good place to put this. its under hitbursts Actually...i think so ;< but i really dont find a good place to put it;<

---All checked

Hard
00:54:683 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:14:068 (5) - new combo
01:17:068 (5,6,7) - this doesn't look too good, maybe curve (6) around the top of (5)
01:56:298 (9) - new combo?

---All checked

Easy
how come this diff uses normal hitsounds in the beginning while the other diffs use soft hitsounds
00:26:991 (1) - this slider could be shaped better
01:08:068 (4) - new combo?
01:16:837 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:683 (2) - new combo
01:30:221 (2) - new combo here instead of : 01:30:683 (1) -
01:37:606 (4) - new combo?
01:52:837 (1,1,1) - are these new combos really needed

-----All Checked

Overall
You need a normal diffah yes
You current Preview Point isn't goodin fact i dont know what it means...
Kiai time: if you mapped Easy, Hard, and Insane, then shouldn't their kiai times be the same?----not a question isnt it :>

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Air la la la]
00:05:991 (6) - new combo
00:55:606 (4,5,6) - 打着不舒服
01:14:068 (1,1) - 不要new combo
01:54:568 (4) - 不要叠在下面，不好读

-checked

[Insane]
不过关，排列太随意

-remaped


[Hard]
00:36:221 (5) - new combo
00:57:914 (4) - clap

-checked

缺中间难度，easy到hard跨度太大

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
- Might want to change combo colors?
---maybe...a new color?...eh i dont like in fact:<
00:25:145 - Add a note? ;_; maybe it;s a liite difficult?
01:53:760 (1) - No new combo...
01:54:683 (1) - ^

--checked

Skimmed, but it's fine.
[Hard]
Eh, this is good.

-thx

But diff settings too high...
[Insane]
Ok, yeah, diff settings don't fit.
- Circle size +1 (Unless you make Hard bigger)
- Approach -1

A lot of inconsistent spacing... sure you're using distance snap all the time?
---surly not...

[Air's]
This is good :3

Eh, Insane needs work, but good luck star~ ><