Thunderstorm wrote:

ThunderMod

Some suggestions

<<Easy>>

Passed due to your first post okay, it's fixed now

<<Normal>>

Slider tick rate 2? I don't like high STR, sry
01:28:019 - break here? nope > <
02:16:655 (1) -->> (2) - swap new combo? A new sentence is beginning at 02:16:655 already so no
02:23:201 - put siler here? (With silenced endpoint here 02:24:292) ok

<<Insane>>

I'd suggest AR -1 no sry
00:17:564 (4) -->> (1) - swap new combo? no sry
00:19:201 (1) - align with 5? nope


That's all

Gabriela Robin wrote:

Hi~

[General]

can any thing add in source?
when all diff finished,plz make sure tags have same content.
maybe the slidertick sound should be silenced.

hard diff not finish
So i just moded easy ,normal and insane.

[easy]

plz make the offset the same with normal&insane and resnap.
Before this is done,i can only mod the hitsound,
and following mod is based on your current timing.

00:10:262(3) - add finish
02:04:080(1) - add finish
03:01:898(1) - plz fade out it instead of just only add a greenline with 0 volume

[Normal]

nice.

[Insane]

00:11:564(5,6,1) - not friendly.make them like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66361 no sry
00:30:292(8,1) - new combo on 8.not 1
00:54:110(1,2) - new combo on 2.not 1
00:59:382(1,2,3) - new combo on 3.not 1
01:01:019(1) - remove new combo
01:25:019(1,2) - new combo on 2.not 1
02:27:201(1,2) - new combo on 2.not 1
02:56:473(1--9) - plz make them in line perfectly. okay ^^
i can't remember anymore but i fix'd some and didn't fix some combo suggestions
nice .i like those streams

Gabriela Robin wrote:

Hi~

[easy]

plz make the offset the same with normal&insane and resnap.
Before this is done,i can only mod the hitsound,
and following mod is based on your current timing. Done.

00:10:262(3) - add finish Done.
02:04:080(1) - add finish Done.
03:01:898(1) - plz fade out it instead of just only add a greenline with 0 volume Done.

Kite wrote:

I love this song.. Ill try mapping you a hard (I guess) <3~

Insane has a few insane jumps but its fine, you could probably improve the way you mapped the calm sections (beginning and the bit around 02:08:664)
Perhaps map this break in Insane 01:07:937 ! Nah, die break will ich da lassen
01:42:664 (3) - New combo on Insane okay
01:43:573 (8) - ^ ^
02:09:391 (3,4,5,6) - A bit confusing to read as it is clustered, its probably better to stack the triplet. (Actually I think this section would make a great break and then picking up slow pace at 02:24:664 again.. but might be too long.. ) Ich denke man kann es eig. ganz gut erkennen weil es ne 0.5x Section ist^^
02:50:482 (4) - New combo? jut
03:01:028 - Add beat perhaps nope
03:01:573 - ^^

Not really a throughout mod but just suggestions for the Insane diff, no need to kudo.
I really like the diff http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66820 pro! >w<

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[Kuro Easy]
Maybe Rename to Kuro's Easy?
00:03:937 (4) - New Combo? Done...
00:08:119 (2) - Remove 1 repeat or silence the 3rd repeat, sounds kinda weird imo No.
00:32:119 (2) - Make this a Slider or Spinner Made slider.
00:53:028 (4) - New Combo Done.
00:54:482 (7) - ^ Done.
01:48:300 (4) - ^ Done.
01:55:573 (1) - ^ Done.
02:39:210 (2) - ^ Done.
02:40:664 (5) - ^ No.
02:45:028 (5) - ^ Done.
you may disagree with my new combos but it will look a lot better with these

Gabriela Robin wrote:

[easy]
Sorry but MagicPhoenix didn't upload the custom hitsound, so I must refuse most of the hitsound mod.
I pefer to use normal finish sound, not soft.You can see in Kite'hard.

00:00:482(1) - start at 00:00:664 end at 00:01:755 Done.
00:02:482(2) - whisle Done.
00:05:573(5,6,7) - whisle on 5,7 Done.
00:07:755(1) - whisle Done.
00:08:482(2) - ^ Done.
00:09:210(2) - ^ Done.
00:10:301(3) - normal finish instead of soft finish?
00:30:301(1) - start at 00:30:482, end at 00:31:755 No.
00:41:937(1) - start at 00:42:119, end at 00:43:210 No.
00:57:391(1) - finish.and remove clap on whole slider,just keep it on end.
00:58:846(2) - remove clap on whole slider,just keep it on start and end.
01:19:210(1) - ^
etc...
01:07:028(1) - extend to 01:08:664 and finish?
01:12:846(2) - extend to 01:14:482 and finish? Done.
01:53:755(X) - add note and finish No.
02:02:301(1) - end at 02:03:937 and finish Done.
02:22:846(1) - extend to 02:24:301 Done.
02:42:846(2) - finish

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
Soft Hitsound in those parts: 00:51:573-00:52:482 and 01:46:846-01:47:755 ( the effect it'll give is good ) I like it how it is :<
00:01:937 (4) - Move it to 00:01:755 ok
00:43:573 (5) - Move it to 00:43:755 and
00:43:573 (x) - Add a Hit here good :3
00:48:301 (6) - Remove clap and aye
00:48:482 (7) - Add Clap here ^
00:48:846 (8) - Remove Clap ^
01:25:755 (x) - Add hit Here okay

[Insane]
Soft Hitsound in those parts: 00:51:573-00:52:482 and 01:46:846-01:47:755 ( the effect it'll give is good )
01:40:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Clap in the middle of a streams are somewhat strange >.<
01:43:028 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ...
02:21:210 (4,5) - change posistion of those? they do seems to almost be out of bond( almost ) nope

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Insane

00:03:573 (1,2) - feels better if you make them further apart. it's cool that way IMO =3=
00:04:846 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:09:573 (5,6) - ^ okay


Kite's Hard

fine to me


Normal

02:49:028 (5) - add new combo on this instead of the next one? no sry :<


Easy

fine to me

BakaHuang wrote:

X_X HI. just suggestion

[Insane]
00:02:301(6)-这里改成一个note silder少一个折返比较好X_X? okay
00:46:482(1)-spinner这里结束?O..O cool idea owo
00:47:573(3)-new combo made the combo 1 note after that
00:56:482(2)-这里加个note 后面两个silder往后挪一格:3 no sry ><
00:59:391(1)-加一个note..silder去掉一个折返 nope = =

:3其他难度没有什么问题~

good map! starr

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Kuro's Easy] ← te la faccio in italiano, direttamente XD
00:10:664 (x) - Aggiungi nota ? ( mi viene voglia di clicckare qui >.< ) No.
03:01:937 (1) - allungalo fino al prossimo abbassamento di volume 03:07:573 Fatto.
( c'è ne è un'altro 1 stanza dopo dopo a 03:07:937, ma li già è quasi nullo il suono)Eh??

yongtw123 wrote:

I'm late @@

[Kuro Easy]
AR+1 plays out better for me
(If you want, OD+1 lol) Done

01:12:846 (2) - the last slidertick is louder than others, move the green line a bit? Done.
01:27:028 (2) - too close to (1)... Ops... Fixed.

1. 00:05:573 (2,3,4) - this seems too close to the slider. Make (2,4) 2 grids up and (3) 3 grids up
2. 00:11:573 - *suggestion* Maybe you can start the break at this point by dragging the beginning of the break to this point.
3. 00:32:119 (2) - finish at the end of the slider
4. 00:33:755 - remove the break, seems better without it
5. 01:12:846 (2) - finish at the beginning and make it end on 01:14:110
6. 01:32:664 (4) - 2 grids up

1. 00:00:664 - just a comment: i just hate irregular clap patterns
2. 00:15:573 (2,3) - ehhh? (i also hate it when people just use a flipped odd slider.....)

1. 00:51:573 (1,2,3) - either remove all hitsounds, change them to whistles, or lower the volume
2. 01:00:300 (3,4) - please.... follow the clap pattern...
3. 01:28:937 - add break
4. 01:46:846 - same as 00:51:573
5. 01:50:482 (2,3,4) - same as 01:00:300
6. 01:54:846 (4,1,2) - ^

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Part 2: Kudosu This....

[Normal]

1. 00:51:573 (1,2,3) - either remove all hitsounds, change them to whistles, or lower the volume whoa forgot ^^ fixd
2. 01:00:300 (3,4) - please.... follow the clap pattern... OK
3. 01:28:937 - add break aye
4. 01:46:846 - same as 00:51:573 same
5. 01:50:482 (2,3,4) - same as 01:00:300 okay
6. 01:54:846 (4,1,2) - ^^

Ehh, good enough....


Kudosu Star!!!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

ahahaha, laziness triumphs me once again...

By Mod Request:

[Kuro Easy]

1. 00:05:573 (2,3,4) - this seems too close to the slider. Make (2,4) 2 grids up and (3) 3 grids up Surely it's better, but since it's an Easy I prefer to not use jumps.
2. 00:11:573 - *suggestion* Maybe you can start the break at this point by dragging the beginning of the break to this point. Done.
3. 00:32:119 (2) - finish at the end of the slider No.
4. 00:33:755 - remove the break, seems better without it Done.
5. 01:12:846 (2) - finish at the beginning and make it end on 01:14:110 Added finish.
6. 01:32:664 (4) - 2 grids up Done.

Soul-less wrote:

As per request from mod queue~

[General]
- I have notice you've used extra slider points for your sliders, even if they're short, like in Insane 02:34:119 (3) for example below. Hold down shift to temporary disable grid snap to obtain optimum slider adjustment?(With less slider point too) I know what you mean but I think there is almost no difference...

Actually no need to adjust them for your map since they looked fine, but for futher reference. XD(And my example doesn't look that good..)

[Kuro Easy]
- Nice and easy.

[Normal]
- 00:17:028 (4) - There's some extra white slider point that's messing up this slider, remove them and adjust. nope
- 00:25:937 (3,4) - Merge these two into a repeating 1/2 slider like 00:13:755 (3)? no sry
- 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 01:42:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try something like this? changed it with help of your screenshot but didn't exactly made it that way

- 01:34:482 (2) - Pretty sure this is a 1/2 slider, but the slider point's quite long, and a 1/1 beat slider is possible here too. Just to confirm.I want the 1/2 slider there
- 02:18:482 (4) - I would prefer another curve slider here, but up to you. nop

[Kite's Hard]
- Only one thing, slider tick 0.5x? 1x sounds fine to me.

[Insane]
- 00:04:301 (2,3,4) - Pattern doesn't seem to fit the overall flow of this part. Just go curvy stream like others? I think it does fit..I'll consider it
- 01:15:755 (1) - Pure linear slider better here? no
- 01:17:028 (4) - Might as well consider a linear slider for this too? no sry :<
- 01:43:573 (1,2,3) - Consider a triangle formation here? n

Overall nice difficulty spread, and fun to play, and it's english song! Ah haha.
Feel free not to use my suggestion if you think they're not suitable.

Shiirn wrote:

General
Hate the song. Ooo~ooh not good _:<
Offset to 664. Even if you need to put the SV changing section on the same line as the offset. fix

Easy
Nothing much.

Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Schizo slider much? no :<

Hard
Fine.

Insane
Don't need tick2. It does need tick 2^^

Leorda wrote:

Hallo Halo

General
* Make sure you resnap all the timing sections. Especially for kiai fix
* I think it's good if you make a lyric SB beside chorus only I think lyric on chorus is good enough

Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Ugly slider ...
00:18:846 (2) - I really don't like overlapped by 00:17:028 (4) fix'd with 00:17:028
00:25:028 (2) - I think place slider here makes my flow are broken. Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/1oYQ no sry > <
00:49:573 (7) - Inconsistent spacing fix
00:58:119 (1) - ^^
01:04:664 (1) - ^^
01:05:755 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern might too hard for average player It's ok IMO
01:25:937 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 01:25:755 (6), or it'll be weird stack during gameplay fix
01:56:300 (2) - Inconsistent spacing fix
02:01:028 (4) - ^^
02:02:300 (6) - ^^
02:49:028 (5) - New combo and also, inconsistent spacing fix
02:49:391 (1) - Remove new combo ok

Insane
* Can you increase the distance spacing when it's slow? It's really hard to read with small spacing @_@
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks

00:23:937 (1) - Inconsistent spacing fix
01:30:482 (7) - Is this object following rhythm or beat? neither, removed
02:31:755 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay ok

Sorry for long mod

Leorda wrote:

Hallo

Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad Done.

00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound) Maybe done.
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please No.
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted kiai XD
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing Nah.
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted.
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:14:119 (2) - New combo No.
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing I get what you want but technically it isn't inconsistent. Btw fix'd.
02:19:210 (4) - ^ ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this Done.

Sorry for long mod

Ayeen wrote:

Easy:
seem good to me

Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm It's fine I think, I check with 25% and it's right on point
01:42:475 (2,4) ^^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps fix


Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick If you listen closely to the music you'll find out that it is a 1/6 note not an 1/4 one, so it's okay

Everything else should be fine

Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny. sounds funny but strange X_X

That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~

And very much thanks for modding my map