As per eveless' request:

[General]
Remove Game from tags since it will be in the genre. If PC stands for Personal Computer, just remove that from tags as well.
Artist is HIDEKI
Check this thread to make sure you don't duplicate your mapset when you reupload.
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Delete CurriculuMachine - CurriculuMachine (toejamms).osb, CurriculuMachine - Togainu no Chi (toejamms).osb, and Togainu no Chi - CurriculuMachine (toejamms).osb.
Try to get Togainu_no_Chi_-_Akira.jpg at 800x600 or 1024 x 768, please.
Are White.png and FullBlack.png being used? If not, please delete and full resubmit.

[All Difficulties]
You only need one timing section, so delete your uninherited timing sections and add in this one:
BPM: 187.00
Offset: 886

[Easy]
Unsnapped notes!
00:04:740 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. Try to give around 3-4 beats (white ticks) at this BPM
01:14:045 (1,2) - Not a fan of notes stacked under the ends of sliders for easy difficulties.
01:19:820 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy.
01:48:697 (1) - Return arrow looks odd

[Normal]
00:28:804 (2,3) - Spacing
00:43:563 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Try to give about two beats (white ticks) for this BPM.
This was kind of boring rhythmically since it was mostly just all 1/1/1/1 beats. Try to mix it up a bit more - use some red ticks. The music offers more than just banging away to the beat. :D

[Hard]
This map looks and plays really nice. It almost stands in a really stark contrast in comparison to the other two difficulties.

I really recommend you take a good look at the Easy and normal and see what you can do to make them more memorable and fun to play. The easy was okay, but there were a lot of overlaps that could have been avoided, and the Normal was a little bit on the dry side since the rhythms were very stale.

http://vgmdb.net/album/13043

Refer to this to correct artist.

Why did you resubmit the map using the Visual Novel title itself as artist anyway.

Faust wrote:

Why did you resubmit the map using the Visual Novel title itself as artist anyway.

...?!
When did I....

Kiiwa wrote:

Faust wrote:

Why did you resubmit the map using the Visual Novel title itself as artist anyway.

...?!
When did I....

you can also changed it in forum .

21:20 <goodbye> : [Hard]
21:21 <goodbye> : 00:22:543 (1) - different spacing between 6 and 2 o.o?
21:21 <goodbye> : Is it on purpose?
21:22 <Kiiwa> : yea ^^'
21:22 <Kiiwa> : ...but not really
21:22 <goodbye> : LOL
21:22 <goodbye> : so moe!

thanks for mod ^^
there is more...

quite well-made map
and sounds like a rock music also fit in my mind !

Star!

nice

fun

Nyan

Star ~

いえい

god !!!!

star

☆ミ

nice^^

[General]
- Almost timing points aren't snapped. Please fix them.
- I couldn't find any hitfinish sound. Adding some finishes would be nice.


[Hard]
00:13:720 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - In this stream, 8+4+4 is more making sense than 6+4+6.
00:30:083 (3,4) - combine to a slider


[Normal]
00:01:026 (1) - (bug) add new combo or make it again.
00:40:652 (1) - ^


[Easy]
00:01:026 (1) - (bug) add new combo or make it again.
01:58:940 (1,2,1) - chage them to like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87608


Star

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fgix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. Okay, that's extremely nazi, but make the audio lead-in 2,000 exactly in all diffs ?
2. I'm not sure this background is rankable. If you can, change it.
3. I have an offset of 4471.

Easy

1. The first spinner hardly makes sense to me. I think it would be better to start the map at 00:04:716 (1) -
2. There is a whole part of the map that has no hitsounds (or none that I could hear, it only seemed to be normal hit all way long).
3. 01:24:288 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?

Normal

1. The first spinner hardly makes sense to me. I think it would be better to start the map at 00:04:716 (1) -
2. 01:53:165 (2,3,4) - Confusing spacing: I was absolutely sure these were 1/4s. Spaced them normally.
3. 01:24:288 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?

Hard

1. The offset is not the same in this diff. Fix it.
2. This doesn't play like a Hard at all. Name it Insane.
3. 00:01:046 (1,2,3,1) - This beginning really doesn't make sense to me. You should start the map at 00:04:736 - imo.
4. 00:14:361 (1,2) - I didn't see these two repeat sliders when playing, so I combobroke here and didn't even understand why. I think you should make them circles.
5. 01:24:308 - This break is really long - can't you map something in it ?
   I like a lot - really - your anti-jumps, like 00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it plays really fine, has a great flow, and fits the song.

Hard - which is actually Insane - has some very good stuff in it. The two other diffs are okay. Good job.
Remember to resnap all notes and all timing sections.

Taiko is coming

Download: HIDEKI - CurriculuMachine (Kiiwa) [Taiko].osu

Love the Taiko diff..

Thanks for Taiko and Mod ;D

awesome map

star~

Timing is a bit off
i suggest +10 ms to your offset,
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes

i used some 1/3 divisors, so i resnapped my diff

Download: HIDEKI - CurriculuMachine (Kiiwa) [Alace's Taiko].osu

yeah

star~~

hi

[overall]:

1. osb delete?
2. BG800*600 I'll resize use this~
3. Where do you use this BG for? BG name White

[Hard]:
Fine

[Normal]:

1. AR-1
2. 00:13:710 (1) - Green Line Volume 20%?
3. 00:52:854 (1) - remove New combo 00:53:175 (2) - Newcombo
4. 00:53:817 (1) - Remove New combo
5. 01:03:763 (1) - add finish?
6. 01:24:458 - unused timing section
7. 01:53:496 (4,1) - Spacing
8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89952Suggestion

[Easy]:

1. You must not change spacing in Easy
2. HP,AR,OD+1
3. 00:17:560 (4,1,2) - Why does this spacing change?

+star
Fight~

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:19:164 (5) - [Suggestion] It covers next slider so why don't you move this like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90189 :3?
01:19:485 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Spacing orz

[Hard]
00:23:175 (3,4,5) - Intended spacing miss ;_;?
00:46:277 (3,4,5) - ^

[Alace's Taiko]
@.@



:3

S o r d a wrote:

hi

[overall]:

1. osb delete? ok
2. BG800*600 I'll resize use this~ thanks!
3. Where do you use this BG for? BG name White

...for kiai

[Hard]:
Fine

[Normal]:

1. AR-1 ok
2. 00:13:710 (1) - Green Line Volume 20%? ok
3. 00:52:854 (1) - remove New combo 00:53:175 (2) - Newcombo ok
4. 00:53:817 (1) - Remove New combo ok
5. 01:03:763 (1) - add finish? ok
6. 01:24:458 - unused timing section ...for kiai
7. 01:53:496 (4,1) - Spacing no
8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89952Suggestionno

[Easy]:

1. You must not change spacing in Easy
2. HP,AR,OD+1 ok AR+1
3. 00:17:560 (4,1,2) - Why does this spacing change?it plays better

+star
Fight~

Thanks ^_^

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
:3

[Normal]
00:19:164 (5) - [Suggestion] It covers next slider so why don't you move this like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90189 :3? ok
01:19:485 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Spacing orz ok

[Hard]
00:23:175 (3,4,5) - Intended spacing miss ;_;? Yup~
00:46:277 (3,4,5) - ^ no...

[Alace's Taiko]
@.@



:3

Thanks ^_^

good map ><

star for goodmap

ETERNAL BAKA!!

delete file: white.png and full submitt >.> then i ll bubble~~

Done ;D

very good

star~!!

ok~ here we go~

your song ends at 02:17:881 yet your mp3 is 03:16:360 long, this is pushing empty space abit too far and it needs cutting shorter, if you need a hand cutting it just pm me

Hard
00:07:293 (1,2,3) - move these a lil closer so they have the same spacing as the combo before

Hard
i would like to suggest one thing for you to think over, i would advise to give the 1/4 streams a visible spacing difference to the antijump streams, its really confusing to know which is which when they both have identical spacing


and here is a taiko BG for you, the taiko looks abit odd without it xD

hey
do you check that i map the whole song lol
rofl

plz use the old mp3~ or you need to delete my taiko diff www