Hi~
Amazing...it's pretty cool~
Very good map, really
Star it~
Amazing...it's pretty cool~
Very good map, really
Star it~
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Ellie Goulding - Black and Gold
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Easy ~
00:38:273 (2) ~ Add finish?
00:50:545 (4) ~ New combo
00:50:909 (1) ~ Remove new combo
00:58:909 (1) ~ I think it would be better if you use normal hitsounds instead of soft hitsounds
01:20:364 (2) ~ Maybe you could remove claps and use normal hitsound just like in 01:17:818 (2)
01:20:727 (3) ~ Add soft hitsound.
01:31:636 ~ Wouldn't be better if you silence this spinner?
01:48:000 (3) ~ New combo?
01:57:091 (1) ~ Same comment as before
Normal ~
00:03:636 (5) ~ Put the same hitsound on the end of the slider as in 00:02:182 (2).
00:10:182 ~ Slider would sound better if it is silenced
01:31:636 ~ Same comment as before
Hard ~
00:32:182 (7) ~ New combo?
01:16:727 (3,1) ~ Spacing.
01:25:636 (6) ~ New combo?
I like Ellie Goulding, nice map ^_~
Starr.
00:38:273 (2) ~ Add finish?
00:50:545 (4) ~ New combo
00:50:909 (1) ~ Remove new combo
00:58:909 (1) ~ I think it would be better if you use normal hitsounds instead of soft hitsounds
01:20:364 (2) ~ Maybe you could remove claps and use normal hitsound just like in 01:17:818 (2)
01:20:727 (3) ~ Add soft hitsound.
01:31:636 ~ Wouldn't be better if you silence this spinner?
01:48:000 (3) ~ New combo?
01:57:091 (1) ~ Same comment as before
Normal ~
00:03:636 (5) ~ Put the same hitsound on the end of the slider as in 00:02:182 (2).
00:10:182 ~ Slider would sound better if it is silenced
01:31:636 ~ Same comment as before
Hard ~
00:32:182 (7) ~ New combo?
01:16:727 (3,1) ~ Spacing.
01:25:636 (6) ~ New combo?
I like Ellie Goulding, nice map ^_~
Starr.
Topic Starter
Fullsubmitted
Thanks for the mod!
Did all the hard suggestions and a couple others.Ignacio wrote:
Easy ~
00:38:273 (2) ~ Add finish? ~Nope
00:58:909 (1) ~ I think it would be better if you use normal hitsounds ~I don't really like how that sounds
01:20:364 (2) ~ Maybe you could remove claps and use normal hitsound just like in 01:17:818 (2) ~Actually, that's inconsistent.
01:20:727 (3) ~ Add soft hitsound. ~Above reason
01:31:636 ~ Wouldn't be better if you silence this spinner? ~She's loud here, so I kept it loud
01:48:000 (3) ~ New combo? ~Nah
01:57:091 (1) ~ Same comment as before ~If you mean the normal hits, then no
Normal ~
00:03:636 (5) ~ Put the same hitsound on the end ~Eh no
01:31:636 ~ Same comment as before ~Nah
Thanks for the mod!
Hard;
00:14:364 (5,6) - Slider from 00:14:364 to 00:14:727, circle at 00:14:909.
00:20:182 (4,5) - Slider from 00:20:182 to 00:20:545, circle at 00:20:727.
01:30:182 (6) - Move this 1/2 forward, circle at 01:30:182.
00:14:364 (5,6) - Slider from 00:14:364 to 00:14:727, circle at 00:14:909.
00:20:182 (4,5) - Slider from 00:20:182 to 00:20:545, circle at 00:20:727.
01:30:182 (6) - Move this 1/2 forward, circle at 01:30:182.
Topic Starter
Nice mod.
Easy
00:57:455, 00:57:545 - useless sections?
Hard
[list:b8170]00:14:364 (5,6,7) - not a good pattern here, mostly used when (7) is 1/2 beats earlier? new combo (7) or move it away
00:44:727 (7,8,1) - move these notes 1 grid left, I know nazi is blahblahblah but it makes 00:44:000 (6,7,8,1) - looks even and neat
01:31:636 (1,2) - ummm excuse me, should it be 3/4 here? 1/6 is a little weird...use 25% to hear carefully and you would find it's a bit early if you use 1/6
Pretty nice map
I couldn't help much though ;_;
Have your star
- 00:56:000 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Nice design for new combos
Normal
[list:b8170]
00:57:455, 00:57:545 - useless sections?
Hard
[list:b8170]00:14:364 (5,6,7) - not a good pattern here, mostly used when (7) is 1/2 beats earlier? new combo (7) or move it away
00:44:727 (7,8,1) - move these notes 1 grid left, I know nazi is blahblahblah but it makes 00:44:000 (6,7,8,1) - looks even and neat
01:31:636 (1,2) - ummm excuse me, should it be 3/4 here? 1/6 is a little weird...use 25% to hear carefully and you would find it's a bit early if you use 1/6
Pretty nice map
I couldn't help much though ;_;
Have your star
Topic Starter
Very nice mod!Pokie wrote:
Hard
00:44:727 (7,8,1) - move these notes 1 grid left ~That causes more spacing problems, and I don't really like how it looks
01:31:636 (1,2) - ummm excuse me, should it be 3/4 here? 1/6 is a little weird ~Oh wow, nice
Nice combo hacks ;D
Hard:
I gotta say that there are some parts where spacing is kinda confusing, but i got most of them right ater a few play tests more... so i guess its alright.
01:20:242 (1) - Consider placing this at 01:20:273 -
01:20:727 (3) - Consider snapping the slider in 1/4. It sounds better imo anyways.
01:50:727 (6) - Unstack it please, if you don't mind. After seeing so many stacks in 1/2, this is something that still confuses me.
Normal:
00:30:545 (2) - Hmm... consider moving this more to the right, making it look more lik a blanket slider. In case you don't know what a blanket slider is, check this: viewtopic.php?f=61&t=19374
01:16:909 - Consider adding a circle here
01:17:273 (1) - Consider moving this to 01:17:455, and replacing 01:17:636 (2) with a circle at 01:17:818 -
Rest is okay.
Also, if youre planning to make a flashy sb, i recommend you to use trigger loops, because of the good use of the hitsounds.
Hard:
I gotta say that there are some parts where spacing is kinda confusing, but i got most of them right ater a few play tests more... so i guess its alright.
01:20:242 (1) - Consider placing this at 01:20:273 -
01:20:727 (3) - Consider snapping the slider in 1/4. It sounds better imo anyways.
01:50:727 (6) - Unstack it please, if you don't mind. After seeing so many stacks in 1/2, this is something that still confuses me.
Normal:
00:30:545 (2) - Hmm... consider moving this more to the right, making it look more lik a blanket slider. In case you don't know what a blanket slider is, check this: viewtopic.php?f=61&t=19374
01:16:909 - Consider adding a circle here
01:17:273 (1) - Consider moving this to 01:17:455, and replacing 01:17:636 (2) with a circle at 01:17:818 -
Rest is okay.
Also, if youre planning to make a flashy sb, i recommend you to use trigger loops, because of the good use of the hitsounds.
Topic Starter
Nice mod.ErufenRito wrote:
Hard:
01:20:242 - That one 1/3 part stuff ~I'll do that if others agree
Normal:
01:16:909 - Consider adding a circle here ~Nah
Hi~ 
nice idea of combo color, nice hitsound with slidertick
nothing wrong so full size mod is unnecessary
only 2 suggestion:
insane: 01:51:449 (8) - how about a clap?
normal and easy: maybe mute to slidertick hitsound? i mean default one.
no kds for this post
GOOD LUCK
nice idea of combo color, nice hitsound with slidertick
nothing wrong so full size mod is unnecessary
only 2 suggestion:
insane: 01:51:449 (8) - how about a clap?
normal and easy: maybe mute to slidertick hitsound? i mean default one.
no kds for this post
GOOD LUCK
hi
Normal
00:33:813(2) - make it symmetrical
01:18:540(4) - ^
no kds
Normal
00:33:813(2) - make it symmetrical
01:18:540(4) - ^
no kds
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mods. Updated.
Sorry for the delay.....
By Mod Request:
General
Lower the volume of the whole thing, its a bit loud
And include kiai time in other places?
Other than that, that's it......
Star!!
By Mod Request:
General
Lower the volume of the whole thing, its a bit loud
And include kiai time in other places?
Other than that, that's it......
Star!!
o hi
Normal
00:17:813 - Maybe add a note and clap? Sounds weird to me without it...
00:20:722 - ^
01:42:177 - ^
01:45:086 - ^ ( if you do, remove the finish on 01:44:904 (6)
01:57:086 (1) - woah, all your sliders are pefectly symmetrical, but this one isn't. I'm a sad panda.
Other diffs are fine~
Have this star.
Normal
00:17:813 - Maybe add a note and clap? Sounds weird to me without it...
00:20:722 - ^
01:42:177 - ^
01:45:086 - ^ ( if you do, remove the finish on 01:44:904 (6)
01:57:086 (1) - woah, all your sliders are pefectly symmetrical, but this one isn't. I'm a sad panda.
Other diffs are fine~
Have this star.
Topic Starter
Changed the not symmetrical slider, thanks for finding that!
I really like the combo colours. Pretty clever.
Easy
Nothing wrong with it
Normal
Neither.
Hard
01:13:086 (7) - This slider follows the music in a strange way. Move it to the white ticks perhaps?
Other than that, I don't see anything wrong. Have a star.
Easy
Nothing wrong with it
Normal
Neither.
Hard
01:13:086 (7) - This slider follows the music in a strange way. Move it to the white ticks perhaps?
Other than that, I don't see anything wrong. Have a star.
Topic Starter
Thanks for checking!Firo Prochainezo wrote:
Hard
01:13:086 (7) - This slider follows the music in a strange way. ~I'm following her voice on that part, I think it's okay as it is
EDIT: It appears that the mods are getting very small. Woo!
[General]
Using the Normal-hit as soft-whistle would have spared you all those green sections =).
[Easy]
Overall seems a bit harsh to me, if it wasn't for the other normal I'd tell you to call this diff normal
01:54:177 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - wth combos, fix th... *listens to song* Oh i see.
[Normal]
Nice.
[Hard]
Noticed that the spacing balances between x1.20 and x1.26, dunno if it's intentional but you might wanna fix that. Well... Not that it really matters actually since it's still plenty readable.
01:15:813 (5) - Reverse it?
Meh don't bother kudosu me, couldn't find anything worth modding in this map xP.
Anyways, I like the creativity in this map. /me likes a lot.
Using the Normal-hit as soft-whistle would have spared you all those green sections =).
[Easy]
Overall seems a bit harsh to me, if it wasn't for the other normal I'd tell you to call this diff normal
01:54:177 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - wth combos, fix th... *listens to song* Oh i see.
[Normal]
Nice.
[Hard]
Noticed that the spacing balances between x1.20 and x1.26, dunno if it's intentional but you might wanna fix that. Well... Not that it really matters actually since it's still plenty readable.
01:15:813 (5) - Reverse it?
Meh don't bother kudosu me, couldn't find anything worth modding in this map xP.
Anyways, I like the creativity in this map. /me likes a lot.
Topic Starter
The slider is reversed at that part intentionally, it's hard to explain why.
As for the spacing, it's minor and I blame grid 3 (never using you again you traitorous swine)
As for the spacing, it's minor and I blame grid 3 (never using you again you traitorous swine)
Folder Check
Looks good
Hard
00:04:359 (1) - maybe make this not touch (8)?
00:20:722 (5) - looks weird in gameplay
- replace (4) with a horizontal/vertical flip of (3) and snap it on grid for like this:
that way the end of (3) is on (2)
00:26:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:177 (1) - ^
01:41:995 (4) - maybe increase the volume of this a little? or make (3) a slider like you did on normal?
Normal
01:35:995 (4,5) - these are kinda lopsided
Easy
00:25:813 (3) - feels short, like she holds out the vocals but its only a half beat long slider
01:41:631 (4) - raise volume a little? or maybe make it a slider like you did in Normal?
P.S. I like the ColourHax (the black and gold part)
Looks good
Hard
00:04:359 (1) - maybe make this not touch (8)?
00:20:722 (5) - looks weird in gameplay
- replace (4) with a horizontal/vertical flip of (3) and snap it on grid for like this:
that way the end of (3) is on (2)
00:26:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:177 (1) - ^
01:41:995 (4) - maybe increase the volume of this a little? or make (3) a slider like you did on normal?
Normal
01:35:995 (4,5) - these are kinda lopsided
Easy
00:25:813 (3) - feels short, like she holds out the vocals but its only a half beat long slider
01:41:631 (4) - raise volume a little? or maybe make it a slider like you did in Normal?
P.S. I like the ColourHax (the black and gold part)
Topic Starter
Thanks, that was very helpful!ouranhshc wrote:
Hard
00:26:904 (1) - remove new combo ~Nah, this part is a little tricky and I want to be generous
00:50:177 (1) - ^ ~^
Normal
01:35:995 (4,5) - these are kinda lopsided ~Modified them a bit, not sure what you meant though
-There is a known spinner bug that creates spinners without a new combo on them, go through all of your spinners and make sure they all have a new combo so that they give the correct score (I know some on Hard don't)
-Just as a minor comment keep your kiai time the same at the end of each map
-Nice work with combo colors there
Easy:
Looks good
Normal:
00:57:268 (1) - I expected this to follow the lyrics as all of the other ones do
Hard:
Looks good
Nicely done maps, really no problems
Deserves a star~
-Just as a minor comment keep your kiai time the same at the end of each map
-Nice work with combo colors there
Easy:
Looks good
Normal:
00:57:268 (1) - I expected this to follow the lyrics as all of the other ones do
Hard:
Looks good
Nicely done maps, really no problems
Deserves a star~
Topic Starter
Applied everything, thanks James!
Easy:
01:15:268 (2) - Add a repeat to this and add a note here? 01:16:722 -
01:25:813 (1) - Pretty short spinner for the easiest diff. Try to either map over it.
01:31:631 (1) - ^
Hard:
The only thing in this diff that bothers me in this diff is the like 4-6 note stacking. Do some stuff about the stacks^^ Not saying all stacks though. Just the overly long ones. I'm going to point them out anyways lol.
00:02:359 (3,4,5,6) - Stack that feels too long.
00:05:268 - Add a note here? Flows better than.
00:16:722 (3,4,5,6) - Stack that feels too long.
00:21:086 (6,7,8,9) - ^
00:34:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Flip this horizontally so it flows better. You get like the swing of the first slider but then you gotta take out that movement by going in the other direction. Takes the speed out of the pattern.
01:25:813 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing consistent.
Pretty cool map I gotta say.
01:15:268 (2) - Add a repeat to this and add a note here? 01:16:722 -
01:25:813 (1) - Pretty short spinner for the easiest diff. Try to either map over it.
01:31:631 (1) - ^
Hard:
The only thing in this diff that bothers me in this diff is the like 4-6 note stacking. Do some stuff about the stacks^^ Not saying all stacks though. Just the overly long ones. I'm going to point them out anyways lol.
00:02:359 (3,4,5,6) - Stack that feels too long.
00:05:268 - Add a note here? Flows better than.
00:16:722 (3,4,5,6) - Stack that feels too long.
00:21:086 (6,7,8,9) - ^
00:34:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Flip this horizontally so it flows better. You get like the swing of the first slider but then you gotta take out that movement by going in the other direction. Takes the speed out of the pattern.
01:25:813 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing consistent.
Pretty cool map I gotta say.
Topic Starter
Changed everything except for the stacks
yayaya
Easy:
Nothing. . .
Normal:
Recheck you distance snapping, make sure it should be this way~
0:08:177 - Distance Snap
0:08:359 - I think you should repeat that once more
0:13:086 - Distance Snap
0:17:813 - ^
0:22:540 - ^
0:25:995 - End it at 0:26:540
0:56:904 - Add a note
0:57:086 - ^
0:58:722 - ^
1:14:540 - End it 1/2 beat snap before
1:15:813 - Add a note
1:36:722 - Half way shorter, repeat once
1:39:813 - Add a note
1:43:631 - Repeat once more
Hard:
The last chorus is quite alike normal, anyway you can change that?
Very nice beatmap till now~ Good luck!
Nothing. . .
Normal:
Recheck you distance snapping, make sure it should be this way~
0:08:177 - Distance Snap
0:08:359 - I think you should repeat that once more
0:13:086 - Distance Snap
0:17:813 - ^
0:22:540 - ^
0:25:995 - End it at 0:26:540
0:56:904 - Add a note
0:57:086 - ^
0:58:722 - ^
1:14:540 - End it 1/2 beat snap before
1:15:813 - Add a note
1:36:722 - Half way shorter, repeat once
1:39:813 - Add a note
1:43:631 - Repeat once more
Hard:
The last chorus is quite alike normal, anyway you can change that?
Very nice beatmap till now~ Good luck!
Topic Starter
Didn't really agree with the mod, thanks for checking though!
Check AI mods for hard, it says that there are some spacing issues but they are MINOR.
I like this, very well done.
I like this, very well done.
General
This is a cover of a Sam Sparro song - Add him to tags.
I really don't like how you cut the song in half, the rest is totally mappable
Clapticks aren't really my thing, but meh they aren't too bad here
I'd prefer if you set tick rate 2, but you'd need to add a shitload of inherited sections to fix the clapticks oryoucouldremovethementirely
Love the colourhax, but I'd make the black a very dark grey - black circles don't look great and break a lot of custom skins.
Hard
01:27:086 (1) - I'd replace this with a slider
bah nothing really wrong with the mapping, great map.
This is a cover of a Sam Sparro song - Add him to tags.
I really don't like how you cut the song in half, the rest is totally mappable
Clapticks aren't really my thing, but meh they aren't too bad here
I'd prefer if you set tick rate 2, but you'd need to add a shitload of inherited sections to fix the clapticks oryoucouldremovethementirely
Love the colourhax, but I'd make the black a very dark grey - black circles don't look great and break a lot of custom skins.
Hard
01:27:086 (1) - I'd replace this with a slider
bah nothing really wrong with the mapping, great map.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod!RandomJibberish wrote:
General
This is a cover of a Sam Sparro song - Add him to tags. ~Oh, okay
I really don't like how you cut the song in half, the rest is totally mappable
I'd prefer if you set tick rate 2, but you'd need to add a shitload of inherited sections to fix the clapticks oryoucouldremovethementirely ~I like the tickrate as is
Love the colourhax, but I'd make the black a very dark grey - black circles don't look great and break a lot of custom skins. ~I found it hard to find a dark gray that can be called black, but I think I settled on something okay. It looks shiny now O_O
Hard
01:27:086 (1) - I'd replace this with a slider ~People brought that spinner up before, so I'll replace it.
Offset needs about -10, fix and I'll bubble.
Topic Starter
Wow I'm lateRandomJibberish wrote:
Offset needs about -10, fix and I'll bubble.
But yeah, changed it.
boom
ｷﾀﾜァ*･゜ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･゜(n‘∀‘)ηﾟ･*:.｡. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ･* !!!!!
bubbled at long last!
Double check your offset again? (Although it was checked before)
I get approx 1450 - 1455 (thanks for helping check ploy)
Everything else looks good
I get approx 1450 - 1455 (thanks for helping check ploy)
Everything else looks good
Topic Starter
*pop*
Okay, I changed the offset to 1450. (runs and gets RJ)
Okay, I changed the offset to 1450. (runs and gets RJ)
Never trust my offsets ever again
A good use of combo colors, all looks nice
Ranked~
Ranked~
Gratz Charles
Topic Starter
The experiment is to see the osu! voter's reaction to a poot ton amount of symmetry combined with Ellie Goulding. The catch is that I'm not copy pasting large chunks of the map. I don't expect high and I don't expect I'll return to this style any time soon.
Good job!
lol symmetry isn't what lowers ratings
it's three things:
1) Copypaste
2) English
3) A reputation as an englishcopypastefag who hates most popular maps
I pride myself on posessing all three
it's three things:
1) Copypaste
2) English
3) A reputation as an englishcopypastefag who hates most popular maps
I pride myself on posessing all three
Topic Starter
So according to that the only downside of this is that it's Ellie Goulding. A 7.9 really says there's something more going on.RandomJibberish wrote:
lol symmetry isn't what lowers ratings
it's three things:
1) Copypaste ~If symmetry doesn't count then this doesn't have it
2) English ~Has
3) A reputation as an englishcopypastefag who hates most popular maps ~No a reputation
I pride myself on posessing all three
Usually when I see a low rating there are spacing errors, but the spacing isn't godawful in this.
Perhaps the fact that it's a small map and not much score to be gained?
2) EnglishCharles445 wrote:
So according to that the only downside of this is that it's Ellie Goulding. A 7.9 really says there's something more going on.RandomJibberish wrote:
lol symmetry isn't what lowers ratings
it's three things:
1) Copypaste ~If symmetry doesn't count then this doesn't have it
2) English ~Has
3) A reputation as an englishcopypastefag who hates most popular maps ~No a reputation
I pride myself on posessing all three
Usually when I see a low rating there are spacing errors, but the spacing isn't godawful in this.
Perhaps the fact that it's a small map and not much score to be gained?
You know the japanesefags and the chinesefags gonna hate.
Topic Starter
UhBlue Dragon wrote:
2) English
You know the japanesefags and the chinesefags gonna hate.
I know that I am late but, congrats on the map!!!, Just remember that its an experimental map, and keep your head up
I find funny how people use the "because its english" for everything these days. That excuse is so over used.
I find funny how people use the "because its english" for everything these days. That excuse is so over used.
Unless we can magically reach into the heads of all of the downvoters (we can't), or they actually post here telling us why they downvoted (not likely to happen, really (prove me wrong, colon three)), we just don't know why maps get the ratings they get, and shouldn't worry too much about them.
I could maybe shed some light. Black stacks were not a great idea, they are kinda hard to see, and some stacks seems abused, making the flow of the map really rigid.
Then again, this probably deserves a tiny bit more of love due to the work on the sliders and some patterns. I'd say 8.5~8.7/10.
Then again, this probably deserves a tiny bit more of love due to the work on the sliders and some patterns. I'd say 8.5~8.7/10.