val0108 wrote:

ya o/

[Easy]
00:54:901 (2) - how? http://puu.sh/1ghH ok~

[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
00:29:281 - add note? ok~

[Insane]
OD -1 nahhhhhh D:
00:54:725 (4) - new combo? sry, it's to fit the "square" pattern DD:

awesome map XDD

CDFA wrote:

Insane:
00:48:310 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove all of the pointless new combos. It's weird, but it's following the song. (and the jump seems a bit weird without a NC)

Hard:
AR +1 ok

Adorable.

Hyguys wrote:

no easy , só acho que 00:50:876 seria melhor vc alinhar com a beat anterior ou fazer isso http://puu.sh/1giL ????
no normal , 00:40:935 http://puu.sh/1giM e dar um jeito no resto oaoroa pouca coisa pra muita arrumação
no hard , aproach rate 7 plz. tava assim até agora, achei ar8 melhor, mas vou ver mais opiniões
no insano , od 8 nahhhhhh
de qualquer jeito , star, mas isso só foram sugestões , qualquer coisa não ajudar é só não dar kudo e bls

Giorgos wrote:

Hi

General:
your mp3 quality has to be 128 - 192 kbps. I don't think 199kbps in a 1 minute song is a big problem. I'll ask for some opinions though Asked 2 BATs and they said it was fine.
put Audio Lead-in on 2 seconds. 3 seconds is pretty long. As a experienced multiplayer gamer, I think 3 seconds is better >:

Easy:
I like it

Normal:
00:37:933 - new combo? I think it looks better like that >:
00:52:255 - ^ ok, fixed ~

Hard:
wow,pretty high AR you have here. I think better to put AR 7. and SV is pretty high too. ok for AR, not for SV
00:52:255 - new combo? I don't think there is a problem in this diff because it's following a pattern

Insane:
pretty hard AR here too. Maybe you should put 8? Really unsure about this. Need to check other opinions.
Hp Drain - better to put 6. ok
00:09:162 - new combo? nahhh

That is all! Star!

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Insane

00:26:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel that the distance of every jump should be increased like 00:29:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Nice idea ~
00:29:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and this group should be like 00:26:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^


Hard

00:11:803 (4) - new combo? okay ~
00:52:255 (5) - ^ sry, following the pattern D:
00:53:666 (9) - ^ ^


Normal

fine to me


Easy

fine, too.


It's a fucking funny song and I think the map is well done, so have you star

galvenize wrote:

[Normal]

00:49:732 (3) - add one more return?

[Hard]

00:18:690 (1,2) - Make those like 00:19:926 (1,2), would avoid confusion. ok~
00:50:436 (3,1) - Didn't have a problem reading this, but erm, dunno spacing will look odd for some players. How about putting (3) in the bottom right corner? ok~

[Insane]

Suggestion: how about overlapping 00:15:865 (7) - with the previous end slider? Same with 00:16:924 (4). no, sry ;_;

00:19:926 (7) - Start the new combo here as he changes the pitch of his voice at that moment. ok, thanks for noticing~

Star ;D

1. Isn't this Black Jack's voice :p? Add him to the tags.
2. Source: "Tenacious D in Pick of Destiny"
3. Countdown is not being used, disable it.
4. Such a really short map, seems ok for rankings tho.

1. 00:35:814 (6) - These note feels "extra", Perhaps remove it and add one here: 00:36:167 - instead? (feels and sounds much better imo)
2. 00:50:845 (1) - I suggest to split this slider here: 00:52:255 - He makes some kind of pause there and then the volume of his voice changes so splitting the slider would be a nice idea.

1. 00:25:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - The "finish" spam is OK but I suggest to use a Whistle on (4) instead of Finish.
2. 00:28:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ on (5)

1. Same suggestion about the whistles on 00:26:985 and 00:29:810 (same suggestion for Insane)

1. 00:48:836 (4) - I would remove this New Combo.

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:911 (2) - spacing. (should be 0.86+?) sorry, i think it's fine >.<


[Normal]
00:18:160 (5) - spacing..sorry, it's to fit the endpoint of the slider
00:20:986 (1,2) - reduce an arrow? ok~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Isn't this Black Jack's voice :p? Add him to the tags. okay~
2. Source: "Tenacious D in Pick of Destiny" okay~
3. Countdown is not being used, disable it. okay~
4. Such a really short map, seems ok for rankings tho.

Easy

1. 00:35:814 (6) - These note feels "extra", Perhaps remove it and add one here: 00:36:167 - instead? (feels and sounds much better imo) okay~
2. 00:50:845 (1) - I suggest to split this slider here: 00:52:255 - He makes some kind of pause there and then the volume of his voice changes so splitting the slider would be a nice idea. okay~

Normal

1. 00:25:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - The "finish" spam is OK but I suggest to use a Whistle on (4) instead of Finish. okay~
2. 00:28:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ on (5) okay~

Hard

1. Same suggestion about the whistles on 00:26:985 and 00:29:810 (same suggestion for Insane) I changed it a bit, but not on the same way as Normal

Insane

1. 00:48:836 (4) - I would remove this New Combo. ok~

This map is fucking awesome

Krisom wrote:

If I'm not mistaken, the waltz metronome is off, Main Beat should go on 00:07:573 (Add a waltz here and make the previous red line a normal timing) Also the second waltz section shoulg go at 00:11:803. I'll let Mashley decide if this is pop worthy or not since he's the one who gave the bubble and I just came here to test the map (wich is awesome btw)

Krisom wrote:

If I'm not mistaken, the waltz metronome is off, Main Beat should go on 00:07:573 (Add a waltz here and make the previous red line a normal timing) Also the second waltz section shoulg go at 00:11:803. I'll let Mashley decide if this is pop worthy or not since he's the one who gave the bubble and I just came here to test the map (wich is awesome btw)

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11786,352.941176470588,3,1,0,60,1,0
18138,352.941176470588,2,1,0,60,1,0
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20980,352.941176470588,4,1,0,60,1,0
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50641,352.941176470588,4,1,0,60,1,0

Ekaru wrote:

All difficulties:

The brown approach circles are a pain to read. Make them a lighter shade of brown, please. Pretty true. Changin'

Insane:

00:10:199 (10,1) - I'd argue that this jump is way too big for such an easy difficulty, but it's up to you. Fits the song a bit. Shouldn't be a problem.
00:48:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just make it into a regular hexagon, this formation's too tough for such an easy difficulty.^

Hard:

Nothin'

Normal:

Nothin'

Easy:

Nothin'

Just fix those brown hit circles which make the map a bitch to play and it should be good to go. Star!

Lesjuh wrote:

timing is off as fuck gj