IceBeam wrote:

If p3n is a guest mapper,add his nickname to Tags? Ahh i forgott this >.<


[Normal]
00:40:550 (1) - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
01:21:286 - Why so long break? Could you map something here?
01:41:181 (1) - Finish?
01:51:286 - ^

[Hard]
00:45:602 (1) - Finish?
00:50:655 (3) - ^
01:00:760 (1) - ^
01:04:392 (8) - This note is hardly visible and hard to read,could you place it somewhere else?
01:10:865 (1) - Finish?
01:21:207 - Break again..
01:45:286 (7) - What's with this note? Shouldn't it be closer to (6) like all others in this combo?
01:51:286 (1) - Finish?

[Insane]
00:50:655 - Finish?
01:10:865 - ^
Impossible. hahahah then don't play Adron's guest diff xD

Good job,star.

Neko_Ray wrote:

p3n's easy
126,286 and 126,602 timing (last two) are innecesary fixed

00:44:339 (4): Delete wristle at finish think it's personal taste but fixed 2
01:36:760 (1): Delete new combo fixed
01:37:707 (1): ^same fixed

KillerRind wrote:

Yo,
hers my mod (finally) ^^

[Storyobard]
SB Load goes very high at 01:00:760
Well i dunno but i guess it's ok.
[p3n's Easy]
fine ^^

[Normal]
irc mod~
looks good ^^

[Hard]
irc mod~
01:03:918 (7) - this slider looks kinda weird but ok~
nice~
It's the super-high-speed-slider of death and destruction.. noe srsly it's fine imo.
[Insane]
Very nice :p

Have a Star~

ziin wrote:

[storyboard]

please use this loop which is better in time

L,60760,16
F,1,0,158,0.4,0
S,1,0,158,1,1.2
F,1,158,316,0.4,0
S,1,158,316,1,1.2
F,1,316,474,0.4,0
S,1,316,474,1,1.2
F,1,474,632,0.4,0
S,1,474,632,1,1.2
F,1,632,789,0.4,0
S,1,632,789,1,1.2
F,1,789,947,0.4,0
S,1,789,947,1,1.2
F,1,947,1105,0.4,0
S,1,947,1105,1,1.2
F,1,1105,1263,0.4,0
S,1,1105,1263,1,1.2

Or just change it to 158. Unless you want it off time for some reason. Also, there's no reason to have "pulse.jpg" doing the same thing as "eye.jpg". yes, i need the "pulse.jpg" for this 00:49:234

[general]
the break in the middle is pretty big, You could probably map it on all difficulties, as the song is less than 1.5 minutes long.
It's good practice to make all the difficulties the same lengths, so I would either get rid of the last section on insane, or map the ending on the rest of the maps. Seriously, easy has more draining time than insane...

The only thing left is nazi spacing and maybe some hitsound fixes.

[eazy]
some parts aren't snapped to grid?

[normal]
the clap pattern is 2,4 for like one or two measures, then immediately switches to 1,3.

[hard]
you keep a 2,4 clap pattern most of the way, then go to a 1,3 in the middle.
01:20:023 - claps here sound terrible.
This is pretty difficult for a hard. I think it would be better suited as an insane or hard+.

[insane]
same as before with the clap pattern, but this doesn't sound as bad since you randomly put in in claps.

1. Offset +8...at least.
2. A little overused Kiai imo hmm.

1. 00:46:865 (1,2,3) - Spacing hmm.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

UGUU~

Kowai yo~

General
Hmm.. der SB strobe is doch n bissl schnell. N bissl weniger wär... weniger furchteinflößend.
Oder am besten du entfernst den strobe komplett und setzt dem BG n paar pulsierende Augen.
Kiai richtig snappen für ALLE diffs, Kiai Anfang bei 01:00:768 , Ende is OK. 2tes Kiai Anfang 01:41:189 - , Ende 02:01:400 -

Insane
Bissl overmapped. Viele Triplets machen ÜBERHAUPT keinen Sinn, IMO.
z.b
00:47:821 (4,5,6) -
00:48:452 (1,2,3) -
00:52:558 (4,5,6) -
00:53:031 (8,9,10) -
usw.
Die müssen nicht sein... Passt net zur "Musik" ... hört sich besser an wenn du daraus einfach 1/2 Noten machst. Ist aber nur meine Meinung.

Naja, mal zurück zum modden.

00:49:715 (6,7,8) - Claps weg, volume ca. -5% und Finishes da hin.
00:52:637 (5) - remove clap
00:53:031 (8,9) - ^
00:53:189 (10) - add clap
00:53:347 (1) - remove clap
00:53:505 (2) - add clap
00:53:663 (3) - der clap gehört eher aufm slidertick, also remove clap am anfang + ende
00:57:137 (2,4,6) - remove clap
01:13:084 (4) - die triplets von hier an sind OK. Jedoch würde ich die, die davor kommen, entfernen.

Hard
00:50:031 (6) - remove clap am ende
00:50:821 (2) - ^
00:55:084 (1) - remove clap am repeat + ende
01:03:926 (7) - warum ist der slider 1,5x speed? weg damit. also die 2 green lines
01:07:400 (4,5) - remove clap am ende + circle
01:55:558 (8) - (Nazi) den Slidermittelpunkt 1 grid hoch

Normal
00:44:347 (3) - remove clap am ende
00:45:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bewege alle claps um einen weißen tick nach vorne + add clap bei (1)
01:08:110 - weg mit den Greenlines für 1.5x speed
01:08:663 (1) - mach den spinner 3 white ticks kürzer und lass ihn ab 01:09:610 - starten. und setz 3 neue noten.
01:28:637 (1) - starte den ab 01:28:558 - oder eher, warum ist der länger als in Hard+Insane?
01:46:558 (5) - New combo + remove clap
01:46:558 (2) - add clap to end
01:47:505 (1) - remove new combo + remove clap
01:47:821 (4) - add clap to end
01:48:768 (5,7) - remove clap
01:49:084 (6) - add clap
01:49:715 (1) - ^ , remove at end

Easy

-Stellenweise viel zu Einfach, und dann mal viel zu schwer.
-Notenmangel am Anfang. Da kann man noch gut ne weitere Note hinpacken, bei
00:41:189 -
00:42:452 -
00:43:715 - usw.
- 00:49:400 (2,3,4,5,1) - solche Patterns sind nicht sehr Empfehlenswert für ne Easy diff. Man muss hier Approach circles lesen können, was die meisten Nubs natürlich nicht können. Vereinfache dieses Pattern.
- Ab der Kiai Time wirds dann richtig schwer.
01:06:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlapping patterns, das selbe wie oben

Map ist ganz OK, aber nocht net ganz reif >w<

• I have problems with the custom colours: they're just a bit too dark and sometimes, especially in stacks, it's hard to see them correctly. Make them slightly less dark? Also, why not add red and grey like the BG? :>
  Beuchi, how can you fail me at the offset? 2031 fails at making stanzas, 2663 is the correct one

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Fine

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Approach Rate -1
   Overall Difficulty +1

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty +2 (if not +2, at least +1, at the moment is way too low)
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:20:426 (6) - this must start at 01:20:505; also remove a repetition and recheck hitsounds; then add a beat at 01:20:426 again to fix the stream.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   I'll give another recheck to this when the combocolours won't make me blind :<
   Nothing major btw.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:00:215 - add a don here? It would be more consistent to this other pattern: 00:58:479 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1)

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy
Kiai time is unsnapped

00:38:031 (1) - I think this spinner sounds better if it started here 00:37:399 - No

01:45:610 (4,1) - Jump is a bit harsh for an Easy. There is not much time to react. Yea ok

Normal

01:12:768 (4) - Adjust this with grid snap off to make it the same distance apart from the start of the combo as the spacing. Ehh no?

01:31:715 (2,3) - Center with horizontal line. No

01:33:610 (4,1) - Center these.No

01:46:558 (1,3) - Add a clap to the starts of these sliders. The hitsounds feel empty. No

Note: You may want to play with the double clap rhythm with this song. It may fit with other areas of the song.I don't like double claps><

02:01:715 (1) - The spinner bonus dings sound to loud for this section. I suggest you play around with the volume of this slider to fix this. Yea fix'd

00:47:189 (2) - I think this plays better without this note. (Stack the note after it on the next slider.) Does it have to be one continuous stream? (Maybe this is a bad suggestion) I stacked it with (3)

00:58:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Meh. I don't like stacks spaced like this. I guess nothing is wrong with them. I prefer spacing like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66754 You'r one is too hard and confusing i keep my one.

I think it is a better hard element than spaced stacks.

01:18:452 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Remove combo change? hmmm yea ok.

02:00:610 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern. Could you make 5 a new combo or at least make the slider end face the next two ends to improve readability. Nah it play's fine imo.


Insane

Overmapped. I don't think every base rhythm should be mapped along with the other rhythm, because it just makes for lots of unneeded streams that interfere with the natural beat transitions that make the song unique. blah blah ><

00:56:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gah pattern confusion. I don't like when one beat changes and the main beat stays the same and people just fill in the gaps of one beat with the main beat. Keep if you want.... i keep it

01:51:452 (8) - This might work better if you moved it here 01:51:531 - and then deleted the next note. Respace afterwards. Wut? A note on blue tick without lyrics? No

01:56:978 (8) - Does the entire map need to be overmapped with conflicting beats? This isn't part of the primary rhythm that goes right into your next patterns. I think a gap here will do the beat some good. (After deletion a remapping of that combo should be in order.)
It play's fine too so i keep it.


I really don't want to star this with Insane mode mapped that way. Let me think it over some.

-Lennox- wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Normal


01:31:715 (2,3) - Center with horizontal line. No Tell me why? It's the exact same pattern as this 01:35:821 (2,3) - just not centered.

Centered
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67026
Not Centered
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67027

01:33:610 (4,1) - Center these.No Why? It's right next to the center of the screen.

Look:

Centered
(01:37:715 (4) - )
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67028
Not Centered
(01:33:610 (4,1) -)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67029




00:58:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Meh. I don't like stacks spaced like this. I guess nothing is wrong with them. I prefer spacing like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66754 You'r one is too hard and confusing i keep my one.

If you were referring to the placement of note 7. I didn't fully implement my idea with all the notes. I was just giving you a basic back and forth pattern that felt more like a hard element, while the double stacks feel like hard +. Again it doesn't matter. Either way a hard element is a hard element.



02:00:610 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern. Could you make 5 a new combo or at least make the slider end face the next two ends to improve readability. Nah it play's fine imo. Fine.....


Insane

Overmapped. I don't think every base rhythm should be mapped along with the other rhythm, because it just makes for lots of unneeded streams that interfere with the natural beat transitions that make the song unique. blah blah >< Okay it isn't overmapped for the most part. I was just stating my opinion on the intensity of the map. I have since changed my mind.


01:51:452 (8) - This might work better if you moved it here 01:51:531 - and then deleted the next note. Respace afterwards. Wut? A note on blue tick without lyrics? No (Eh I just realized that, but I figured out the real problem. Look at that transition with auto on and listen to the beat. Do you think it's really all that appropriate to have such weird angles for jumps?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67023

Look at the spacing of 01:51:294 (7,8,1,2,1) - and tell me the current pattern isn't awkward to play and read for that matter. Why is 1,2 increased in spacing and then goes flying into a reduced spacing section? At least make the spacing into 1,2 the same as the previous combo or an idea would lower the spacing into the decreased spacing of the purple combo. Make note 8 a part of the next combo.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67025

Just a suggestion.

01:56:978 (8) - Does the entire map need to be overmapped with conflicting beats? This isn't part of the primary rhythm that goes right into your next patterns. I think a gap here will do the beat some good. (After deletion a remapping of that combo should be in order.)
It play's fine too so i keep it. Fine.


I really don't want to star this with Insane mode mapped that way. Let me think it over some.

You'r business ><


Nobody says it's overmapped..you are the first one... So i don't think it is overmapped. Try to map something like this.. should i map all on 1/4? Without streams? Without challenging parts? No thank you ><

I just think that the beat sometimes throws you into a jump that's mapped solely on a main beat instead of focusing on the defining vocal beat. My opinion on this map has changed and I'm going to star. My main reasoning of not staring was not because it was implicitly overmapped, but because I was unsure whether to support such a mapping intensity for ranking. Not many maps use AR 9 and most of the map is a stream that almost randomly increases in spacing in some places. It all depends on the patterns you were going for. This map deserves a star regardless.

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod check

SPOILER

TheVileOne wrote:

Normal


01:31:715 (2,3) - Center with horizontal line. No Tell me why? It's the exact same pattern as this 01:35:821 (2,3) - just not centered.

Centered
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67026
Not Centered
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67027
~ Ahh >< I didn't understand what you mean sooo... (i need to learn english xD)
01:33:610 (4,1) - Center these.No Why? It's right next to the center of the screen.

Look:

Centered
(01:37:715 (4) - )
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67028
Not Centered
(01:33:610 (4,1) -)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67029




00:58:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Meh. I don't like stacks spaced like this. I guess nothing is wrong with them. I prefer spacing like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66754 You'r one is too hard and confusing i keep my one.

If you were referring to the placement of note 7. I didn't fully implement my idea with all the notes. I was just giving you a basic back and forth pattern that felt more like a hard element, while the double stacks feel like hard +. Again it doesn't matter. Either way a hard element is a hard element.



02:00:610 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern. Could you make 5 a new combo or at least make the slider end face the next two ends to improve readability. Nah it play's fine imo. Fine.....


Insane

Overmapped. I don't think every base rhythm should be mapped along with the other rhythm, because it just makes for lots of unneeded streams that interfere with the natural beat transitions that make the song unique. blah blah >< Okay it isn't overmapped for the most part. I was just stating my opinion on the intensity of the map. I have since changed my mind.


01:51:452 (8) - This might work better if you moved it here 01:51:531 - and then deleted the next note. Respace afterwards. Wut? A note on blue tick without lyrics? No (Eh I just realized that, but I figured out the real problem. Look at that transition with auto on and listen to the beat. Do you think it's really all that appropriate to have such weird angles for jumps?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67023

Look at the spacing of 01:51:294 (7,8,1,2,1) - and tell me the current pattern isn't awkward to play and read for that matter. Why is 1,2 increased in spacing and then goes flying into a reduced spacing section? At least make the spacing into 1,2 the same as the previous combo or an idea would lower the spacing into the decreased spacing of the purple combo. Make note 8 a part of the next combo.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67025

Just a suggestion.

01:56:978 (8) - Does the entire map need to be overmapped with conflicting beats? This isn't part of the primary rhythm that goes right into your next patterns. I think a gap here will do the beat some good. (After deletion a remapping of that combo should be in order.)
It play's fine too so i keep it. Fine.


I really don't want to star this with Insane mode mapped that way. Let me think it over some.

You'r business ><


Nobody says it's overmapped..you are the first one... So i don't think it is overmapped. Try to map something like this.. should i map all on 1/4? Without streams? Without challenging parts? No thank you ><

I just think that the beat sometimes throws you into a jump that's mapped solely on a main beat instead of focusing on the defining vocal beat. My opinion on this map has changed and I'm going to star. My main reasoning of not staring was not because it was implicitly overmapped, but because I was unsure whether to support such a mapping intensity for ranking. Not many maps use AR 9 and most of the map is a stream that almost randomly increases in spacing in some places. It all depends on the patterns you were going for. This map deserves a star regardless.[/quote]

I will keep the rest.

EnPassant wrote:

Jumps roughly 2.75x distance snap on the 1/8 interval of space?

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   I kinda have to agree with EnPassant about this diff being more than a Hard, but songs with a really high BPM tend to be more difficult just because they're faster, there's nothing much to do about it. As long as the difficulty spread is fine between the difficulties I don't see the problem.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:03:926 (7) - i think i get what you're trying to do here, but honestly this speed up just leaves the player "o_O" because there's nothing that calls for a speedup there.
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   02:00:689 (4) - didn't notice this one last time, it is the same mistake as 01:20:505 (6) from the previous mod post: move 02:00:689 (4) 1/4 later, then add a beat at 02:00:689

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Overall Difficulty +1?
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   This pattern feels weird while playing because 7 and 8 are in a new stanza, yet they're still in the old combo. Here's a suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (^ delete 4 and 8, then move those three beats a bit and fix them in the timeline accordingly)
   
   (^ stack those as 1+2 and 3+4)
   01:56:979 (8) - this felt weird while playing
   02:00:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - move them all one square to the right to center the pattern

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
00:55:400 (3) - delete
00:54:926 (2) - move to 00:55:084
00:55:715 (3) - add a note.
~Done

[Hard]
01:57:136 (6) - consider adding a note?
~No

[Insane]
00:44:821 (5/6,7,8) - spacing. (1.40x) ~Should be ok now
01:00:452 (8) - 5 gird down. ~Don't see why
02:00:768 (9) - newcombo. ~ok
--------------------------------
Nice
Star~☆