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yanhan1064

Joined June 2010

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yanhan1064 2011-04-06T14:46:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月2日 at 11:39:21

Artist: DOA
Title: HERO
Source: Ultraman Nexus
Tags: Akihito Tokunaga Eiyu
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3673kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.87 stars, 116 notes)
Hard (4.9 stars, 419 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 654 notes)
Normal (4.14 stars, 199 notes)

Download: DOA - HERO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please redownload if you downloaded before 2012 o.o
Storyboard by Sherrie__fay
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Last edited by yanhan1064 2012-01-02T03:39:28+00:00, edited 67 times in total.

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2011-04-07T00:46:07+00:00

Star~Star~❤

CCHV-16

49 posts

Joined August 2010

CCHV-16 2011-04-07T07:15:56+00:00

00:56:679 (3) - 去掉一个reverse
01:16:056 (1) - 这后面的东西怎么没了
02:39:190 (3) - 去掉一个reverse
00:17:925 (9,10) - 这两个造型和7,8弄成一样比较好
00:19:175 (1,2,3,4) - 排列弄得好看点？
00:28:551 (1,2) - 感觉这种类似的可以加重音
00:32:927 (7) - 敢弯好看点吗
00:34:177 (3,4,5,6) - 平行排列
00:40:584 (7,8) - 选中这两个NOTE CTRL+R
00:43:553 - 可以考虑这里下个转圈，停在00:44:803 -
00:51:679 (3) - 去掉两个reverse，在00:52:304 - 加一个NOTE
01:51:685 (3) - 同上
02:54:192 (3) - 同上
00:54:492 (4) - 真扭曲
02:57:004 (4) - 同上
00:55:117 (1) - 这个1不要了吧。。。没压到歌词，好别扭的感觉
01:55:123 (1) - 同上
01:35:590 (8,9,10,11,12) - 弯好看点233
01:40:590 (7,8) - 也ctrl+r一下吧这样打感觉好别扭
02:06:374 - 到02:23:407 -当中那么多绿线放着干嘛的
话说INSANE后面不+KIAI么，如果想+的话建议
02:38:565 - 和02:48:566 - 各放一根02:48:488 - 收一次KIAI

还有，敢别弄那么多复制黏贴段嘛

yanhan1064

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Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

yanhan1064 2011-04-07T09:56:00+00:00

CCHV-16 wrote:
00:56:679 (3) - 去掉一个reverse 完毕
01:16:056 (1) - 这后面的东西怎么没了歇会D:
02:39:190 (3) - 去掉一个reverse 完毕
00:17:925 (9,10) - 这两个造型和7,8弄成一样比较好完毕
00:19:175 (1,2,3,4) - 排列弄得好看点？完毕
00:28:551 (1,2) - 感觉这种类似的可以加重音完毕
00:32:927 (7) - 敢弯好看点吗 ..完毕
00:34:177 (3,4,5,6) - 平行排列完毕- =
00:40:584 (7,8) - 选中这两个NOTE CTRL+R 完毕
00:43:553 - 可以考虑这里下个转圈，停在00:44:803 - 额需要么- =
00:51:679 (3) - 去掉两个reverse，在00:52:304 - 加一个NOTE 完毕
01:51:685 (3) - 同上完毕
02:54:192 (3) - 同上完毕
00:54:492 (4) - 真扭曲完毕 = =
02:57:004 (4) - 同上完毕
00:55:117 (1) - 这个1不要了吧。。。没压到歌词，好别扭的感觉没歌词但是有重拍- =
01:55:123 (1) - 同上同上
01:35:590 (8,9,10,11,12) - 弯好看点233 完毕
01:40:590 (7,8) - 也ctrl+r一下吧这样打感觉好别扭完毕
02:06:374 - 到02:23:407 -当中那么多绿线放着干嘛的喷火花效果不觉得很萌嘛/w
话说INSANE后面不+KIAI么，如果想+的话建议
02:38:565 - 和02:48:566 - 各放一根02:48:488 - 收一次KIAI ？...没清楚往哪加

还有，敢别弄那么多复制黏贴段嘛太懒了噗会改的

完毕= =

sai_chan

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Joined October 2010

sai_chan 2011-04-08T06:49:27+00:00

loveFantasy

526 posts

Joined August 2008

loveFantasy 2011-04-09T03:02:50+00:00

你好

[General]
- Source建議填 Ultraman Nexus, 這是它的OP
- Tags建議填 Akihito Tokunaga (這是作曲者), Eiyu (曲名拼音), 如果Taiko不是你做的則必須填幫你做的作者id
- 背景圖片必須使用800x600或1024x768的JPG檔案
- Easy/Normal長度太短了吧!?
- 取消Countdown, 你目前用不到, 勾"Display storyboard in front of combo fire", 避免你的歌詞SB被高連擊數的火焰效果遮住
- 歌詞sb的漢字和日文部分不太和諧啊, 如果你要改的話找個一致的字型吧

[Easy]
<00:16:050> (3) 結尾點擺finish
- 整體倒是沒什麼問題的難度, 但是擺的太方方正正了

[Normal]
- 建議AR -1
<00:16:353> (3) 下new combo
<00:21:051> ^
<00:26:051> ^
- Normal避免使用repeat非常多次的reverse slider, <00:15:425>的還能說是為了迎合節奏, <00:34:177>那個就沒啥必要了

[Insane]
- 最近的新人真愛使用AR9..這個難度來說連8我都會嫌高, 不是AR拉高就很難很好玩啊
- Easy/Normal有下KIAI的部分這個難度也下, 另外其實第二段副歌也能下
<00:05:424> (3,4) E/N都下clap怎麼到insane反而下whistle了
<00:40:740> (8) 往右下移, 不要疊(6)
<00:47:303> (6) 下new combo
<00:48:553> (10,1) 交換new combo
<01:14:962> (2,3) 打散成note吧, 這種節奏結果是在原地按著..
<01:32:933> (7,8) 把(8)拉出來或者做成1/2拍slider+2個1/4拍circle吧
<01:47:310> (6) new combo
<01:48:560> (10,1) 交換new combo
<02:27:314> new combo改下(2)
<03:04:818> (7) new combo
<03:08:099> 我想你這Storyboard得換個色, 超不搭的
<03:16:225> (4) spacing error
- 除了用複製貼上這點想吐槽和 stacking/overlap 用過頭以外, 很令我驚訝, 很多新手第一張圖的insane都做得亂七八糟的, 你這張完全playable, good job

star

yanhan1064

43 posts

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Topic Starter

yanhan1064 2011-04-11T07:52:03+00:00

loveFantasy wrote:
你好

[General]
- Source建議填 Ultraman Nexus, 這是它的OP - 完毕
- Tags建議填 Akihito Tokunaga (這是作曲者), Eiyu (曲名拼音), 如果Taiko不是你做的則必須填幫你做的作者id - 完毕
- 背景圖片必須使用800x600或1024x768的JPG檔案 - ...背景实在不好找直接拖大了是否可行- =
- Easy/Normal長度太短了吧!? - 修改完毕..
- 取消Countdown, 你目前用不到, 勾"Display storyboard in front of combo fire", 避免你的歌詞SB被高連擊數的火焰效果遮住 - sb只是自己练习着玩的现在删掉了 = =
- 歌詞sb的漢字和日文部分不太和諧啊, 如果你要改的話找個一致的字型吧 - 同上

[Easy]
<00:16:050> (3) 結尾點擺finish - 完毕
- 整體倒是沒什麼問題的難度, 但是擺的太方方正正了 - ....整齐点不是好看嘛-v-

[Normal]
- 建議AR -1 - 额..完毕
<00:16:353> (3) 下new combo - 完毕
<00:21:051> ^ - 完毕
<00:26:051> ^ - 完毕
- Normal避免使用repeat非常多次的reverse slider, <00:15:425>的還能說是為了迎合節奏, 那個就沒啥必要了 - <00:34:177>修改完毕
[Insane]
- 最近的新人真愛使用AR9..這個難度來說連8我都會嫌高, 不是AR拉高就很難很好玩啊 - ...感觉这图还是AR9比较好...吧?
- Easy/Normal有下KIAI的部分這個難度也下, 另外其實第二段副歌也能下 - 完毕= =
<00:05:424> (3,4) E/N都下clap怎麼到insane反而下whistle了 - 完毕
<00:40:740> (8) 往右下移, 不要疊(6) - 完毕
<00:47:303> (6) 下new combo - 完毕
<00:48:553> (10,1) 交換new combo - 完毕
<01:14:962> (2,3) 打散成note吧, 這種節奏結果是在原地按著.. - 本来是两个5连打后来觉得蛋疼改成这样的= =
<01:32:933> (7,8) 把(8)拉出來或者做成1/2拍slider+2個1/4拍circle吧 - 完毕
<01:47:310> (6) new combo - 完毕
<01:48:560> (10,1) 交換new combo - 完毕
<02:27:314> new combo改下(2) - 完毕
<03:04:818> (7) new combo - 完毕
<03:08:099> 我想你這Storyboard得換個色, 超不搭的 - SB删掉了-v-
<03:16:225> (4) spacing error - 完毕..
- 除了用複製貼上這點想吐槽和 stacking/overlap 用過頭以外, 很令我驚訝, 很多新手第一張圖的insane都做得亂七八糟的, 你這張完全playable, good job
star

基本完成- =?

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2011-04-15T11:07:09+00:00

严寒BUG~

CCHV-16

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CCHV-16 2011-04-21T08:05:08+00:00

Alace

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Alace 2011-04-21T08:10:42+00:00

BPM should be 192.000
offset:+20ms
記得要Resnap all notes,然後綠線要看看位子,有些可能會跑掉

<Taiko>
1/4 大圈 dame XD

yanhan1064

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Topic Starter

yanhan1064 2011-04-21T08:28:55+00:00

Alace wrote:
BPM should be 192.000
offset:+20ms
記得要Resnap all notes,然後綠線要看看位子,有些可能會跑掉

<Taiko>
1/4 大圈 dame XD

明白

Nymph

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Nymph 2011-04-24T07:52:52+00:00

我推~

sherrie_fay

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sherrie_fay 2011-04-24T11:23:56+00:00

我只是来给星的0.0

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_Kiva 2011-04-26T04:04:04+00:00

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Air_kannabi

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Air_kannabi 2011-04-26T07:06:28+00:00

(>,<)~ 这歌大爱！！好想GD个。。。。。

严寒姥爷up↑！！

yanhan1064

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yanhan1064 2011-04-27T15:17:41+00:00

Air_kannabi wrote:
(>,<)~ 这歌大爱！！好想GD个。。。。。

严寒姥爷up↑！！

GD大好o o

xinhe

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xinhe 2011-04-27T21:21:03+00:00

[easy]
00:06:674 (3) - 往右移点，整齐点
00:19:800 (2) - 左移
00:26:051 (1) - 下移
基本都是以上的这类问题～自己扫一遍吧～稍微调整一下吧～没什么大问题，改不改也随意

[normal]
没什么问题

[hard]
01:35:600 (1) - sl的结尾调整到前面的红线，然后在白线上下个circle感觉听着更舒服
01:45:287 (4) - NEW COMBO
02:01:225 - 加个circle
02:02:475 - ^
02:43:725 - ^
02:44:975 - ^

[insane]
00:43:569 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:912 - 补个circle
01:16:069 (1) - 这后面空的太多了吧，建议做点东西

总体感觉没什么大问题，音效再改改，挺好的。
好歌！STAR

yanhan1064

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yanhan1064 2011-04-30T11:03:37+00:00

xinhe wrote:
[easy]
00:06:674 (3) - 往右移点，整齐点
00:19:800 (2) - 左移
00:26:051 (1) - 下移
基本都是以上的这类问题～自己扫一遍吧～稍微调整一下吧～没什么大问题，改不改也随意

[normal]
没什么问题

[hard]
01:35:600 (1) - sl的结尾调整到前面的红线，然后在白线上下个circle感觉听着更舒服
01:45:287 (4) - NEW COMBO
02:01:225 - 加个circle
02:02:475 - ^
02:43:725 - ^
02:44:975 - ^

[insane]
00:43:569 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:912 - 补个circle
01:16:069 (1) - 这后面空的太多了吧，建议做点东西

总体感觉没什么大问题，音效再改改，挺好的。
好歌！STAR

<(_ _)>

K i R a

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K i R a 2011-05-06T00:03:34+00:00

Hi, please note all except offset are suggestions

~General~

Offset: 1086 (0 ms) (Except the start, i dont know why but this song have 2 offsets..., check it.)

~Norma~l

Well i dont know exact why... but in 00:01:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - (at the start) the offset is DIFFERENT to the rest of the song. I dont know how you can repair it, for the rest of the song is 1086.
00:35:461 (5) - Stack

~Hard~

00:52:336 (1) - Stack?
01:58:898 (2) - ^

~Insane~
01:59:523 (4) - ^
02:43:742 (3) - A little align <-<
00:07:804 (7) - Stack
00:24:523 (2,4,6,7) - Stack
00:59:211 (3,4,5) - Stack
01:25:461 (6,7) - ^
01:43:117 (9) - ^
01:47:961 (3) - ^
03:02:336 (5) - Stack!

Good map, Easy dont need mod ^^. Good luck and star

Rating:

Song: 8.2
Map: 9.1

iceey-o-

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iceey-o- 2011-05-06T00:38:19+00:00

☆~~(<ゝω·)☆ kira~~~

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CCHV-16 wrote:

loveFantasy wrote:

Alace wrote:

Air_kannabi wrote:

xinhe wrote:

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