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Ayana Taketatsu - Over the Starlight

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Pereira006
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~

This just my suggestions and I not stronger mod :(

[Over the Star]

00:01:746 (2) - New combo?
00:30:871 (3) - Grid 1 dowm ?
01:25:371 (6) - Grid 1 left ?
02:42:871 (5) - Spacing?

I can´t find another wrong :o

[Over the Light]

00:34:746 (3) - Spacing?
00:39:371 (5) - Spacing?
00:45:121 (4) - New combo ?
00:47:121 (4) - New combo ?
00:49:121 (4) - New combo ?
01:24:996 (3,4,5) - Not good

I can´t find another wrong :o

That all

well star because ilike song and great ryhthm
sirjuyt
172 posts
Joined October 2010
sirjuyt
mod4mod o . o /

下在藍線上的地方拉slider有被趕的感覺o o 不過打幾次也習慣了XD

[Over the star]
02:37:371(x) 這個看是加note 還是延長4 應該有東西點o o
03:55:746(1~6) 讓他們跟之前的弧度一樣?
能加點clap來提神XD 因為感覺slider滿慢的o o

[over the light]
01:55:871(1~3 , 1~5) o o 感覺滿擠的 分散一點?
02:03:871(1~3 , 1~5) ^
02:57:871(1~3 , 1~5) ^

好多的返回圓圈XD

好map啊 o.ob 找不到大問題 :D star~ :)
Lissette
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Lissette
Over the Light
01:49:371 (1) - this slow down, threw me off, because the four sliders before are following the music, and when i thought that this one gonna be the same, you follow the vocals, with a slow down @.@ (just trying to explain myself a bit)
02:24:621 (2,5) - this pattern is really confusing, would help if you add new combo, to make it more readable
02:31:996 (1) - 1/4 after the spinner? that's to near, even for insane difficulty, imo

Star~
Red_old
158 posts
Joined July 2009
Red_old
萌 萌 梓喵 =w=
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Here's my mod~

[Over the star]

01:01:371 (6,1) - Maybe do like this?
SPOILER

[Over the light]

00:49:871 (7) - New combo
03:24:871 (7) - New combo

This map is really good,hope this gets ranked!
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Mm... That star sliding object isn't really nice. Is there any chance of a pink ball or a star within a pink ball?

Easy:
Lower the slider velocity or hurry the approach rate. Slow and fast do not go together!
0:07:371 - End it 1/4 erlier.
0:08:121 - Add a note
0:41:746 - New combo
0:53:371 - You don't need this note in normal, remove...
0:54:746 - Finish here would be nice, as there is the same kinda loudness as on the previous finish...
0:55:746, 0:56:746 - Whistles pleaseee
0:59:371 - Soft whistles
1:03:746, 1:04:746 - Whistles
1:07:371, 1:08:371 - Soft whistles
1:27:746, 1:31:746, 1:35:746, 1:39:746 - New combos
1:39:371 - Remove?
1:46:996 - New combo, no whistle but finish.
1:47:371 - Shorten by a half, repeat and finish where it starts and ends
1:50:371 - Remove
1:50:871 - New combo
1:51:746 - Please do the same hitsounds as I've done for the previous chorus. Same for the next chorus.
3:33:746 - This till the end should be the only Kiai in your beatmap... Just a sug-suggestion

I'll edit this if I'll find anything for insane, *yawns*
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there~
*Looks at the top of the page* That's a lot of stars (@.@)
Not much that I can find, and even those that I did are only suggestions, but here goes:

[Over the Star]
1:31:746 [3] - Maybe new combo here?
2:45:871 [4] - ^
2:47:621 [1] - Delete new combo here, and...
2:47:871 [2] - Start a new one here instead.

[Over the Light]
2:27:871 [5] - Maybe new combo here?
2:52:871 [5] - ^

Love the custom skin, and love the way the maps are being done, so here's a star to you~
Hope you get this ranked soon! :)
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Over the Star]
Awesome o.o

I don't generally like where the sliders begin and such, but it fits the song and it's constant, so it shouldn't be any trouble.
[Over the Light]
o.o Great job. Fun map.

Star~

I'd ask to make a taiko, but I'm slow and delay stuff orz
tetsutaro
3,863 posts
Joined February 2008
tetsutaro
Star~ Nice map and song
Can there be one more difficuly between the current two?
The easy thing to do is to up the approach rate and overall diff. of the current Hard map, remove some of the hardest jumps and voila!
nicktoons
174 posts
Joined June 2010
nicktoons
so much stars >.<.
my mod is a one big suggestion, so don't take it too serious.
over the star(normal?):
seems fine only some suggestions^
so 00:07:371 (2) - end here 00:07:746 -
00:08:871 (4) - 2 times shorter reversed slider would sound better i think =/ (will follow rythm" no - ta - ki" )
00:59:371 (4) - make it end here 00:59:746 - and add circle here 01:00:121 (x) -
01:57:371 (4) - bake it end here 01:57:371 (4) - and circle here 01:58:121 (x) -
02:59:371 (1) - ^
the rest is fine. Liked it.
over the star(insane?):
wathed through 2 times, for me it's sooo done. liked playing it btw
and star ofcourse.
chungskale
120 posts
Joined December 2009
chungskale
star~
大量發亮的綠線。。。
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
Why did you want me to mod a perfect beatmap? xD
I don't find anything to mod here!
Okamiroy
19 posts
Joined August 2010
Okamiroy
star~~ :)
Dear-mastk
44 posts
Joined July 2010
Dear-mastk
射星 :)
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Seen your maps looks fine.

Here's a star.:-)
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
sorry for such a delay. u.u

[Over the Star
1:43:871 (1) - delete new combo
1:45:871 (1) - ^

[Over the Light]
0:49:871 (7) - new combo
1:51:246 (1) - delete new combo


uhh...it's so hard to find anything in a map that's actually perfect :D
get this bubbled finally!
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
OK, as your request >_>

Overall:
  • This map has epic sound timing lol
    I feel that the offset is a bit too late, try to check?
    I LOVE AZUNYAA XDDDD
Over the star: I really cant find anything

Over The Light:
01:26:621(2,3,4)- This pattern is a bit confusing, I don't encourage to do it. (Suggestion)
Can't find anything more -w-

This map is one of the flawless map I have ever mod lol
*
MisakaMikoto
383 posts
Joined July 2010
MisakaMikoto
;)
Sumisola
475 posts
Joined June 2010
Sumisola
:) :)
mochi
779 posts
Joined June 2010
mochi
[over the star]
no problems found

[over the light]
01:26:621 (2,3,4) - at first i thought (2) was the slider, but on my 2nd playthrough i didn't have any problems... so your choice on whether you want to change
01:56:871 (3,1) - make this into a jump like 03:06:871 (3,1)?
02:04:871 (3,1) - ^
02:58:871 (3,1) - ^


Very nice beatmap. STAR~
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
random mod ;)

<Over the Light>
fine

<Over the Star>
01:51:621-add a note?
03:44:621 (6,7,8,9) - - 个人觉得跳太大了一点0.0（或许我太noob了 lol）
03:46:621 (6,7,8,9) - ^

OD+1较好 7的话对这歌来说不怎么合适

really nice map

also i dont need kds~
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
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Nymph
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
who can give this map a bubble.....
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Gomo Psivarh
:P
KayeSara
KayeSara
star~
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
What the..... WHY is the comboburst 425 pixels wide? It should be no wider than the comboburst in the template (388 px)

[Normal] seems okay, but doesn't feel that easy either.....
Shirakawa Kotori
104 posts
Joined February 2010
Shirakawa Kotori
~~~☆
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
OK
Fixed some , thanks you all
Maybe waiting for a bubble now? :roll:
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

wcx19911123 wrote:

OK
Fixed some , thanks you all
Maybe waiting for a bubble now? :roll:
That emote makes me reeeally want to mod this now. *cough*

Anyway, sorry for the delays, since I believe this was in one of my three lost queues. >_>

[General]
The HTT being reversed half the time with the combo burst kind of bugged me, but eh.

[Over the Light]
00:49:871 (1) - New combo

...yup.

A solid pair of maps, though. Just kind of feels weird with that BG staring at you the entire time.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
Hmm....
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Perfect Start for mapping O.O

I liked it, very very much

Nice Slider Shapes, Nice Patterns, Nice Graphics ... sure it needed more mods?
Last edited by HakuNoKaemi , edited 1 time in total.
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
神触神mapper O.O
star!
RhaiizoN
RhaiizoN
Star~ ;)
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
yay ~ >w<!
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Oh well, it's bubbled.

Good luck.
-Moccha_chii-
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Joined September 2010
-Moccha_chii-
:)
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
神mapper XDD 加油啊就要rank了
（原来star过了
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
:) 梓喵萌爆了
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Offset -4ms
    Please recalculate slider lengths. I don't know why but i have the impression that something is wrong with them and doing this made the map play slightly better to me (remember to recheck!)
- Over the Light:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    03:57:871 (8) - new combo ;_; It's readable but i see no reason not to have a new combo only here.
Fix, send me a forum PM for recheck and Ii'll rank (~￣∇￣)~
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
Offset -4ms
Please recalculate slider lengths. I don't know why but i have the impression that something is wrong with them and doing this made the map play slightly better to me (remember to recheck!)- Over the Light:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    03:57:871 (8) - new combo ;_; It's readable but i see no reason not to have a new combo only here.
Fix, send me a forum PM for recheck and Ii'll rank (~￣∇￣)~
Just a curiosity question on -4ms, does it really make changes CnF? As far as i know 10ms do make thing changes, but 4ms isn't too tiny?
HakuNoKaemi
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Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
it do makes change, as human reflex are not too much precise...
We can specalute that A has got Reflex between 180-220 ms, A will click it at one of the extreme of this area ( 180 or 220 ) here is an example where 4ms can be fatal for A taking a 100 or a 300.
Nymph
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
even though it is 10ms, I can hardly feel any change...
4ms offset change, really necessary?
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka

The Official Ranking Submission Criteria wrote:

Perfectly timed. This means that your BPM and offset are spot-on, sliders end when they should, and notes are generally following a rhythm which is comprehendable by a player.
Better to change it, although the change is really really small... :?
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Offset -4ms
    Please recalculate slider lengths. I don't know why but i have the impression that something is wrong with them and doing this made the map play slightly better to me (remember to recheck!)
- Over the Light:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    03:57:871 (8) - new combo ;_; It's readable but i see no reason not to have a new combo only here.
Fix, send me a forum PM for recheck and Ii'll rank (~￣∇￣)~
Fixed
:roll:
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Grats for your first ranked map, you did a good job ^_^
Shiro
Global Moderator
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Shiro
hey =o congratulations !
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
congratz!! :D
Curisu
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Joined January 2010
Curisu
(拍肩

:D

edit:神mapper求指导 ._.
Last edited by Curisu , edited 1 time in total.
Sallad4ever
2,933 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
woot it's ranked :D
congratz for your first ranked map ;)
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
i didn't notice the comment about my "offset -4ms", so i'm gonna answer them now.

"offset -4ms" wasn't the main issue. I was about to rank it anyway and eventually add an online offset, but i had that feeling with the sliders so the "recalculate slider lengths" was the most important thing which i wanted to be applied.

Since i had to post anyway, i posted the 4ms thing as well, that's all.
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
Yeah!
First ranked beatmap > <
Thank you all very much
I will try my best to be a good mapper > <
Nymph
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Nymph
wcx神mapper求指导~
_Kiva
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Joined January 2010
_Kiva
神mapper求指导 ._.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Gratz :D
mochi
779 posts
Joined June 2010
mochi
I like how everyone combo breaks at the end of the song.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Azusa not moe ;~;
DJPop
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DJPop
The map is good, just the skin is a bit distracting :o

What did you do to get the pink title and make it start on 2nd break?
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou

DJPop wrote:

What did you do to get the pink title and make it start on 2nd break?
ask a BAT to do that I think
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
综合下rate偏低的原因>.>
1、图做的不善良 (善良中带鬼畜是最让人讨厌的)
2、SB和kiai同时开着的确打着让有些机子差的人很难受吧...

不管了 还是恭喜了0.0
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
吃不到的葡萄是酸的;w;
pianiac
93 posts
Joined May 2011
pianiac
hm i donno why but i just cant play your beatmap.... please help me
*unable to import..the file is posibbly corrupted*
id downloaded it twice and one more yet.help laaaaa
Coffeezi
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Joined October 2011
Coffeezi
梓喵！！！
=w=
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