Personal Request: Could you include an easier difficulty. I know it's for approved, but some people still might want to actually beat the song. I'd make a guest difficulty, but I assure you this map is so asking for DJPop streams.
Atomic
00:08:863 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - Why jumps?
01:37:996 (2) - Ugly slider.
01:39:036 (2) - ^
01:40:423 (1,2,3,4) - Why does it go inward to outward to outward to outward? I think slider 3 and 4 should be oriented the same way as 1 and 2.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64828
01:56:030 (1,2,3,1) - Is it really that much fun to place these notes so wide?
Maybe if you tried a crossing pattern like so. Don't need to do it if you don't want to.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64829
02:09:383 (1) - Perhaps not have this note in a stack. It can be placed in a lot of other places that don't stop the flow.
02:16:493 (1) - Maybe remove new combo. Unsure though.
02:17:186 (1) - ^
02:41:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Claps don't sound good here. Either change the clap pattern or remove the hitsounds.
Since I don't want to recheck this map ever again. Here's a star.
Atomic
00:08:863 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - Why jumps?
01:37:996 (2) - Ugly slider.
01:39:036 (2) - ^
01:40:423 (1,2,3,4) - Why does it go inward to outward to outward to outward? I think slider 3 and 4 should be oriented the same way as 1 and 2.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64828
01:56:030 (1,2,3,1) - Is it really that much fun to place these notes so wide?
Maybe if you tried a crossing pattern like so. Don't need to do it if you don't want to.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64829
02:09:383 (1) - Perhaps not have this note in a stack. It can be placed in a lot of other places that don't stop the flow.
02:16:493 (1) - Maybe remove new combo. Unsure though.
02:17:186 (1) - ^
02:41:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Claps don't sound good here. Either change the clap pattern or remove the hitsounds.
Since I don't want to recheck this map ever again. Here's a star.