1. Add an audio lead-in of at least 1 second. The map starts too early.
2. Since you mapped several times on that weird echo after the vocals, I think it would be nice to have the echo mapped using soft hitsounds, and maybe with a progressive decrescendo.
3. For all diffs: kiai sections should be snapped on white ticks because it affects how it looks in the menu.

1. I think it would need more hitsounds... The map feels rather bland right now.
2. Seeing how fast the song is, I think AR+1 wouldn't hurt, and would actually help.
3. 00:15:509 (6) - A new combo here would be welcome: it would cut the too long 10-notes combo and make sense to the song, since it represents the start of the instruments and the end of the vocals.
4. 00:35:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is rather long for a Normal - especially the easiest diff of a mapset -
5. 00:37:744 (8,1) - Swap new combos (the new combo marks the shift between the vocals and the echo).
6. 01:13:744 (4,5) - That stack looks rather hard to play to me - at 170 BPM, that's rather fast - so I think you should replace it with a slider.
7. 01:28:921 (5) - New combo to cut the too long combo.
8. 01:34:568 (1,2) - These should be 1/1 earlier to fit the song.
9. 02:19:744 (5) - New combo to fit the song better and cut the too high combo.
10. 02:36:686 (7) - New combo to cut the too high combo.
11. The last spinner becomes abruptly silent. At least make a decrescendo.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
Ok~
General

1. Add an audio lead-in of at least 1 second. The map starts too early. Set Audio Lead-in 1081ms for every diff
2. Since you mapped several times on that weird echo after the vocals, I think it would be nice to have the echo mapped using soft hitsounds, and maybe with a progressive decrescendo. Agree, used soft for that part in the beginning.
3. For all diffs: kiai sections should be snapped on white ticks because it affects how it looks in the menu. I checked all the kiai times for all diffs, but they were all snapped correctly. O.o

Thank you very much for looking at my map!

Normal

1. I think it would need more hitsounds... The map feels rather bland right now. Added more claps
2. Seeing how fast the song is, I think AR+1 wouldn't hurt, and would actually help. AR+1
3. 00:15:509 (6) - A new combo here would be welcome: it would cut the too long 10-notes combo and make sense to the song, since it represents the start of the instruments and the end of the vocals. fixed
4. 00:35:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is rather long for a Normal - especially the easiest diff of a mapset - removed 6 and 8
5. 00:37:744 (8,1) - Swap new combos (the new combo marks the shift between the vocals and the echo). I couldn't change this because I removed 6 and 8.
6. 01:13:744 (4,5) - That stack looks rather hard to play to me - at 170 BPM, that's rather fast - so I think you should replace it with a slider. fixed
7. 01:28:921 (5) - New combo to cut the too long combo. fixed
8. 01:34:568 (1,2) - These should be 1/1 earlier to fit the song. shifted, adjusted the notes following it
9. 02:19:744 (5) - New combo to fit the song better and cut the too high combo. ok
10. 02:36:686 (7) - New combo to cut the too high combo. fixed
11. The last spinner becomes abruptly silent. At least make a decrescendo. made decrescendo

Hard
Needs more hitsounds. Besides that, nothing to point out. added more claps

Patchouli
I really don't like that. The AR feels forced. But oh well. Just one thing: the spinner at the end becomes suddenly silent, at least make a decrescendo. made decrescendo~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:039 (3,4,5,6) - lol nazi mod, the spacing seems to increase ._. fixed~

star~

1. 01:14:450 - Add a note?
2. 02:00:333 - ^
3. 02:06:686 - ^
4. 02:22:568 (6) - New combo

1. 00:50:097 (4,5,6) - It's better to make them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:04:744 - Add a note?
3. 01:50:097 (4) - Move this slider 2 grids up to fix the spacing
4. 01:59:627 (4) - Move this slider 1 grid up to fix the spacing
5. 02:00:509 (6) - This note is not alligned with the end of the slider.Delete it and recreate it under the slider to fix this.

1. No problems here.

-kevincela- wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:14:450 - Add a note? added
2. 02:00:333 - ^ ^
3. 02:06:686 - ^ ^
4. 02:22:568 (6) - New combo

fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:50:097 (4,5,6) - It's better to make them like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:04:744 - Add a note? added
3. 01:50:097 (4) - Move this slider 2 grids up to fix the spacing fixed
4. 01:59:627 (4) - Move this slider 1 grid up to fix the spacing fixed
5. 02:00:509 (6) - This note is not alligned with the end of the slider.Delete it and recreate it under the slider to fix this. fixed

All fixed! Thank you very much for mod and star~ ><

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
TIMING 46,391 - remove removed

~Hard~
01:39:862 (11) - add clap added

~Patchouli~
TIMING 46,524 - remove removed

Taiko is fine.


+Star

DJPop wrote:

se-sukeEila wrote:

:) star

Alace wrote:

Offset:+10ms to 1402, move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes in all diffs All fixed

<Hard>
00:08:274 (4) - Spacing,00:08:274 (4) - i thought (4) is a full divisor 1,2,3,4 and the following spacing fixed
00:15:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - make this part louder plz (same as normal diff) changed from 50% to 60%

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Preview Time is different for all the diffs., make them the same pl0x Fixed, all diffs have preview time at 80460
- Personally, you should've mapped all your diffs. with 1.0x spacing instead. I think it'll look a lot better, but you know, what's done is done...
I didn't know about adjusting distance spacing back then... so I used default 0.8x. I'll make sure to use 1.0x from now on
Well, the maps look ok to me at this point, because of all the help I got from others

Meh, guess the map's okay (y)

Lizbeth wrote:

Hard
00:16:754 - I suggest to add a note here, feels empty, and made me miss that next slider cuz threw me off while playing. ok, added~

Wmf's Taiko
Resnap all notes fixed

that's all~

Lizbeth wrote:

Patchouli
02:21:166 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this. I think you should remove new combo from: 02:21:166 (1), and let 2 and 3 be a single combo. like this: http://puu.sh/2xjy
Very nice map, I really enjoy it~

Lizbeth wrote:

All looks good now =D

Bubbled~

Alace wrote:

ok sounds better now
ranked

Shiki wrote:

Congrats~! (: