Holoaz wrote:

clumsy mod sry. orz

Collaboration

01:06:445 (1) - 2grid up
01:06:820 (2,3) - 1grid up
01:16:945 (1) - new combo
01:59:507 (10) - 1grid up & 1grid left
01:59:695 (11) - 1grid left
03:43:382 (4) - 1grid right
04:38:695 (3) - 1grid down
05:08:507 (4) - 1grid left
05:15:445 (1) - 1or2grid up?

nice map! Fight okayama and everyone!

KRZY wrote:

As per request~

[Collaboration]
01:22:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The jump between 4 and 5 looks unnecessary, unless there is a good reason I think it is better to make this one connected stream.
03:21:070 (9) - Seeing as you put a whistle at the end of 03:15:070 (4), add a whistle at the end of this slider also.



Looking pretty good :3 Star!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~!

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore

~General~
- There's a little silly typo on one of the tags, instead of "ignorethis" it says "ignorthis".

im baka lol fixed~!!

Storyboard:
- All the name images have a looot of unused transparency. Could you crop it please? ;~;
- Not sure if it's on purpose, but the white strobe on MeLLoN's name lasts longer than on the rest of the names =x

fixed~

Skin:
- Think about making the sliderborders grey as well? If you don't know how, open your .osu file and add "SliderBorder: 210,211,214" Right after the combocolor codes

fixed~


~Collaboration~
01:01:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found this specially messy, (4) might be hard to read because of the slider. Do you think you can find any cleaner way to make this without having weird overlaps? >.<
fixed~

01:22:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same happens here, I'd recommend to move the stream somewhere else, to be perfectly visible.
fixed~!

03:35:320 (2,3) - Probably someone is going to complain about this, I'm not sure about it but... well the slider is 300-able without moving the cursor...
no sorry Q.Q

Cool map!! I love the hitsounds~
Good luck!! *star*

Glass wrote:

These are all suggestions and opinions, feel free to ignore any of them.

00:04:945 (1,2,3) - These finishes don't really fit the music, use whistles instead?fixed
00:12:445 (1) - Use a normal finish for this? no sorry
01:35:976 (9,11) - These finishes sound a bit weird to me, use whistles instead?fixed
01:36:445 (T) - Add a note and give it a finish sound, move the spinner forward on the red tick if you do that. ?fixed
03:45:445 (1) - Move this a little bit farther from 03:44:882 (10).changed. but i put stack
03:52:195 (2) - New combo? Not much of a problem though.fixed
04:40:382 (3,4) - Delete 4 and give 3 a repeat?no sorry

Have a star, good luck~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add an "approachcircle.png" into the folder since it's missing. Remember to full submit after this fix.

[Difficulties]

[Collaboration]

Just rename it to "Collab" ?

Open the difficulty as .osu in notepad and put -> AudioLeadIn: 1000

01:00:445 (1,2) - Too close. I suggest to do something like this.
03:17:413 (2,3,4) - This sounds bad to me.
03:29:507 (8) - New combo due to jump.
04:55:195 (4,5) - This is seriously confusing.

Sorry, have to pop this Call me back when you've fixed everything!

osuplayer111 wrote:

You forget to change the AudioLeadIn >_<

http://puu.sh/yTV
http://puu.sh/yTX

Follow this.

EDIT: Good now.

Bubble #1~

Alace wrote:

there are so many hentai mappers except 0.0/////

quintitem wrote:

Alace wrote:

there are so many hentai mappers except 0.0/////

......

Alace wrote:

hentai mappers

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Alace wrote:

hentai mappers

Nice and relaxing, the skin is really comfortable to play with too.

I approve

:U

Verdisphena wrote:

Congratz yuca :3
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Verdisphena wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

Congratz yuca :3
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