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Itou Kanae - Happy Sunshine

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mjw5150
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月23日 at 17:38:37

Artist: Itou Kanae
Title: Happy Sunshine
Source: Asobi ni Ikuyo!
Tags: KayeSara cmn_891127
BPM: 92
Filesize: 4166kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.04 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Hard (4.78 stars, 357 notes)
  3. KS & cmn's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 844 notes)
  4. Normal (3.76 stars, 210 notes)
Download: Itou Kanae - Happy Sunshine
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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TV アニメ - あそびにいくヨ! ED
thx for KayeSara & cmn_891127's taiko diff
have fun with this relaxing and kawaii song XD
lorvd
KEY君のbaka
DarkRingSystem
;) kira~
2b mod is coming~

[General]
BG I think it is so 阿格尼 maybe you should change a better one. 8-)

Music Track +2 second in each diff, so that players can skip in the begining.

[Easy]
OD+3 OD=0 is unrankable 我擦 这么久了还犯这么低级的错误

00:39:293 (4) - 不建议在EZ难度里有堆叠
01:16:141 (4) - ^
01:44:510 (4) - ^
01:54:945 (3) - ^
02:24:293 (1) - finish the nc
....还冒做完啊 orz


做完了再mod
kira~❤
KD就是这样骗的
DarkRingSystem
BG
http://puu.sh/1W8D
http://puu.sh/1W8C
加好了音效再给我改改

[Timing+5ms]
Topic Starter
mjw5150
改完 BG的话我会另外找的
thx for DRS/2pc brother/yami no akuma's modding~
DarkRingSystem
Kurai
Easy
- Approache rate +1 ? It will make the map more readable.
00:06:047 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistles at the end oh these sliders, it will make this part nicer ;D
00:13:873 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier (at 00:13:547), it will follow the voice
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:16:482 - Add a note here with a finish for the same reason as before
01:32:134 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this slider, Remove the whistle at the beginning of 01:32:786 (2) and add a whistle at the end of this slider too, It fit much better this part in my opinion
01:45:177 (1) - Add a whistle onto the reverse and add a whistle at the beginning and the end of 01:46:156 (2), it fit much this part ;D
01:46:156 (2) - Add a note here ~
02:37:351 (1) - This note is hidded by 02:35:721 (2,3) :/

Normal
00:06:699 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:08:003 (4) - Add a whistle
00:09:308 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:10:612 (4) - Add a whistle
00:11:590 (1,2) - Add a whistle on the reverse of these sliders
- Those whistles will makes this part nicer
00:13:873 (1) - Begin this slider 1/4 earlier to follow the voice
00:17:134 (1) - This slider should ends 1/4 earlier
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:14:525 (1) - Add a whistle here ?
01:16:482 - Add a note here ?
02:13:873 - Add a note here ?
02:38:493 (3,4) - This part don't really follow the song because (4) starts on nothing, so remove (4) and make (3) a slider who ends at the spot where (4) ended.
02:53:003 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier to follow the voice ?

Hard
00:06:699 (5) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:07:677 (7) - Add a whistle at the end
00:09:308 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:10:286 (5) - Add a whistle at the end
00:11:590 (1) - Add a reverse onto the whistle
00:12:895 (3) - Add a whistle at the end
- Those whistles will makes this part nicer
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:16:482 - Add a note here ?
02:13:873 - Add a note here ?
02:34:416 (8) - This circle is a bit offscreen, I don't really like that :/

D2S
00:28:547 (11) - New combo ?
00:42:569 (7) - New combo ?
01:45:177 (6) - New combo ?
01:58:058 (9) - New combo ?
02:06:047 (9) - New combo ?
02:16:156 (7) - This circle is too much offscreen D:
02:42:895 (11) - New combo ?
03:04:906 (9) - This slider has no sense :/ Maybe remove 03:04:743 (8) and move this slider 1/4 earlier ?
03:07:351 (7) - New combo

Yay, pretty nice map, really well made :3
Star~
Topic Starter
mjw5150

KuraiPettan wrote:

Easy
- Approache rate +1 ? It will make the map more readable.
00:06:047 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistles at the end oh these sliders, it will make this part nicer ;D
00:13:873 (1) - Begin this slider 1/2 earlier (at 00:13:547), it will follow the voice
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:16:482 - Add a note here with a finish for the same reason as before
01:32:134 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this slider, Remove the whistle at the beginning of 01:32:786 (2) and add a whistle at the end of this slider too, It fit much better this part in my opinion
01:45:177 (1) - Add a whistle onto the reverse and add a whistle at the beginning and the end of 01:46:156 (2), it fit much this part ;D
01:46:156 (2) - Add a note here ~
02:37:351 (1) - This note is hidded by 02:35:721 (2,3) :/

Normal
00:06:699 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:08:003 (4) - Add a whistle
00:09:308 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:10:612 (4) - Add a whistle
00:11:590 (1,2) - Add a whistle on the reverse of these sliders
- Those whistles will makes this part nicer
00:13:873 (1) - Begin this slider 1/4 earlier to follow the voice
00:17:134 (1) - This slider should ends 1/4 earlier
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:14:525 (1) - Add a whistle here ?
01:16:482 - Add a note here ?
02:13:873 - Add a note here ?
02:38:493 (3,4) - This part don't really follow the song because (4) starts on nothing, so remove (4) and make (3) a slider who ends at the spot where (4) ended.
02:53:003 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier to follow the voice ?

Hard
00:06:699 (5) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:07:677 (7) - Add a whistle at the end
00:09:308 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning
00:10:286 (5) - Add a whistle at the end
00:11:590 (1) - Add a reverse onto the whistle
00:12:895 (3) - Add a whistle at the end
- Those whistles will makes this part nicer
00:19:090 - Add a circle here with a finish, in my opinion it will mark the end of this part.
01:16:482 - Add a note here ?
02:13:873 - Add a note here ?
02:34:416 (8) - This circle is a bit offscreen, I don't really like that :/

D2S
00:28:547 (11) - New combo ?
00:42:569 (7) - New combo ?
01:45:177 (6) - New combo ?
01:58:058 (9) - New combo ?
02:06:047 (9) - New combo ?
02:16:156 (7) - This circle is too much offscreen D:
02:42:895 (11) - New combo ?
03:04:906 (9) - This slider has no sense :/ Maybe remove 03:04:743 (8) and move this slider 1/4 earlier ?
03:07:351 (7) - New combo

Yay, pretty nice map, really well made :3
Star~
OK,all fixed,thx for your modding and pink star:)
hoLysoup
hihi~
These are all suggestions :>

General:
Kiai Sections! You don't have any kiai sections in any difficulty :( such a cute song, you must add them:
00:53:003
01:50:395
02:34:743
and I'm sure you know where to end.
Also, I think you can use louder hitsounds cause it's a bit quiet right now :)

D2S:

00:19:579 - Add a beat here?
00:33:275 - ^
00:58:710 (1~7) - How come spacing here is the same when the beats are twice as fast? Make spacing smaller IMO
01:02:134 (3,4) - mm, extend these 2 by 1/2 so it follows the vocals I think it's better
02:07:025 (3) - Maybe move this to 02:06:862 and add a repeat
02:19:906 (7) - add a repeat on this slider

Hard:
Mm, just a thought, the slider velocity is the same as D2S, and I'm gonna guess that D2S means it's more challenging than Hard diff.

00:06:699 (5,6,7) - I think this kind of jump is a bit challenging for hard diff. hard to read IMO
00:09:308 (3,4,5) - ^
00:40:123 (2,3,4) - Move 4 to 2 on the timeline, 2 to 3 and 3 to 4. Basically the sliders move in order from right to left. Simpler and cancels antijumps. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88027
01:32:134 (1,2) - pretty far jump for Hard
01:52:677 (10,1) - Spacing
01:54:633 (7,8,9) - Make this into a better looking triangle, unless you weren't trying to make them into an equilateral triangle
02:07:025 (2,3,4) - ^
02:50:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is hard to read for Hard diff
There are some pretty hard jumps in Hard than D2S I think but nonetheless it's good.

Normal and Easy are perfect. ^^

Star~!
Topic Starter
mjw5150

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~
These are all suggestions :>

General:
Kiai Sections! You don't have any kiai sections in any difficulty :( such a cute song, you must add them:
00:53:003
01:50:395
02:34:743
and I'm sure you know where to end.
Also, I think you can use louder hitsounds cause it's a bit quiet right now :)

D2S:

00:19:579 - Add a beat here?
00:33:275 - ^
00:58:710 (1~7) - How come spacing here is the same when the beats are twice as fast? Make spacing smaller IMO
01:02:134 (3,4) - mm, extend these 2 by 1/2 so it follows the vocals I think it's better
02:07:025 (3) - Maybe move this to 02:06:862 and add a repeat
02:19:906 (7) - add a repeat on this slider

Hard:
Mm, just a thought, the slider velocity is the same as D2S, and I'm gonna guess that D2S means it's more challenging than Hard diff.

00:06:699 (5,6,7) - I think this kind of jump is a bit challenging for hard diff. hard to read IMO
00:09:308 (3,4,5) - ^
00:40:123 (2,3,4) - Move 4 to 2 on the timeline, 2 to 3 and 3 to 4. Basically the sliders move in order from right to left. Simpler and cancels antijumps. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88027
01:32:134 (1,2) - pretty far jump for Hard
01:52:677 (10,1) - Spacing
01:54:633 (7,8,9) - Make this into a better looking triangle, unless you weren't trying to make them into an equilateral triangle
02:07:025 (2,3,4) - ^
02:50:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is hard to read for Hard diff
There are some pretty hard jumps in Hard than D2S I think but nonetheless it's good.

Normal and Easy are perfect. ^^

Star~!
fixed,thx a lot :D
Orgol
加油~~
Kitsunemimi
kawaii >w<

[Easy]:
00:58:547 (1,2) - This might be a bit hard, so delete (2), and make (1) have slider reverses.
01:14:525 (1) - Some noob players who spin big (like I used to) might miss this note. I think it's okay to delete? Maybe?
02:40:286 (1,2) - Same as before.
02:47:786 (1,2) - Unstack?
....:< I feel like... I missed something.. but oh well.

[Normal]:
01:02:134 (3) - Try to make this go around (3) a little better.
01:42:243 (4,5) - Unstack, so it's less confusing.
02:52:025 (4) - You can make this new combo if you want.
Meh, your Normal is sort of difficult. Try simplifying some sections, like your kiai parts? You can make some parts with 1/1 beat sliders. It gives a nice steady rhythm, and is easy to map.

[Hard]:
lol Insane-tier jumps
02:00:503 (6) - Ugh... doesn't really fit. Easy to miss. It sounds better if you delete it, but remember you'll have to move the next combo around.
02:44:851 (5) - This actually fits, but only if you stack it under (4)

And that's it! You have a sort of hard diff spread, but that's okay. It's probably just me. Good map~ Star~
MDuh
Easy

~None

Normal

~None

Hard

02:54:471 (5,6) - Minor Spacing

D2S

00:43:221 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing going up then going down
00:49:743 (4) - Revise?
02:11:916 (1,2) - Stack?

Very good map :D
Fun playing your map

~Starred
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Kitsunemimi wrote:

kawaii >w<

[Easy]:
00:58:547 (1,2) - This might be a bit hard, so delete (2), and make (1) have slider reverses.
01:14:525 (1) - Some noob players who spin big (like I used to) might miss this note. I think it's okay to delete? Maybe?
02:40:286 (1,2) - Same as before.
02:47:786 (1,2) - Unstack?
....:< I feel like... I missed something.. but oh well.

[Normal]:
01:02:134 (3) - Try to make this go around (3) a little better.
01:42:243 (4,5) - Unstack, so it's less confusing.
02:52:025 (4) - You can make this new combo if you want.
Meh, your Normal is sort of difficult. Try simplifying some sections, like your kiai parts? You can make some parts with 1/1 beat sliders. It gives a nice steady rhythm, and is easy to map.

[Hard]:
lol Insane-tier jumps
02:00:503 (6) - Ugh... doesn't really fit. Easy to miss. It sounds better if you delete it, but remember you'll have to move the next combo around.
02:44:851 (5) - This actually fits, but only if you stack it under (4)

And that's it! You have a sort of hard diff spread, but that's okay. It's probably just me. Good map~ Star~

MDuh wrote:

Easy

~None

Normal

~None

Hard

02:54:471 (5,6) - Minor Spacing

D2S

00:43:221 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing going up then going down
00:49:743 (4) - Revise?
02:11:916 (1,2) - Stack?

Very good map :D
Fun playing your map

~Starred
fixed thx a lot and very happy that you like this kawaii song :D
DarkRingSystem
:evil:又在打dota?
Topic Starter
mjw5150

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:evil:又在打dota?
打大帝国
20110101
8-) 看来神采有进展,大帝国也开始了
DarkRingSystem
8-) 小姨妈威武
DRS_old
8-) 妹子招来
mod in IRC no kd thx
Miyabi_old_1
-
Ayatsuji Tsukasa
光看这张脸,你能看出哥的部队编成特性是航空+20%么?
:) star~~
Yusu Aoi
Hi^^
You have very nice mapped this song!! GZ!:))
Star!! I hope, U'll get this ranked fast so here's a kudosu star too!! :))

PS: No Kudosu, pls:)
Vikon
(玩過你Chata的map,覺得很好,所以來看看你的新圖)

[General]
整個map也做得很好,其實沒甚麼可以mod... 只是主要有點聲音方面的意見,有興趣的話就看看吧~
會否考慮為slider加上靜音的sliderside檔? 這歌屬於很柔和的類型

[Easy]
00:13:547 (1) - 調低這spinner的音量? (Bouns的聲量太大了)
00:49:743 (1) - ^
01:10:938 (1) - ^
02:08:329 (1) - ^
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:52:677 (1) - ^
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?

[Normal]
00:13:873 (1) - 調低這spinner的音量? (Bouns的聲量太大了)
00:49:743 (1) - ^
00:39:960 (1) - 這個slider頭的finish會否考慮調低音量至65或70%?連續2個同等聲量高的finish好像有點刺耳 (而且低音量可以模彷回音效果?)
00:53:003 (2) - ^
01:03:438 (1) - ^
01:10:938 (1) - 調低spinner音量?
01:47:134 (1) - ^
01:50:395 (2) - slider頭調低音量?
02:00:829 (1) - ^
02:08:329 (1) - spinner音量降低?
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:45:177 (1) - slider頭音量降?
02:52:840 (1) - spinner音量降?
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?

[Hard]
00:49:743 (1) - spinner音量降?
00:53:003 (1) - slider頭音量降?
00:57:895 (10) - 在slider尾加finish?
01:03:438 (1) - slider頭音量降?
01:10:938 (1) - spinner音量降?

01:44:525 (5) - 這裏的whistle變finish? or 取消01:38:982 (5) slider尾的finish? (這樣聽起來較對稱)
01:55:612 (11) - 加finish?
01:59:525 (4) - 在slider頭加65%-70%音量的finish?
02:05:395 (6) - 在這裏加65%-70%的finish?
02:13:221 (4) - 加65-70%的finish?
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:45:177 (1) - slider頭音量降?
02:49:416 (7) - slider尾的whistle轉65-70%的finish?
02:50:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2個Z形的排法按起來感覺有點不自然
02:39:308 (9) - slider尾加finish?
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?


[D2S]
00:09:960 (3) -這slider可以不在00:08:982 (1) -後面嗎? 有點不清晰
00:13:873 (1) - spinner音量調低一點? (bonus太大聲)
00:17:134 (1,2,3,4) - 如果跟主唱放notes的話,(2,3)應向前推1/4,那這種距離的排法還可接受... 但一樣是1/2間距的,(1,2,3,4)突然放到像1/4連打一樣,能考慮增加這幾個notes的distance 或改放法嗎? 不然太混淆了
00:32:134 (1) - 或不要放在00:31:482 (6,7) - 後面? 有點難清晰看見
00:38:329 (1) - 移開它? 放在00:37:351 (2,3,4) - 後面有點難看見
01:00:829 (1) - 移開它?放在01:00:503 (8) - 後難看
01:11:264 (1) - spinner降音量?
02:08:656 (1) - ^
02:53:003 (1) - ^
Leorda
NI HAO

General

* Set the Audio Lead-In to 2000? Like [D2S]?

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy
* As far as I know, placing in blue ticks is doesn't beginner-friendly, their makes the novice player go confusing. Example 00:17:623 (2)

00:47:786 (4,5) - Add finish at startpoint?
00:55:286 (x) - Maybe, add note here? To follow the music and make the flow better?
00:59:851 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider to make a better flow?
01:52:677 (x) - Maybe, add note here? To follow the music and make the flow better?
01:55:612 (4) - New combo?
01:55:938 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:57:243 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider to make a better flow?
02:25:938 (3) - ^
02:40:286 (1,2,3) - I don't the slider has a same shapes. Please make it better pattern for that (Nazi?)
02:56:916 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add finish at endpoint?

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Normal
00:31:808 (x) - Add note here?
00:40:612 (2) - Perhaps make a slider and place it like this to make a flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/94802 (Nazi)
00:47:786 (2,3) - Add finish at startpoint to follow the cymbal sound in music
00:53:003 (2) - New combo????
01:00:503 (x) - Add note here to make a flow better?
01:38:329 (3) - I think your tail slider is almost offscreen during gameplay
01:52:677 (x) - Add note here to make a flow better?
01:55:612 (x) - ^
02:00:177 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:58:221 (x) - Add note here?

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Hard

00:13:547 (4) - Perhaps, unstack with tail slider? I think is kinda weird for me~
00:47:786 (2,4) - Add finish at startpoint to follow the cymbal sound in music
01:38:493 (4,5) - The tail slider is not stack together
01:55:286 (10) - New combo?
02:00:177 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:02:460 (7) - ^
02:24:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - These pattern is weird
02:46:808 (7) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:58:221 (x) - Add note here?

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

D2S

00:07:351 (5,6) - These pattern is kinda confusing
00:09:308 (2) - The slider is overlapped by 00:08:003 (6) during gameplay
00:11:590 (6) - New combo?
00:11:916 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:26:916 (6) - New combo?
00:27:406 (7) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
00:42:079 (4) - ^
00:49:743 (4) - Not stack perfectly with previous object
00:58:221 (5) - New combo?
01:00:829 (1) - I am note sure that the slider trace is kinda hidden by previous slider.....
01:06:047 (7) - New combo?
01:06:373 (2) - Remove new combo?
01:36:047 (10) - New combo?
01:40:938 (5) - It would be nice if this stack with 01:39:960 (1)
01:46:482 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
01:47:134 (4) - ^

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

*yawn*
JoJo
好歌~好图~ 8-)
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Vikon wrote:

(玩過你Chata的map,覺得很好,所以來看看你的新圖)

[General]
整個map也做得很好,其實沒甚麼可以mod... 只是主要有點聲音方面的意見,有興趣的話就看看吧~
會否考慮為slider加上靜音的sliderside檔? 這歌屬於很柔和的類型

[Easy]
00:13:547 (1) - 調低這spinner的音量? (Bouns的聲量太大了)
00:49:743 (1) - ^
01:10:938 (1) - ^
02:08:329 (1) - ^
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:52:677 (1) - ^
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?

[Normal]
00:13:873 (1) - 調低這spinner的音量? (Bouns的聲量太大了)
00:49:743 (1) - ^
00:39:960 (1) - 這個slider頭的finish會否考慮調低音量至65或70%?連續2個同等聲量高的finish好像有點刺耳 (而且低音量可以模彷回音效果?)
00:53:003 (2) - ^
01:03:438 (1) - ^
01:10:938 (1) - 調低spinner音量?
01:47:134 (1) - ^
01:50:395 (2) - slider頭調低音量?
02:00:829 (1) - ^
02:08:329 (1) - spinner音量降低?
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:45:177 (1) - slider頭音量降?
02:52:840 (1) - spinner音量降?
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?

[Hard]
00:49:743 (1) - spinner音量降?
00:53:003 (1) - slider頭音量降?
00:57:895 (10) - 在slider尾加finish?
01:03:438 (1) - slider頭音量降?
01:10:938 (1) - spinner音量降?

01:44:525 (5) - 這裏的whistle變finish? or 取消01:38:982 (5) slider尾的finish? (這樣聽起來較對稱)
01:55:612 (11) - 加finish?
01:59:525 (4) - 在slider頭加65%-70%音量的finish?
02:05:395 (6) - 在這裏加65%-70%的finish?
02:13:221 (4) - 加65-70%的finish?
02:21:699 (1) - ^
02:45:177 (1) - slider頭音量降?
02:49:416 (7) - slider尾的whistle轉65-70%的finish?
02:50:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2個Z形的排法按起來感覺有點不自然
02:39:308 (9) - slider尾加finish?
02:58:221 在這加一個finish的note?


[D2S]
00:09:960 (3) -這slider可以不在00:08:982 (1) -後面嗎? 有點不清晰
00:13:873 (1) - spinner音量調低一點? (bonus太大聲)
00:17:134 (1,2,3,4) - 如果跟主唱放notes的話,(2,3)應向前推1/4,那這種距離的排法還可接受... 但一樣是1/2間距的,(1,2,3,4)突然放到像1/4連打一樣,能考慮增加這幾個notes的distance 或改放法嗎? 不然太混淆了
00:32:134 (1) - 或不要放在00:31:482 (6,7) - 後面? 有點難清晰看見
00:38:329 (1) - 移開它? 放在00:37:351 (2,3,4) - 後面有點難看見
01:00:829 (1) - 移開它?放在01:00:503 (8) - 後難看
01:11:264 (1) - spinner降音量?
02:08:656 (1) - ^
02:53:003 (1) - ^

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General

* Set the Audio Lead-In to 2000? Like [D2S]?

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Easy
* As far as I know, placing in blue ticks is doesn't beginner-friendly, their makes the novice player go confusing. Example 00:17:623 (2)

00:47:786 (4,5) - Add finish at startpoint?
00:55:286 (x) - Maybe, add note here? To follow the music and make the flow better?
00:59:851 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider to make a better flow?
01:52:677 (x) - Maybe, add note here? To follow the music and make the flow better?
01:55:612 (4) - New combo?
01:55:938 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:57:243 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider to make a better flow?
02:25:938 (3) - ^
02:40:286 (1,2,3) - I don't the slider has a same shapes. Please make it better pattern for that (Nazi?)
02:56:916 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add finish at endpoint?

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Normal
00:31:808 (x) - Add note here?
00:40:612 (2) - Perhaps make a slider and place it like this to make a flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/94802 (Nazi)
00:47:786 (2,3) - Add finish at startpoint to follow the cymbal sound in music
00:53:003 (2) - New combo????
01:00:503 (x) - Add note here to make a flow better?
01:38:329 (3) - I think your tail slider is almost offscreen during gameplay
01:52:677 (x) - Add note here to make a flow better?
01:55:612 (x) - ^
02:00:177 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:58:221 (x) - Add note here?

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Hard

00:13:547 (4) - Perhaps, unstack with tail slider? I think is kinda weird for me~
00:47:786 (2,4) - Add finish at startpoint to follow the cymbal sound in music
01:38:493 (4,5) - The tail slider is not stack together
01:55:286 (10) - New combo?
02:00:177 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:02:460 (7) - ^
02:24:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - These pattern is weird
02:46:808 (7) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
02:58:221 (x) - Add note here?

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D2S

00:07:351 (5,6) - These pattern is kinda confusing
00:09:308 (2) - The slider is overlapped by 00:08:003 (6) during gameplay
00:11:590 (6) - New combo?
00:11:916 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:26:916 (6) - New combo?
00:27:406 (7) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
00:42:079 (4) - ^
00:49:743 (4) - Not stack perfectly with previous object
00:58:221 (5) - New combo?
01:00:829 (1) - I am note sure that the slider trace is kinda hidden by previous slider.....
01:06:047 (7) - New combo?
01:06:373 (2) - Remove new combo?
01:36:047 (10) - New combo?
01:40:938 (5) - It would be nice if this stack with 01:39:960 (1)
01:46:482 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
01:47:134 (4) - ^

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*yawn*
fixed thx a lot :)
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