03:27 <Chocopikel> : I'm sorry suddenly
03:27 <Chocopikel> : Is it good though I want you to do modding?
03:28 <Garven> : ahm
03:28 <Garven> : Which map?
03:28 *Chocopikel is listening to (Senya - Koakuma Apple)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28479]
03:28 <Garven> : Downloading
03:29 <Garven> : Is your English good enough for an IRC mod?
03:29 <Chocopikel> : ok!
03:29 <Chocopikel> : Thank you really
03:30 <Garven> : Hmm, MP3 is 320 kbps
03:30 <Garven> : Do you know how to re-encode to 192kbps or do you need help?
03:30 <Chocopikel> : The way is not understood....
03:31 <Garven> : Okay, I'll do it for you, matte kudasai
03:31 <Chocopikel> : I'm sorry purposely.....
03:32 <Garven> :
http://puu.sh/1zSr03:32 <Garven> : Timing will be different, but I am not good at that. ><
03:33 <Chocopikel> : It not suitable?
03:34 <Chocopikel> : Thank you for re-encode XD
03:34 <Garven> :
http://puu.sh/1zSw Old MP3 上 new MP3 下
03:35 <Garven> : Small difference in offset
03:36 <Chocopikel> : It was said that this offset was suitable in mod from Licnect
03:36 <Garven> : For the old MP3, yes
03:36 <Garven> : New MP3 has different timing, unfortunately
03:36 <Garven> : It's very close, but still different.
03:36 <Chocopikel> : I see
03:37 <Garven> : Anyway, for your two difficulties the first kiai section doesn't feel like a good place for Kiai.
03:37 <Garven> : 01:12:145 -
03:37 <Chocopikel> : It is a little different certainly....
03:38 <Garven> : It's a softer part of the song, so it doesn't feel like it needs that emphasis with the kiai fountain and flashing.
03:39 <Chocopikel> : Should I erase the first kiai?
03:39 <Garven> : In Normal: 01:12:145 - This is too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It might be best to delete 01:24:427 (1) - and map
03:39 <Garven> : through it. Possibly with this rhythm?
http://puu.sh/1zSI03:39 <Garven> : It's up to you fo rthe kiai
03:39 <Garven> : I suggest that you do, though
03:39 <Garven> : For the reasoning above
03:41 <Garven> : 01:33:449 - This break is awkward. I'd just map through it.
03:42 <Chocopikel> : I see
03:43 <Garven> : If you do map through it, perhaps delete 01:38:232 (1) - and use a short break between that and 01:39:971 (1) - ?
03:43 <Garven> : 02:08:232 (1) - Maybe delete since it's so soon after a spinner?
03:45 <Chocopikel> : ok,It corrects it
03:46 <Garven> : 02:42:797 (1,2,1,2) - These feel weird against the vocals. Might play better like this?
http://puu.sh/1zSV ?
03:46 <Garven> : 02:46:710 (3) - I don't recommend stacking under sliders for the easiest difficulty, but it's okay if you keep it since it is a Normal.
03:47 <Garven> : 02:51:275 (3) - New combo
03:47 <Garven> : 02:53:014 (5) - New combo
03:47 <Garven> : 03:00:732 (1) - Extend to 03:03:449 - and delete 03:03:449 (1) -
03:48 <Garven> : Lalarun's hard -> Lalarun's Hard
03:48 <Garven> : Are you okay with making fixes on guest difficulties? Or you want me to post those?
03:49 <Chocopikel> : Because I asked, it is unquestionable
03:49 <Garven> : Well, I can simply post my opinions and let the mappers decide if they wish to make changes on their own
03:49 <Garven> : And mod your maps via IRC
03:50 <Chocopikel> : Thank you really from what to what
03:53 <Garven> : Well then, for Insane: Same comment about the first kiai
03:54 <Garven> : 01:17:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This didn't really fit very well for such a slow part of the song
03:55 <Garven> : 01:33:014 - Map through this break with the same suggestion of a short break where 01:38:232 (1) - is
03:57 <Garven> : Otherwise it looks fine. :3
03:58 <Chocopikel> : Thanks :D
03:58 <Garven> : I'll mod the other two difficulties and post on the forum. Also
03:58 <Garven> : Delete the osb file in the folder before you do full submit with the new MP3
03:58 <Garven> : It's the old song title before you changed the artist.
04:00 <Chocopikel> : I see.
04:01 <Chocopikel> : Because I am not so good at English, it might take time for all the corrections.
04:01 <Chocopikel> : However, it absolutely corrects it
04:02 <Chocopikel> : Thank you really from first to last though it asked a big favor here suddenly
04:02 <Garven> : Take your time, and remember that these are merely suggestions, not something you must change (except the mp3/timing)
