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YuiKaori - Our Steady Boy (TV Size)

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Suimya
;)
Bessy
:) so quickly
Sure
kanpakyin
lol

kissXsis.
Ekoro
Gogo ~
DeadAlready
star~ >~<
Colin Hou
lovely video :D and cute jumps
Mapper 31
Hi, May I make taiko diff? :)
Topic Starter
Andrea
Okay, but only if you could make it appear "H" on the website.
Cyril Scarlet
ʅ(◔౪◔`)ʃ
-Lennox-
\:D/
Louis Cyphre
Awesome map, nothing wrong here, so i can bubble this.

Yea bubbled~. enjoy sexy boy ~
Astom
lazy ass~

Have a star :>

edit:

okok Ranked
Vicho
Coy
<3
kanpakyin
HellDawn
8-)
Mercurius
8-)
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone for the stars and for the support ^_^

Finally moved to Pending!

Mod please~
Kitsunemimi
Yay! >w<

[Our Steady Kanpakyin]:
00:01:090 (1) - This is really confusing, especially for an easy difficulty like this. There's not much you can do about it, except replace it with a slider repeating every 1 beat. You can change it up a lot, but don't make these sorts of kick sliders.
00:07:332 (2) - ^
00:11:494 (2) - ^ At least keep it to 1 reverse only! :<
01:21:899 (5,6) - Might be a bit fast/awkward for easy. I suggest you turn (4) into a circle, start a slider at 01:21:379, then make it 1 beat long and repeat once.
01:24:326 (2,3,4) - Tricky as well (they could get 100s). Aughh I hate explaining these... But you could start the first slider on the red tick and make it go for 1 beat. And the same for the rest of them
01:27:101 (1,2) - Same as above. This one doesn't even fit right.

[Our Steady Kite]:
Might be a bit too hard >_>
00:36:118 (1) - Messed me up D: Replace with two short sliders
00:37:506 (3,4,5) - See, if you want, this is a place where you can reduce difficulty.
00:58:662 (2) - Do you really want to place a spacing infraction in this difficulty? Unless I'm mistaken and this was supposed to be a Hard or something...
01:09:933 (1,7) - Stay consistent with your kick sliders. They can throw people off, so stick with one or another.

[Our Steady Vicho]:
00:14:095 (3,4) - Crappy jump. Either make farther or don't have it.
00:59:876 (1,2,3) - The map is really fast paced, so if you want these like this, it might as well be a stack, or a slow slider.

[Our Steady Carrot]:
Tee hee 4.99 stars
00:54:847 (5) - Sort of hidden? I dunno, it feels better unstacked. I know you'll have to move more stuff around, so do it if you want.

[Our Steady Andrea]:
00:06:465 (3,4,5) - Maybe space it out a little more.
00:09:240 (7,8,9) - They're not in the same place as last time!! DX And ^

....o3o Oh okay, that's all then. Nice solid looking map!~ Here's a star~
Tenshi-nyan
olol modding this cus bored. would be happy if you'd check mah bubble.

Andrea
01:18:604 (7,8) - shorten 7 by 1/2 , add finish to end and add a note at 01:18:951 - like dat http://puu.sh/1RtE
01:23:980 (5) - add clap to end

Carrot
00:57:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the claps in here sound bad IMO.
01:00:569 (4,5) - replace some of the claps with whistles.
01:12:881 (5) - ^
01:18:604 (3) - add whistle to repeat
01:19:471 (2) - whistle to start

diff could need some more whistle in general :<

Vicho
01:17:217 (3) - remove sliderwhistle ._.

Kite
01:04:037 (3) - replace like this? http://puu.sh/1Ruy
01:07:159 (2,3,4) - those sliders don't really make sense... can you find a way to map this so that not every note is on a red tick? ._. this would make more sense and is better to play http://puu.sh/1RuH
01:14:789 (1,2,3) - these are also weird.
the entire part from 01:13:228 - to the end is really weird... please follow the beat/ vocals closer orz or something like that.

Kanpakyin
I dunno, the hitsound volume feels really loud here... reduce everything by 10% ?
00:16:696 (4,5) - this doesn't follow the music ._.
01:20:858 (4) - end at 01:21:379 -
01:21:899 (5) - start at 01:21:725 - and add one more repeat
arien666
[Our Steady Kanpakyin]
00:34:384 (3) - [Suggestion] :3? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84125

[Our Steady Kite]
:3

[Our Steady Vicho]
:3

[Our Steady Carrot]
:3

[Our Steady Andrea]
:3



[Not related with m4m queue]
Anyway, I think it's okay for bubbling <3
Catch me in-game when you finishes m4m queue :3
akrolsmir
General:
I really like how the video was unobtrusive to gameplay since it didn't flash around a lot or anything, I wouldn't have to use No Video mod to play this after it's ranked.
00:33:344, 00:44:442, 01:05:945- I hear a really loud, out of place, drum beat here, much louder than the music. It's not in the mp3, so iono what's causing it... across all difficulties, too.

Kanpakyin:
I personally dislike short sliders that repeat an unspecified number of times b/c it's hard to tell how long to hold, especially for an easy diff.

00:02:824 (3) - If this is meant to curve around (4), make it more pointed, it's too flat right now.
00:16:003 (3) - ^
00:54:673 (6) - The slight tilt is weird, maybe just point into (1) or make it flat.
01:27:101 (1,2,3) - Perhaps replace like:

to fit vocals and music better.

Kite:
01:24:500 (1) - Kinda long, and encompasses two song phrases. Try splitting into 2 spinners, one from this time until 01:26:754, and one from 01:27:101 until 01:29:009.

Vicho:
00:59:876 (1,2,3) - should space this out IMO.

Carrot:
(00:34:384 (1,2,3) - I really like this heart shape.)

Andrea:
Ah, the incredibly-well used jumps for which you are legendary.
HP drain rate -1? maybe I'm just a noob, but I was hitting 300's on 95% of notes and still failed...

00:01:090 (1) - Kinda flat against (2), move the second node right and the third node up one grid. Mirror for 00:02:303 (7) - .
00:28:835 (2) - A little bit too pointed (like a v instead of part of a circle), try moving the second and fourth nodes left and right one grid, respectively, to make more round, or moving the endpoints of the slider closer to (3).

Nice set of 5 maps from 5 different mappers, wasn't that much too fix since it was very good. Starred!
Weez
Vicho
00:36:985 (5) New combo
00:39:760 (5) New combo
00:42:535 (5) New combo
(keep the pattern going)

nice as always :)
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[Kite]


  • 00:36:118 (1): Repeat-1 and add a circle at 00:36:639
[ Andrea]


  • 00:36:639 (4,5,6): Spacing
This map is so great that I can’t find any other problems…

☆ STAR ☆

I'm late
Sure

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Our Steady Carrot]:
Tee hee 4.99 stars
00:54:847 (5) - Sort of hidden? I dunno, it feels better unstacked. I know you'll have to move more stuff around, so do it if you want. // I stacked it because of shape. → =)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Carrot
00:57:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the claps in here sound bad IMO. // Meh...
01:00:569 (4,5) - replace some of the claps with whistles. // Nope
01:12:881 (5) - ^ // ^
01:18:604 (3) - add whistle to repeat // Added
01:19:471 (2) - whistle to start // ^

diff could need some more whistle in general :<

akrolsmir wrote:

Carrot:
(00:34:384 (1,2,3) - I really like this heart shape.) // <3
Download: YuiKaori - Our Steady Boy (TV Size) (osuplayer111) [Our Steady Carrot].osu
Rebeccccc
:D
Remon_Coppola
:) good!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone :3

Most of the suggestion has been applied~
arien666
I think Kiss man2man seems...
...



/me runs<<<
Kaona
*quickly ★'s before rank*

★ ☆ ✰
Kite
Thanks for the mods, changed some in my diff.
Just letting know that it's supposed to be a balanced diff between vicho and kanpakyin and not exactly a normal :<
MoodyRPG
Go Go Rank!
DerekMcD
*Star* So one of the songs I liked ranked.
James2250
-Not sure about the source...most of the other maps agree with this one but most things on google say KissxSis, guess google is wrong?

Our Steady Kanpakyin:
00:40:974 (2,3) - don't stack these so the repeats aren't hidden by the previous hit burst
01:08:373 (5) - new combo? Gets longer than most of the combos on this difficulty

Our Steady Vicho:
00:17:043 (3,4) - odd place for a jump
00:59:182 (3,4,5) - this repeat can be pretty hard to see while playing as well

Our Steady Andrea:
HP Drain 9? :( Doesn't really suit the map

Everything else looks good~
akrolsmir

James2250 wrote:

-Not sure about the source...most of the other maps agree with this one but most things on google say KissxSis, guess google is wrong?
Regarding the source:

The official site says "kissxsis", based on this image:

While wikipedia goes with KissxSis.

However you capitalize, I think that the x should be lowercase since it's meant to represent a multiplication sign, not the letter x. I dunno about earlier beatmaps uploaded, though; is it better just to conform this to past submissions or to start changing it here?

Also, I still hear the really loud drumbeat mentioned in my mod...
Topic Starter
Andrea

James2250 wrote:

-Not sure about the source...most of the other maps agree with this one but most things on google say KissxSis, guess google is wrong? // After some searches with ykcarrot, the correct source seems to be "kissxsis".

Our Steady Kanpakyin:
00:40:974 (2,3) - don't stack these so the repeats aren't hidden by the previous hit burst // Fixed.
01:08:373 (5) - new combo? Gets longer than most of the combos on this difficulty // Fixed.

Our Steady Vicho:
00:17:043 (3,4) - odd place for a jump // Vicho doesn't want to change this.
00:59:182 (3,4,5) - this repeat can be pretty hard to see while playing as well // Fixed.

Our Steady Andrea:
HP Drain 9? :( Doesn't really suit the map // Fixed.

Everything else looks good~
Thanks James :)

Will upload the fixes when you are online~

EDIT: Updated.
SagisawaYomi
:) :)
Sure
Refined shape of some sliders. Bcuz of circle size was increased.

Download: YuiKaori - Our Steady Boy (TV Size) (osuplayer111) [Our Steady Carrot].osu
arien666
Our Steady Bubble

Fixed bubble since some modding done actually orz
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