Sakura Hana wrote:

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
00:03:246 (15) - Big don? No.
00:09:480 (49) - ^ No.
00:28:181 (168) - ^ Fixed
00:54:675 (331) - ^ Fixed
01:28:766 (535) - ^ No.

Suzully wrote:

HeiL's Normalに関してのみのmodです～

SPOILER

ノーマルとしては少し難しめのパターンが多いように感じます。
Slider Velocityもノーマルとしては高めなので、1.0程度まで下げても良いと思います。

1. 00:01:688 (4,5,6) - 音楽と合っていないので(4)の始点を00:01:493に移動してみてはどうでしょう。もしもそれで(6)のスライダーの音取りに違和感が生まれたら、↓のようなパターンにしてみてはいかがでしょうか。
   
2. 00:04:026 (9) - ^ 終点を00:04:220にしてみてはどうでしょうか。
3. 00:04:805 (1) - ^ 始点は00:04:610だと思います。終点はそのままで。
4. 00:10:649 (3) - ^ ↓のようにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
   
5. 00:46:883 (1) - 1grid 左へ
6. 01:22:727 (1) - 終点を01:25:454にして他のdiffと合わせてください。
   
   もしもMATに難易度を下げたほうがいいと言われた場合はこのように修正すると易しくなると思います。
   あくまで参考にしてください。
7. 00:07:727 (2) - 取り除いてください。
8. 00:15:909 (2) - ^
9. 00:26:818 (8) - ^
10. 00:34:220 (3) - ^
11. 00:35:779 (6) - ^
12. 00:46:298 (10,12) - ^
13. 00:56:039 (3) - ^
14. 01:01:493 (2) - ^
15. 01:03:052 (3) - ^
16. 01:07:727 (2,4) - ^
17. 01:10:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - このパターンは難しいように感じます。
18. 01:16:493 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
    
    以下ヒットサウンドについて
19. 00:59:350 (4) - 終端のfinishをclapに変えて01:00:909 (1)の始端にfinishを加えてみてはどうでしょうか。
20. 01:11:818 (7) - 折り返し端のfinichを取り除いたほうが良いように思います。
21. 01:17:078 (2,3) - (2)のfinishを取り除いて(3)の始端にfinishを加えてみては。
22. 01:18:636 (3,4) - ^ + (4)の終端のfinishを取り除いてみては。
23. 01:19:610 (6) - 始端にfinishを加えて折り返し端のfinishを取り除いてみては。
24. 01:20:779 (7) - finishを取り除いてみては。
25. 01:21:168 (8) - ^ (6)
26. 01:22:142 (9) - 終端のfinishを取り除いてもいいかも？

配置がすごい綺麗だと思います！

KSHR wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月7日 at 1:25:32

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: STRAIGHT JET (TV Size)
Source: Infinite Stratos
Tags: IS loli_milk Hinacle11 frost-b-spec climbb65588
BPM: 154
Filesize: 10418kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 535 notes)
2. HeiL's Normal (3.88 stars, 141 notes)
3. Hina's Hard (4.82 stars, 205 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 290 notes)
5. Milk's Easy (2.31 stars, 106 notes)

Download: Kuribayashi Minami - STRAIGHT JET (TV Size)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - STRAIGHT JET (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 STRAIGHT JET (TV Size)


~special thanks!!~

--GUEST dif--
Milk's Easy : loli_milk
HeiL's Normal : _[JSF]HeiLPoInT
Hina's Hard : Hinacle11
climbb's Taiko oni: climbb65588

--MOD--
S o r d a, frost-b-spec, Qrool, Suzully(2times), loli_milk
TTTTTTTTTTTT, climbb65588, ykcarrot, Kitsuneko
orioncomet, arien666, Sakura Hana

-----------------------------
2/3 : change mp3

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hina's Hard]
Sliders have improved quite a bit since last time, i dont like the overused finishes tho, you might want to look into that, otherwise nice job

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok then Bubbled~

val0108 wrote:

いっけえええええ！！！！

loli_milk wrote:

シャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいい

Qrool wrote:

loli_milk wrote:

シャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいいシャルかわいい

S o r d a wrote:

mousugu!

PotsBreaker wrote:

8-)

Sakura Hana wrote:

Tags changed because guest mapper changed nickname so
Bubble Repair~

Odaril wrote:

General
"is" in tags ? Why ?
Add "heilpoint" and "climmb" to the tags ? I doubt people would bother typing their whole nicks.

Milk's Easy
I'm worried about the constant 1/1 parts. It might be quite tiring in the end (for new players) and makes the map somewhat repetitive.
00:39:091 (1,2) - I think this is quite confusing for an Easy, because a new player would probably expect the first slider to be 1/1, and panic when they realize it isn't. Just my opinion though
00:54:675 (1) - This is too far from the center of the screen and too soon after the spinner.

HeiL's Normal
Quite hard for a Normal, due to all the 1/2 patterns.
00:00:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pretty harsh for the beginning of the map. Some of these beats actually match nothing in the song, like (2) and (5) (and (7)). I think it'd be better to make this a bit easier. I also think it'd be good to reduce this combo length a bit, for example by adding a new combo on 00:01:493 (4,8) - .
00:10:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is quite hard too. The second slider also feels misplaced (it should be 1/1 before).
00:14:155 (4,5) - Stack (5) with (4)'s end properly ?
00:39:091 (4) - If you wanted to follow the music's cymbals, this should end 1/4 earlier.
01:25:844 (1) - I think this is quite far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
01:27:207 (1) - I don't think this new combo is needed.

Hina's Hard
Lots of added notes that make no sense with the song imo...
The hitsounds are too quiet.
00:04:610 (4) - Too close to previous object ? It plays fine, but it's the only spacing error in the whole diff =(

Insane
Way too many beats added that make no sense with the song... The diff feels like it was done for the sake of having an Insane diff in the mapset.
00:04:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern for example makes no sense whatsoever, and is actually confusing to play.

Climb's Taiko Oni
Lots of patterns look weird to me... But I'm not a taiko mapper, and I can't really mod taiko diffs ._. so I'll just say I didn't enjoy this one much :/


Not popping, but consider making these changes.

Odaril wrote:

General
"is" in tags ? Why ?
"Infinit Strats" is called "IS". so, I add this in Tags.

Add "heilpoint" and "climmb" to the tags ? I doubt people would bother typing their whole nicks.
ok, add milk, heilpoint, hina, climb

marimarimari wrote:

nice map!

- S e k a i - wrote:

wow nice work mapping it

yuugeki1234 wrote:

star up. good luck