Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Normal]
01:06:067 (1) - remove clap from start? done
01:42:067 (1) - i think you should place this in center because this slider is pretty early after the spinner and you can't see the approach circle that clear. After that you can rotate it 90 degrees clockwise done
02:09:067 (1) - remove clap from start? done

[Insane]
00:47:879 (2) - inconsistent distance fixed, AIMod is now silent about it and also it looks better
00:48:442 (5) - ^^ ^^
omg. so nice diff <3 ty

Yomeiro wrote:

Hi there~ (from my riddle queue~) hai o/

General

Is there a reason why you didnt map the first 40 seconds of the map? o.o (I kinda understand why you wouldn't want to map the first 12 seconds but the rest... .,.) that'll make it too long and boring
Oh well, my question is, did you consider to cut the part you didn't map away from the mp3? yes, but i decided to keep it since it blends well with the lolsb and also my map is 3,6mb only so it shouldn't be a problem
Meh, Normal could be hard for real beginners probably, it's also above 3 stars >< like Natteke said, it's not like it's harder than this one here http://osu.ppy.sh/b/83743&m=0
Did you consider to map an Easy diff for this?~ i am now, since everyone is pointing this out. but it'll be boring. is that ok?

Insane

00:51:067 (5) - Add a NC here~ i didn't add nc there because i want players to see that i'ts a jump, it's less confusing this way (it was also a pr0tip from the veteran player)
00:52:567 (1) - Remove it from here then~ ^
00:56:504 (4,1) - Add NC at 4 and remove it from 1? >< oh, how did i miss this one? fixed
00:57:067 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:02:317 (7) - Add NC~ same as above, i want player to see it's a jump

Hard and Normal seem fine~ yay \:D/

Awesome maps, awesome song, guess you get my star aaaaaaaand....~ D: awesome! thankyou~

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Insane]

02:09:067 (7) - New combo good point

Saten-san wrote:

Sorry for the delay~ np

General:
Kiai just for fountains isn't nice~ there are 2 full kiai sections as far as i can remember.. shoud i remove the fountaions completely?
also, the last kiai doesn't end on the same spot on every diff fixed for hard and insane

Easy:
02:18:067 (8) - Even if it fits, I don't think you should silence the last circle on an [Easy]
I know it's 20%, but at least increase the volume more so it feels more noticeable~ changed to 70%

Normal:
HPD+1 since it's the same as Easy right now~ it was the easiest diff just yesterday, forgot to add some. done
00:43:942 (4) - stack properly (Distance snapping 0,0x and disable grid snapping) don't know what it changes but i did what you asked me to do =)
00:45:067 (1) - overlaps (3) fixed
00:56:317 (4) - overlaps (1) remapped section
01:46:942 (9) - stack properly done
01:51:442 (2) - ^ done

Hard:
why is the offset 39067 and not 67? because someone forgot to change it. right, uinbauan? D:
doesn't really hurt changing it~ changed. i hope Winber1 won't mind

Insane:
01:37:942 (5) - stack properly done what you asked

star~★ yay~

winber1 wrote:

what.. you never told me D: lol. but anyways, it's fine. :3

HeatKai wrote:

[General]

Kiai time : Don't make small kiai time. Delete all of the short kiai. why? i'm not spamming them
Don't play fireworks (spam kiai) there was 10 of them, now it's only 4. is it still considered spamming?

Preview Point : In your beatmap doesn't have Preview point ! I suggest put at 00:39:067 my map HAS a preview point, all diffs D:

Artist : Greenox FEAT. JASON MARTINO AND RED ONLINE http://puu.sh/2nEN
I asked peppy about it and here is his answer http://puu.sh/2nYH

[easy]

00:51:067 (1) - spacing what's wrong with it here?
01:02:692 (6) - 1 grid down done
02:13:192 (2) - 1 grid left sorry, no. i don't like straight lines
02:16:942 (6) - 1 grid right ^

[normal]
00:55:192 (2,3,4,5) - make square done
01:09:442 (2) - sounds odd , remove clap ? changed
01:10:942 (4) - ^ changed
01:14:317 (4) - 1 grid down ~ sorry, no. i don't like straight lines

[winber1's hard]
Approach rate -1 done

[Insane]
00:48:817 (7) - new combo done
01:14:504 (5) - new combo i like how it looks so no
01:45:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds odd for me added whistles. don't know if it's better now, through

[overall]
Go go Senaya avatar cute ! *blush* XD

justnobody wrote:

Easy
00:51:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe too long combo as an easy? i'm not sure though. it fits the music pattern
01:40:192 (1,1) - putting notes that shortly after a spinner is......killing the newbies. made it shorter
maybe i'm wrong...but i like sliders here. randomly placed sliders are the best \:D/

Normal
01:45:067 (6) - i guess a new combo here? added nc on (5), also thanks to you i've found a skipped finish hitsound later on

Insane
i doubt some new combo in this diff...anyway. i wonder what were you trying to tell me, but i guess it's fine

pink star. wow, thanks D:

IceBeam wrote:

Интересная музыка,я нашёл в нете альбом - название всё же должно быть "InTernal UnCeRTaintY".С маленькой "l" на конце,в общем.Так что,исправь его в тэгах во всех сложностях. где? в шопе я вижу с большой L

[Easy]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5?
Разница между скоростью слайдеров / дистанцией заметно великовата,и хоть это и по правилам,но игралось бы лучше хотя бы на 0.7 ~ 0.8

И ещё хитсаунды на тиках Они меня почти всегда конфузят,ну да ладно. до тех пор, пока всех страивает =)

01:01:192 (4,5) - Убери стак,его тяжело прочитать новичкам будет,тем более ритм не очевидный тут. kinda done
01:30:817 (3) - Здесь специально хлопок стоит? Просто ты больше нигде не использовал в мапе стандартный софт-хлопок,поэтому странно он звучит. он есть в музыке. никак не избавиться =)
01:34:567 (1) - Я бы сюда добавил финиш. done
01:36:817 (3) - А отсюда убрал,слишком рандомно он тут стоит по-моему. done

[Normal]
00:45:067 (1) - Я бы изогнул его в другую сторону.Вроде лучше смотрится и играется: done

SPOILER

00:52:567 - Тут вроде не нужен хлопок? он там естьлолштоянаписал? оставлю пока
01:13:942 (3,4,5) - Сдвинь их вправо,что бы (4)-ый сиркл по центру был. done
01:28:567 - Нет,ну..0.5x здесь нечитаемо.Тогда уж ставь секцию,и делай 0.5 слайдеры тоже. done

[Insane]
00:41:598 (9,10,11) - Не люблю я такие стаки.Может всё же анстакнуть 00:41:879 (11)? поставил на (1) и сделал нк на (11)
00:51:067 (5) - Тут вроде новое комбо. я говорил с h3k1ru, он рекомендовал на джампах не делать нк, чтоб не путать игроков
01:02:317 (7,8,9,10) - Тут я бы тоже выделил новое комбо.И прыжок выделит,и визуально лучше. done
01:02:692 (9,10) - Очень советую поменять их местами,так гораздно приятнее играть. done
01:30:254 (6,7) - Какие-то резковатые прыжки,немного рандомно. я старался сделать мапу рэндомной..
01:36:254 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:52:942 (5,6,7,8,9) - Вот тут прыжки очень уместны,но,во-первых нужно бы выделить тут новое комбо,и начинай делать прыжки уже от (5). done

Звезда~ лучей добра тебе :3

senaya wrote:

где? в шопе я вижу с большой L

senaya wrote:

я говорил с h3k1ru, он рекомендовал на джампах не делать нк, чтоб не путать игроков

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Insane
00:51:067 (5) - нк? раз все рекомендуют, то я думаю таки добавить его там.. надеюсь, что h3k1ru меня простит =)

Надеюсь на скорый ранк, удачи :3 спасибo~

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

I can't find anything wrong on the diffs.

The only things that bug me is the storyboard.
The problem is that at 01:15:067 -, when the person on background disappear, there is a spinner, and when appear, after the spinner at 01:40:379 (1) - , there is a beat or a slider that ruin the effect. the fade effect is made specially for taiko so she won't appear suddenly

I have some suggestion for other parts of SB: umm.. i'd rather not, i like how it goes...

SPOILER

I think that would be better if the fade of black.jpg is extended to 00:36:067 and bg2.jpg starts at 00:36:067.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",320,240
 F,0,0,,1
 F,0,6067,12067,1,0
 F,0,12067,36067,0
 F,0,36067,38317,0,1
 F,0,37567,39067,1
 F,0,39067,,0
 F,0,39067,,1,0
[...]
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg2.jpg",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.8
 F,0,39067,,0,1
[...]

What do you think to make the person disappear at the end? This is my try: i don't think she should fade before the bg does..

[...]
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg2.jpg",320,240
[...]
 F,0,100567,137692,1
 F,0,137692,138254,1,0

Good map
Star~

Hyguys wrote:

No more than 10 seconds of break it's 10,300 secs long. these 0.3secs matter that much?
Easy
What the heck is up with the distance snap i was told to make an easy diff. i figured that 0.5 will be easy enough
01:33:817 (3) - Change whistle to clap? no, i'd rather have no claps at all, but 01:30:817 (3) is in the music so i can't get rid of it =(

Normal
00:46:942 (4) - One grid up? don't see how it will make it better
00:54:442 (1) - Whislte on start , whislte on arrow and normal on end same thing on 01:57:442 (1) then?
01:09:067 (1) - One grid up , and two left distance snapping won't allow it and also i don't like straight lines
01:49:942 (4) - Two grids left how come 00:46:942 (4) is 1 grid up, but vertical flip of it is 2 grids left, not 1 down? =\
01:59:317 (4) - One grid left also, 1 grid up, done
02:00:067 (1) - Rotate it 6º done
02:01:567 (4) - 3 grids to right and 1 up because of the distance snap, done

Insane
all good?

Hyguys wrote:

Winber's Hard
00:54:817 (3) - Offscren...

Vass_Bass wrote:

Привет, извини за долгое ожидание (сессия все дела) главное, что не зря =)

General
Вначале БГ с девочкой как-то внезапно появляется, сделай переход по плавнее появляется по звуку, поэтому и резко

Easy
AR -1 done
00:46:192 (2) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл разве это не получится слишком запутано для новичка? сёркл поверх слайдера..
00:55:567 (6) - новое комбо хоть я и не согласен, но ты не первая, кто просит, так что ладно, done
01:07:567 (7) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл но ведь нельзя же ставить сёрклы поверх разворотной стрелки слайдера D:
01:33:817 (3) - вообще в изи не допускаются такие короткие слайдеры, выглядит конечно хорошо, но думаю придется заменить чем-то типа серкла думаешь или таки придётся? я бы хотел оставить, но если анранкабл, то сменю
01:45:067 (5) - новое комбо зачем? но ладно, done
01:46:567 (7) - о, сделай как вот тут 01:58:567 (7,8) - 2 слайдера, так будет лучше done
01:57:442 (5) - новое комбо не вижу смысла
02:09:067 (5) - ^ не люблю большие комбо в изях но ведь оно подходит по музыке..
02:17:692 (7) - ^ done

Normal
AR -1 done
02:02:317 (1) - (наци наци) 1 клетку вверх и одну вправо distance snap разрешил только одну вправо

Insane
02:06:067 (9) - новое комбо done
02:07:379 (1) - a здесь удали done

Vass_Bass wrote:

Winber1's Hard
HP OD と AR -1
00:40:942 (2) - extend till 00:41:317
00:42:442 (1) - extend till 00:42:817
01:14:317 (2) - too high over the grid, you have to lower it
01:50:504 - add circle
01:52:004 - ^

senaya wrote:

Vass_Bass wrote:

00:46:192 (2) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл разве это не получится слишком запутано для новичка? сёркл поверх слайдера.. Установи не поверх стрелки, а например на следующем слайдере, там скорость не большая так что норм

01:07:567 (7) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл но ведь нельзя же ставить сёрклы поверх разворотной стрелки слайдера D: то же самое что там ^
01:33:817 (3) - вообще в изи не допускаются такие короткие слайдеры, выглядит конечно хорошо, но думаю придется заменить чем-то типа серкла думаешь или таки придётся? я бы хотел оставить, но если анранкабл, то сменюя советую сменить чтоб потом не придирались, а то достать могут еще как

02:09:067 (5) - ^ не люблю большие комбо в изях но ведь оно подходит по музыке.. по музыке то понятно, но лучше делать коротенькие комбы, опять же чтоб потом не придирались

Vass_Bass wrote:

00:46:192 (2) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл разве это не получится слишком запутано для новичка? сёркл поверх слайдера.. Установи не поверх стрелки, а например на следующем слайдере, там скорость не большая так что норм всё-равно не понимаю, так distance snap не разрешает =\

01:07:567 (7) - удали один ретерн и добавь вместо него серкл но ведь нельзя же ставить сёрклы поверх разворотной стрелки слайдера D: то же самое что там ^ тут тоже. distance snap не позволяет так далеко тянуть
01:33:817 (3) - вообще в изи не допускаются такие короткие слайдеры, выглядит конечно хорошо, но думаю придется заменить чем-то типа серкла думаешь или таки придётся? я бы хотел оставить, но если анранкабл, то сменю я советую сменить чтоб потом не придирались, а то достать могут еще как я попросил в #modhelp прийти проверить. покачто ответ был: "можно, но страшно", но пообщещали прийти поиграть и там уже дать окончательный ответ

02:09:067 (5) - ^ не люблю большие комбо в изях но ведь оно подходит по музыке.. по музыке то понятно, но лучше делать коротенькие комбы, опять же чтоб потом не придирались.. по гайдлайнам вроде не больше 10 нжуно делать, тут 8.. ну ладно, об этом тоже нужно будет спросить отдельно

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
There might be a few inheriting sections that can be removed, so you might want to go and check for those. (Example: 02:17:504 on [Normal]) i did Insane diff first so yeah, there might be quite a bit of unused sections on some of the easier diffs. removed one in Easy and quite a lot in Normal just now

[Easy]
01:33:817 (3) - My final say on this would be no. This is the only slider in the map that uses a 1/2 repeat, so it's really better to just keep things consistent and use no 1/2s. it can't be helped then, changed

Hyguys wrote:

No more than 10 seconds of break

Thunderstorm wrote:

*
Ничего конструктивного. Найс

-Sekai- wrote:

[Easy]
01:07:567 (7) - new combo don't think it fits
01:09:067 (1) - remove the new combo ^
01:34:567 (1) - ^ done
01:36:067 (6) - new combo done
01:37:567 (1) - remove the new combo done
02:17:692 (1) - ^ added few mods ago, removed in again now.. i added nc at 02:18:067 through

[Normal]
00:51:442 (2) - remove whistle add clap ? added clap, but didn't remove whistle
01:06:067 (1) - remove new combo done
01:30:817 (3) - remove clap add whistle ? it's in the music, i can't remove it
01:34:567 (1) - finish at the end maybe ? done
01:37:567 (1) - ^ done
02:09:067 (1) - remove the new combo done

[Insane]
00:54:254 (4) - new combo no, i like how it is
00:56:504 (1) - remove the new combo done
00:58:754 (9) - new combo no, reason: same as 00:54:254 (4) ^
01:04:567 (8) - ^ done
01:05:504 (1) - remove the new combo done
01:51:067 (7) - new combo done
01:51:254 (1) - remove the new combo done
01:53:692 (5) - new combo no, i like how it looks
01:53:785 (1) - remove the new combo ^
02:00:067 (9) - new combo done
02:02:504 (7) - ^ done
02:13:754 (7) - ^ done

-Sekai- wrote:

02:11:317 (5) - new combo
02:12:067 (1) - remove the new combo

Haneii wrote:

~General~
You don't need to have "ver." in the title in brackets. Just "Instrumental" would be nice. Lol, that's just a preference of mine though + trying to keep it consistent with the naming on all the other ranked instrumental maps. i asked in #modhelp and the answer was it has to be (Instrumental ver.) so i'm keeping it as it is. i do think that it looks weird, through.

~Easy~
This map was just unreadable for me, mainly due to the large circles, low AR, and really low distance spacing o.o. I would suggest increasing AR by 1 or 2 at least. I'd also suggest you space everything out with 0.8 spacing (Low distance spacing doesn’t make the map easier – right now notes are so close that player has to heavily rely on approach circles to know when to hit, pretty hard for beginner players imo.) i just lowered AR a few mods ago.. well, okay, getting it back up =\ also, major change: distance spacing is now 0.8 instead of 0.5 and i hope it's better now, because i spent a lot of time rearranging notes.

~Normal~
01:42:067 (1) – this note might be too hard to hit that soon right after the spinner (for a normal). Suggestion: Have spinner end at 01:42:067 and add a note at 01:42:442. it is not the easiest diff so i think it's okay to leave it like this. AIMod said it's fine too

winber1 wrote:

Also, i wouldn't really consider that an anti-jump, even if the spacing is too small, but whatever.

winber1 wrote:

The spacing probably looks fine if you're concentrated on playing the map xD.

gef wrote:

Можно попробовать добавить флешлайтнинги в ритм хитсаундам-финишам. уже ничего не хочется после вчерашнего))
И да, изи дифка тут лишняя. заставили. её изначально не должно было быть

gyt wrote:

[Easy]
00:44:692 (1,2) - может без пересечения как-нибудь? done
01:40:192 (1) - быстрый спиннер для easy да и 01:42:067 (1) довольно близко к нему. Может поставить его вместо 01:39:817 (5) и закончить на 01:41:317? done
01:39:067 (4) - поменять финиш на свисток? done

[Normal]
01:03:067 (1,2,3) - неравный спэйсинг? + в 02:06:067 (1,2,3) done + done
01:09:067 (1,2) - прыжок? ну ок. Хотя это вроде бы должно быть симметрично с 02:12:067 (1,2), а там прыжка нет прыжка быть не должно. my bad, fixed
01:40:379 (1) - может переместить спиннер на 01:40:192? done

[Insane]
не очень нравятся рандомные тройки, а так всё отлично вся мапа построена на рэндоме =)
01:36:817 (1,2) - почему-то не симметрично с 01:30:817 (1,2) потомучто я не хотел, чтобы было симметрично =)
01:52:567 (4,1) - здесь бы лучше спэйсинг увеличить до 2x увеличить? он там больше двух и так

CracK wrote:

[General]
00:12:067 если бы отсюда карта начиналась было бы логичнее и лучше =\ и тогда бы в инсейне было 100500кк очков =(
black.png нужно заменить скриптом
и bg2 нужно обрезать до девчушки
I will remove sb entirely or I will spend my time on heavily modifying it UPD: so, I had a chat with Odaril, he said that it's perfectly fine unless the sb load is over 5.00x which will never happen in my sb so I'm leaving it unchanged.

[Normal]
01:28:567-01:39:817
в той же изи эта часть нормально на мой взгляд сделана, а тут..
такой маленький спейсинг - не айс changed spacing from 0.5 to 1.0
01:42:067
в отличии от других сложностей в этой с этого момента дофига свистков
они тру, но непонятно почему они только здесь потомучто нормал озвучивала ла каталин~

wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry for the huge delay

[Easy]
00:39:067 (1) - more symmetrical done, i think D:
01:34:192 (4,5) - 1 gird down ? make circles and slider on the same arc is better imo done
01:52:567 (6) - repeat 1 time more i thought about it, i mean, it is the same as everywhere else, but i'd be boring D:


[Insane]
00:44:785 (6) - delete done

kurohacker wrote:

[General]
The girl creeps me out. XD good =)

[Easy]
0'56''692 - I suggest that you follow the 5 cymbals combo from here. Split [4] into a note at this spot, adding a finish, and....
0'57''067 - ... make a slider from here to 0'57''442, with a finish at the beginning. .. and clap at the end. done
1'33''817 - Try using either Custom 1 soft clap or default sof clap for [3] and [4], though I prefer Custom 1. It helps establish a rhythm. don't like nor custom1 nor soft claps
1'36''817 - Add a default soft clap here. i don't like claps here at all, i used the first one because it was in the song, can't remove it =(
2'18''067 - Remove the whistle, to follow the other diff's style here. dunno why but done

[Normal]
0'59''317 - Delete new combo here, and...
1'00''067 - Start here instead. done
1'12''442 - Delete new combo here, and...
1'13''192 - Start here instead, to follow the combo pattern from earlier. nope, random ftw =)
1'34''567 -> 1'39''817 - I highly suggest that you follow the rhythm pattern from the earlier two combos. To do that:
- 1'34''567 - Remove the finish at the end.
- 1'36''817 - Replace the finish with a default soft clap.
- 1'37''567 - Remove the finish at the end. alright, you win, all done
1'44''317 - Delete new combo here, and...
1'45''067 - Start here instead. done
1'50''317 - In reverse, start new combo here, and..
1'50''692 - .. delete the one here. ...there is a new combo at 01:50:317 (1) so .. what?
1'54''442 - Remove the whistle at the end, and..
1'55''192 - Add a whistle at the beginning, to maintain the rhythm. there already is. it's a pattern that comes form 00:51:442 (2)
1'57''442 - Remove the whistle at the end, and...
1'58''192 - Add one at the beginning here instead for the same reason. same as above
2'02''317 - Remove new combo here, and..
2'03''067 - Start here instead. agreed, done

[Insane]
1'46''379 - Add a whistle at the beginning. Gives out a nice jingle. only here? no, there has to be some pattern, not a single whistle.
1'47''692 - You should definitely add a note here, with a finish. but i don't like how it sounds =(
2'07''379 - The spacing between [3], [4] and [5] are inconsistent as compare to the rest of the diff. Hope you can fix this. what do you mean? it's 0.5x like everywhere else
2'08''129 - Same case for [1], [2] and [3]. same as above

whymeman wrote:

[Winber1's Hard]

I thought it was supposed to be winber1.... ?

whymeman wrote:

[Easy]

01:34:567 (5) - The new combo could start here instead. agreed
01:37:567 (3) - ^ same as above

[Winber1's Hard]

I thought it was supposed to be winber1.... ? if that makes him happy, why not leave it as he wants it?


Its a nice map honestly. Though combocolor #1 is kidna hard to see with it being almost as dark as most of the area of the background. See if you can make it lighter please (and make sure to apply the same adjustment to all difficulties). made it a bit brighter. changing it even more will cause it to blend with #2. making #2 brighter will cause it to blend with #3 and #3 is almost white allready.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

why you stealing Lybydose's desktop wallpaper?

senaya wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

why you stealing Lybydose's desktop wallpaper?

because i visit konachan too
had to modify it in PS though.

Lybydose wrote:

did not get from konachan

http://puu.sh/2TUk