[General]-
The mp3 bitrate is 320kbps. Change it to 128~192kbps.-
Every diff need audio lead-in at least by 1000ms.- Here is the video. Add it if you want.
MP3 and video's timing doesn't match perfectly, but it looks not bad when adjust video offset to -80ms.
[taka]00:38:365 (1) - I saw this return arrow when I play this diff for a first time, but it's a bit hard to see. Please fix it to something like this pic.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7169902:58:512 (1) - Looks very odd. Stack under 02:58:402 (8) please.
Other are fine to me.
Good luck.
EDIT : Removed video link