Charles445 wrote:

This song has swing, it should be mapped on the 1/3, not the 1/4.

Hyguys wrote:

i just can't believe...
Congratz for the bubble !!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:900 (2,3) - Don't stack on these rhythms, beginners will always try to hit it at a faster rhythm such as 00:15:749 (4,5).

00:42:484 (1) - I'd probably move this spinner to the end, as the last note is placed in a strange place. It ruined my SS wwww.
[Hard]
Seems good. Though some parts have strange distances, like 00:11:754 which has a rather small distance to at one point 00:26:095 (8,1) which has a rather large jump of space in between...
[Insane]
Oh my DR is high... probably just me thinking it's unfitting... one notch lower would be nice though, but maybe not... lol orz

00:26:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo seems to start a bit close to the last combo, though, the AR might make it fine... otherwise, move it down or something so it's more spaced 'correctly'

00:34:085 (4,5) - Lol, when I play this part, I end up hitting the 5 first, then I feel forced to do it right after playing again. But maybe it's just me. Simply doesn't feel right for me.


anyways star~

1. Folder is clean~
2. Don't forget to fix the Artist and the Title.

1. HPDrain is too high for this map, reduce it at least 1 tick.
2. AR seems high too, I suggest to reduce it 1 tick too.
3. 00:02:535 (2,3,1) - These objects are not correctly spaced, the spacing must be consistent because the objects have the same spacing between them in the timeline. Please fix the spacing between (3) and (1).
4. 00:06:837 (1,2,3,4) - (3) sounds off, it's not following any noticeable rhythm or the vocals, I highly suggest to remove it.
5. 00:19:129 (1,2) - (2) is not correctly spaced, it's so far away from (1), fix the spacing please.
6. 00:20:563 (1) - This spinner seems too short for [Easy] imo, almost like a ninja spinner. The high BPM will make the next object really hard to hit. I highly suggest to use a slider instead.
7. 00:24:046 (1,2,1) - Same issue about spacing here, You can't use huge spacing between objects in 1/1 and then use little spacing between some objects that are placed on 1/1 too. Fix the spacing between (2) and the last (1) please.
8. 00:40:026 (1,2,3) - I'll say it again, "BPM: 195" makes even a bunch of 1/1 notes together hard to hit (for Rookies). Why don't you try something like this, That's way easier and fits the music.
9. 00:42:484 (1) - The beginning of this spinner seems a bit odd, I suggest to start this spinner here: 00:42:176 - that will also make the spinner longer. (It's kinda short imo)

1. AR seems too high for [Hard] you should reduce it 1 tick. (You used AR: 8 for Insane too, so you should use 6~7 for Hard)
2. 00:07:964 (3) - The end of this slider sounds off. I suggest to end this slider 1/3 earlier, sounds way better (Perhaps, add a whistle at the end too?
3. 00:09:296 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these in 1/2? I've tested them in 1/3 and they sound perfectly fine, even better~
4. 00:10:525 (1) - This spinner barely gets 3k on Auto, it totally kills the flow. I highly suggest to use a slider instead, the spinner seems too short...
5. 00:15:647 (1,2,3,4) - These objects would feel better if you stack (1)&(2) and (3)&(4) or use sliders instead
6. 00:24:968 (4) - This repeat is snapped to 1/2, it should be snapped to 1/3 too. (The repeat should land here: 00:25:172 - )
7. 00:31:421 (1) - I saw the same huge spinner in [Easy] where it seemed acceptable, but in [Hard] too?, it makes me think that you got lazy. Why don't you delete that spinner and map that part? (That spinner doesn't suit this diff anyways. IMO)

1. HPDrain is too high, reduce it at least 1 tick. (2 if it's possible)
2. 00:03:662 (8,9) - This jump doesn't fit at all. It feels so random and unintuitive. I suggest to reduce spacing
3. 00:17:593 (5) - This sounds off, it should be placed 1/3 later.
4. 00:17:798 (6,7,8,9,10) - (8) and (9) are not following any noticeable rhythm, you should remove those circles.
5. 00:25:788 (8,1) - This spacing is completely wrong, (1) looks like a fake 1/3. You need to move (1) away.

Jarby wrote:

Offset should be set to 691 so the metronome functions correctly.