Hi impossiblexu~
[General]
- I'm not very knowledgeable with touhou music but is this a remix of the original song? well if it is don't forget to add the original title in the tags
- add kiai in the first chorus too? I know it maybe a bit long but only using kiai in the last chorus is a bit unfair
- The BG is weirdly stretched can you find any better one?
- the end of the Hard diff had an extra kiai fountain but the other 2 diff are not, I guess you forgot them~
- the second break is very too long, please map half of it. You've already bookmark half of the break so I assumed you'll map it. Really you have to map it
[Easy]
01:33:092 (2) - the only slanted slider in this diff and doesn't look very good either, maybe make them into curve or wavy slider
[Normal]
01:31:916 (7) - too cramp, just make in into a simple curve or wave slider
02:16:229 (1) - this overlap, by the previous slider, really bothers me. I suggest to move the end point so the slider body won't get overlapped
03:34:269 (7) - I really2 can't agree with this slider. Mostly because how it cover the high pitch rise in 03:34:661, it's better to put a circle or a slider in there (just like in Hard) or cut the slider by 1/2 then add a long slider in 03:34:661
[Hard]
00:50:739 (9) - the jump is too mini imo add some more distance?
01:39:367 (5) - uh...spacing
01:40:935 (10) - rather than using a 1/4 end slider, it's better if you follow the keyboard? sound in the music
02:38:386 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the flow of this pattern, kinda awkward. This is my personal preference btw
03:55:837 (9) - change the shape? maybe I just don't like a simple liner slider :P
I was expecting that you'll use some 1/4 in this song cause some of the vocal are on it~
That's all I guess, the thing that's bother me the most is that 2nd break. Also this vocal is kinda like a Nightcore mix lol
Anyway Good Luck~
Star
[General]
- I'm not very knowledgeable with touhou music but is this a remix of the original song? well if it is don't forget to add the original title in the tags
- add kiai in the first chorus too? I know it maybe a bit long but only using kiai in the last chorus is a bit unfair
- The BG is weirdly stretched can you find any better one?
- the end of the Hard diff had an extra kiai fountain but the other 2 diff are not, I guess you forgot them~
- the second break is very too long, please map half of it. You've already bookmark half of the break so I assumed you'll map it. Really you have to map it
[Easy]
01:33:092 (2) - the only slanted slider in this diff and doesn't look very good either, maybe make them into curve or wavy slider
[Normal]
01:31:916 (7) - too cramp, just make in into a simple curve or wave slider
02:16:229 (1) - this overlap, by the previous slider, really bothers me. I suggest to move the end point so the slider body won't get overlapped
03:34:269 (7) - I really2 can't agree with this slider. Mostly because how it cover the high pitch rise in 03:34:661, it's better to put a circle or a slider in there (just like in Hard) or cut the slider by 1/2 then add a long slider in 03:34:661
[Hard]
00:50:739 (9) - the jump is too mini imo add some more distance?
01:39:367 (5) - uh...spacing
01:40:935 (10) - rather than using a 1/4 end slider, it's better if you follow the keyboard? sound in the music
02:38:386 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the flow of this pattern, kinda awkward. This is my personal preference btw
03:55:837 (9) - change the shape? maybe I just don't like a simple liner slider :P
I was expecting that you'll use some 1/4 in this song cause some of the vocal are on it~
That's all I guess, the thing that's bother me the most is that 2nd break. Also this vocal is kinda like a Nightcore mix lol
Anyway Good Luck~
Star