1. BPM : 139 Offset : 175 Time Signature : 4/4
2. BPM : 139 Offset : 57.167 Time Signature : 4/4
3. BPM : 139 Offset : 86.524 Time Signature : 5/4
4. BPM : 139 Offset : 122.799 Time Signature : 4/4

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiha

General
Wasn't the title should be "Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sister"? Fixed!

Timing
The timing are bit late and there some different metronome. Try this timing from me. You must fix the offset and time signature that I bolded. Also, you should double-check the timing by set the 0,25% playback rate, because my timing sometimes wrong

1. BPM : 139 Offset : 175 Time Signature : 4/4
2. BPM : 139 Offset : 57.167 Time Signature : 4/4
3. BPM : 139 Offset : 86.524 Time Signature : 5/4
4. BPM : 139 Offset : 122.799 Time Signature : 4/4

　ok!thank you timing check!

Easy
00:10:103 (5) - Looks odd, if this stack with 00:08:808 (3) on head slider. Change something better? Fixed!
00:12:477 (4,5,1,2) - This pattern are pretty strange, since 00:13:987 (1,2) are stack pattern. Try stack with 00:13:772 (5), that's looks neat if you change this Fixed!(5)Remove and little Remap
00:19:167 (4) - I think stack with 00:17:441 (1) would be better Fixed!
00:57:153 (5) - Nazi, move 1 grid down? Fixed!
01:09:671 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo to prevent "combo spammer!!"
01:25:210 (1,1,1,1) - ^ Fixed!
01:49:815 (3) - Move further away from 01:48:088 (1). It's ugly to place near tail slider[/color] Fixed!
02:09:239 (7) - Nazi again, Move to X:416 and Y:136, look upper-right to know what I mean Fixed!
02:14:851 (6,7,8,9,1) - Youuuuuu, better change this ASAP, because has a ugly stack on test/solo mode http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59488 (sorry for bad quality of this picture) Fixed!
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern are very not beginner-friendly. Change something better please[/color] Fixed!


Lunatic
Awesome

Good job

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Timing]
I'm not sure, first red line is such a small offset change, that makes me wonder if it isnt a wrong BPM instead, the time signature change appears to be correct, but i'd like to let Lybydose double check these to be certain check thank you~~~>.<

[Holo]
This diff has a different preview point than the others. Fixed!

[Easy]
Notes stacked at the end of sliders are kinda invisible for newbies i recommend you change them. Fixed!
Could you map the last few seconds too? okey~ Add notes!

Pretty nice map i must say, good job! call me for a recheck after

orioncomet wrote:

why is this map in WIP :<
oops,sorry It's a my mistake. Fixed!

[Easy]
- fix your 4th offset to 121,056. don't forget to resnapp all notes and green lines.Fixed!
- make sure your preview point is the same as other diffs.Fixed!

[Holo]
03:53:933 (8,9,10) - make them a little cleaner when playing a bit? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59851. move them down 1grid lvl3 Fixed!
03:54:365 (11,12,13,14) - ^ move them down 3grid lvl3, and move to right 1grid lvl3.Fixed!

[Lunatic]
- fix your 4th offset to 121,056. don't forget to resnapp all notes and green lines.Fixed!

look nice ^_^

Sakura Hana wrote:

Recheck:
[Easy]
There's an extra red line at the beginning of the map which is making the first slider be unsnapped, this red line isnt present in any of the other difficulties, what's it doing there?

Edit: Ok that got fixed so Bubbled~

KanaRin wrote:

Bubble おめでとう！ｗｗｗ

abalee wrote:

/._.

y u c a wrote:

おめでとーーーーヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

S i R i R u wrote:

またフランが来た

テンション　↑↑↑↑

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Suzully wrote:

こんぐらっちゅ

KSHR wrote:

omedetou!!

ついにあのぱちぇさんがランクマッパーに...ヽ(*´∀｀)ノ

KanaRin wrote:

おめでとうーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー！

Ibuki Suika wrote:

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Holoaz wrote:

きたな　ついにきたな　

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Sakura Hana wrote:

Congrats

val0108 wrote:

おめ！

banvi wrote:

congrats