快到中间有点节奏不明显

加油 坏蛋支持~

第一次作图不要贪快哟，想Rank不是几个月就能搞定的（炸

Q_Q下不好了。
先给star好了

Nice song and nice map.I like it especially jump diff
Personal Suggestions:
NORMAL diff:circle size +1,Approaching Rate +1
Insane diff:add one note at 00:57:391.Appoaching Rate +1
Fight!

star~~

i mean circle shuold be larger...
I used a vague way to say it before.
So Sorry...

Xeon wrote:

i mean circle shuold be larger...
I used a vague way to say it before.
So Sorry...

童鞋你其实完全可以讲汉语的我看的懂

o0cannian0o wrote:

Xeon wrote:

i mean circle shuold be larger...
I used a vague way to say it before.
So Sorry...

童鞋你其实完全可以讲汉语的我看的懂

其实我以为这里不能说汉语……

我觉得jump那个难度中，把有些有直角的slider拉成弧形更好，比较符合该曲风，尤其是03:38:491，那个矩形完全破坏美感

rs_fadeaway wrote:

我觉得jump那个难度中，把有些有直角的slider拉成弧形更好，比较符合该曲风，尤其是03:38:491，那个矩形完全破坏美感

谢谢建议，我就去看

星星啊~~~月亮啊~~~变身啊~~~~

good job

图还不错，但要改的地方太多了。
暂时不给你星了先。等你改完善点在给。
顺便求kudosu。
可以打打看我的校歌：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26561

ax_pokl wrote:

图还不错，但要改的地方太多了。
暂时不给你星了先。等你改完善点在给。
顺便求kudosu。
可以打打看我的校歌：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26561

在没有得到有效帮助的时候请不要随意给KD

MOD：
说中文可以吧？
首先最重要的一点是distance sanp，注意你的circle之间的间距保持一致
Example： 你jump难度 00:16:591 (5) (6) (7) 看图：
你离前面的距离1.39X 到后面就是也应该在1.39X左右而不是1.53X
另外一点是作图讲究一定的好看 要有排列，比如 jump难度的00:15:391 (1) 到(6)替换
只是举个例
还有就是别过多使用circle 有节奏性的地方可以用回旋的slider替代
比如在 normal里00:15:391 (1,2,3,4,5)
上述只是个人小点意见~

这歌曲我很喜欢 star~
顶你做好~ 一定要坚持

试着Mod一下好了XD。
顺便吐槽一下Xeon好呆呆呆好萌XDDD

[General]
总体来说Offset还是不大准..
Skin方面我个人不喜欢黑色的那么长的LOGO全压在note里，看起来很不舒服
注意音效嗯

[Normal]
Note大小调到最大
[00:06:091~00:05:391] [2,3] NC拔掉
[00:38:276] [8] 下finish。我的意思就是想说稍微注意下音效嗯，一路一个音效到底有点单调
[01:13:891] [7] 这个note可以往上一些，如果放在和5重叠的地方容易造成节奏和之前一样的错觉
[04:09:091~04:09:691] [3,4]


再者很多地方如[00:12:091~00:15:391]这样的短break可以按着节奏下一点note或是slider，空着总感觉不好

[Jump-]
[00:15:691~00:16:891] [2~6]

我好像也没对准，你可以在view里把grid level改成2或者3然后用grid snap调整，弄得好看一点吧
[00:37:691] [9] 改到[00:37:691]
[00:37:691~01:33:691] [2~8] 注意spacing...前面的跳spacing都还行，这里的话有点难受
[03:23:791] NC
[03:37:291] NC拔掉
[03:45:016] 这个slider....换个样子吧
最后那个spinner不要也可以

[Insane]
Circle Size+1
AR+1
[00:43:891] [2]
[00:45:691~00:52:891] 空太多了，多加点东西
后面问题有点多._.再重新改改吧，把stream的空隙都改小
有些该有拍的地方没有打上，short break还是太多了根本不需要嗯

等改了之后我再remod好了。暂时保留星星

歌很好听XD

H-Miku wrote:

ax_pokl wrote:

图还不错，但要改的地方太多了。
暂时不给你星了先。等你改完善点在给。
顺便求kudosu。
可以打打看我的校歌：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26561

在没有得到有效帮助的时候请不要随意给KD

MOD：
说中文可以吧？
首先最重要的一点是distance sanp，注意你的circle之间的间距保持一致
Example： 你jump难度 00:16:591 (5) (6) (7) 看图：
你离前面的距离1.39X 到后面就是也应该在1.39X左右而不是1.53X
另外一点是作图讲究一定的好看 要有排列，比如 jump难度的00:15:391 (1) 到(6)替换
只是举个例
还有就是别过多使用circle 有节奏性的地方可以用回旋的slider替代
比如在 normal里00:15:391 (1,2,3,4,5)
上述只是个人小点意见~

这歌曲我很喜欢 star~
顶你做好~ 一定要坚持

-。-这个其实。。他直接在线上帮我改的，调整了很多地方。。。谢谢大家支持~

我是来扔星星的XD

veoliouy wrote:

我是来扔星星的XD

谢谢-。-能够试一试给点建议就更好了。。

努力吧 少年

努力吧 少年

a519172361 wrote:

努力吧 少年

谢谢大叔支持

给个星星o.o

Shirakawa Kotori wrote:

给个星星o.o

谢谢支持！

IRC mod

给个星星

加油做啊！

谢谢大家支持~我正在努力修改

好吧,第一个想说的就是过场的图有些地方还有白色的擦漏了,在左下角和正下方.然后把三个难度都玩了以后,觉得hard有些短滑条的节奏很奇怪...可是开了自动看着打又觉得很正常= =,所以除了抠图有问题,其他暂时找不出问题了

我喷

lakexiu16 wrote:

好吧,第一个想说的就是过场的图有些地方还有白色的擦漏了,在左下角和正下方.然后把三个难度都玩了以后,觉得hard有些短滑条的节奏很奇怪...可是开了自动看着打又觉得很正常= =,所以除了抠图有问题,其他暂时找不出问题了

-.-其实我本来是故意没擦掉的，不过后来还是擦了。。谢谢O(∩_∩)O哈！

頑張って！！！

o0cannian0o wrote:

lakexiu16 wrote:

好吧,第一个想说的就是过场的图有些地方还有白色的擦漏了,在左下角和正下方.然后把三个难度都玩了以后,觉得hard有些短滑条的节奏很奇怪...可是开了自动看着打又觉得很正常= =,所以除了抠图有问题,其他暂时找不出问题了

-.-其实我本来是故意没擦掉的，不过后来还是擦了。。谢谢O(∩_∩)O哈！

- -这是卖萌么...

00:06:691 (3) - 感觉这个短了, 到00:07:291
00:07:891 (1) - 同上 到00:08:491
上两个可以改为
00:07:891 (1) - 的样式..
01:39:391 (3) - 这个貌似多余了？
01:47:491 (1) - 移动到01:48:091 (1) -
01:59:341 (2) - 少一个
02:00:091 (6) - 02:00:391 (8) - 换成滑条
02:00:541 (？) - 这个多余了。
02:01:291 () - 这加个NOTE。。
不错的4星半难度
...尾巴突然断了的感觉.歌曲是自己剪的?音源有问题，我用播放器打开放不了后半部分的，换个音源吧，最好是192kbps。

忘记说，是hard难度..其他没看啊，，低星歌我没玩过几个，不知道怎么评价。.

good map!!!XD

fliness wrote:

00:06:691 (3) - 感觉这个短了, 到00:07:291
00:07:891 (1) - 同上 到00:08:491
上两个可以改为
00:07:891 (1) - 的样式..
01:39:391 (3) - 这个貌似多余了？
01:47:491 (1) - 移动到01:48:091 (1) -
01:59:341 (2) - 少一个
02:00:091 (6) - 02:00:391 (8) - 换成滑条
02:00:541 (？) - 这个多余了。
02:01:291 () - 这加个NOTE。。
不错的4星半难度
...尾巴突然断了的感觉.歌曲是自己剪的?音源有问题，我用播放器打开放不了后半部分的，换个音源吧，最好是192kbps。

-。-谢谢包子。。
不过那个有些其实不是多余的。。。主要是节奏比较轻。。。不过的确有漏掉的note。。我就去改进。。

catch me in game if you need help

_Kiva wrote:

catch me in game if you need help

Thank you~

不错啊。
星数加的也蛮快的。
star。

ax_pokl wrote:

不错啊。
星数加的也蛮快的。
star。

毕竟大家都很热心地帮我修改建议啊

._.音源改了，加个❤

have a try these hit sounds ,
and i can assist for hisound.Download: New Folder.zip

_Kiva wrote:

have a try these hit sounds ,
and i can assist for hisound.[attachment=0:5dd4b]New Folder.zip[/attachment:5dd4b]

thanks~

HI

[General]
you submitted 2 maps , but they are the same , maybe you need to ask BAT how to do 0.0
and I suggest to make an Easy diff

[Skin]
you need a approachcircle.png , section-fail.png , sliderb.png(maybe sliderb0 to slider5/6/7/8/9) , spinner-approachcircle.png , spinner-clear.png , spinner-osu.png , spinner-spin.png

[Normal]
AR - 1/2
HD - 1
00:15:391 (1,2,3,4,5) - very confusing to a Normal
00:23:791 (1,2) - spacing
01:00:091 (6,7) - 1 gird up
02:03:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - symmetrical ?
02:09:691 (6) - repeat ?
02:30:991 (5,1) - spacing
02:36:091 (1) - symmetrical ?
02:40:591 (5,6) - 1 gird left
02:45:691 (1) - symmetrical ?
03:23:191 (7) - 1 gird right
03:23:491 (8,9,10,11,12) - 2 gird right
03:55:591 (5,6) - circle at 03:55:591 , slider from 03:55:891 to 03:56:491
04:00:091 (6) - 1 gird right
04:08:491 (2,3) - stack better

[jump-] ← rename to Jump
OD - 1
00:31:891 - add circle
03:45:841 (5) - move to 03:45:691
04:12:391 (1) - end at 04:14:491
nice random jump

[Hard]
00:09:391 (3,4) - stack better
00:46:591 (3) - slider to 00:47:291 ?
02:09:991 (1) - end at 02:13:291 ?

that's all
good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[General]
you submitted 2 maps , but they are the same , maybe you need to ask BAT how to do 0.0
and I suggest to make an Easy diff

[Skin]
you need a approachcircle.png , section-fail.png , sliderb.png(maybe sliderb0 to slider5/6/7/8/9) , spinner-approachcircle.png , spinner-clear.png , spinner-osu.png , spinner-spin.png

[Normal]
AR - 1/2
HD - 1
00:15:391 (1,2,3,4,5) - very confusing to a Normal
00:23:791 (1,2) - spacing
01:00:091 (6,7) - 1 gird up
02:03:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - symmetrical ?
02:09:691 (6) - repeat ?
02:30:991 (5,1) - spacing
02:36:091 (1) - symmetrical ?
02:40:591 (5,6) - 1 gird left
02:45:691 (1) - symmetrical ?
03:23:191 (7) - 1 gird right
03:23:491 (8,9,10,11,12) - 2 gird right
03:55:591 (5,6) - circle at 03:55:591 , slider from 03:55:891 to 03:56:491
04:00:091 (6) - 1 gird right
04:08:491 (2,3) - stack better

[jump-] ← rename to Jump
OD - 1
00:31:891 - add circle
03:45:841 (5) - move to 03:45:691
04:12:391 (1) - end at 04:14:491
nice random jump

[Hard]
00:09:391 (3,4) - stack better
00:46:591 (3) - slider to 00:47:291 ?
02:09:991 (1) - end at 02:13:291 ?

that's all
good luck

thanks~i will make it

Your map has been much better，star~

up

star._.、

Thank you~

[Hard]
00:43:891 = the slider is not the same shape as the one before, i match them up. Minor change

attached the .osu file here

Download: eufonius - narcissu (o0cannian0o) [Hard].osu

piratesof wrote:

[Hard]
00:43:891 = the slider is not the same shape as the one before, i match them up. Minor change

attached the .osu file here

Thank you for suggestion~

Going to mod this song soon. Take my star first.

I think it's great, I love 'hard' the most , good map

=w=星星了

I noticed there's a new diff, I can't help myself to mod it
[So easy]
00:04:891 (1) add finish sound
00:16:891-00:21:691 (1,1,1) move the beats so it looks like a triangle
00:33:691 (1) add finish sound
00:48:391 (1) lengthen the slider to 00:48:691
01:21:691 (1) add finish sound

Download: eufonius - narcissu (o0cannian0o) [So easy].osu

[General]:

1. Title: Narcissu
2. Source: Narcissu -Side 2nd- CD Edition Disc B (Sound Track)
3. Tags: STAGE NANA Setsumi Kataoka Tomo
4. Pls set PreviewTime in all difficulties.

[Easy]:

1. All fine

[Normal]:

1. The diff exsits too many long combos. It doesnt look nice with the stuff like this. Sometimes it could be be disrupted while playing and multiplaying.
2. For example: 00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
3. Apart from the one mentioned above, I can not pick up any issues.

[Jump-]:

1. No hitsound? Is this diff still be in progress?
2. 00:06:091 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo(Doesnt look nice imo).
3. 00:17:491 (7) - New combo
4. 00:26:191 (9) - New combo?(It's not good to have the long combo)
5. 00:30:991 (9) - ^
6. 00:36:691 (7) - ^
7. 00:51:091 (6) - ^
8. 01:08:191 (5) - ^
9. 02:07:891 (5) - ^
10. 03:22:891 (6) - ^
11. 03:49:291 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]:

1. 03:38:491 (5) - Add custom finish on the slider tail.
2. 03:54:091 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. 03:55:591 (2) - Switch combo and remove new combo at 03:55:891 (1)
4. 04:12:091 (1) - Add Custom finish.

作为处女图感觉还不错。继续加油:3

gdeath wrote:

[General]:

1. Title: Narcissu
2. Source: Narcissu -Side 2nd- CD Edition Disc B (Sound Track)
3. Tags: STAGE NANA Setsumi Kataoka Tomo
4. Pls set PreviewTime in all difficulties.

[Easy]:

1. All fine

[Normal]:

1. The diff exsits too many long combos. It doesnt look nice with the stuff like this. Sometimes it could be be disrupted while playing and multiplaying.
2. For example: 00:48:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
3. Apart from the one mentioned above, I can not pick up any issues.

[Jump-]:

1. No hitsound? Is this diff still be in progress?
2. 00:06:091 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo(Doesnt look nice imo).
3. 00:17:491 (7) - New combo
4. 00:26:191 (9) - New combo?(It's not good to have the long combo)
5. 00:30:991 (9) - ^
6. 00:36:691 (7) - ^
7. 00:51:091 (6) - ^
8. 01:08:191 (5) - ^
9. 02:07:891 (5) - ^
10. 03:22:891 (6) - ^
11. 03:49:291 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]:

1. 03:38:491 (5) - Add custom finish on the slider tail.
2. 03:54:091 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. 03:55:591 (2) - Switch combo and remove new combo at 03:55:891 (1)
4. 04:12:091 (1) - Add Custom finish.

作为处女图感觉还不错。继续加油:3

谢谢-。-

我会尽力做好taiko难度的

awesome neechan! ;u;

after some time, I think the scores on easy are too low
using hard rock, double time, and flashlight only nett me 43k
at least make it a little below 100k, i think it's fine
as example this map

oh, don't have to kudosu this one, take it as an edit on my post :/

piratesof wrote:

after some time, I think the scores on easy are too low
using hard rock, double time, and flashlight only nett me 43k
at least make it a little below 100k, i think it's fine
as example this map

oh, don't have to kudosu this one, take it as an edit on my post :/

thank u~

已经修改成这样了为什么还没rank...

lakexiu16 wrote:

:? 已经修改成这样了为什么还没rank...

....咱也不知道。。。估计姥爷们都看不上眼把X3...

GJ~

star~

应援团

EZ难度：
俺觉得这样的情况下EZ要RANK不太可能，原因有三：
1 DS距离过大，而且并没有按照DS来作图，这在EZ和NORMAL难度里面是不可以的，由于没有遵守本条，造成了许多ANTI JUMP。
例如： 00:24:091 (1) - 和00:28:891 (1) - 的间距 再如： 00:55:291 (1) - 和00:58:291 (2) - 的间距
2 个人觉得SV（slider速度）还是有些快
3 01:44:491 (1,2) - 这样的遮盖放置对于新手太难
建议： 缩小DS并严格按照DS排列，减慢SV；少牵扯绿线和红线，即便是01:39:991 (1) - 这样的（仅为建议）

NOR难度：整体： 排列四四方方，有板有眼，建议排列圆滑，美感，符合歌曲的风格
00:23:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 像这样的排列在NOR里面太难（建议换成拉回SLIDER）
01:13:891 (5) - 在NOR的AR中，由于设置的低，这个NOTE很难发现（建议：NEW COMBO）
01:39:991 (1,2,3,4) - 玩NOR的玩家很多为鼠标玩家，鼠标移动的不足和相对新手，使得这种排列打起来太难
02:05:791 (1) - 这样的遮盖不要有，重新排列一下
02:07:891 (5,6) - 毫无预兆的变速，建议画成弯曲的slider然后两个都减速
03:21:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这样的在NOR绝对不可能被RANK
03:37:891 (4) - 还是老话，EZ和NOR不要遮盖
03:42:391 (1,2,3,4) - 即不好看又遮盖
03:51:091 (7) - NEW COMBO
04:05:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - 圆滑排列，中间使用至少一个SLIDER
04:07:291 (1) - 这个没必要NEW COMBO
04:08:191 (1,2,3,4) - NOR难度这种排列不建议

JUMP难度： 不MOD，个人建议直接删除，原因如下：
1 整套MAP， SV=1.8X DS=1.9x 三星半难度，
2 曲风和MAP风完全不符，00:23:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 类似这样的排列在三星半难度中出现不恰当

HARD难度：
1 节奏单一，并且毫无预兆的转换： 例：00:56:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - 作为MAPPER你对歌曲的熟悉远大于玩家，这样的地方多数人肯定不知道这种节奏，虽然节奏是正确的
2 01:06:091 (1,2,3) - 完全跟不上VOCAL也不符合节奏，又是突然变化
3 01:12:091 (1,2,3,1,2) - 又是突然变化01:13:591 (1,2) - 尤其是这俩，看不太懂
4 有时快有时慢，快的太快不符合曲风，慢的太慢且没有预兆
5 01:26:191 (5,6) - 没听过的玩家根本不知道这里的VOCAL，容易MISS，并且出现在MAP的中间部分，一旦MISS心情会不太好
6 01:39:091 (2,3,4) - 这里也是。类似这样的地方还有很多，不一一指出
7 01:51:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种和曲风完全不相称的地方也建议改改
8 02:00:541 (10,11,12) - 像这种地方最后的12，什么都卡不上，还具有很大的模糊性
后面的基本也都是这样，建议HD remap


以上
仅为建议
好歌！

one more time :/


[normal]
02:09:683 - preferrably i'd use spinner like hard
02:36:083 (1) - extend it to 02:38:483, use half speed if you like
02:41:783 (1) - put it at the same horizontal level as (2)
02:43:283 & 02:44:183 - add a circle
03:01:883 (6) - put it to 03:01:583
03:50:483 (1,2) - put more spacing between them
[Jump-]
01:33:383 (6,7) - inconsistency of spacing with before
[hard]
01:11:483 - add a circle
03:38:483 (5) - extend it to 03:40:883 and 0.5 speed, also delete the 03:40:491 timing point

cansaannnnn~ <3

mod ><

-easy-

I honestly think you don't need new combos that much >< so this mod's main point is just decreasing them ><
For the opening, why not try the pattern 1,2,3, 1,2,3 or only new combo for new lyrics? rather 1,1,1,1,1... orz
00:07:283- (1,1) remove nc ><
00:16:883- (1,1) ^
00:24:083- (1) try this codes so the slider comes out smoother? ><

80,164,24083,6,0,B|104:96|160:48|236:28|312:32|368:52|408:92|428:144|432:200|432:244|416:284|376:332|376:332,1,600

00:28:883- (1) I honestly don't like the idea of this slider overlapping ><;; why not try this? then add reverse :3
the code is here -

316,260,28883,2,0,B|306:269|330:251|342:229|346:209|348:184|336:156|312:132|280:116|236:112|192:124|168:152|162:191,2,300

00:33:683- (1) if you did ^, move it to 284,212~
00:36:083- (1,1) remove nc ><
00:43:283- (1,1) ^~
00:52:883- (1) ^
01:02:483- (1) ^
01:09:483- (1) ^
01:14:483- (1) ^
01:21:683- (1) ^
01:46:883- (2) move it to 284,164 for a good blanket pattern?

I guess thats all >< cann-san is as amazing as usual ;u;

-normal-

00:06:683- (1) remove new combo, and expand by 1/2 beat (since the lyric is still playing)~?
00:26:183- (5) I think this acr slider suits better? ><;;
00:38:183- (8) I think it'll sounds better if you move this a half beat backward? ><~ considering the hitsounds too--
01:21:383- (9) I think it'll be better if you change this into 1/2 beat slider? ><
01:58:883- (2)(nazi) I think it's better if you move it 2 grid downward ><? so its linear?
02:00:638- (4) at least tidy it a little orz ><
02:32:583- (5) remove this note >< it doesn't follow anything--
03:02:183- (7) move it 1/2 beat backward?
03:38:483- (6) I think you need to tidy this one too ><a
quite same like the ss above ><
03:50:483- (1,2) spacing ;A;!
03:57:683- (1) if you add a green line with the soft default hitsound, put finish here, don't forget to end it 1/4 beat after it :3 It sounds better really xD
04:00:083- (6)^ , here too xD
04:03:383- (5) remove note >< doesn't follow anything
04:10:283- (5) at least new combo here for the sv change T_T;;

-jumps-

I don't know how to mod this ;A; just a little reminder~
01:36:983- (2,3,4) avoid these patterns. They're impossible to read for first time play ._.;; and there are issues this might be unrankable ><;
plus suggestions~
why not try these jump patterns?

-hard-

since this is a slow song, HD-1 ><!~
00:19:283- (4) new combo here for sv change >,<
01:20:483- (4) I think it sounds better if you move it 1/2 beat forward~ ah, new combo because of sv change ><
02:00:983- (12) move this 1/2 beat forward-- fits the stream xD
03:38:483- (5) new combo here for sv change >,<

I think thats all ;A;--- cannsann so pro orz

话说这首歌还在做啊。

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