1. Notes are really hard to see because of the skin or because of the combo colour on some parts of the SB imo ;_;
2. SB "4.png" shouldn't be "4.jpg" ?
3. cursor and cursortrail aren't really necessary :<
4. Quality of 1122 is bad D: I guess it's ok but...
5. You have two .osb files, delete Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko (Nymph_).osb
6. Why combo colours are different on all the diff?
7. This first kiai time of the map doesn't really fit imo since this chorus is quiet. The second one fit better because it's the climax of the song.
8. Your timing points are not snapped, it makes some errors like a spinner end without the audio down.
9. It feels like lot of beats are not mapped while some notes are not on the main beat. I think you should try to make a better timing for your map, all those gaps are weird.

1. 00:48:259 - Add a note?
2. 01:08:684 - Add a note?
3. 01:15:067 - Make a slider like this? http://puu.sh/14wW
4. 01:20:174 - Add a note?

1. 00:47:620 (2,3) - Spacing error
2. 01:25:280 (5) - Stack it under the end of 01:23:365 (3) - or move it somewhere else.
3. 02:49:535 (1,2) - Spacing error
4. 02:50:174 (2,3) - Spacing error
5. 02:50:812 (3,4) - Spacing error
6. 03:04:216 (2,3) - Little spacing error but not really important.
7. 03:05:493 (3,4) - Spacing error
8. 02:15:705 (6) - New combo here?

1. The diff name sounds like a guest diff D:
2. 01:09:322 (2) - Move it 1 grid right with grid lvl 4 for the symmetry :<
3. 01:41:876 (1) - Move it so it's not under 01:40:918 (10) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/14y6
   I think that's all, this diff is cool.

James2250 wrote:

-I don't really think the epilepsy warning is needed as the white flashes are used very rarely but I guess keep it for now
-For only 3 difficulties and for such a slow song it would be nice if Beginner was mapped until the end
-Consider using a custom 'spinnerbonus' as the default one is pretty loud compared to the song
-Are you sure the artist is not meant to be "Sona"? (Most results I see seem to have that)
-I don't really like the darkness in the beginning but oh well~
-Do you need 'Nymph' in tags?

Beginner:
01:24:003 (4,5) - slight spacing error compared to the other ones

Normal:
00:41:876 (4) - add a whistle here to follow your pattern?
02:39:961 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look too good
02:44:429 (4) - the whistle should be on this note not on 3
03:23:684 (1,2,3) - add whistles here too?

Nymph's Favourite~:
-Why only have this difficulty with a custom name?
-Make the HP Drain different than Normal? (either by decreasing Normal's or increasing this one)
-The break on Normal is long enough, this one doesn't need to be any longer
03:16:982 (8,9,10,11) - make this look neater?
03:24:642 (4,7) - nazi: stack these

The last difficulty has a pretty nice flow to it, call me back after the general issues are fixed and I will star~

arien666 wrote:

[General]
[Suggestion] As this song is cover from original by 'Kouzou Murashita', why don't you add tag 'Kouzou Murashita' :3?
( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naRutIIc_DI and http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%B8%8A% ... 6%9B%B2%29 )

[Beginner]
03:18:897 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Some nazi spacing ;_;

[Normal]
00:27:833 (4,5,6) - [Nazi] Is it just for me or why these spacing are longer than others ;_;? But It would be fine imo ;_;
00:42:514 (5) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make spacing same?
00:47:620 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:27:833 (4,5,6)
01:37:408 (3,4) - [Nazi] Closer than other... Why don't you fix about this :3?
02:20:493 (3,4) - [Nazi] Farther than others... Why don't you fix about this :3?

[Nymph's Favourite~]
:3



Sorry for late modding ;_;
About star symbol, let to James2250 :3
Good luck XD

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Skin]
Please make your spinners darker D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64309

[Timing]
Offset is late, try -10ms since i keep hitting early http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64317

Really nice map <3

arien666 wrote:

James checked -> I checked -> Saku checked
I think it's ready for something :3

Enjoy Soft ice-cream <3

Larto wrote:

Add a custom sliderb.png animation to your skin please, or just take the one from the templateskin and submit your map with it. You'll have your rank afterwards.

Larto wrote:

Eh, if you look at the sliderball here, you can see that its glow is somewhat cut off.


Note the lower right part here. Can you fix this, or get a different sliderball?
Also, it would look nicer if you got a whole sliderball animation (sliderb0.png, sliderb1.png, sliderb2.png... etc.) instead of one frame. That is up to you though.

fhworld wrote:

=。=GOOD JOB!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Me and Sakura Hana tried downloading this map few times and we only get Beginner difficulty.

Can you do a full submission please?

I'll recheck when you're done with that.

Nymph_ wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

Me and Sakura Hana tried downloading this map few times and we only get Beginner difficulty.

Can you do a full submission please?

I'll recheck when you're done with that.

Full submission done~ and the bubble gone after the submission..

I think this time it is OK, I can download it well~ please recheck