lolcubes wrote:

• Offset is wrong in all diffs. The correct offset is 1819.

Blue Dragon wrote:

hey hey ~

Beginner
00:04:824 (1) - finish?

Normal
00:29:756 (4,5,1) - this spacing DDD:

Hyper
00:24:891 (4) - 1 grid up because of consistency with (1) and (8)
01:09:486 (7) - 1 grid right and then fix 01:09:688 (1) - spacing

Another
00:09:891 (1) - Move the endpoint 1 grid up so the reverse arrow doesn't glitch

Nice map. Star ~

DJPop wrote:

I think the gap between stars of Beginner & Normal is too high (1.96 <-> 4.10).
You should make Normal a bit easier.

~Beginner~
00:11:309 (4) - new combo
00:15:769 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:877 (4) - new combo
00:43:742 (4) - ^

~Normal~
00:40:498 (5) - new combo
00:42:120 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:742 (3) - new combo
01:37:255 (6) - ^
01:38:877 (1) - remove new combo
01:44:147 (4) - new combo
01:45:363 (7) - ^

~Hyper~
00:06:444 (1) - add whistle OR finish
00:09:688 (6) - new combo
00:16:174 (5) - ^
00:37:255 (6) - ^
00:40:296 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:498 (2) - new combo
01:11:309 (6) - ^
01:19:417 (5) - ^
01:40:904 (1) - remove new combo

~Another~
- Stack Leniency should be 6.
00:16:580 (2) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:35:634 (5) - new combo
00:39:688 (5) - ^
00:54:688 (7) - ^
00:55:093 (1) - remove new combo
01:08:066 (6) - new combo
01:24:282 (6) - ^
01:27:525 (6) - ^
01:34:012 (6) - ^
01:37:255 (7) - ^


+Star

Ekaru wrote:

Another:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO. I agree.

It's Insane, that's all I can say really. Felt kinda slow for the song but eh. >.>

Hyper:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.
-I would decrease the circle size by 1. The spacing is way too close to play like a Hard with such big circles, so making the circles still a good size but smaller improves the experience significantly. The 1/2s are touching and stuff, and that's not Hard-like spacing. Also, for future reference, 1.1x slider velocity is slow for a 148 BPM Hard. ><; I'll remember that.

Normal:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.

Beginner:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.
01:11:715 (2,3,4) - I would rearrange these, this looks weird. Done.

Overall, it's a rankable mapset. Didn't really excite me but eh, some people will love it. Star.

1. Offset 1585~1600. Try 1590?
2. OD shouldn't be the same on Hyper and Another, change it in one of the diffs?

1. Maybe AR +1? Not sure for this one.
2. Spacing is often changing between 0,9 and 1,2 you should fix it and make a regular spacing since it's an easy diff.
3. 00:16:174 (5) - Maybe a new combo here?
4. 00:17:796 (7) - Here you should add a new combo.
5. 01:06:444 (3) - Add a new combo?
6. 01:45:363 (5) - Mmh maybe a new combo? Not sure.

1. AR is way too slow here D: make it +2 or at least +1
2. I think some parts have too much linear sliders, try to make a shape for some of them?
3. 00:24:282 (1,2) - Fix spacing here?

1. AR is a bit too slow imo, AR7 would fit better.
2. 00:39:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Uh, remake this part? It's not really nice and spacing is wrong

1. Break time shouldn't be the same than other diffs? Oh well not so important however.
2. 00:13:539 (3) - Remove a repeat and add a circle?
3. 00:19:215 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really disturbing. Move the centre of the pattern somewhere else than under the slider or make the combo start at (9) or make more spacing between (9) and (2) or you can do all of those suggestions.
4. 01:30:566 (4,5,1,2,3) - Hmm this pattern looks a bit weird.

Kurosanyan wrote:

Mod4mod request

[General]

1. Offset 1585~1600. Try 1590?
2. OD shouldn't be the same on Hyper and Another, change it in one of the diffs?

[Beginner]

1. Maybe AR +1? Not sure for this one. done.
2. Spacing is often changing between 0,9 and 1,2 you should fix it and make a regular spacing since it's an easy diff. i did that intentionally.
3. 00:16:174 (5) - Maybe a new combo here? no.
4. 00:17:796 (7) - Here you should add a new combo. done
5. 01:06:444 (3) - Add a new combo? done.
6. 01:45:363 (5) - Mmh maybe a new combo? Not sure. nope.

[Normal]

1. AR is way too slow here D: make it +2 or at least +1
2. I think some parts have too much linear sliders, try to make a shape for some of them? i'm lazy :(
3. 00:24:282 (1,2) - Fix spacing here?

[Hyper]

1. AR is a bit too slow imo, AR7 would fit better.
2. 00:39:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Uh, remake this part? It's not really nice and spacing is wrong

[Another]

1. Break time shouldn't be the same than other diffs? Oh well not so important however. i mapped that part
2. 00:13:539 (3) - Remove a repeat and add a circle?
3. 00:19:215 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really disturbing. Move the centre of the pattern somewhere else than under the slider or make the combo start at (9) or make more spacing between (9) and (2) or you can do all of those suggestions. No i've seen patterns like this before.
4. 01:30:566 (4,5,1,2,3) - Hmm this pattern looks a bit weird. no it's not

That's all! Good map have a star :3 Also the music is cool.

HeatKai wrote:

8-)
I still hate you

Sakura Hana wrote:

I'm only getting Beginner and Another try full submitting the map again and i will come back when the osz includes all the difficulties

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Heat's Taiko]
54 Unsnapped notes! Done.

[Normal]
Many sections sound weird, i dont really know what you were following with the notes, but if anything i'd recommend the sliders would follow the "weeeeeooooo" on the background Hmm k.

[Beginner]
00:38:951 (1,2) - This should probably be a repeat slider like earlier, since 1.5 beat time can be hard to predict for newbies.
00:39:560 (2,1) - Spacing too close.
00:47:465 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:519 (3,4) - These would look better if they were centered.
01:09:762 (1,2) - I think distance snap would like to have a word with you.
01:45:438 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
Lots of spacing inconsistencies that i didnt feel like pointing out, just apply DS to most of your map, that's all. Done.
Looking good, dont like the song much, but the map's nice

Crimmi wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Heat's Taiko]
54 Unsnapped notes! Done.

[Normal]
Many sections sound weird, i dont really know what you were following with the notes, but if anything i'd recommend the sliders would follow the "weeeeeooooo" on the background Hmm k.

[Beginner]
00:38:951 (1,2) - This should probably be a repeat slider like earlier, since 1.5 beat time can be hard to predict for newbies.
00:39:560 (2,1) - Spacing too close.
00:47:465 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:519 (3,4) - These would look better if they were centered.
01:09:762 (1,2) - I think distance snap would like to have a word with you.
01:45:438 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
Lots of spacing inconsistencies that i didnt feel like pointing out, just apply DS to most of your map, that's all. Done.
Looking good, dont like the song much, but the map's nice

Thanks. + 600th Post.