1. Another (5 stars, 333 notes)
2. Beginner (3,04 stars, 138 notes)
3. Hyper (4,74 stars, 227 notes)

soulfear wrote:

Overall
OFFSET+8 - Sounds off, no.
Disable countdown,it's no need Done.
delete .osb file then full submission Stop doing this. It's a 0,2kb file that doesn't do anything bad.
Hyper:
01:07:156 (5) - delete?
then add notes at 01:07:156 and 01:07:358 01:07:460 01:07:561 make these triple
like[attachment=1:b5e19]1.jpg[/attachment:b5e19]
01:08:980 (5) - short this to 01:09:284
01:09:588 (1) - make this begin at 01:09:385 also 01:09:994 (2) - - make this begin at 01:09:791
01:10:196 add note
01:11:615 (4,1) - space Made some changes in the whole part.
Another:
some green lines didn't right snap,please recheck
00:06:943 (1,2,3,4) - space
00:07:652 (5,6,7,8,9) - space
00:10:186 (1,2,3,4) - space
00:10:896 (5,6,7,8,9) - space
Didn't use anything of this, mostly because it's pretty useless advice.

here's VIDEO,VIDEO offset -1346
http://u.115.com/file/f3ec5946be
click this then download
[attachment=0:b5e19]2.jpg[/attachment:b5e19]
Thanks! Really nice BGA.
If you can't download,tell me

kurohacker wrote:

Hi!
I've done modding your Beginner map. Here goes...

ZLOdeuka wrote:

hello~

[General]

BG: should be the size of 800x600 or 1024x768? Will do.

2 osb. files ~ delete

Beginner 3.2 star ~ There must be no more than 3 stars,right ? First of all - it's not 3,2, but 3,02, second thing - the star rating gone so high because of the amount of sliders in the diff, which is not very hard.

[Beginner]

Slider Tick rate = 2? No needed.

00:07:764 (2,3) - it is not too far away?

00:17:494 (2,3) - I think they are farther apart than 2 1

00:19:521 (4) - maybe ?

00:26:412 (1) - delete ~ 00:26:615 (1) - move here 00:26:412

00:35:737 (4) - better to place to place second note

01:03:710 (4) - new combo

01:04:521 (1) - delete new combo

01:04:521 (2,3) - spacing

01:21:548 (5) - new combo

01:21:953 (2) - delete new combo

02:00:061 (1) - ^

02:00:466 (2) - new combo

02:03:710 (1) - delete 02:03:912 (1) - move here 02:03:710

Done some of this.

[Hyper]

00:19:926 (1) - delete and 00:20:129 (1) - move here 00:19:926 - Nope.

00:26:412 (1) - delete and 00:26:615 (1) - move here 00:26:412 - Nope.

01:45:872 (5) - new combo - Fixed.

[Another]

00:19:926 (1) - delete and 00:20:129 (1) - move here 00:19:926 - Nope.

00:26:412 (1) - delete and 00:26:615 (1) - move here 00:26:412 - Nope.

Nice :]

Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi fartownik

[General]
- hmmm I think the offset should be 450 - No, sounds off.
- the countdown doesn't sound fit with the music so I suggest to disable it - Done.
- also disable the letterbox during break as it'll cover half of the girl's face in the BG - Done.

[Beginner]
00:26:412 (1) - decrease the hitsound for this circle to around 30% then add finish at it - Done.
01:08:169 (4) - hmm it's better if you shorten by 1/4 beat, ending this slider in 1/4 is rather surprising - Done in another way.
01:14:656 (5) - ^ - ^
01:50:534 (T) - imo 0.5 is kinda extreme, as the SV is slow enough. Well I'll suggest 0.65 or 0.7 but this probably more like my personal taste - Will leave it as it is now.

[Hyper]
rise AR by 2 ticks please - 1 ticked
00:26:412 (1) - same as the beginner - Done.
00:43:237 (2) - please put this and 00:44:04 8 (5) in the y-axis so it'll perfectly stack - Done.
01:16:885 (1) - it's not that unexpected, but the repeat is kinda hidden by the scoreburst - It's playable.
01:56:699 (4) - imo this jump is kinda far well prolly because it's on 1/4 beat - Will leave it as it is now.

[Another]
00:26:412 (1) - Same as above - Done.
01:23:575 (2,3) - I don't really like these kick slider, it making me kinda rush after I have to hold the previous slider repeat. Maybe use circle stream instead? - Will leave it as it is now.
01:56:699 (4) - same as Hyper - Will leave it as it is now.

Nice map, epic song and lovely streams, I bet this would get to osu! stream compilation if it's already ranked before - Thanks
STAR

rEdo wrote:

[Beginner]
0:11:817 (3,4) - those notes are kinda hidden by previous sliders. how about placing them like this? - I think it's okay. Will leave it as it is now.
2:03:911 (1) - silence it's end? - I think it's okay. Will leave it as it is now.

[Hyper]
(the whole beginning part) - those 1/3's are a little bit offsync. - Yes, done.
1:56:715 (4) - is this slider really following the music? it's ending feels kinda offsync - Yes, it does o.o Why am I only one who hears this part in the song.
2:02:695 (1) - delete new combo - Yes, done.
2:03:911 (1) - silence it's end? - I think it's okay. Will leave it as it is now.

[Another]
1:56:715 (4) - is this slider really following the music? it's ending feels kinda offsync - ^
2:02:695 (1) - delete new combo - Yes, done.

[General]
i don't really like how you place new combos, i'd like you to take a look at my suggestions about them and try them, should look a lot better. - Done in my own way.
resize the bg to 4:3 ratio.

maybe i'll try to flashlight this soon ;d

Yomeiro wrote:

Hello :3

Beginner

00:11:817 (3) - Maybe move this one grid to the right? o.o - Sorry, it looks okay for me.
00:17:493 (2) - Uhm maybe 3 grids down but I think it's ok as it is.... - This too.

Dunno.... didn't really find anything else here o.o
Hyper and Another seem fine to me too....

Aww well just take this star xx

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
I got offset-10... - Sounds fine. Fixed.

Beginner
00:11:006 (2,3,4) - Re-space them perfectly ? It shouldn't be too hard by moving (3). - Done.
00:16:682 (1,2,3,4) - I understand why (1) and (2) are spaced this way but is there a way to space them correctly ? ;_; - I guess newbies will catch a 2 grids spacing change, so it's not needed.
01:43:033 (3) - Fix its placement so that the spacing is more regular ? - Done.
00:47:087 (3,4) - This kind of placement might be a bit confusing, because it might lead to think (3) has 2 repeats and might make the timing hard to follow. - Done.
01:08:574 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the hitburst. - Hm, nope, it's not. For first - this is not a hitburst, but a vanishing slider. For second - it has vanished almost in 100%, so it can be normally noticed.

Hyper
The difficulty gap is way too hard. So is the beginning; it would be better to start this diff at least a bit easier, seeing it's supposed to be a Hard. - Okay, it should be easy enough now.
01:16:884 (1) - The slider's repeat is hidden by a previous slider and its hitburst. - Done.

Another
Hm... Nothing to say. Streams too hard

Verdisphena wrote:

Can make a taiko diff?
i love this song

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko diffs aren't made to be hard with many random and insane stuffs. They are made to fit the music. Please respect this

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko diff overmap

also the stream is not fit the music too much.

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko diffs aren't made to be hard with many random and insane stuffs. They are made to fit the music. Please respect this

so..what are you doing?

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

General:
- Source: beatmania IIDX - done
- Tags: iidx16 empress - done
- Offset: -10MS - sounds a bit too fast, mine sounds better to me

These are just suggestions

Beginner:
- 01:21:131 (5,1) - IMO kinda hard to read with low AR, i keep rushing it.. maybe don't stack? - done
- 01:24:374 (5,1) - ^ - done

Another:
- 00:32:888 (1) - Start the stream here? I think sounds better x.X - done
- 00:35:726 (5) - ^ - done
- 01:18:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is kinda hard to read, everything looks really mushed together, maybe make it a bit nicer? >.< - Looks and plays fine to me.


OK call me back later, maybe try to see if some others can find stuff, but this all I see.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Just beatmania IIDX in source please don't need series number in the same fashion as Touhou maps jsut need Touhou and not Touhou 10 ETC, I'll bubble after this.

Mogsworth wrote:

Beginner:
Wow, this is a fun lower-level difficulty. Very nice work.

Hyper:
No real problems with this one, IMO. Some patterns seemed confusing in the editor, but they're very natural and readable once you actually play the map.

Another:
Same deal as Hyper; patterns don't seem readable if you only look at them from an editor perspective, but they flow very naturally in the map itself when playing. This is quite tough for my skill level/lack of skill, but I could still easily read it.

Another thing I should commend you on is the hitsounds. Very, very well done.

I see no reason to not rank this map! Great job!

Xgor wrote:

Ahh why does mappers still do stuff like that even with the custom slider speed addition

rEdo wrote:

maybe i'll try to flashlight this soon ;d

Xgor wrote:

Ahh why does mappers still do stuff like that even with the custom slider speed addition

You could at least have set the tick rate to 2 here

rEdo wrote:

rEdo wrote:

maybe i'll try to flashlight this soon ;d

hi

rEdo wrote:

rEdo wrote:

maybe i'll try to flashlight this soon ;d

hi

Xgor wrote:

Ahh why does mappers still do stuff like that even with the custom slider speed addition

You could at least have set the tick rate to 2 here