I do realize I never gave a star to this map. Have one! And a Kudosu one, too!
This jump is from Mystearica's original map, i'll not change the combo too.. sorry =PJarby wrote:
03:04:908 (1,1,1,1) - The sudden jumps and combo shifts aren't particularly gruesome, but aren't a recurring element throughout this map, so it seems odd to start it now.
Xgor wrote:
[General]
I still think the artist just should be Shounen Radio.
The third and fourth combo colour almost feel like the same as the first and second one but brighter even if they are different colours.
I would think it would be a good idea to make those colours a bit more different from the first and second one.
The source is just wrong, I'm guessing it's the album it comes from but as this comes originally from the benami series, Benami, Dance Dance Revolution or Beatmania IIDX.
It felt like you could SB a bit more, It's quite boring that over 50% of the playtime it's just a black screen.
Also, just a suggesting but I think you should fade the BG at 05:56:780.
[Rebirth]
00:37:935 (3) - Move this 1/4 forward on the timeline
00:43:391 (3) - ^
00:46:119 (1) - ^
00:50:893 (1) - I think you should move this 1/8 forward on the timeline
00:57:031 (7) - ^
It's a bit weird that you at some parts around here try to get spot on and some others not.
01:02:487 - 01:48:182 - The spacing felt quite low here considering that the start had much wider spacing but has around the same feeling speed wise and the part after has much much wider spacing even if it is mostly the same thing.
02:40:015 (13,14,15) - Move down 3 grids? (Level 4)
02:57:065 - 03:09:682 - I would say something like 1,25x would fit much better than 1x here.
03:27:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing caught me off guard as I though it was 1/1 between (2) and (3) and 1/1 between (4) and (5).
03:50:262 (10) - I'm guessing this not having a new combo is intentional right. (It's kinda neat.
[Lunearica]
For being supposed to be a extended replica of Mystearica's version it sure is different at the extra parts
First, the sliders are far more curved than in the original. The Another difficulty has only three sliders with more than 2 slider points and they all were wave sliders (And none of them ever had red points) making stuff like 01:21:583, 01:57:389 and 02:04:891 look quite out of place.
What's with the low stacking latency? It's not even in the original.
00:51:660 (1) - Move 1/4 forward on the timeline
00:57:031 (1) - I know that you are trying to be neat with the volume going down but it's kinda boring and feels nothing like the original.
04:02:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why not move all this one grid to the right so it all centered.
04:03:561 (4) - If you not doing the thing above, please
04:07:994 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It feels like that at least one of them should spin in the opposite direction. (I suggest the second one as I think you are intending to make it spin the opposite direction as the music changes)
Ok, not that bad of a map, I can barely play the fast part at all because I suck but I like the whole big buildup part.
Worthy a star.
*star*
On purpose. I mean, you can tell by now right?wmfchris wrote:
[Rebirth]03:50:262 (10) - NC...? unless there's some linkage between (9,10) like a slider?
Hmm, you're right.DeeN wrote:
add milestone in tags?
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