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Pereira006
update :3
Komeiji Yuki
I have finished the previous SB request~

Will take a little break then start yours :D
Topic Starter
Pereira006

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

I have finished the previous SB request~

Will take a little break then start yours :D
ok ;) :3
XepherX3
[Normal]
00:14:660 (4) - two bounces less

00:23:932 - add a clap every other white tick



[Fight69's Hard]

00:07:205 (4) - remove this one

01:10:478 (6) - new combo?

~star
Topic Starter
Pereira006

XepherX3 wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:660 (4) - two bounces less done

00:23:932 - add a clap every other white tick hmmm ok done
thank you star and mod :)
TheVileOne
General

Song artist is EastNewSound Capitalize the S
Song bitrate is over 192.

Kiai starts and ends randomly. End kiai time here 01:32:296 - (Start on a note that preferably not a blue tick.) End somewhere that's not a blue tick

kuro's Easy

00:24:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This pattern isn't very creative. I would expect better from a song such as this.

01:04:296 (4,1,2) - spacing
01:05:387 (2,3,4) - ^

01:23:569 (3) - How about scale it down to about 2 beats wide and add an extra repeat. Then map the rest of the sounds differently? Or you could just add more repeats to cover up those sounds, but that wouldn't be the best thing to do.

01:45:387 (1,2,3,4) - Make all the spacings equal here.

01:57:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same uninspiring pattern...

02:04:296 (3) - Slider doesn't fit the song at all.

02:27:569 (2) - This sounds better if you moved it back to 02:27:205 -

02:55:205 (1,2,3) - Spacing.

02:56:660 (3) - Doesn't look symmetrical to me. Just because the move points are the same doesn't always mean they will make the slider even.

Normal

00:06:114 (6,7) - I don't like this stack.

00:14:660 (4) - move back to here 00:14:478 - and remove a repeat. This isn't really so much a suggestion rather something that must be done to make this sound and play right.

00:55:569 (7,8,9) - whistles don't sound quite right here.

01:57:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clean up this spacing? It changes every note.

02:24:659 (2) - I don't like these whistles.

Fight's Hard

00:57:387 (2,3,4) - I don't like this stack.

01:28:478 (3,4,5) - Stack better.



Star. well done.
Kurowolfe
Thanx for the nazi mods, TheVileOne! :D

TheVileOne wrote:

kuro's Easy

00:24:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This pattern isn't very creative. I would expect better from a song such as this.
I was going for a simple pattern at first, before the big ones. Guess that's a no, huh? Added two notes.
01:04:296 (4,1,2) - spacing
I didn't notice that. Fixed!
01:05:387 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

01:23:569 (3) - How about scale it down to about 2 beats wide and add an extra repeat. Then map the rest of the sounds differently? Or you could just add more repeats to cover up those sounds, but that wouldn't be the best thing to do.
I was hoping to match the singer's sustained voice at this part, so I think I'll keep this first.

01:45:387 (1,2,3,4) - Make all the spacings equal here. OK.

01:57:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same uninspiring pattern... .... and same fixes as above.

02:04:296 (3) - Slider doesn't fit the song at all.
Really? I was following the chimes at the back, like I did in the first half of the song. I'll keep this first.
02:27:569 (2) - This sounds better if you moved it back to 02:27:205 -
Sorry, I forgot to apply Takos's mod here. Not applicable.
02:55:205 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
Distance spacing seems fine with it though, but I agree with you. Fixed!

02:56:660 (3) - Doesn't look symmetrical to me. Just because the move points are the same doesn't always mean they will make the slider even.
Hmm, you're right, I didn't even notice that. Fixed.
Download: EastNewsound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Pereira006

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Song artist is EastNewSound Capitalize the S done
Song bitrate is over 192. this mp3 is 192 bitrate...

Kiai starts and ends randomly. End kiai time here 01:32:296 - (Start on a note that preferably not a blue tick.) End somewhere that's not a blue tick no

Normal

00:06:114 (6,7) - I don't like this stack.ok change now with stack 00:07:569 (1)

00:14:660 (4) - move back to here 00:14:478 - and remove a repeat. This isn't really so much a suggestion rather something that must be done to make this sound and play right.hu? i so sorry... no i did change and i think is horribel i felling this song...(sorry my poor english so no fix

00:55:569 (7,8,9) - whistles don't sound quite right here. done

01:57:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clean up this spacing? It changes every note. the spacing is correct but fix

02:24:659 (2) - I don't like these whistles.done

Star. well done.
thank you mod and star :)
Fight69

XepherX3 wrote:

[Normal]

[Fight69's Hard]

00:07:205 (4) - remove this one Nope

01:10:478 (6) - new combo? Okay

~star
Thanks ! :)

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Fight's Hard

00:57:387 (2,3,4) - I don't like this stack. Fixed

01:28:478 (3,4,5) - Stack better.
Thanks ! :)

Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [Fight69's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Pereira006
update :)
Gcode
this is just nitpicking put insane has notes under epilepsy warning


IMPORTANT:
Offset sounds better at 712
Topic Starter
Pereira006

Gcode wrote:

this is just nitpicking put insane has notes under epilepsy warning Insane is not finished because this is WIP


IMPORTANT:
Offset sounds better at 712 i liste this but at 00:12:296 the drums on the blue tick and is wrong sorry not change and i will used timing by Selee
don´t hate me pleasse :(

thank you looking my maps and star
Gcode

Pereira006 wrote:

Gcode wrote:

this is just nitpicking put insane has notes under epilepsy warning Insane is not finished because this is WIP


IMPORTANT:
Offset sounds better at 712 i liste this but at 00:12:296 the drums on the blue tick and is wrong sorry not change and i will used timing by Selee
don´t hate me pleasse :(

thank you looking my maps and star
Alright, I just thought that your offset was off, but i see what you mean
Tony
[General]
early offset. i'd set it to 712(encoding error i guess). not 100% sure on this... you can ask a timer to check it deeply.


[Normal]
ugly slider design! read this guide : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=0
00:23:860 - 00:47:114 I can even hear the hitsounds. increase the volume
01:34:114 - 01:57:023 - so long break, you can map that break from the half. like in easy

[Fight69's Hard]
so good...me dies *.*

good luck.
//me shoots star!
Art-FzTT
man i really like ur hard diff !! :3

star !! GOGO
Kurowolfe
Here's the updated one. I've changed the offset to 712 (not that it makes any difference, since the notes are mostly on 1/2 beats) and reduced the hitsound volume a bit.

Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
Fight69
Here's my diff with the new offset :)

Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [Fight69's Hard].osu
Raimon
^^
Komeiji Yuki
Do you like this font and style ? Or need some change



Topic Starter
Pereira006

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Do you like this font and style ? Or need some change

i like this :D

Komeiji Yuki

Pereira006 wrote:

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Do you like this font and style ? Or need some change

i like this :D

Uhh.. D:" You may misunderstand my meaning

The second pic is the diversification of colors , the 2 pic are the same font :P

Just asked you that this fit the song or not iyo :3
sirjuyt
EastNewSound > <

[song setup]
Add tag "Last Remote" (Original song) , "Koishi Komeiji" (character)

[kurohacker's Easy]
00:26:893(4,5) do not overlap > < may confuse newbies
02:03:621(1,2) ^
00:53:075(1) umm.... 00:54:530 remove whistle and 00:55:257 add a circle+whistle ?
00:55:984(1) ^
01:01:075(4) remove whistle ,then add the hitsound in beginning and end
01:06:893(4) ^

[Normal]
00:15:984(5) a bit hard to read o o maybe like this http://puu.sh/2pZ4 ?
00:43:984(1) move to 00:44:348 and shorten it to 00:45:802
00:51:802(2) reduce a reverse ?
02:13:802(x) add a circle?
02:43:621(3,1) swap new combo

[Fight69's Hard]
00:57:621(2,3,4) use DS 0.2 x ?
01:32:530(1) move to 01:32:439 ?

yay I like the mapping style > <

STAR! :D
Kurowolfe
Finally, a mod :D ! Thanx, sirjuyt!

sirjuyt wrote:

[kurohacker's Easy]
00:26:893(4,5) do not overlap > < may confuse newbies - Erm, OK, changed the style a bit.
02:03:621(1,2) ^ - ^
00:53:075(1) umm.... 00:54:530 remove whistle and 00:55:257 add a circle+whistle ? - Nice idea!
00:55:984(1) ^ - ^
01:01:075(4) remove whistle ,then add the hitsound in beginning and end - OK
01:06:893(4) ^ - ^
Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [kurohacker's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Pereira006

sirjuyt wrote:

EastNewSound > <

[song setup]
Add tag "Last Remote" (Original song) , "Koishi Komeiji" (character) no tag just only who make diff


[Normal]
00:15:984(5) a bit hard to read o o maybe like this http://puu.sh/2pZ4 ? fix
00:43:984(1) move to 00:44:348 and shorten it to 00:45:802 fix
00:51:802(2) reduce a reverse ? no
02:13:802(x) add a circle? fix
02:43:621(3,1) swap new combo no

yay I like the mapping style > < thank you :3

STAR! :D
thank :)
Moriya-Suwako
:)
Komeiji Yuki
SB finished ~

If you have something want to add , forum-pm me ;w;

/me is tired and goes to sleep

Attachments:

Lyric Elements [1.38MB]
Download me please

Download: EastNewsound - Another Distance (Pereira006).osb
Fight69

sirjuyt wrote:

[Fight69's Hard]
00:57:621(2,3,4) use DS 0.2 x ? Okay
01:32:530(1) move to 01:32:439 ? Okay
Thank you sirjuyt ! :)

Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [Fight69's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Pereira006
woow sb lyrics is cool :)
Thank you so much, komeiji Yuko :) i give you kudosu because you did hard work lyrics :D

and update :3
Kurowolfe
Pereira006, me and HeatKai made a Taiko collab diff for the song, as has been suggested by him.
Hope you like it! =3

And here's the timing points for the collab:
  1. 0:00:712 ~ 0:23:984 -> kurohacker
  2. 0:24:348 ~ 0:47:075 -> HeatKai
  3. 0:47:257 ~ 1:10:348 -> kurohacker
  4. 1:10:530 ~ 1:32:348 -> HeatKai
  5. 1:33:802 ~ 1:56:893 -> kurohacker
  6. 1:57:075 ~ 2:20:166 -> HeatKai
  7. 2:20:348 ~ 2:43:439 -> kurohacker
  8. 2:43:621 ~ 3:06:893 -> HeatKai
Download: EastNewSound - Another Distance (Pereira006) [KK's Taiko Collab].osu
HeatKai
KK's on the work :P

Well here's the taiko BG


Remove all of the Flashing SB.

LET THE LYRICS STAY.
The other thing on SB remove from the taiko diff ~

Don't remove lyrics <--- reminder

:P


Remember put my name in tags :P


From TBRT page :P
Even wrong request XD

We make ;p

Barney Stinson
http://puu.sh/2KIv That's the Fight 69's hard.
http://puu.sh/2KGz That's the Normal.
GREAT MAP, STAR!
Fight69

scalone wrote:

http://puu.sh/2KIv That's the Fight 69's hard.
How can I accept it ? I don't even know what you did on my diff... :?

Anyway, thanks for your star !
HellDawn
8-)
Magical Pokie
good!
Verdisphena
Thanks for mapping this song :3
S MoMo
This is great map :) :)
cococococo_old
:)
Makar
I played through Hard. Nice song! Star~
Medicine Melancholy
Great map :D
Raging Bull
Hi.

General:
Long break in Normal/Hard. Like 20 seconds. Maybe start mapping where easy started? 01:45:439.
Use consistent tick rate? Tickrate 2 would be good. Change easy and normal.

Easy:
Seems alrighty to me.

Normal:
00:21:075 (1,2,3) - I'm not entirely sure if beginners would be able to follow this and I'm not really a fan of these short repeating sliders on lower difficulties. See if you can map differently using a longer slider and adding some notes if needed.
00:44:348 (1) - Extend slider to 00:46:530?
00:52:530 (3) - Tricky spacing here. Please distant snap it correctly.
00:55:257 (6) - NC?
00:57:439 (9,2) - This slider could block beginners from seeing 2 correctly. Maybe move 2 to a different spot?
02:14:166 (7) - NC?
02:15:621 (1) - Remove NC. Move one grid down also (Nazi)
02:29:075 - Add note? Would sound better.
02:33:075 (3,5) - Don't like the overlap. See what you can do if you want.
02:34:166 (4) - NC
02:37:802 (5,2) - Don't like the overlap. Move slider or 2?
02:40:348 (5) - NC?

Hard:
Some notes in the beginning are inaudible. Try to raise the SOFT notes volume to 40%. It should be better.
I'm rather curious why you used x1.5 slider velocity the whole map instead of changing it at the timing menu.
Seems okay, although I don't really like the anti jumps. Doesn't seem to fit for me.

Good luck.
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