Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. (7) (8) (9) in SB seems really poor quality ORZ Actually, I make it bigger since the man inside this song is screamming. So I make it bigger

[Freezing]: ALL FIXED

1. 02:42:294 (1) - delete? a bit strange ending point and can't find a good time to end this
2. 01:59:736 (6) - new combo
3. 02:37:410 (6) - ^
4. 02:28:166 (4,5,6,7,8) - move this 2 grids right? the stack is really huge OTL.

[Cold]: ALL FIXED

1. 02:40:724 (1) - end this at 02:42:119

[Warm]: ALL FIXED

1. Cool seems better as a name for Cirno
2. 02:40:724 (1) - end this at 02:42:119

star~

banvi wrote:

Cirno~

[Warm] ALL FIXED
00:29:212 (3) nazi : 2 grid up (grid lv4)
01:36:538 (3,4) nazi : 2 grid right (grid lv4)

[Cold]
...maybe Circle size +1? OK
mapset is fine to me

[Freezing] ALL NO
AR +1
01:04:270 (n) add note?
02:00:084 (n) ^
02:37:759 (n) ^

nice map!
star~

416,240,16654,6,0,B|420:191|372:163|323:191|323:247|367:268,1,180,8|4

376,160,83631,6,0,B|408:120|376:76|320:76|288:120|320:160,2,180,8|4|8

Goooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuomoooooouuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Psivarh wrote:

[freezing]
00:16:654 (1) - doesn't look good. How about this? (Yeah I like mod shape )

416,240,16654,6,0,B|420:191|372:163|323:191|323:247|367:268,1,180,8|4

01:23:631 (1) - ^

376,160,83631,6,0,B|408:120|376:76|320:76|288:120|320:160,2,180,8|4|8

GREAT! BONUS 80000!

Gopoh Kushifarah wrote:

Oh I'm bad modder

Btw do you need sb modding? Your storyboard contains some useless lines and can be compressed.
I can do these for you.

Gomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomomo wrote:

30% size reduced

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- In the tags, it should be "The embodiment of scarlet devil" and not "embodiment of scarlet devil"
- Remove "(9)" and "Cirno" from the tags, there are already in the song name Remove "(9)" and stay "Cirno" because it's a name

Warm
00:13:689 (1,2,3) - 1/2 are not good in easy difficulties :/, I think you should remove (1) and (3)
00:45:782 (2,3) - Make them a slider ? NO
00:55:549 (3,4) - Make them a slider ? NO
01:20:666 (1,2,3) - Remove (1) and (3)
02:29:038 (4,5) - Make them a slider ?

Cold
00:21:712 - Add a note ?
02:18:747 (1) - I think it would be better if you start this slider 1/2 later
02:20:317 - Add a note here (or add a reverse at 02:19:794 (1)) and start 02:20:491 (2) 1/2 later. It sounds nicer imo.

SPOILER

Star~

1. consider adding a 2000 audio lead-in (for your storyboard element at the beginning)
2. combo color 2 and 3 are really alike...further brighten combo color 2?
3. enable "display storyboard in front of combo fire"

1. 00:47:701 (1) - clap 00:48:747 and 00:50:143?
2. 01:01:654 (1) - similar as above
3. 02:26:770 (1) - slightly inconsistent spacing
4. 02:35:143 (1) - similar clap suggestion

1. 00:21:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - place them this way to fit your storyboard?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:03:050 (3) - try this arrangement? i think sounds better:
   
3. 01:18:398 (2,3,4) - they're not perfectly symmetrical, also (2) is offgrid..try these code:
   

   256,192,78398,2,0,B|256:94|436:94|436:192,1,260,4|0
   344,244,79445,1,8
   436,296,79794,2,0,B|436:394|255:394|256:296,1,260,4|0

   you may need to adjust 01:20:840 (1) - if you fixed above
4. 01:47:701 (5) - clap the endpoint
5. 01:51:887 (1,2) - clap the endpoint
6. 01:58:863 (4) - same as 01:03:050
7. 02:18:922 (1) - switch clap to endpoint? sounds weird now
8. 02:21:189 (1,2,3,4) - make them a straight line?
9. 02:29:561 (1,2,3) - same as 01:18:398, you can do a copy/paste if you apply the code
10. 02:36:538 (5) - same as 01:03:050, if you're not willing to change pattern: make it parallel to 02:37:933 (1)

1. 00:23:108 (2) - move to x:232 y:108
2. 01:40:109 (T) unused timing section
3. 02:21:189 (1,2) - their shape is not perfect..make them look like (same to the later part):
   
   SPOILER

   

Xgor wrote:

Let's shoot a bubble at it.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

So many clap sounds T_T

Warm:
Timing section mod:
00:44:906 - make the first kiai section start here to be consistent with the other diffs OK

Combo mod:
Similar to what I mentioned in Cold about the chorus. I advise you make the choruses consistent I don't what you mean

Cold:
Combo mod:
00:46:305 (3) - new combo here to follow the lyrics (I think 2 note combos are fine. The consistency of patterns is more important imo) OK
01:00:259 (3) - ^ OK
01:56:073 (1) - since this chorus had combos done differently than the previous diff, remove the new combo here to be consistent with the other combos in this chorus OK
02:30:956 (3) and 02:33:747 (2) - why is the second half of the chorus have combos that follow a different pattern than the ones in the first half of it. Please make them consistent I don't know how to fix this O_O

Freezing:
00:17:526 (3) - The mass repeats made this play strangely for me I think it's fine
00:21:887 (5) - I personally don't like how this hit the hp bar (it makes 01:28:863 (5) and the stack before it look even worse), so I advise you make this like a sine wave I think it's fine
02:37:410 (1) - nazi:put this in the center of the star so that it does not overlap the other parts of the star (the star is not symmetrical right now) OK

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A decent mapset. Some of the combos could use a bit of work, but overall it is not bad. Popping over the kiai timing. Once you fix that and any of changes you want, call me back and I'll remod (not sure for what yet). For now, star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Warm:
01:28:863 (5) - it is sort of weird that there is nothing to follow the sbed down arrow here
01:49:096 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:53:282 (1)?

Cold:
Here is how I would fix the last chorus: (I like more combos rather than fewer)
02:30:956 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 02:19:794 (1)
02:33:747 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 02:22:584 (1)
02:36:538 (5) - The mass repeat is a little boring and doesn't fit that well imo. I would advise changing it. Regardless, new combo to follow the change in lyrics

Freezing:
01:05:840 (1,1) - the short spinner combined with the notes quickly after is more cruel than fun imo
01:28:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stack leniency's overlap with the hp bar looks aesthetically unpleasing. If you really want to keep the pattern, I advise you manually stack the notes in a nicer pattern
02:01:654 (1,1) - same as 01:05:840 (1,1)

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That is all I found on this run. Reply to the post, contact me, and I'll remod, hopefully I'll rebubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

(no kds pls)

Cold:
02:36:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern still does not fit that well for me. Then again, I am not sure what fits. If you have another idea try it, otherwise just tell me, and I'll rebubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Everything seems to check out, so I'll rebubble.

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

HI~ nice map
just want to know,
is it too late too upload this ? (my taiko diff)

can you take a look at it please ~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

The timing seems to be off. After some testing I found - BPM: 172,02 / Offset: 3.060 - Remember to resnap all notes and everything after changing it. Fixed, but are you sure this is the right timing? Did you discuss about this with your friend? I'm scare

[Freezing]

01:02:965 (1,2) - This sudden doublet is really hard to read and confusing while playing. Change it to something else.
01:58:773 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:59:732 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
02:36:443 (1,2) - Same as 01:02:965. Fixed
02:36:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why don't you make this pattern similiar to 01:58:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) ? Much better.[/color] NO thanks

That's all, I guess.

Sorry but have to pop due to the timing issue. WWHHHHHYYYYYY