[general]
I'm not going to nazi, but there's plenty of areas which you should take a look at (01:48:298 (2) - on normal for example). Nazi mods are best left to yourself, and it shows that you care about making a perfect map.
Rename default-x, comma, percent, etc... to "score-x" etc...
I have 2 osb files in mine. Delete them both and do a full submit if you have 2 in yours. (otherwise it's not required, just good form).
[normal]
00:18:927 (1) - way too high. It is underneath the life bar. Very bad. In general, keep things inside the grid, try not to have the circles/sliders overlap the edge more than 2-4 grids.
[hard]
00:29:360 (2,5) - I don't agree with making up rhythms and putting notes in where they don't exist in the song unless you have a really good reason.
01:12:845 (1) - this is the only blue tick note I agree with so far, and there's a few more spots later.
[magic]
same as hard, I don't agree with mapping silence. I would take out the blue tick notes and put in jumps instead.
good enough for my star.