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would like some critique on a beatmap

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xBeni
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Joined July 2015
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xBeni
beatmapsets/1212758#osu/2524206

as the title suggests, i'd like some help/critique on a more serious beatmap that i recently made
newbie mapper so any comments would be greatly appreciated!
Stario
132 posts
Joined May 2018
Stario
Un-even spacing at the beginning. (try utilizing distance snap)
Un-even spacing at the first drop. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Map does not look very visually appealing in general.
Reduce spacing and slider velocity at beginning. (music is calm, slow sliders and short spacing emphasize this)

00:01:686 (3) Hit circle is not on a beat
00:05:959 (9) Buzz slider is not necessary (would use a regular slider)
00:08:358 (6, 7, 8, 9, 10) [Music here does not support a stream]
00:47:253 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

00:18:823 (4, 5, 1, 2, 3) Well done with the calm part, reduce spacing a tiny bit

I'm not a great mapper so take it with a grain of salt
Also sorry i don't have tips on how to make the map more visually appealing, i'm not really qualified to judge that well.

I also guarantee i missed some things.

Hope you liked this. :P
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KDMC
29 posts
Joined April 2018
KDMC
Try and use distance snap more often in the beginning, some circles and sliders are of time by quite a bit, fix that at the top bar. The streams should be more spaced and less quick otherwise it doesn't go with the rhythm. Some area of the map we're good although a lot of mistakes to, keep practising and learn more fundamentals of mapping, read the ranked qualifier page to get a higher chance of the map being ranked.

Good Luck!
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