thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[insane]
00:42:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesn't fit any part of music at all :/
00:53:636 (4) - pretty bad underlap, but possibly acceptable
01:04:196 (6) - ^
01:08:036 (4) - ^
Totally intentional, and they are not overlapped that badly... :T

01:27:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i dont think the first few notes are necessary here Hmm you're right, deleted 01:27:596 -
01:37:676 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't fit music It does for me...
02:20:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this needs changing. i don't think anyone would rank this much underlapping Will wait for more opinions...
03:10:916 (4) - bad underlap
03:40:556 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt fit music
03:46:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - possibly unrankable. rearrange to be less annoying How the hell would this be unrankable?
03:47:276 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt fit music
03:52:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - possibly not rankable I know... i may change this sometime in the future though.
03:54:596 (1,2,3) - you may need to confirm these kiai fountains with someone

[Garven's hard]
All good

[normal]

all good except for possibly the kiai fountains at the end

starring

1. IRC Mod
2. Garven's Hard seems Fine.
3. Evil Patterns are Evil.

Odaril wrote:

General
The red combo colours is too dark and blends too much with the background. Make it lighter.
Well, i tried to use a lighter red, but it seems that it blends even more than the darker red... Lol, anyways, changed just for you ;D

Normal
01:19:076 (1,2,3,4) - I like the idea of using small jumps in a Normal diff, but these are irregular, and I think that since this is the easiest diff of the mapset, it needs to be beginner-friendly... And these irregular jumps aren't that much. So... Space (1) correctly with the previous note and make the jumps at least regular ? (like always 1.4x or something)
03:21:956 (1,2,3,4) - same comment
I have tested with over 5 people ranked 120000 and above, and all of them seems to be able to do this part almost perfectly. Conclusion: newbies doesn't how to read spacing really well yet.

Insane
I really don't like this, honestly. The jumps seem to be there only to add some difficulty to the map... :/ Also, the high OD makes them very hard to play, and quite frustrating. That's the intention that i had when i mapped this. Althought i guess i could lower OD and AR

00:42:476 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I find them extremely confusing because they're unexpected, and start on blue ticks, which makes them hard to actually catch with the right rhythm.
01:37:676 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ No comments from my part for this, except that they are fine for me.
02:04:196 (3,4) - Confusing spacing: it follows the spacing of the jumps but not the same rhythm... Intentional.
02:15:596 (1,2,1,2) - Same as 00:42:476 - (this is actually true for all the doubles that start on blue ticks)
(suggestion) 02:53:396 (2,5,8) - new combo to mark the jumps ? Don't find it really necessary...
03:52:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this stream extremely awkward to play, because of its sharp angles and huge spacing.
Also intentional... :(

Garven's Hard
nothing to say

lennox989 wrote:

[Hard]

01:53:156 (4): Remove whistle and add finish? I have these hit sounds set up as a progression to go with the guitars, so nah.
01:55:076 (2): Add finish? ^
02:21:236 (x): Add note? I'm going with the synth, so no thanks
02:21:356 (x): ^
02:21:836 (x): ^
02:22:076 (x): ^
02:31:076 (5): the slider is pretty ugly.. maybe you remove them and set circles like this? I'd rather not add circles since I'm following vocals at this point. And I dunno how else I could get a slider that gets the general feeling of motion from the previous pattern any prettier with the space that I have. :P

Appreciate the look, in any case.

sonnyc wrote:

Garven's Hard
00:42:116 (5) - Eliminate Whistle Hrm, okay.
00:49:316 (4) - No whistle at the end kk

lennox989 wrote:

Hey~
[Normal]


01:19:076 (1,2,3,4): Pretty hard for a normal diff... Sighs... FINEEE ill change.
02:21:956-02:36:836: Those pattern are really bad in my eyes... maybe you change it?. Not really... No Id rather not..x
03:37:316(1,2,3,4): Same as above.

[Insane]

I can only say AR +1 and Circle Size +1 >w< Sighs... Fine ill do it. >_>
Pretty hard D:

sonnyc wrote:

Normal
01:53:156 (3) - Clap?
02:00:836 (3) - ^ They doesn't sound so good for me...
03:02:276 (3) - Clap Okay

Insane
03:46:196 (1~7) - I don't think.. some person could do this.. I suggest to remake the pattern Hmm well its an insane after all, its not meant for everybody...

Nice, especially Insane!
star~

Aleks719 wrote:

Normal
02:36:356 (1,2) - add claps here
02:36:836 (3) - remove clap, add finish.
Sure thing! It was a great idea actually

Shino wrote:

Modding for Kurisuchianu Taikoni...

Important:
Notes are unsnapped. Fix this so I can continue modding.
(I can't give star right now because of this)

Section Issue:
03:08:440 - Isn't this section too fast? I recommend x1.5.
04:25:120, 04:25:240, 04:52:120 - These are useless. Remove please.

Section Issue:
03:08:440 - Isn't this section too fast? I recommend x1.5.
(Being ranked would be difficult because of using 4 types of speed.)

03:46:917 ~ 03:54:597 - This feels empty(suddenly). How about fill this part and remove some notes?

04:25:120 - / 04:25:240 - / 04:52:120 - These are over the song's length.

Note Issue:
00:03:237 (1) - Remove?

01:20:997 (242) - Remove finish? (I don't think Big note in stream is good.)
01:22:797 (257) - ^
01:24:837 (274) - ^
01:55:317 (99) - ^
03:23:877 (92) - ^
03:25:677 (107) - ^

Shino wrote:

[Kurisuchianu Taikoni]
First, star.
I just modded the important part(in my opinion, of course).

Section Issue:
03:08:440 - Isn't this section too fast? I recommend x1.5.
(Being ranked would be difficult because of using 4 types of speed.)

03:46:917 ~ 03:54:597 - This feels empty(suddenly). How about fill this part and remove some notes?

04:25:120 - / 04:25:240 - / 04:52:120 - These are over the song's length.

Note Issue:
00:03:237 (1) - Remove?

01:20:997 (242) - Remove finish? (I don't think Big note in stream is good.)
01:22:797 (257) - ^
01:24:837 (274) - ^
01:55:317 (99) - ^
03:23:877 (92) - ^
03:25:677 (107) - ^

ps. Sorry for late ^_^;

Xgor wrote:

[Garven's Hard]
00:56:036 - I suggest you add a circle here.

Mm, I am mapping heavily to the vocals with the one instrument note to start each phrase - and although there is a light syllable touch from the singer at that beat, I think it breaks some of the phrasing feel that I have set up in the intro.

Not much more to say here, nice hard and nice slider speed usage.

Thanks. :3

Xgor wrote:

[Normal]
I strongly suggest you have the breaks at the same place as in Garvens difficulty, that break placement just works better imo, I also think it works better to end it at the same place as in Garvens difficultly even both is a bit weird Garven just feels a bit better.

Im guessing that you are talking specifically about 01:36:356 - 01:40:196 - Fine deleted as well as the last part.

01:53:636 (4,5) - (Suggestion) Make these into a slider so it fits better with the rest of the flow of the map.
01:55:556 (2,3) - ^
02:01:316 (4,5) - ^
02:03:236 (2,3) - ^
They are fine for me... >_>
02:20:516 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - The spacing change to 1.5x from 1.0x felt kinda random because there are more intense parts (the chorus) in the song and you made bigger spacing on that part.
Reduced spacing...

[Insane]

00:42:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This rhythm feels so odd and is out of place and feels like it's just there for the difficulty.. I suggest you just make it more simpler and make it more sense to the song...
Its to not make it the same all the time >_>

00:54:116 (1,2,3,4,1) - These jumps are so different from the other ones before and after it and they plays a lot better to the song.
I suggest you make this combo more like them.
Hmm not quite sure if im understanding... But added new combo at 00:55:076 (1) -

01:56:516 (2,3) - This anti-jump doesn't fit the song that well, I rather think a jump would fit here so I suggest you do that.
Changed a bit...

01:59:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This spacing feels kinda weird and out of place imo.. Epically 02:03:716 (1,2,3,4) - felt weird.
And i thought they were awesome... Not changing yet, unless you feel strongly about it >_>

02:15:596 (1) - I suggest you remove this circle, feels just weird with the rest.
02:17:516 (1) - ^
Fine, removed.

02:30:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think you need this wide jumps to this part, I think 2.0x would be just enough to fit the song.
Lol! Okay reduced xD

02:53:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just.... wrong, I think you just should have the
Not really undersanding what youre trying to say...

Well some parts was pretty cool I admit, but others..... was just plain weird.

Pretty nice map but some stuff felt a bit weird.
*Star*

1. Preview Point varies a little in [Garven's Hard]... is it worth the trouble to fix? I guess not.

1. I only have a little perk with the timing... when I played all of the difficulties it sometimes felt like it was off, with the beats going a bit late. I got offset 4,180, but thinking I most probably have the UO wrong, I went ahead and got a few rechecks:
   Shiirn says offset 4,189 works.
   James2250 says current offset is fine.
   DiamondCrash says current offset is fine.
   
   So yeah I might be the faulty one... well uh, in any case, I just want to hear your opinion first before doing anything else. I will attempt to fix my UO.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Preview Point varies a little in [Garven's Hard]... is it worth the trouble to fix? I guess not.

I like this map. It has a fair balance of patterns and flow, and hitsounds don't come bad at all. Nothing else seems to be out of order.

I guess I am ready to bubble this, just check what I wrote in the [Timing] section. Don't give me kudosu since this is far from useful.

ErufenRito wrote:

Xgor wrote:

02:53:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just.... wrong, I think you just should have the
Not really undersanding what youre trying to say...

Gonzvlo wrote:

1. Evil Patterns are Evil.

Star.

Larto wrote:

8=D