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Hatsune Miku - Clover ♣ Club

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Krisom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 24 de noviembre de 2010 at 15:21:25

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Clover Club
Source: Yuuyu
Tags: Project Diva 2nd Garven Rokodo Roko-Don vocaloid
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6079kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. G-Easy (1,73 stars, 167 notes)
  2. Hard (4,68 stars, 336 notes)
  3. Insane (4,84 stars, 385 notes)
  4. Normal (3,24 stars, 235 notes)
  5. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 841 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let it clover club! The beautiful love!

G-Easy is 100% Garven juice!!!
Roko did a taiko >w<, give him praise and love and money *A*!!
Rokodo
Taiko with BG. http://puu.sh/oqX
Dusty
Random mod!

[Tags]
add "vocaloid"?

Sliders are nice, (except for a couple,) the art is cool too

[G-Easy]
01:02:400 (1,2) - this does not look good at all, sorry :(

[Normal]
01:16:600 (4) - something more like this might look better?
The rest is nice.

[Hard]
sexy

[Insane]
00:23:600 (7,8) - oops, these are not symmetrical (you think I wouldn't notice? :D)
00:33:600 (1,2,3,4) - another one
00:44:600 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...excuse me while I cry :(
And fix the flipped versions too please

Topic Starter
Krisom

Dusty wrote:

Random mod! At this point is not a suprise anymore~

[Tags]
add "vocaloid"? Free kudosu go!

Sliders are nice :D, (except for a couple D:!,) the art is cool too


[Normal]
01:16:600 (4) - something more like this might look better? true, changed this and his flip
The rest is nice.

[Hard]
sexy <3

[Insane]
00:23:600 (7,8) - oops, these are not symmetrical Oh snap!(you think I wouldn't notice? :D) You're my worst nightmare and my sweetest dream when it comes down to symmetry <3
00:33:600 (1,2,3,4) - another one Fixed, tested it with ctrl H and ctrl J
00:44:600 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...excuse me while I cry :( D:! Uhhh,, uhh, I didn't knew what you meant so I just moved 5 and 7 some grids !
And fix the flipped versions too please Did em'

Garven

Dusty wrote:

[G-Easy]
01:02:400 (1,2) - this does not look good at all, sorry :(

I think I was getting tired of plain curved sliders, hehe.
Hey look, I forgot to star.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
Shiro
General
256 kbps mp3. Re-incode to 192.
Where's the Krisom skin ? :(

Normal
There were quite a few rhythms that bugged me.
01:58:800 (1) - That note is too soon after the spinner.
02:28:900 (1) - That spinner starts too soon after the note.

Hard
01:02:400 (1,2) - This overlap looks pretty bad.
01:25:400 (5,7) - ^
01:31:800 (5,7) - ^

Insane
I really believe this would play a lot better with bigger circles. Also space the streams less than they are right now.

G-Easy
00:27:200 (1) - Having the anchor point two grids down looks better imo.
00:44:600 (3) - <nazi> not symmetrical </nazi>

Roko-Don's Taiko Oni
I didn't get a background for this diff o.O
Topic Starter
Krisom

Odaril wrote:

General
256 kbps mp3. Re-incode to 192.
Whoops, will do it later
Where's the Krisom skin ? :(
This is a krisom skin vocaloid version.

Normal
There were quite a few rhythms that bugged me.
01:58:800 (1) - That note is too soon after the spinner. It's ok for a normal.
02:28:900 (1) - That spinner starts too soon after the note. Moved to red tick

Hard
01:02:400 (1,2) - This overlap looks pretty bad. What? I love it ;_;!!!
01:25:400 (5,7) - ^ ^
01:31:800 (5,7) - ^ ^
Yeah, they might not look pretty, but they play really nice

Insane
I really believe this would play a lot better with bigger circles
Sliders look hoorible that way. Also space the streams less than they are right now. Will do this if someone else mentions it.

Roko-Don's Taiko Oni
I didn't get a background for this diff o.O
Whoops! /me fullsubmits

Garven

Odaril wrote:

G-Easy
00:27:200 (1) - Having the anchor point two grids down looks better imo. Mm, the curve is too gradual for what I was going for like that.
00:44:600 (3) - <nazi> not symmetrical </nazi> ww All fixed.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
why after the map's end there still a kiai? (not happen in G-Easy)

[G-Easy]
00:58:800 (5) - about 1 grid down?
01:31:800 (2,3) - 1/2 later?
02:06:400 (1) - whistle at the reverse?

[Normal]
00:55:600 (6) - clap?
01:59:600 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:48:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move them 1/2 later? since i think there shouldn't be a beat at 01:48:800. (not a strong one in fact)
02:19:600 (2,4) - also add clap to these two circles and next (2,4)?
02:44:800 (3) - whistle?
02:51:200 (3) - ^

[Insane]
01:45:800 (9) - wwww
01:54:500 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - xxxoxxxoxoxxx, x=whistle, o=normal

[Roko-Don's Taiko]
00:50:400 (209) - remove finish?
Topic Starter
Krisom

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
why after the map's end there still a kiai? (not happen in G-Easy)
Whoops, fixed~


[Normal]
00:55:600 (6) - clap? Nah :3
01:59:600 (3) - ^ Ok

[Hard]
01:48:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move them 1/2 later? since i think there shouldn't be a beat at 01:48:800. (not a strong one in fact) Hmm ok done
02:19:600 (2,4) - also add clap to these two circles and next (2,4)? Yeah
02:44:800 (3) - whistle? Nah
02:51:200 (3) - ^ Nah

[Insane]
01:45:800 (9) - wwww >w<
01:54:500 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - xxxoxxxoxoxxx, x=whistle, o=normal Sounds awesome, thanks :3
Thanks rin >w</

Clovah
Garven

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
why after the map's end there still a kiai? (not happen in G-Easy) Gaah, I told you to fix that, Krisom. :P

[G-Easy]
00:58:800 (5) - about 1 grid down? Oop, done.
01:31:800 (2,3) - 1/2 later? Mm, it does translate better.
02:06:400 (1) - whistle at the reverse? Hrm, masks the off-sounding beat better than I thought it would. Done~
Thanks Rin~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
Sleep Powder
Tons of Hitsound Suggestions Below.

I disagree with silenced sections. Make it low volume but NOT silent.
(I have tons of reasons why if you need to know)


[G-Easy]
Boring. The notes just don't sound interesting...will try my best to mod :(

00:30:800 (1,2) - Clap,Whistle
00:32:800 (4) - Whistle both ends
00:34:400 (2) - Whistle
00:35:000 (3) - Whistle,Clap,Whistle (repeats)
00:37:200 (2) - Clap,Whistle
00:44:000 (2) - Whistle
00:45:600 (4) - ^
01:09:200 (2,3) - Clap,Whistle
01:13:400 (2) - Clap at end of slider
01:15:600 (2,3) - Clap, Whistle
01:20:800 (3) - Remove Clap
01:26:200 (2) - Clap at end of slider
01:30:000 (5) - Clap, Whistle
01:32:600 (3) - Clap at end of slider
02:16:000 (1) - Add a Finish
02:19:200 (1) - ^
02:22:400 (1) - ^



[Normal]
Still Boring.
01:14:000 (4) - Clap
01:20:400 (4) - ^
01:26:800 (4) - ^
01:33:200 (4) - ^



[Hard]
00:18:600 (4) - Whistle here
00:21:800 (4) - ^
00:28:200 (4) - ^
00:32:800 (6) - ^
00:39:200 (6) - ^




[Insane]
02:13:600 (1) - Make it a horizontal flip of the previous slider instead? Looks messy as it is now.


[Roko-Don's Taiko]
Really Good~ ;)

Overall, the sliders were nice and so were the patterns. Somehow they didn't quite work well together on some of the difficulties or it could
just be the song...

Starr'd

Also,
Genre: Unspecified (Other)
lol~
Garven

animask wrote:

Tons of Hitsound Suggestions Below.

I disagree with silenced sections. Make it low volume but NOT silent.
(I have tons of reasons why if you need to know)


And I disagree with your disagreement, and if it sounds good/matches the music, there's no need to change it. I am curious if you have any different reasons from the normal ones I hear though. :3

[G-Easy]
Boring. The notes just don't sound interesting...will try my best to mod :(

It's an easy, and what I would normally want with an easy, Krisom pretty much took the rhythms with his Normal. I don't want something that rhythmically similar lest the difficulty spread get messed up. Though I guess you found the normal boring too. Whatever.

Mod compression box
00:30:800 (1,2) - Clap,Whistle
00:32:800 (4) - Whistle both ends
00:34:400 (2) - Whistle
00:35:000 (3) - Whistle,Clap,Whistle (repeats)
00:37:200 (2) - Clap,Whistle
00:44:000 (2) - Whistle
00:45:600 (4) - ^
01:09:200 (2,3) - Clap,Whistle
01:13:400 (2) - Clap at end of slider
01:15:600 (2,3) - Clap, Whistle
01:20:800 (3) - Remove Clap
01:26:200 (2) - Clap at end of slider
01:30:000 (5) - Clap, Whistle
01:32:600 (3) - Clap at end of slider
02:16:000 (1) - Add a Finish
02:19:200 (1) - ^
02:22:400 (1) - ^

I kind of ignored these because SOMEONE forgot to add in the custom hitsounds like I had asked and the suggestions sound weird with them in. I can see why you thought bleh at the hit sounding (though I'm thinking you'll still be of the same opinion regardless), haha. Did change a couple things (consistency issues) though.
Download: 22020 Hatsune Miku - Clover Club.rar

Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom

animask wrote:

I disagree with silenced sections. Make it low volume but NOT silent.
Searched through my diffs and there is not a single slient section

[Normal]
Still Boring.
Any feedback explaining why?
01:14:000 (4) - Clap
01:20:400 (4) - ^
01:26:800 (4) - ^
01:33:200 (4) - ^
None done.

[Hard]
00:18:600 (4) - Whistle here
00:21:800 (4) - ^
00:28:200 (4) - ^
00:32:800 (6) - ^
00:39:200 (6) - ^
None done either

[Insane]
02:13:600 (1) - Make it a horizontal flip of the previous slider instead? Looks messy as it is now.
What?! How can this look messy?

Overall, the sliders were nice and so were the patterns. Somehow they didn't quite work well together on some of the difficulties or it could
just be the song...
That's probably due to the high SliderSpeed compared to distance between circles on Insane.
All the hitsounds being like that were pretty much intentional, I tried yours but they broke what I had in mind for the whole patterns
Sleep Powder

Krisom wrote:

animask wrote:

I disagree with silenced sections. Make it low volume but NOT silent.
Searched through my diffs and there is not a single slient section
Oh...I guess it was just my imagination...idk lol

[Normal]
Still Boring.
Any feedback explaining why?
Some of the sliders sound weird where they end.
01:14:000 (4) - Clap
01:20:400 (4) - ^
01:26:800 (4) - ^
01:33:200 (4) - ^
None done.

[Hard]
00:18:600 (4) - Whistle here
00:21:800 (4) - ^
00:28:200 (4) - ^
00:32:800 (6) - ^
00:39:200 (6) - ^
None done either

[Insane]
02:13:600 (1) - Make it a horizontal flip of the previous slider instead? Looks messy as it is now.
What?! How can this look messy?
Well I just thought it would look better if the slider ends weren't overlapping.

Overall, the sliders were nice and so were the patterns. Somehow they didn't quite work well together on some of the difficulties or it could
just be the song...
That's probably due to the high SliderSpeed compared to distance between circles on Insane.
My point was mainly that the notes were placed in a way that made the map sound bad..
All the hitsounds being like that were pretty much intentional, I tried yours but they broke what I had in mind for the whole patterns
Okay, I'll be rechecking this later.
jericho2442
blah blah just a reminder you still need to encode your mp3 down ;)

G-Easy

00:38:200 (1) - using a newcombo like you have here breaks the combo pattern you was using for this area, maybe remove it, it just looks wrong

01:34:800 (2,3) - spacing, these are too close to follow your spacing, they need to be more apart

Normal
fine

Hard
fine

Insane
01:52:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this really dont suit the mapping style you are doing :< i advise something like the following
01:52:100 (2) - remove
01:53:100 (10) - remove
01:54:900 (6) - remove

flows better to the song to me that way

02:48:600 (6,7,8,9) - i dont really like the placement of (9) my hand kept wanting to do this and it feels better this way 02:55:000 (6,7,8,9) - same again

-- --- ---------

lovely maps <33
enjoy a star
Garven

jericho2442 wrote:

blah blah just a reminder you still need to encode your mp3 down ;)

Uh, it's around 190 average (VBR) Maybe you have an older copy?

G-Easy

00:38:200 (1) - using a newcombo like you have here breaks the combo pattern you was using for this area, maybe remove it, it just looks wrong I think I originally did it for a weird spacing different due to the flow break, but ended up changing things later on, bleh.

01:34:800 (2,3) - spacing, these are too close to follow your spacing, they need to be more apart OTL
Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom

jericho2442 wrote:

Insane
01:52:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this really dont suit the mapping style you are doing :< i advise something like the following
Hummm, I really want to keep this :<

02:48:600 (6,7,8,9) - i dont really like the placement of (9) my hand kept wanting to do this and it feels better this way
02:55:000 (6,7,8,9) - same again
Changed both placements

lovely maps <33
Thank you <3!
enjoy a star
Clovah~
Rukario
General:
Maybe Tickrate 2? I'd like that :D

G-Easy:
00:40:400 - maybe add a note
00:46:800 - ^
00:53:200 - ^


Normal:
02:33:400 (5) - these sliders made me go D:, and also the other one that you copied later.

Insane:
00:48:600 (10) - move the endpoint down by two ticks

Very cool mapset.
Clover ♣ ~
Topic Starter
Krisom

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Maybe Tickrate 2? I'd like that :D
Added just for now, Will ask garven what he thinks

Normal:
02:33:400 (5) - these sliders made me go D:, and also the other one that you copied later.
Fixed

Insane:
00:48:600 (10) - move the endpoint down by two ticks
Fixed

Very cool mapset.
Clover ♣ ~
Clovah ~
Garven

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Maybe Tickrate 2? I'd like that :D

I don't like the way it sounds on my short sliders though. :/ And a lot of my 1.5 beat sliders actually work well with the lyrics with tick rate 1. Sounds fine on Krisom's diffs though.

G-Easy:
00:40:400 - maybe add a note
00:46:800 - ^
00:53:200 - ^ Nah, I don't want a constant rhythm going through those parts. It'd start to get a little boring rhythmically otherwise.
Verdisphena
~
banvi
<<<<3
Yes_old
Dropped by to star and say that I don't like the slider tick 2 on Easy (but I think you were going to change back anyway xD)

♥! ♣!
Topic Starter
Krisom
I thought I did alredy?
Thanks for the star!
EDIT: Whoops, no I didn't. Thanks, fixed
Danzai_old
G-Easy:
00:39:200 (4,5,1) - move 1 one grid up, and 1 grid left to get the correct spacing (a bit nazi, its only talking about 0.30, but it feels wierd.)

Normal:
Looks fine~


Hard:
Looks fine~

Insane:
Looks fine~
Big big kudos for the slider art :3 That was really awesome.

And sorry I did not find anything except the minor spacing issue you most likely gonna ignore ><

~Star~
ztrot
every thing checks out but insane does really feel stretched out :(
well nothing that could hinder it tho bubble
mm201
All difficulties:
  1. Impeccable structure! This is the kind of map that moves osu! forward.
  2. Boost soft sampleset volumes to 100%.
  3. Set a SliderBorder colour of 223,223,223?
  4. I'd prefer a bit more opacity on the hitcircle borders
G-Easy:
  1. Set tick rate 2.
  2. 01:31:800 (2) - This red tick object is confusing for an easy.
  3. 02:11:600 (1) - Raise volume.
  4. 02:55:800 (2) - One grid right.
Normal:
  1. 01:12:000 (1) and repeat - One grid-ish down. (grid snapping wouldn't be an issue if you'd used 1.44 speed~ :P)
  2. 02:35:200 (1) and repeat - One grid down
  3. 02:36:600 (3) and repeat - ^
  4. 02:42:200 (2) and repeat - One grid up
  5. 02:43:000 (3) and repeat - ^
Hard:
  1. 01:11:800 (1,2) - Overlap~
  2. 02:15:200 (5,6) - One grid up
  3. 02:38:000 (1,2) - 3px down/right. (don't do this for the first appearance however!)
Insane:
  1. 3 minutes long and only one break?
  2. 01:25:400 (6,8) and repeat - AAAHHHH
Roko-don's Taiko:
  1. 01:58:600 - Add 'd kk kk' ?
Your opinions/changes and I'll rank.
Garven

MetalMario201 wrote:

G-Easy:
  1. Set tick rate 2. I still don't like it, but I'll add it for consistency amongst the difficulties.
  2. 01:31:800 (2) - This red tick object is confusing for an easy. Mm, I did the rhythm via a slider a phrase before to help out, but oh well - doesn't change the feel to turn it into a slider.
  3. 02:11:600 (1) - Raise volume. Hrm, let's try this then.
  4. 02:55:800 (2) - One grid right. Sure.
I agree with the border color change, but it's up to Krisom. :P

Download: Hatsune Miku - Clover Club (Krisom) [G-Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom

MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:
  1. Impeccable structure! This is the kind of map that moves osu! forward.
    Woah, thanks a lot!
  2. Boost soft sampleset volumes to 100%.
    Ok I will
  3. Set a SliderBorder colour of 223,223,223?
    Ok >w<
  4. I'd prefer a bit more opacity on the hitcircle borders
    Can't do much about them, they're z-senpai's circles

Normal:
  1. 01:12:000 (1) and repeat - One grid-ish down. (grid snapping wouldn't be an issue if you'd used 1.44 speed~ :P)
    Done
  2. 02:35:200 (1) and repeat - One grid down
  3. 02:36:600 (3) and repeat - ^
    Both done
  4. 02:42:200 (2) and repeat - One grid up
  5. 02:43:000 (3) and repeat - ^
    Both done
Hard:
  1. 01:11:800 (1,2) - Overlap~
    Let it O VER LAP, the beautiful love (ok changed
  2. 02:15:200 (5,6) - One grid up
    Ok
  3. 02:38:000 (1,2) - 3px down/right. (don't do this for the first appearance however!)
    Done (I think)
Insane:
  1. 3 minutes long and only one break?
    Just like in the other diffs >w<
  2. 01:25:400 (6,8) and repeat - AAAHHHH
    I-I find this pattern really fun to play :<!!
Your opinions/changes and I'll rank.
Thanks >w<! Will ask roko to check his mod later!
mm201

Krisom wrote:

3 minutes long and only one break?
Just like in the other diffs >w<
Wups, that belonged under All Difficulties. Where are you Roko?

Edit: Oh it's that 999 combo thing. He'd say no anyway so I'll go ahead and rank~
Verdisphena
Congratz sexy avatah x3
arien666
orz
Why didn't I give this song star ;_;



Anyway, good job :3
Selee
Congrat ;)
I love this song
Gonzvlo
^(%)^

<3
hatsune__miku01
;) good
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