Hi~
~General~ - That background imageee... ;w; I just hate the black bars at the sides
- Not a big deal at all (and I'm not sure if it does even make a difference), but you have "jarby" in Tags on
[Normal] and
[Insane], but "Jarby" in tags on
[Jarby's Hard].
- You'll need an Easy if you're leaving
[Normal] with jumps =x
~Normal~ - You'll have to reconsider leaving all those jumps. Even being a 3 star difficulty, having jumps in the easiest difficulty (right now) it's a no-no.
01:30:156 (1,2,3) - (1,2) are cute, but why does (3) have to be linear? It's ugly ;x; Maybe you can make something like
this?
01:52:990 (1) - This jump is too long (notice the spacing here is 1.94, in the other chorus is 1,50-1,60).
01:56:860 (1) - 2,30 spacing ;~; ^
03:12:716 (1) - This one might be too much too <w<;
03:19:296 (5) - (Super nazi modding ahead)
Before ->
After03:35:550 (5) - I can probably nazi the end of this slider too but... I'll leave it to your end >w<;
~Jar's Hard~No problems here!
~Insane~00:40:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I'd rather play with symmetry or make a real pattern here than just throw notes around, just my opinion.
00:56:873 (1) - I've always been curious, why that weird curve at the top of the slider? o-o
01:34:801 (4) - Add a New Combo here to mark the new spacing? Also 1 Lv4 grid up please <3
01:43:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as I said before.
03:03:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (this one is better, though)
03:11:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this at all ;A; It seems totally random.
03:35:550 (1) - Same as I already asked before.
Pretty nice, but I'm against the jumps in
[Normal] :c
Good luck~