1. Easy (2,37 stars, 97 notes)
2. Love (4,89 stars, 28 notes)
3. Normal (3,34 stars, 134 notes)
4. Verdi's Hard (4,6 stars, 227 notes)

_lolipop wrote:

> < star~

(in fact the skin is made by me http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16964)

wmfchris wrote:

TAG ALL GUEST DIFF MAKERS

[Love]
00:19:099 (x) - add a note (+clap)? Ok
00:25:974 (4) - down 1 grid Ok
00:48:265 - change SV by inherit BPM is unrankable. Fixed
00:52:223 - delete break Fixed
01:20:765 (3,4) - up 1 grid Fixed
01:24:098 (3,4) - (3) up 2 grids, (4) up 1 grid Fixed
01:36:806 (9,10,1) - uneven spacing Fixed
03:33:681 (1,2) - spacing? No
04:02:640 (4) - down 1 grid Nop

[Normal]
ok

star.

wmfchris wrote:

[Verdi's Hard]
beginning a bit too loud for me
00:21:182 (4) - remove clap No
01:53:890 (2,3) - left 1 grid Ok :3
quite good in spacing Ty <3

[Normal]
ok

star.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hola
aca mi mod (son solo sugerencias si kieres las pones si no , mandame a la mierda)

~General~
la verdad eske me gusta como mapeas lo haces muy bien
solo un detalle , podrias ocupar "Custom Colours" no crees ? , eske se ven feos los colores predeterminados D:
mira yo probe estos asi

(me BASE en el background D: Y EN EL SKIN DEL SPINNER)
y nose me gustaron como qedaron ijijijij (gay colors , pero weno es cosa para el map) Con el skin que uso los colores se veian bien, pero me gustaron los que pusiste :$ Fixed !

~Easy~

03:12:849 (5) : whistle ? :3 Nu
03:19:515 (5) : ^ Nu
03:39:515 (5) : clap D: ? Nu

~Verdi's Hard~

dios cuantas rayas verdes hahawejahwej
pero esta muy linda Congratz

~Love~
00:27:224 : podrias hacer esto con el break mira No veo ninguna parte donde hacer eso D: (Ademas que no se como XD)

desplazalo hasta 00:27:536
00:59:515 (5,6) : whistle ? D: Nop
01:16:390 (4,5) : clap ? :3 (solo el principio del slider) Fixed
02:34:724 (4,5) : ^ Fixed
02:36:390 (4,5) : ^ Fixed


TE DEJO ESTRELLA , MUY LINDO EL MAP SUERTE Y OJALA TE LO RANKEEN LUEGO PORKE MUY BUENO :$

adios.~

Verdisphena wrote:

Okya

Love:

00:46:807 (7) - Agrega una nota No
01:36:807 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
01:37:015 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo Fixed
01:43:474 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
01:43:682 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo Fixed
01:50:140 (5) - Nuevo combo Fixed
01:50:349 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo Fixed
01:56:807 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
01:57:015 (1) - Quita el nuevo combo Fixed
01:57:640 (3) - Nuevo combo Fixed
01:57:849 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
02:40:349 ~02:46:182 - Mejor mapea esta parte, no le va al break Fixed
02:48:057 (5) - Nuevo combo No
02:56:807 (9) - ^ Fixed
02:57:015 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
03:03:474 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
03:03:682 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
03:10:140 (8) - Nuevo combo Fixed
03:10:349 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
03:16:807 (5) - Nuevo combo Fixed
03:17:015 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
03:53:474 (7) - Nuevo combo Fixed
03:53:682 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
04:00:140 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
04:00:349 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
04:01:807 (7) - Nuevo combo Fixed
04:02:015 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
04:06:807 (5) - Nuevo combo Fixed
04:07:015 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
04:13:474 (9) - Nuevo combo Fixed
04:13:682 (1) - Quita nuevo combo Fixed
04:14:515 (1) - ^ Fixed

Verdi's Hard:
Algunos sliders arreglados.
[attachment=0:042e4]Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love (Melodies Overflowed Mix) (eldnl) [Verdi's Hard].osu[/attachment:042e4]

Bajando ~

Easy:
Todo bien :O

Ya Danielsito ahi tiene su mod , espero mi kodosu

_lolipop wrote:

[General]
Custom colors ? Fixed
BG_normal.jpg is not being used, delete it? Fixed

[Easy]
01:18:474 (6) - Spacing ( New combo or try to move to the same position as 02:34:724 (2) ) Fixed
02:38:474 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:24:515 (X) - Add a circle (up to you) Fixed
03:38:682 (4) - Not sounds good. Delete it and change 03:39:515 (5,6) to a slider (up to you) I Considers it
Too many copy&paste O_o.

[Verdi's Hard]
00:20:974 (3) - Change clap to hitnormal
00:23:682 - Increase the volume a bit at the end of the spinner
01:16:703 (4) - Delete (up to you)
too many spinners. try to change some of them to circles and sliders.

[Love]
Audio lead-in : 1000ms Fixed
Disable the countdown plz Fixed
Not something important found. But as a insane diff, it can be more fun imo.

Overall a good job.
[attachment=0:072ba]event_mu18c.png[/attachment:072ba]

_lolipop wrote:

[Verdi's Hard]
00:20:974 (3) - Change clap to hitnormal ok
00:23:682 - Increase the volume a bit at the end of the spinner Ok
01:16:703 (4) - Delete (up to you) no
too many spinners. try to change some of them to circles and sliders. Ok

• Current bitrate of mp3 file is 320kbps...Try this one? (Offset: 341)
  
  New mp3?
  
  Tags: SUPER SHOT 2 (Album) shinfonikku rabu Verdisphena
  
  Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony -Love is pure white- (Since the song is from the game, I think you can use this as a source like touhou.)
  
  Add kiai for the second part?
  
  02:53:681~03:06:181
  03:07:015~03:20:348
  04:03:682~04:16:182

• 01:17:022 (5,6) - I suggest to increase the spacing and also add new combo for 6...Otherwise this would be a little confusing..
  01:32:015 (5) - new combo? (hmm, suggestion...)
  02:00:349 (6) - ^
  02:35:349 (1,1) - Remove new combo like 01:13:682 (1,2,3,4,5) ? Also increase the spacing for 02:37:015 (1,2) and add new combo for 02:38:474 (2) please.

• 00:15:349 (1,2,3,4...etc) - For this part, I suggest to have clap at the long white line rather 2nd white line. (What's the use clap for when you put it at 2nd white line? It doesn't work well as a metronome for this part imo..)
  00:18:682 (1,3) - Switch clap
  00:37:432 (1,1) - Clap? At least for 1st one..
  01:07:432 (2,3,4) - Hmm, why stack 3,4? I think 2,3 would be a more reasonable way to stack these...
  01:20:557 (2,3) - Spacing
  01:32:432 (1,3) - Whistle?
  01:45:349 (1) - Sounds a little weird to silence this during kiai..
  01:53:057 (1) - Clap end?
  01:53:682 (1,3) - Switch?
  02:20:349 (2,3) - Why stack these ._. ...
  02:52:015~02:53:265 (T) - ...map this part?..

• 00:25:974 (4) - Remove whistle end?
  01:18:785 (1) - Slience the end please..
  01:57:222 (4) - Unsnapped ._.
  01:21:390 (5) - New combo? (--different part of vocal, also you'd better avoid high combo numbers)
  01:24:723 (5) - ^
  01:28:056 (5) - ^
  Second and third kiai part - ^

Selee wrote:

[Nico's Hard]

Verdi? Nico? ._. My name

• 00:15:349 (1,2,3,4...etc) - For this part, I suggest to have clap at the long white line rather 2nd white line. (What's the use clap for when you put it at 2nd white line? It doesn't work well as a metronome for this part imo..) No
  00:18:682 (1,3) - Switch clap no
  00:37:432 (1,1) - Clap? At least for 1st one.. ok
  01:07:432 (2,3,4) - Hmm, why stack 3,4? I think 2,3 would be a more reasonable way to stack these... No, it's fine
  01:20:557 (2,3) - Spacing fixed
  01:32:432 (1,3) - Whistle? ok
  01:45:349 (1) - Sounds a little weird to silence this during kiai..
  01:53:057 (1) - Clap end? ok
  01:53:682 (1,3) - Switch? ok
  02:20:349 (2,3) - Why stack these ._. ... changed
  02:52:015~02:53:265 (T) - ...map this part?.. ok

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Current bitrate of mp3 file is 320kbps...Try this one ? (Offset: 341 Ok)
  The song have 197Kbps
  
  
  New mp3? Thanks but not
  
  Tags: SUPER SHOT 2 (Album) shinfonikku rabu Verdisphena Fixed
  
  Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony -Love is pure white- (Since the song is from the game, I think you can use this as a source like touhou.) Fixed
  
  Add kiai for the second part? Fixed
  
  02:53:681~03:06:181
  03:07:015~03:20:348
  04:03:682~04:16:182

[Easy]

• 01:17:022 (5,6) - I suggest to increase the spacing and also add new combo for 6...Otherwise this would be a little confusing.. Fixed
  01:32:015 (5) - new combo? (hmm, suggestion...) mm no
  02:00:349 (6) - ^ Fixed
  02:35:349 (1,1) - Remove new combo like 01:13:682 (1,2,3,4,5) ? Also increase the spacing for 02:37:015 (1,2) and add new combo for 02:38:474 (2) please. Fixed

[Nico's Hard]

Verdi? Nico? ._. Yes

[Love]

The first part is too loud, try to use 50%~60% volume? Fixed

• 00:25:974 (4) - Remove whistle end? Fixed
  01:18:785 (1) - Slience the end please.. Fixed
  01:57:222 (4) - Unsnapped ._. Fixed
  01:21:390 (5) - New combo? (--different part of vocal, also you'd better avoid high combo numbers) Fixed
  01:24:723 (5) - ^ Fixed
  01:28:056 (5) - ^ Fixed
  Second and third kiai part - ^ Fixed

Too many copy & pastes ;_; ... only the chorus ;_;

Star for hitsounds~

Try this one ? (Offset: 341 Ok)

Selee wrote:

Try this one ? (Offset: 341 Ok)

hmm, sorry, but the offset is for my mp3...349 would be fine for your audio.

senaya wrote:

[Love]
02:48:049 (1,2,3) and 02:56:799 (1,2,3) and 03:04:299 (6,7,8) - this spacing can't be unnoticed, right? Is this some kind of pattern? OMFG FIXED

Nice map

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

Timing: I don't know you, but the offset i got is around -10 ms (around 330) from the current one. But then again I'm not an expert on timing

Tags: Take out "2" from the tags. osu! search only searches for words with 3 more characters. Ok

BitRate: the map was uploaded before 25th october. At that moment, the guidelines were that max bit rate is 256 kbps, the current one is at 320 kbps, so yeah, you gotta have to reduce it anyways. 197kbps

Love:

I really find the silent spinner to be little intuitive.

01:18:778 (1) - Start spinner at 01:18:674 - Ok
01:44:507 (8) - One grid up. Make sure that prev and next distance space of 01:44:403 (7) - is the same. wtf Fixed
02:48:257 (3) - The one grid thing again Fixed
02:57:007 (3) - ^ Fixed
03:02:840 (7) - ^ Fixed
03:33:674 (1,2) - This jump makes no sense. Please avoid making the jump. Considered it but no for now
03:56:382 (6) - New combo no
04:02:007 (3) - The one grid thing again Fixed

And mod ends here... sorry, don't really like the song >_> Not everyone will like, personally to me I do not like and now I realize, but ...

dksslqj wrote:

disable countdown Ok
delete .osb file and full submit Ok

and this song is too long
you should cut.......
--------------------------------------------
http://puu.sh/WDr
Look at this...
Isn't it strenge?
so I recomend change slider tick 0.5 or 2 Ok

01:21:591 (2) - add newcombo Ok
01:24:924 (2) - same Ok
01:28:257 (2) - same Ok
02:41:590 (2) - same Ok
02:44:924 (2) - same Ok
02:48:257 (2) - same Ok
03:38:674 (4) - same Ok
03:53:674 (3) - same Ok
04:00:340 (3) - same Ok

mapset is fine
but copy and paste is boring to me

[Hard]
01:28:049 (2) - add newcombo
01:34:299 (4) - This jump is confusing!
02:40:341 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:43:674 (1,2,3,4) - If you use jump this part,,, you should use other part
02:52:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG
02:55:757 (6) - add clap

[Love]

omg
Please down...

00:55:132 (6) - add newcombo Ok
03:54:507 (6) - 1grid down Ok
04:16:174 (5) - add newcombo Ok


good...

but don't use copy and paste too much

Astom wrote:

Bastante bien a mi parecer, el unico detalle es que hay mucho copy paste en la ultima diff Intenta agregar mas slider para bajar el score max. y no repetir tanto algunas cosas.

Star~

senaya wrote:

And right when I was thinking that it can't get any better than Symphonic Love, you are mapping this mix

[Nico's Hard]
01:50:966 (4,5) - nazi: uneven spacing. Just copy-paste 01:50:132 (1,2,3) and flip them horizontally. ok
02:52:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strange, but I never had problems with this spacing while playing O_o （・∀・ ）
03:08:257 (5) - 1 grid up? ok
03:50:549 (1) - why you start with TA instead of WA? Make spinner 2 ticks shorter and add a circle at 03:50:341 ? ok
04:17:007 (1) - don't make this note silent :'( ok

ErufenRito wrote:

Nico's hard:

00:30:757 (3,6) - It would sound so much better without the soft sample... no
03:45:341 (1) - It sound awful, it shouldnt be silenced.ok

dksslqj wrote:

[Hard]
01:28:049 (2) - add newcombo ok
01:34:299 (4) - This jump is confusing! no u
02:40:341 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:43:674 (1,2,3,4) - If you use jump this part,,, you should use other part no, it's fine
02:52:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG
02:55:757 (6) - add clap no

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

>:)

Good Luck Eldnl !

Lizbeth wrote:

Nico's Hard
Cambia el audio lead a 1.5
02:52:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Te sugiero agruparlos mejor de esta manera (no específicamente con estas posiciones claro está: http://puu.sh/1fII Y quizás new combo para cada par.
02:55:966 (7) - haz que este slider termine 1/2 beat antes y agrega una repetición, creo que se escucha mejor :>
02:59:507 (1) - no new combo
03:00:132 (4) - quita esta nota
03:18:466 (1,2,3) - creo que todos pueden estar en el mismo combo.
04:10:966 (4,5,6) - No creo que sea buena idea esta overlap~
04:15:132 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - no me gustó mucho esta colocación. Opino que los circles que deberían estar en saltos son: 04:15:132 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - Todos puestos en un mismo combo. Ejemplo (no tienes que colocarlos así): http://puu.sh/1fJi
02:20:341 - Esta timing section no está haciendo nada, borrala~

Lizbeth wrote:

Hola duende~

El mp3 es de 196 kbps y el limite es 192.... no si haga mucha diferencia, pero pregúntale a un BAT al respecto a ver que opina~

Love
Asegúrate de que todos los spinners tengan el New combo.
00:12:840 (2,3,4) - podrías colocar estos un poco mas lejos del slider? Como hiciste en aquí: 00:14:090 (2,3), combina mas con el patrón.
00:18:465 (4) - Me parece que podrías quitar este circle, y colocar el slider siguiente aquí agregándole un repeat.
00:25:132 (1,2,3,4) - El slider 4 no debería estar a la misma distancia que los circles 1,2 y 3. Intenta colocarlo mas lejos, porque está algo confuso así. Idea: http://puu.sh/1fFO
00:27:007 (1) - Quita el New combo
00:41:799 (6) - new combo aquí y quita el siguiente.
00:45:132 (6) - Igual aquí.
01:05:132 (4) - agrega el new combo aquí y quita el siguiente.
01:28:049 (1,2,3) - coloca estos tres a la misma distancia, se nota mucho la diferencia~
01:33:674 - 02:00:341 - miau~ muy divertida esta sección <3
02:33:257 (5) - new combo
02:53:466 (7,1) - Esta salto es demasiado drástico y sin sentido.
03:20:340 (1) - No entiendo estos new combos @.@
03:33:882 (2) - new combo yay~~
03:56:382 (6) - ^

Nico's Hard
Cambia el audio lead a 1.5
02:52:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Te sugiero agruparlos mejor de esta manera (no específicamente con estas posiciones claro está: http://puu.sh/1fII Y quizás new combo para cada par.
02:55:966 (7) - haz que este slider termine 1/2 beat antes y agrega una repetición, creo que se escucha mejor :>
02:59:507 (1) - no new combo
03:00:132 (4) - quita esta nota
03:18:466 (1,2,3) - creo que todos pueden estar en el mismo combo.
04:10:966 (4,5,6) - No creo que sea buena idea esta overlap~
04:15:132 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - no me gustó mucho esta colocación. Opino que los circles que deberían estar en saltos son: 04:15:132 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - Todos puestos en un mismo combo. Ejemplo (no tienes que colocarlos así): http://puu.sh/1fJi
02:20:341 - Esta timing section no está haciendo nada, borrala~

Easy
00:47:007 (1) - Quita el new combo >.<
00:48:465 (2) - agregalo aquí
00:52:007 (1) - no new combo
01:07:007 (1) - ^

Bye y suerte<3

• 
  Your mp3 file is 196kbps.Please convert it between 128kbps and 192 kbps.
  In Nico’s Hard, Letterbox during breaks option is unselected,but in other diffs it’s selected.

• 
  00:53:674 (1,2,3): Spacing
  01:12:007 (1): Remove this finish
  01:33:049 (5): Remove this clap or add clap at 01:33:257
  03:42:007 (1): Add a circle here and start the spinner at

• 
  01:47:007 : Re-Kiai Time here
  01:53:674 (1): Finish
  02:40:341 (1,2,3,4): I suggest removing this jump or add jumps at 02:43:674 (1,2,3,4) and 02:47:007 (1,2,3,4)
  02:58:466 : Add a circle
  03:00:341 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  03:19:507 (1): Remove finish at the end
  03:40:341-03:45:341 : I suggest removing this break
  03:48:674 (1): Spinner ends here
  04:03:466 : Add a circle

• 
  00:46:174 (8): Add clap at the end
  01:47:007 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  03:19:924 (6,7): Don’t overlap here

Samah wrote:

[Nico's Hard]
03:13:257 (7) - One left.

Star.

Verdisphena wrote:

Samah wrote:

[Nico's Hard]
03:13:257 (7) - One left.

Star.

Puedes arreglar eso tu, eldanielsillo?