Leorda wrote:

Halo

First of all, your timing is seems off, I guess you have to call someone who can help you

[Mato]
If this easy diff, please make sure the Slider Velocity is not high, and no 0,5x BPM Adjustment, because it's very very confusing for beginner/new player

TheVileOne wrote:

Add 0.5 section?

00:35:024 (1) - Maybe like this? It would be nice to see this you change the slider http://puu.sh/cfo
00:43:425 (1,2) - This pattern are very difficult for new player, since the BPM is high and the slider velocity is high. no way, they easy enough
01:03:678 (x) - Feels empty when I test.......[/color] added
01:12:229 (3) - New combo? Since the pattern are change? done
01:16:730 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing for new player, other circle place in 1st and 3rd white tick, but why this circle is place at 2nd and 4th white tick?it follows the vocal
01:49:435 (2) - Ugly slider, try copy (Ctrl+C) 01:48:235 (1), delete 01:49:435 (2) and paste at 01:49:435
01:51:835 (2) - Not stack perfectly at 01:50:635 (1)[/color] k
02:00:237 (1) - Silence this spinner? no
02:36:242 (4) - Should new combo, since the pattern change done
02:44:343 (2,3) - This object is just like a this object are place in red tick what???
02:50:644 (4) - Same concept as 01:12:229 (3)
02:55:445 (3) - ^
03:20:649 (2) - ^ ALL DONE!
03:31:450 (5) - Same concept as 02:36:242 (4) done~

[Yomi]
Ugh, I hate linear slider, they looks waaaaaaaay too ugly get on with it

00:25:422 (7) - New combo? hmmm ok
00:55:727 (4) - Forgot to put clap at end? oh yeah...
00:59:928 (2) - Clap?k
01:01:428 (5) - Must new combo, since the pattern are change
01:21:831 (6) - ^ ALL DONE!
02:00:237 (1) - Perhaps, silence this spinner? no
02:31:441 (3) - Same concept as 01:01:428 (5)
02:34:142 (6) - Finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
03:12:247 (4) - Same concept as 01:01:428 (5)
03:21:849 (3) - ^
03:31:450 (7) - ^
all done except the 4th
[Yuu]
Holy Jesus, this is overmapped. If this very very hard, I reccomend you to decrease the Circle Size at least 1 or 2 tick, so the player can enjoy and fun no wai, it's big enough and no it is NOT overmapped... well it WAS but not anymore...

00:25:422 (6) - Should new combo, because the pattern change
00:31:423 (3) - ^
00:50:626 (5) - ^
01:39:834 (5) - ^
01:44:634 (4) - ^
03:06:247 (5) - ^
03:10:747 (3) - ^
03:23:649 (6) - ^
03:35:051 (6) - ^
03:37:451 (5) - ^
all done!

Not bad
STAR

Derekku wrote:

So I opened the map up to check the timing, had to afk, came back, and fell asleep for a couple hours. :c Now it's time for class, so I'll check the timing for you when I get home later (I'll edit this post with my findings). <3

• 1. BPM 199.975 , Offset 1430

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
are you sure this is 199.99 not 200?

so hentai >_<~

star~

1. Maybe add Hatsune Miku for the tags? It should be her Black Rock Shooter after all ;_;

1. Even for an easy, Approach Rate at 3 for a 200BPM song is very low, imo Approach Rate at 5 is the best for this diff. If you don't want 5, move it to 4 at least please.
2. 00:31:430 - This timing point makes no change, you should remove it.
3. 00:58:434 (4,1) - This slider under the note isn't really nice How about something like this? http://puu.sh/YYX and after you can copy paste to do something like this: http://puu.sh/YYZ
4. 01:40:439 (2) - With 50% playback rate I can hear the beat sound at 01:40:289 - The note fit better here imo (don't forget the spacing if you fix it)
5. 01:42:839 (3) - Same here, fit better at 01:42:689 -
6. 01:49:440 (2,2) - Again, but here I think it fit well so maybe you shouldn't change it.
7. 02:43:447 (1,2,3) - Why isn't it like 02:38:646 (1,1,2) - ??? It doesn't sound good at all you really should move 02:44:047 (2,3) - those two notes on the previous white tick ( http://puu.sh/YZo )
8. Also this repeat slider 02:42:247 (2) - doesn't sound well imo it should end at 02:42:997 - like: http://puu.sh/YZz or http://puu.sh/YZE but 02:44:647 (3) - seems to fit.
9. 03:02:649 - This timing point makes no change, you should remove it.
10. 03:06:850 (3) - Again this circle that should be on the red tick before.
11. 03:09:250 (3) - And again
12. 03:16:451 (3) - And again
13. 03:18:851 (3) - And again
14. 03:35:653 (3) - And again
15. 03:38:054 (2) - And again.

1. Maybe Approach Rate at 7 but not sure, seems ok at 6 too.
2. 01:29:037 (1) - Add a repeat?
3. 02:43:447 (1,2) - Uh this part sounds weird imo how about this? http://puu.sh/Z01
4. 03:15:701 (3,4) - This looks a little bad imo how about stack (3) on (4)? It doesn't respect the spacing but when I played it, it was good(maybe even better).

• WOW WOW WOW I can't mod this, it's just perfect! Your map is the best I've ever modded RANK IT NOW!!!

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

salah baca

The Gombal - Braveheart

nvm
8-)

Magicphoenix wrote:

Shuna maps make me *FAP FAP FAP* ww

STAR~
Shuunaaa~ <3

1. remove normal-hitclap.wav and full submit.
2. 03:05:050 (T) - snap this section in [Mato]&[Yomi] (1ms difference nazi X3)

1. 00:06:227 (1,2) - the stacking makes (2) a bit too close to (1), move (1) left a few grids?
2. stack leniency max is not supported by me cuz 9 seems enough for this diff.

1. 00:26:330 (T) - unused section, you lazy man :3

1. slider tick rate 1 better imo

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. remove normal-hitclap.wav and full submit. what? I use this hitsound
2. 03:05:050 (T) - snap this section in [Mato]&[Yomi] (1ms difference nazi X3)nazi pr0
   

[Yuu]:

1. 00:06:227 (1,2) - the stacking makes (2) a bit too close to (1), move (1) left a few grids? done
2. stack leniency max is not supported by me cuz 9 seems enough for this diff. done

[Mato]:

1. 00:26:330 (T) - unused section, you lazy man :3 done

[Yomi]:

1. slider tick rate 1 better imo done

star~

• • Disable contdown.

• • 01:43:439 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:033 (white tick). Remove the slider-repetition. Add a circle at 01:44:639
  • 01:51:840 (2) - End this slider at 01:52:290 (red tick).

• • Open the .osu file and change...
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 107,199,97
  Combo2 : 64,121,57
  Combo3 : 124,174,123
  • 00:26:330 (1) - End this spinner at 00:28:730 (white tick)

• • Open the .osu file and change...
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 232,211,132
  Combo2 : 255,128,128
  Combo3 : 156,134,187
  • 02:00:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete this pattern. Start a spinner at 02:00:241 (white tick) and end it at 02:02:642 (white tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Disable contdown.done

[Mato]

• • 01:43:439 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:033 (white tick). Remove the slider-repetition. Add a circle at 01:44:639already done in the previous mod
  • 01:51:840 (2) - End this slider at 01:52:290 (red tick).

done

[Yomi]

• • Open the .osu file and change...
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 107,199,97
  Combo2 : 64,121,57
  Combo3 : 124,174,123
  done
  • 00:26:330 (1) - End this spinner at 00:28:730 (white tick)done

[Yuu]

• • Open the .osu file and change...
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 232,211,132
  Combo2 : 255,128,128
  Combo3 : 156,134,187
  done
  • 02:00:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete this pattern. Start a spinner at 02:00:241 (white tick) and end it at 02:02:642 (white tick)

what!? no! D;

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game PM

[General]
-> Why stack leniency is different in every diff? The map plays well though, I have no problem overall with this

[Mato]
00:43:432 (1,2) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier? done
00:55:433 (2,1) - Spacing issue? done
01:25:437 (1) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier? done
01:44:639 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange symmetrical like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114520 done
01:50:640 (1,2) - Linear sliders here kills flow imo, maybe try something like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114523 ? done
03:03:849 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't really feel too many stacks like this is friendly for beginners, considering this is the easiest diff done
03:08:650 (2) - Try to shape the slider wave like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114524 done

[Yomi]
-> Overall Difficulty -1 ? done
00:24:529 (6) - Move the whistle to the previous note?no
00:54:233 (1,2,1,...) - idk... in my opinion this part could use more whistle done
01:12:535 (5) - This repeat is partially hidden, but I have no problem with it done
01:25:137 (1) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier? done
03:32:653 (9) - Remove clap?no

[Yuu]
-> AR9 o.o nvm it's enjoyable (:
00:11:028 (1) - Placing in the center seems too forced for me, placing in the bottom-right of the screen flows better imo done
00:29:930 (4) - Add clap?no
01:02:334 (2) - Placing like this seems better to me : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114530 done
01:25:137 (1) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier? done
02:00:841 (2,5) - Try using soft sound on these two notes? done
02:48:547 (1) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier? done
03:41:054 (1) - This spot is potential for a slider art (: i'm weak @ sliderarts ;_;

KOK PONIIIIIIIII
*ehm* Star, awesome map~

abalee wrote:

[General]
are you supposed to use custom sampleset? you have normal-hitclap.wav in the folder but didn't set any custom timing point, and i think the hitsound could be much better with it. done

[Hard]
03:14:651 (1,2) - spacing? done

[Insane]
slider tick rate 0.5? i think it can't be used anymore o.O set to 1

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Arusha Shuna ~

Random check bubbled map ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:11:253 - Move break time to default. done i guess?
2. 02:02:867 - ^ done i guess?
3. 01:28:437 (1,2) - Move to X:88 Y:328 symmetry with 01:27:837 (1,2). got another idea, horizontal symmetry
4. 01:33:688 (1) - I guess this spinner should start to 01:33:838,listen to 25% pls. done
5. 02:47:497 (4) - Stack on 02:46:597 (2) - end point.

done

[Hard]

1. AR+1 much better with play,AR6 is too bad. done
2. 00:39:681 (1) - I guess this spinner should start to 00:39:831,same reason as Insane. done
3. 02:00:241 (1) - You are forgot add finish to here.

done

[Normal]

1. AR+1 much better with play. done
2. 00:19:166 - Move break time to default. done i guess?
3. 02:12:618 - ^ done i guess?
4. 02:27:620 - ^ done i guess?
5. 00:26:330 - Remove this break time,no need here. done
6. 01:03:834 - Add finish. done
7. 01:03:835 - Unsnapped kiai time end point. : V

Pop due unsnapped kiai time end point. lol u srs?

Call me back recheck ~ when you are done my mod ~