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[General]

Resnap the green sections where kiai starts

[AEasy]

02:11:409 (3) - make it a bit closer to (2)

[aaa]

How about naming this [Hard] and name lkp's diff like [lkp's Hard] ?
It's your mapset after all

The spacing on this diff looks kind of random, and the sliders also don't look good.
This diff needs a lot of work before it can be ranked.

00:19:223 (4,5) - the overlap doesn't look good
00:20:677 (1) - ^
00:24:677 (7) - Too close to (6) this anti-jump doesn't work well here.
00:30:859 (1) - Too close to (3)

00:48:314 (6,7) - Too close to (5) and the overlap doesn't look good
00:49:768 (9) - Move this 1/2 back? it would sound much better.
01:01:586 (4) - weird spacing
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing doesn't follow your map at all. can you remap this part?

01:19:768 (8) - Too close to (7)
01:44:314 (3) - Overlap doesn't look good here
01:49:586 (1) - Too close to (8)
01:50:132 (3) - weird spacing

01:57:768 (7) - Too close to (6)
01:58:495 (1) - Weird spacing.
02:02:677 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:03:950 (4) - Too close to (3)

02:06:859 (1) - Move this 1/2 further? it would sound much better
02:14:314 (1,2) - Too close to (3)
02:14:859 (3) - The slidertrack itself is too close to (2)
02:18:314 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing

03:00:859 (1) - Consider using slower sliders for this part ><


[Hard]

where is kiai?

00:21:586 (3) - looks weird with the overlappings
00:26:677 (1) - Shouldn't hit the slidertrack, make the shape the same as (1) but inverted?
00:35:223 (4) - Overlap doesn't look good
01:19:041 (4) - ^

01:28:495 (1) - This jump is too big and completely destroys the flow D:
01:38:132 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:04:677 (2) - Too close to (4)

Try to clean it up a bit

and don't ask people to star your map, it will give the opposite effect

happy30 wrote:

[General]

Resnap the green sections where kiai starts

[AEasy]

02:11:409 (3) - make it a bit closer to (2)

[aaa]

How about naming this [Hard] and name lkp's diff like [lkp's Hard] ?
It's your mapset after all

The spacing on this diff looks kind of random, and the sliders also don't look good.
This diff needs a lot of work before it can be ranked.

00:19:223 (4,5) - the overlap doesn't look good
00:20:677 (1) - ^
00:24:677 (7) - Too close to (6) this anti-jump doesn't work well here.
00:30:859 (1) - Too close to (3)

00:48:314 (6,7) - Too close to (5) and the overlap doesn't look good
00:49:768 (9) - Move this 1/2 back? it would sound much better.
01:01:586 (4) - weird spacing
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing doesn't follow your map at all. can you remap this part?

01:19:768 (8) - Too close to (7)
01:44:314 (3) - Overlap doesn't look good here
01:49:586 (1) - Too close to (8)
01:50:132 (3) - weird spacing

01:57:768 (7) - Too close to (6)
01:58:495 (1) - Weird spacing.
02:02:677 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:03:950 (4) - Too close to (3)

02:06:859 (1) - Move this 1/2 further? it would sound much better
02:14:314 (1,2) - Too close to (3)
02:14:859 (3) - The slidertrack itself is too close to (2)
02:18:314 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing

03:00:859 (1) - Consider using slower sliders for this part ><


[Hard]

where is kiai?

00:21:586 (3) - looks weird with the overlappings
00:26:677 (1) - Shouldn't hit the slidertrack, make the shape the same as (1) but inverted?
00:35:223 (4) - Overlap doesn't look good
01:19:041 (4) - ^

01:28:495 (1) - This jump is too big and completely destroys the flow D:
01:38:132 (2) - Overlap doesn't look good
02:04:677 (2) - Too close to (4)

Try to clean it up a bit

and don't ask people to star your map, it will give the opposite effect

thanks fot mod >w<

all fix ~

[General]
The lyrics on the SB does not fit the song accurately, I will mod via IRC.
and probably add some more effects.
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[Hard]
02:59:768 - slider should prolong to the next white.

P.S. 讓我心寒沒好下場.

4/3

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (aaa123456) [Koko's Taiko].osu

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Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (aaa123456) [Koko's Taiko].osu

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All
Make sure the tags and source are the same for ALL difficulties!
Source is : Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai
Tags : lkp cheukhin1985 koko6162006 aesopl19193
Turn off letter box during breaks for all difficulties!

AEasy
AR +1 or +2
02:44:132 (4,5) - Bad spacing

Normal
The combos get pretty big, maybe add some new combos on some of the big white ticks?
It's a good difficulty.

Hard
Rename this Insane
01:01:586 - This reverse is hidden by the burst of the 3! Make it not hidden!
01:47:405 (4,5) - Too close together
02:02:677 (2,3) - ^^
02:03:223 (3,4) - ^^
02:59:405 to 03:08:132 - The spacing in this portion is very bad, go through and make sure the spacing is correct.
03:25:405 (4,5) - Too close together
03:37:041 (5,6) - ^^
This map has numerous spacing problems, I may not have listed them all.
Before you say they're readable and fine, most of them are really stupid to have.

lkp's Hard
01:32:132 to the end - Add hitsounds!
Nice difficulty, but it needs those sounds.

Taiko
Storyboard an epilepsy warning. It's a good taiko.

2/4

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (Madoka) [Koko's Taiko].osu

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Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (Madoka) [lkp's Hard].osu

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做得挺好的 :3

FIXED SOMETHING

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (Madoka) [Koko's Taiko].osu

"La" SBs near the end seems lazy - -"


~AEasy~
02:44:496 (5) - move left 1 grid & down 2 grids (Lv3)

~Normal~
TIMING 165,391 - remove

~Hard~
00:37:405 (7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:02:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - random streams... not fit to anything
01:56:859 (6) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:59:405 (4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
TIMING 23,694 - remove
TIMING 52,603 - remove
TIMING 191,512 - remove
TIMING 192,043 - remove
TIMING 192,239 - remove

lkp's Hard
Fine.


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~Hard~
00:37:405 (7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:768 (7) - new combo
01:03:950 (1) - remove new combo


Edit:

stress 被泡了

MisakaMikoto wrote:

stress 被泡了

stress +1

Got some free time to do a recheck~
There are some few things you've missed out to fix.

1.

Madoka wrote:

Hard - aaa123456 (finish)

Did you get a username change? :3

2.
Please change the tag 'cheukhin1985' to 'Miu Matsuoka' in every diff.

3.
(My request?) Change 'Normal' to 'Miu's Normal'?
coz every guest diff had the creator's name on them...

4.
One simple fix on my diff:
00:32:314 (7) - New Combo

NO KDS

咪又系bubble番= =
嬲咩姐

加油 刚芭蕾~我感觉错误还不太多 前面的人都说过了所以纯支持啦

-You are going to need to change the storyboards to make them difficulty specific (also removing it from the osb file in the folder) seeing as your difficulties are different lengths and people playing easy etc just have to sit and wait for the storyboard with no notes to hit. You are going to have to cut the sb almost in half on Easy/Normal. For the rest of the difficulties cut it down slightly so it ends closer to the end of the maps - If for any reason you don't want to cut the storyboard you are going to have to fully map everything to match up to where it ends
-Might as well make all the kiai time is perfectly snapped (The fountain around 01:29:223 doesn't really fit in my opinion, I would just end all of the beginning kiai times at 01:31:768. Same comment for the fountain at 02:44:859 and I would try and keep them all more consistent if possible
-It seems most of the fixes mentioned above have already been done but I would include the full guest mappers names in the tags (Miu Matsuoka etc) and all of the usernames used before they were changed as well
-I suggest you change your source from 'Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai' to 'Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai' to match all of the ranked maps with it (Hard actually has the source this way unlike the other difficulties)
-You shouldn't have 2 osb files in your folder both with code in them but you will need to delete both of them in this case anyway
-I don't know if you really need the epilepsy warning...those flashes aren't very strong
-Keep the letterboxing/epilepsy warning consistent on every difficulty

AEasy:
-Has some places where there are very few hitsounds, go through and try and add some more

Miu's Normal:
01:56:859 (6,1) - overlaps like these don't look too good while playing

Hard:
-Go through this difficulty and try and avoid as many of the anti jumps as possible (will list some of them)
-Doesn't need the audio lead-in (the other difficulties don't have it)
00:26:132 (7,1) - space out more
00:30:132 (3,1) - ^
00:57:768 (6,7) - ^
01:01:041 (3,4) - move this pattern so the repeat isn't hidden
01:42:859 (12,1) - space out more
01:57:768 (7,1) - ^

lkp's Hard:
-Why does this difficulty have 'Tags:' in the tags..anyway remove it
01:54:495 (3) - might want to make this a new combo to make it easier to read

The maps aren't too bad but there are several important general issues to fix
Try and get some more mods on this map before calling me back for a rebubble

1. 改SB做 diff. specific -> 每個diff唔同 (因為每個diff既break同ending time都唔同)
2. Kiai time要完美配合 (例如 01:29:223 既kiai fountain唔配合, 佢認為01:31:7685應該結束所有kiai, 02:44:859也一樣)
3. Tag要包括guest diff mapper既全名 (Miu Matsuoka etc)
4. Source: 'Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai' 改做 'Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai' (n -> N)
5. folder裡面不能包括2個osb, delete一個osb file
6. 建議: 刪除epilepsy warning
7. 每個diff既letterboxing/epilepsy warning都要完全一樣 (Song setup -> Storyboarding)

AEasy:
有些地方沒有hitsound, 嘗試添加一些

Miu's Normal:
我自己改

Hard:
唔使 audio lead-in (Song setup -> Audio)
00:26:132 (7,1) - 隔開D
00:30:132 (3,1) - ^
00:57:768 (6,7) - ^
01:01:041 (3,4) - 移動個pattern, 費事d note隱藏左
01:42:859 (12,1) - 隔開D
01:57:768 (7,1) - ^

lkp's Hard:
Tags: delete 'Tags:'
01:54:495 (3) - 建議new combo

這圖都不算太差，但有幾個重要的問題要解決
嘗試MOD多D, 然後叫james回來rebubble

Kana~

Fighto!

Hi~ Random mod pick up:
General:
For me, those flashy light plus the jumping lyrics is kinda disturbing~
Fix the inherited timing/ snap it (doesn't necessarily as there is no major issue here and hitsound/timing speed is accordance to it)
AEasy:
01:28:859 (T) remove the 1.5 speed here as there is no speed up
02:44:496 (T) same as above

Miu Normal:
01:03:041 (6) End this slider at 01:03:768 and add note at 01:03:950. This way it should make the slider 6 more beautiful and fit to the lyrics there.Example:
01:04:859 (9) make this slider abit more beautiful
01:05:950 (T) I don't really like the 1.5x time used here. It feel so sudden

Hard:
01:57:677 (T) remove 1.00x timing here as before was 0.5x time used and after it is 0.5 too. It become sudden changes
03:26:950 (T) same reason as above, remove 0.5x time

Lkp hard:
00:46:859 (5,1) I dont think it a good idea for big jump here or lower down the DS between them.

Overall, good map

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