H-boy wrote:

Easy

00:07:981(4) - 开始处的whistle去掉
00:19:981(3) - 把whistle加到中间,而不加在结束处
00:43:981(3) - 去掉结尾的whistle在中间加whistle

Normal

00:11:731(6) - remove whistle
00:52:981(4) - ^ 或去(5)的
00:58:231(x) - 加个circle?
01:09:481(3) - 开始处加whistle

ying's Hard

00:38:918这里加kiai 不如在01:27:434开始kiai然后01:27:481结束

Insane

01:32:731 声音过小
以及后面一些地方声音可能略显小些

starrrrrrr

非常感谢...

Easy is okay
Normal is okay
Hard is great
Insane is okay

I don't mod because I don't find it in a need for much modding. There's not really much to mod y'know..?

Star!

[General]
delete .OSB file and then full-submitting....

StackLeniency in Ying's diff was set to 0.2 whereas other diffs are 0.3

[ying's Hard]
00:04:918(1) - move the end of slider left 2 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
00:06:418(1) - move the end of slider down 2 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
00:07:918(1) - move the end of slider up 1 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
there is some set of slider like this need symestry shape
00:21:12[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at the 5th tick of volume bar
00:21:31[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at the middle of 4th tick of volume bar
00:22:06 - useless timing section (nothing changed)
00:49:96[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at 4th tick of volume bar ( a bit error )
becareful.... some of people stop clicking when they didn't hear a hitsound...


[Normal]
00:29:668(4,5) - It would be nice if you replace this one more clear to see(a bit ugly for now), you have a lot of playfield to deal with it right?
00:36:418(6) - new combo
00:37:918(1) - remove new combo
01:10:543 - add note here to keep continue your pattern of hitsound.

[Easy] - Why the slider velocity in this diff is same as [Normal] D: wth
Approach rate -1
Overall difficult -1 ( result in same score and play feeling like Easy! )
01:08:668(5) - new combo
01:09:418(1) - remove new combo
01:26:293 - this spinner is too short for easy diff D:

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - not that bad.... but i would be nice if you made it more clear to see ( aviod overlap )
01:55:355 - you didn't finish it right? D:

vincerio wrote:

[General]
delete .OSB file and then full-submitting....

StackLeniency in Ying's diff was set to 0.2 whereas other diffs are 0.3

[ying's Hard]
00:04:918(1) - move the end of slider left 2 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
00:06:418(1) - move the end of slider down 2 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
00:07:918(1) - move the end of slider up 1 grid lv 3 after do this don't forget to stack 2 at its end
there is some set of slider like this need symestry shape
00:21:12[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at the 5th tick of volume bar
00:21:31[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at the middle of 4th tick of volume bar
00:22:06 - useless timing section (nothing changed)
00:49:96[Audio timing section] - make a good snap at 4th tick of volume bar ( a bit error )
becareful.... some of people stop clicking when they didn't hear a hitsound...


[Normal]
00:29:668(4,5) - It would be nice if you replace this one more clear to see(a bit ugly for now), you have a lot of playfield to deal with it right?
00:36:418(6) - new combo
00:37:918(1) - remove new combo
01:10:543 - add note here to keep continue your pattern of hitsound.

[Easy] - Why the slider velocity in this diff is same as [Normal] D: wth
Approach rate -1
Overall difficult -1 ( result in same score and play feeling like Easy! )
01:08:668(5) - new combo
01:09:418(1) - remove new combo
01:26:293 - this spinner is too short for easy diff D:

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - not that bad.... but i would be nice if you made it more clear to see ( aviod overlap )
01:55:355 - you didn't finish it right? D:

thx for mod...it will help a lot

remod :3

[Taiko]
ok lol

[Insane]
hitsound of beginning a bit too loud
00:13:636 - (9) increasing spacing sequence -> up 3 grids?
00:22:543 (4,5,6,7) - (4,6) + whislte, (5,7) -whistle? - [change soundings in similar pattern too?]
00:35:668 (3,4) - (3) up 1 grid, (4) right 1 grid
00:37:543 (4) - right 1 grid
01:09:793 (2,3) - make them similar in shape
01:32:668 (1,2) - spacing
01:52:918 (4) - up 1 grid
02:07:168 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - spacing?
02:11:293 (2,3,4) - ^
02:38:668 (1~11) - not appropiate, at least make it piano-forte (soft-> loud)

[bakaying's Hard]
00:44:855 (1,2,3) - try (1) up 1 grid, (2,3) left 1 grid
Just so short 030

worth star again, especially for moe moe BG.

mod by request

[General]
这首arrange的出处是http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm8464343，在nico大百科也有相关介绍。link:
http://dic.nicovideo.jp/a/%E7%A7%8B%E5% ... 3%E3%81%AB
所以Artist应该是作为Arranger的ばんし-->Banshi，Title应该是秋姉妹のなく頃に-->Akishimai no Naku Koro ni，可以将ZUN跟dai加到Tags里
至于Source，按理来说是填Nico Nico Douga，但是这Source一向给人一种鬼畜的感觉还是算了 :/
以up主倾向东方的风格，加上标题已经提到寒蝉，以及考虑到人气跟pc，Source其实还是只填Touhou比较好

[Easy]
01:26:293(1) - 这个spinner给人没有完结的感觉 :/ 如果想在这里结束，最好在01:27:418之后没有任何东西

[Normal]
00:48:418(1,2,3) - ooxoxox? (x=whistle)
00:54:418(1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ugly，想点更好看的hidden notes排列吧
01:09:418(3) - 这里Newcombo代替前面那个
01:12:418(4) - 这里Newcombo代替前面那个
01:37:168(2) - 这个whistle移到01:38:668上

[ying's Hard]
Stack Leniency在最低格跟最高格是unrankable的
建议在01:15:043开始加点音量，从前面的combo递增也不错
01:32:668(7) - whistle?

[Insane]
01:50:293(1,2,3) - 在一个段落的尾声应该用小点的distance spacing，spacing太大会显得note很重
02:26:668(3) - 个人不建议叠着:/
02:33:418(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 因为前面没有铺垫这里造成了一个很突然的1/2JUMP连打，有铺垫的时候一般02:33:230都会有note，而这里很难实现。如果你不想改掉这节奏/排版，起码02:32:668(9)改成一个slider会好一点点，最普遍的做法是一个1/1的长条
02:38:668(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ...Anti-Jump连打是不错。。但是至少个人认为Z型(压抑)的摆放不应该在这种抒情的歌里用
02:57:418(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 同样是很突然的1/2JUMP连打，前面改不了的话连打还是改成容易易看懂的形状吧

希望能帮到你

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
作为一个Normal来说，这太遮了，不是很好。至少不够主流。就这点而言Easy比Normal要好很多。
00:12:400 (1,2,3) - spacing.
拉slider注意可以走一些倾斜的，不必开头结尾都得在同一水平/竖直面上

[ying's Hard]
stack leniency请至少0.3，0.2是不准许的（无特殊情况下）。测试表明这并不影响1/1 note不重叠这一情况
00:13:150 (6,7) - 6开头和7whistle
00:22:337 (3) - 左一格？。。。其实按格的话我总觉得摆不正
00:37:900 (1,2) - 只是建议。前面三个缩退式的段，这个可能做个对称好一点，这样感觉和前面没太大关系，段落感就弱了。
00:54:025 (1,2) - 下一格然后把3拉回上个345的那条线上
01:13:150 (4) - remove whistle

[Wmf's Taiko]
这个建议SV1.4，毕竟实质是80BPM，这样太快了
00:06:962 (16,17,18) - 拉后1/4或者你干脆开1/6(1/8?)定音吧。这样看起来难受打起来也对不上音
00:12:587 (43,44,45,46,47) - 不合啊。。
这歌很安静为什么弄这么多鱼蛋。。。看不到意义。我认为overmap.

[Insane]
00:07:900 (7,1) - spacing
00:51:025 (1,2,3,4) - spacing不要这么变（1-2=2-3），很难认。后面那一组的就可以
00:58:525 (1,2,3) - 这个就属于不要的
01:10:525 (5,1) - spacing
01:15:025 (1,2,3) - 同样
01:16:525 (1,2,3) - 这样的因为12叠着，所以没关系
02:05:650 (5,6,7) - 间距太小
02:18:400 (6,1) - 换new combo
02:28:525 (3,4) - spacing
02:38:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不适合歌
03:15:400 - 加个结束音

re:NatsumeRin
非常感谢mod

拿走了一些notes =d

Download: Banshi - Akishimai no Naku Koro ni (asus10tu) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

先拿掉我的Diff吧
秋姉妹BG:
combo colour也改改吧

karenying wrote:

先拿掉我的Diff吧
秋姉妹BG:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:8f91f]1.jpg[/attachment:8f91f][attachment=0:8f91f]2.jpg[/attachment:8f91f]

combo colour也改改吧

那GD怎么办.. 还有BG要怎么放... colour改成什么比较好.. = =

hard gd~

听……听好了，这个mod可只是义理哦义理！；
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.osb文件在歌曲包内,如果不准备用请删掉之再全部重新上传；
note打了之后就变色好高级啊0.0；
Taiko diff:真不知道怎样去mod= =；
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Easy;
0:18:400（1）和前面的距离大了；
0:19:150（2）加whistle；
0:19:900（3）下移一格，whistle加在最后一个圈上；
0:32:650（3）左移一格；
0:33:400（1）移动到正中间，可以关掉DS；
0:43:900（1）whistle加在最后一个圈上；
0:45:400（4）new combo?;
0:46:900（1）去掉new combo?;
0:48:400（4）new combo?;
0:55:900（3）new combo?;
0:57:400（1）去掉new combo?;
0:58:900（2）new combo?;
01:00:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:01:900（4）加whistle 然后new combo?;
01:03:400（1）第一个圈加whistle；
01:06:400（1）加whistle；
01:10:900（4）new combo?;
01:05:400（1）加whistle；
01:16:900（3）加whistle；
01:27:400（5）new combo?;
easy难度没有KIAI time大丈夫？建议在01:27:400这个位置加一个；
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Normal;
有些note没有重叠好，关GD和DS重新拍一下，比如01:25:900（3）；
排列有点点陷阱的味道……；

0:19:525（4）加whistle；
0:22:525（2）whitle加在第二个圈上；
0:25:900（4）new combo?;
0:28:90（3）new combo?;
0:43:525（4）加whistle；
0:46:525（4）加whistle；
0:49:150（2）whitle加在第二个圈上；
0:52:900（4）new combo?;
0:55:900（4）new combo?;
0:57:400（7）whitle加在第一个圈上；
0:58:900（2）加whistle；
0:59:275（3）加whistle；
01:00:025（5）加whistle；
01:00:400（1）加whistle；
01:01:900（4）new combo?;
01:03:400（1）加whistle；
01:04:150（1,2,3）不要重叠在一起，不好读图；
01:06:400（1）加whistle；
01:09:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:12:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:15:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:18:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:22:150（3）加whistle；
01:22:900（4）new combo?;
01:23:650（5）加whistle；
01:37:900（3）new combo?;
01:46:150（3,4,5）很难读出来……；
没有KIAI time大丈夫？;
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Insane
Nice Ass diff!；
同样有重叠不好的地方，比如02:36:025（2,3）。这种方式的重叠可以关GD，把DS开到0来排；

0:15:025（2）被前面打出的挡住了，移动下？；
0:51:400（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
0:54:400（1）加whistle；
0:55:900（4）再小声点；
0:57:400（2）whitle加在第一个圈上；
01:00:025（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
01:03:025（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
01:09:400（1）加whistle；
01:12:400（1）加whistle；
01:15:025（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
01:18:025（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
01:21:025（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
01:23:275（7）new combo?;
01:58:525（2）new combo?很难读出来，换个方式排（比如2,3重叠，3,4重叠那种）;
02:06:400（7）new combo?;
02:15:400（1）whitle加在第一个圈上；
02:21:026（1）whitle加在第二个圈上；
02:43:150（4）new combo?;
02:51:205（1,1,1）连续spinner感觉挺蛋疼的，删掉做break time？前面打了那么久了可以休息下；
03:06:025（4）new combo?;
03:06:775（7）new combo?;
03:15:400（4）new combo?;

STAR

Wow, nice music

[Normal]
Okay, so when the kiai time starts, you're going with the same pattern till the end.
For example, lets take this part 01:30:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) you put whistles on 2, 3, 5, 6.
What if in next part, at 01:33:400 (1,2,3,4,5) you will remove whistle form 01:35:275 and leave it only at 01:35:650 ? Might add some variety.

[Insane]
Just beautiful, great work with everything!
01:36:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wonderful. Usually distance is increasing, but you did it the other way around. Awesome.

senaya wrote:

Wow, nice music

[Normal]
Okay, so when the kiai time starts, you're going with the same pattern till the end.
For example, lets take this part 01:30:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) you put whistles on 2, 3, 5, 6.
What if in next part, at 01:33:400 (1,2,3,4,5) you will remove whistle form 01:35:275 and leave it only at 01:35:650 ? Might add some variety.

[Insane]
Just beautiful, great work with everything!
01:36:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wonderful. Usually distance is increasing, but you did it the other way around. Awesome.

thx ...~>_> you mod is quickly

star!awesome map

i like this song =)

star.....要好好学习哟

Insane
Where Kiai time?
If I were you, I add 3 notes here :
00:09:118 (x) -
00:09:212 (x) -
00:09:306 (x) - As for me, this stream fits the music.

03:01:525 (7) - add note + fix distance ?

Normal
Where Kiai time again? ^^ As for me, ~1 sec is too little)
01:20:650 (4) - add whistle
01:38:275 (4,1) - too close
01:48:400 (1) - add whistle

Easy
Ohh... I see kiai here))) But It more than 1/2 of map)) fix it please
01:10:150 (3,1) - too far
Make the end of Easy diff like in Normal ? I think, It will be better

Star~

Aleks719 wrote:

Insane
Where Kiai time?
If I were you, I add 3 notes here :
00:09:118 (x) -
00:09:212 (x) -
00:09:306 (x) - As for me, this stream fits the music.

03:01:525 (7) - add note + fix distance ?

Normal
Where Kiai time again? ^^ As for me, ~1 sec is too little)
01:20:650 (4) - add whistle
01:38:275 (4,1) - too close
01:48:400 (1) - add whistle

Easy
Ohh... I see kiai here))) But It more than 1/2 of map)) fix it please
01:10:150 (3,1) - too far
Make the end of Easy diff like in Normal ? I think, It will be better

Star~

thx.for mod >_<

tag delete my name plz orz

karenying wrote:

tag delete my name plz orz

我忘记了……周末去弄

a

Download: Banshi - Akishimai no Naku Koro ni (asus10tu) [dksslqj's Hard].osu

dksslqj wrote:

a

Great.!!! thx for GD~!!XD

Hi^^
I tried to find anything out and I just found something in Insane,
but I don't think it has a big weight
00:15:212 (3) it is a little hidden by the slider 10 (00:13:900)
01:53:134 (5,6,7,8) unsnapped, even with Beat Snap Divisor 1/8, I think, there could be more sections like this..
and something's wrong with the distance here too, though.


Cool work on Insane with hitsounds!! Love it!
Star! And GL on getting this ranked:))

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi^^
I tried to find anything out and I just found something in Insane,
but I don't think it has a big weight
00:15:212 (3) it is a little hidden by the slider 10 (00:13:900)
01:53:134 (5,6,7,8) unsnapped, even with Beat Snap Divisor 1/8, I think, there could be more sections like this..
and something's wrong with the distance here too, though.


Cool work on Insane with hitsounds!! Love it!
Star! And GL on getting this ranked:))

tank you~:D

star~

go go as(u)s10tu

General

I suggest you have kiai time from 01:27:400 to 01:49:900 & 02:27:400 to 02:49:900 & 02:51:400 to 03:13:900

Like this:


uuuu, I can't mod symmetrical maps >.<

Normal

00:22:900 (3) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)
00:30:400 (4) - ^
00:49:150 (2,3) - ^
01:01:150 (2) - ^
01:03:025 (3) - ^
01:05:275 (4) - ^
01:16:150 (2) - ^
01:25:900 (3) - ^ (Temporarily remove the previous repeat to fix it)
01:30:775 (2) - ^
01:44:650 (6) - ^


dksslqj's Hard

01:20:462 (4) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)

Insane

Why use so short kiai's? If it's for the fountains only, I suggest that you Story Board something instead~ (kiai shouldn't be used for that purpose only)
00:14:837 (1) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)
01:21:775 (2) - ^
01:52:337 (1) - ^
02:03:587 (6) - ^
02:36:400 (3) - ^
02:40:525 (7) - ^
02:42:400 (1) - ^

Nice song, it reminds me of "Dear you" and another song that I can't remember~
Have my star~☆

Saten-san wrote:

General

I suggest you have kiai time from 01:27:400 to 01:49:900 & 02:27:400 to 02:49:900 & 02:51:400 to 03:13:900

Like this:


uuuu, I can't mod symmetrical maps >.<

Normal

00:22:900 (3) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)
00:30:400 (4) - ^
00:49:150 (2,3) - ^
01:01:150 (2) - ^
01:03:025 (3) - ^
01:05:275 (4) - ^
01:16:150 (2) - ^
01:25:900 (3) - ^ (Temporarily remove the previous repeat to fix it)
01:30:775 (2) - ^
01:44:650 (6) - ^


dksslqj's Hard

01:20:462 (4) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)

Insane

Why use so short kiai's? If it's for the fountains only, I suggest that you Story Board something instead~ (kiai shouldn't be used for that purpose only)
00:14:837 (1) - Stack properly? (Distance Spacing 0,0x and disable Grid snapping)
01:21:775 (2) - ^
01:52:337 (1) - ^
02:03:587 (6) - ^
02:36:400 (3) - ^
02:40:525 (7) - ^
02:42:400 (1) - ^

Nice song, it reminds me of "Dear you" and another song that I can't remember~
Have my star~☆

thank you～! so fast

star~ ^^

Star~~~~~
直接Rank!直接Rank!

fighto~ :3

thank for mod@@@

真的很美><

Nice map~ >.<//