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pieguyn
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pieguyn
General:

-Make the Kiai time the same across all diffs.
-All the diffs end at different points. It would be better if you made most of them end at the same point, and have the harder diffs be longer. I recommend ending at 02:21:373.
-I didn't get [kevincela's Hard] with the download. Try full submitting it.

Lizzehb's Easy:

-Hitsounds?

00:10:712 (3) - New combo
00:13:379 (5) - ^
00:18:712 (1) - Not symmetrical
00:27:045 (3) - New combo
00:29:045 (6) - Too close to (5)
00:29:712 (7) - New combo
00:31:045 (1) - Remove the New Combo then add one on 00:32:379 (3)
00:31:712 (2,3) - Align with (1)? (If you do, fix the spacing after (3))
00:35:045 (5) - Add a New Combo and then remove the one on 00:35:712 (1)
00:37:379 ~ 00:40:045 - Add a break or a spinner?
01:04:045 (4) - New combo
01:17:379 (3) - New combo then remove the one on 01:18:712 (1)
01:21:379 (1) - Remove the New Combo
01:25:379 (2) - I'm not sure I like how this is mostly hidden under 1...it looks kind of odd
01:32:045 (1) - Remove the New Combo
01:46:712 (2,5) - New combo? Also, 5 is too close to 4.
01:50:045 (1) - Not symmetrical
01:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - Move these 1/2 back and then make 1 closer to the previous note? (Also, if you do this, adding a note on 01:59:379 would be nice).
02:13:379 (4) - New combo?
02:14:712 (6,7) - Align with (5) (if you do this, fix the spacing after (7))

Normal:

00:16:379 (6) - Too far from (5)
00:30:045 (4) - Too far from (3)
01:49:045 (1) - I'm not sure if this slowdown fits, but feel free to keep it as is

kevincela's Hard:

01:00:045 (4, 5) - (nazi) Not symmetrical
01:12:045 (1) - ^
01:13:379 (5) - Too far out
01:52:045 (1, 2) - (nazi) Not symmetrical
01:56:045 (5) - ^
01:58:712 (5) - ^

Final:

-Hitsounds?
-20 million? o.o Either reduce the score or push this for approval.

00:10:545 (11,12,13,14) - This arrangement is odd. Either remove (14) or add a note after it.
00:16:212 (9) - Add a New Combo, then remove the New Combo from (1)
00:41:295 (2) - Too close to (1)
00:46:712 (1,2,3) - I'd recommend doing something else, as this doesn't fit the song that well. If you keep it, though, align them properly.
00:48:379 (5) - Too close to (4)
00:50:712 - End it a full beat earlier, and start it 3/4 earlier so Auto gets 2000
01:08:545 ~ 01:09:045 - This pause feels unnatural o.o
01:50:712 (5) - Too close to (4)
01:52:045 (2,3) - I'm not sure if this fits, but feel free to keep it.
02:13:879 (6) - Confusing, since it's too close to the end of (5)
02:19:045 (1) - Too close to (5). Also, perhaps remove the new combo?
02:19:712 - Add a note
02:26:712 - Add a note (and possibly one at 02:26:879)
02:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd recommend spacing these out the same distance as the other notes. Either that, or make 6 the same spacing as these notes. Another possibility would be to make the notes farther apart as it goes along.
02:32:379 (1) - Too close to (6)
02:35:045 (6) - Either move it closer to (5) or add a new combo
02:37:212 (7,8,1) - Too close to each other IMO
02:41:045 (4) - New combo?
02:45:045 (2) - One more repeat, and then remove 02:45:462 (1)
02:46:212 (10) - This slider is in an awkward position. Move it 1/2 later in the stream.
02:48:045 - Add a note
02:48:212 (1) - Awkward slider. Consider moving it 1/4 later and not making it repeat.
02:53:212 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing. Shorten (1) by a repeat, add a note at 02:53:545, extend (4) by one repeat, and remove (5).
02:54:962 (4) - Awkward slider tick. Either set slider tick rate 0.5 or move the start 1/4 later and add a note where it is.
02:57:879 (2,3,4) - Too far apart IMO
02:58:045 (4,5,6,7) - No. Make this into a 1/4 stream.
03:05:045 (1,2) - Awkward sliders
03:08:379 (2) - End it 1/4 earlier
03:09:712 (1) - Too close to (3)
03:14:795 (2,3) - Swap these notes
03:13:545 (1,2,3) - Too far apart
03:19:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move this 1/8 later and make (7) into a single note

Faust:

-Hitsounds?

00:56:540 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - These are very far apart. You might be able to keep it, but I'd change it if I were you.
00:57:373 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:873 (3,4) - ^
01:03:206 (9,10,11) - Uneven, and looks odd (Note: When I say uneven, I mean that one or more groups of notes are way too close to each other. I recommend making all the notes in these streams 2 level 3 grids in one direction, 2 in one direction and 1 in another, or 2 in one direction and 2 in another away from the previous note.)
01:22:206 (12,13,14,15,16,1) - ^
01:29:373 (10) - New combo (or put one somewhere in there, that combo is quite long)
01:38:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uneven, and looks odd
01:44:539 (1,2,3) - This confused the hell out of me. You might be able to keep it, but I don't think it fits.
01:48:539 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - ^
01:52:039 (2,3,4) - ^
01:53:873 (7,8,9) - ^
01:55:873 (1) - Too close to (8), but you might be able to keep it
02:10:289 (4,5) - Too close compared to the rest of the stream
02:10:706 (1) - Too far compared to the rest of the stream. Move it closer.
02:17:373 (1) - Stack it perfectly under (7)
02:18:748 (1) - Extend it to 02:21:373?

For three of the diffs, it's mostly cosmetic issues, but for [Final], a lot of work needs to be done. Either fix it and aim it for approval (or end it earlier, like maybe 02:20:039 or 02:21:373) or remove it entirely. kevincela's Hard was mostly fine though. I won't star it for now, but call me back when this is fixed and I probably will.
senaya
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senaya
Epic stuff you got there.
I couldn't find anything so I'll just leave you a star.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Fix'd,but not sure if i did right.

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [kevincela's Hard].osu
naught
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Joined September 2009
naught
good
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,785 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Faust].osu

Fixed some issues. Added Hitsounds.
Gonzvlo
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Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General
  1. I'd like to hear more hit sounds especially in Easy, Normal and Final.
  2. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.
  3. Preview Point is different for "Faust" and "Hard".
Lizzehb's Easy
  1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain -1.
  2. 00:18:712 (1,1,1) - I don't like how these sliders are over each other, It looks really messy. Here's a suggestion.
  3. 00:27:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is no consistent in this pattern, You need to keep spacing consistent if the notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, Fix spacing between (5)&(6).
  4. 00:39:379 (X) - I was spacing a circle here, consider adding it to suit the drums.
  5. 01:22:712 (1,2) - Sliders are over each other, You need to avoid things like that specially on Easy. Try this instead, It's not perfect but you get the point.
  6. 01:48:379 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy imo. I highly suggest to replace it with a slider.
  7. 01:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not following the rhythm correctly, select them all and move them 1/2 backward.
  8. The end point of this diff is too random, I suggest to finish the diff here: 02:21:379 -
Normal
  1. 00:40:379 (1) - This slider is not following the main rhythm correctly so it doesn't sound good, Something like this sounds much better.
  2. 01:09:379 (1) - Perhaps finish at the end of this spinner ?
  3. 01:19:379 (2) - This slider starts too early, If you listen carefully the rhythm you are trying to follow starts here: 01:20:045 - So you should try this. Plus that spacing you were using it's a bit mean for Normal :3
  4. 01:28:379 (1) - This New Combo doesn't seem necessary, It looks like you are about to start a New Combo spam, I suggest to remove it.
  5. Except for those "out of rhythm" things I pointed out everything seems pretty nice in this diff.
kevincela's Hard
  1. The Combo Colours seem to bright for the wallpaper (It gets even brighter during kiai D:) Try these ones.
  2. Ok no major problems here.
Final
  1. 00:26:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't like this stream is too confusing. I suggest to remove that repeating slider and add more circles OR add more repeating sliders after that one.
  2. 00:48:712 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The New Combo spam makes the jumps even harder to play because it adds confusion, I suggest to get rid the New Combo Spam.
  3. 02:13:712 (6,7) - This anti jump killed the flow completely, I suggest to use normal spacing or stack the notes.
  4. 02:42:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh these patterns, I'm not sure if that is Ok even for Insane, because It seems really hard to read even for "Insane Players" (I've tested it with other player Rank #400~) mainly because the jumps are too exaggerated and the spacing is completely inconsistent. I highly suggest to make it a bit easier to read.
  5. 03:20:045 (8) - Using Red Lines (Uninherited sections) to change slider speed is unrankable, with no exceptions.

Faust
  1. 1 unsnapped object.
  2. Really Hard, But No Major problems
  3. Is this Ok for rankings ?
I'll star this hoping to see some major fixes. Otherwise I'll regret "starring" this and that will make me sad :(
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,858 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.
If you see,my hard and normal have different bpms,and Normal's bpm is lower than my hard,so i think it's all right.Anyway,later i'm going to fix all in my diff.
Gonzvlo
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Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

-kevincela- wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.
If you see,my hard and normal have different bpms,and Normal's bpm is lower than my hard,so i think it's all right.Anyway,later i'm going to fix all in my diff.

Ok, So I asked in #modhelp, the mapset must have the same BPM , so use 180 for Easy and Normal too, then slowdown the sliderspeed.
Hard is OK.
winber1
4,519 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
Faust

00:32:956(6,7,8,9,10) - spacing doesn't really make sense. The way it's oriented, it doesn't even look at they are 1/4 apart. Secondly, the music doesn't change in away to provoke something like this.. it's not major tho.
00:40:373(2) - i would move this a little closer to the end of the slider to be more clear, but i guess it's fine
00:40:706(4,5,6,7,8,1) - pretty much almost completely unreadable until several tries or actually looking in edit in my opinion.
00:57:373(1,2,3) - spacing makes no sense. The music does provoke any sort of spacing like this, and it's hard to read. if these spacings happened continuously through a portion of the song, it may work better. Still, the spacing is kinda intense for a 1/4 beat.
01:01:873(1,2,3) - ^ this sort of spacing makes it look like a 1/2 note
02:04:706(1) - slider makes more sense ending at 02:05:373 in my opinion.
02:17:206(7) - move this note on top of the new combo

Final

00:12:545(2,3) - this happens a few time in the song. Although it's playable, it's just a little to continue the stream so far away. If it was just a jump it might be better, but it's not
00:19:045(6) - ^ yea.. wat? it's probably possible to not get an 100 on combo 5, but um.. it's still quite insane spacing even if combo 5 is a reverse slider.
00:41:212(x) - add a note?
00:47:212(x) - ^
00:48:545(x) - add a note, or you should move the new combo somewhere else, cuz it seems a little hard to read.
00:48:879(1,2,1,2,1,2) - do you really need new combos here? I think one is enough.
01:02:379(4,5) - although i can't even here these notes, i don't think they should be on blue ticks...
01:07:379(2) - move closer to previous note.
01:27:879(5,6,7) - do something more creative instead of stacking?
01:47:379(x) - add note
01:51:462(11) - start slider 1/4 tick ealier
01:53:962(3) - move onto combo 4
02:14:212(1) - i would end this note at 02:14:379 and put a note at 02:14:545. just a suggestion tho
02:26:712(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing doesn't make. It only happens once in the whole song, and the music does not become calmer at all.
02:35:045(6) - move the slider closer to the previous note.
02:37:545(8) - i would move this note further away from the new combo
02:45:045(2) - i would move this note closer to the new combo
02:47:962(7) - remove finish
02:48:045(x) - add note with finish (you don't have to end follow the last to steps, but that 7 on a blue tick makes no sense. Even if you can't hear a difference, you really shouldn't just put random notes on blue ticks)
02:53:545(2,3,4) - ok.. pretty much impossible to read, at least for the first time, and more impossible to do for the first time. Move combo 3 on to onto combo 2 and 4
02:57:962(3) - move 1/4 tick forward and move closer to combo 4
03:05:045(1,2) - blue ticks don't match anything.
03:08:712(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the music is still in 4/4 meter, this 3 3 3 does not feel correct when playing
03:13:545(1,2,3) - weird spacing. i recommend moving them closer together
03:14:712(1,2,3,4) - i would move 2 on top of 1, and move 3 on top of 4

kevincela's

This is still hard. You should finish at around the same time as the harder difficulties.
The song also seemed a tiny bit off. Maybe you could try 8036, but offset right is fine i guess.

00:42:036(7) - why are these 3 claps while all other instances of this pattern are whistles? (i guess you did it again at 01:40:702, but it seems fine since you did it twice)

looks fine.

Normal

00:10:712(2) - move 1 right
00:36:712(x) - add note
00:37:045(x) - ^
00:38:712(spinner) - end spinner here? Although the spinner follows the music, i'm not sure about putting a note 1/2 away from the end of spinner in normal, but you seem to have enough time for the spinner.
01:26:045(1) - i know you can't finish here, but i would recommend changing some notes around to put a finish here. It just makes more sense that way.
01:28:379(1) - remove combo

Lizzehb's Easy

00:10:712(3) - I'm not an expert on combos, but it might work better adding a new combo here
00:13:379(5) - ^
00:18:712(1,1) - make more symmetrical?
00:41:379(1,2) - move up one grid
01:54:379(1,2,3,4) - snap these on the white ticks. the red ticks don't make much sense
02:21:379(x) - add note
02:22:379(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move 1 red tick forward. then readjust the new combo at 02:32:045 accordingly
02:48:045 - end the song here. it makes more sense to me.


Yea this song was over that 10 minute limit i had, but oh well. i like the song, so i guess you can count yourself lucky xD.
Cool map. the way some notes are organized and placed sound kinda cool sometimes, but just some spacings just feel awkward and hard to read sometimes... fun to play tho.

Star~
Faust
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4,785 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
SPOILER

winber1 wrote:

Faust

00:32:956(6,7,8,9,10) - spacing doesn't really make sense. The way it's oriented, it doesn't even look at they are 1/4 apart. Secondly, the music doesn't change in away to provoke something like this.. it's not major tho.
00:40:373(2) - i would move this a little closer to the end of the slider to be more clear, but i guess it's fine
00:40:706(4,5,6,7,8,1) - pretty much almost completely unreadable until several tries or actually looking in edit in my opinion.
00:57:373(1,2,3) - spacing makes no sense. The music does provoke any sort of spacing like this, and it's hard to read. if these spacings happened continuously through a portion of the song, it may work better. Still, the spacing is kinda intense for a 1/4 beat.
01:01:873(1,2,3) - ^ this sort of spacing makes it look like a 1/2 note
02:04:706(1) - slider makes more sense ending at 02:05:373 in my opinion.
02:17:206(7) - move this note on top of the new combo

Final

00:12:545(2,3) - this happens a few time in the song. Although it's playable, it's just a little to continue the stream so far away. If it was just a jump it might be better, but it's not
00:19:045(6) - ^ yea.. wat? it's probably possible to not get an 100 on combo 5, but um.. it's still quite insane spacing even if combo 5 is a reverse slider.
00:41:212(x) - add a note?
00:47:212(x) - ^
00:48:545(x) - add a note, or you should move the new combo somewhere else, cuz it seems a little hard to read.
00:48:879(1,2,1,2,1,2) - do you really need new combos here? I think one is enough.
01:02:379(4,5) - although i can't even here these notes, i don't think they should be on blue ticks...
01:07:379(2) - move closer to previous note.
01:27:879(5,6,7) - do something more creative instead of stacking?
01:47:379(x) - add note
01:51:462(11) - start slider 1/4 tick ealier
01:53:962(3) - move onto combo 4
02:14:212(1) - i would end this note at 02:14:379 and put a note at 02:14:545. just a suggestion tho
02:26:712(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing doesn't make. It only happens once in the whole song, and the music does not become calmer at all.
02:35:045(6) - move the slider closer to the previous note.
02:37:545(8) - i would move this note further away from the new combo
02:45:045(2) - i would move this note closer to the new combo
02:47:962(7) - remove finish
02:48:045(x) - add note with finish (you don't have to end follow the last to steps, but that 7 on a blue tick makes no sense. Even if you can't hear a difference, you really shouldn't just put random notes on blue ticks)
02:53:545(2,3,4) - ok.. pretty much impossible to read, at least for the first time, and more impossible to do for the first time. Move combo 3 on to onto combo 2 and 4
02:57:962(3) - move 1/4 tick forward and move closer to combo 4
03:05:045(1,2) - blue ticks don't match anything.
03:08:712(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the music is still in 4/4 meter, this 3 3 3 does not feel correct when playing
03:13:545(1,2,3) - weird spacing. i recommend moving them closer together
03:14:712(1,2,3,4) - i would move 2 on top of 1, and move 3 on top of 4

kevincela's

This is still hard. You should finish at around the same time as the harder difficulties.
The song also seemed a tiny bit off. Maybe you could try 8036, but offset right is fine i guess.

00:42:036(7) - why are these 3 claps while all other instances of this pattern are whistles? (i guess you did it again at 01:40:702, but it seems fine since you did it twice)

looks fine.

Normal

00:10:712(2) - move 1 right
00:36:712(x) - add note
00:37:045(x) - ^
00:38:712(spinner) - end spinner here? Although the spinner follows the music, i'm not sure about putting a note 1/2 away from the end of spinner in normal, but you seem to have enough time for the spinner.
01:26:045(1) - i know you can't finish here, but i would recommend changing some notes around to put a finish here. It just makes more sense that way.
01:28:379(1) - remove combo

Lizzehb's Easy

00:10:712(3) - I'm not an expert on combos, but it might work better adding a new combo here
00:13:379(5) - ^
00:18:712(1,1) - make more symmetrical?
00:41:379(1,2) - move up one grid
01:54:379(1,2,3,4) - snap these on the white ticks. the red ticks don't make much sense
02:21:379(x) - add note
02:22:379(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move 1 red tick forward. then readjust the new combo at 02:32:045 accordingly
02:48:045 - end the song here. it makes more sense to me.


Yea this song was over that 10 minute limit i had, but oh well. i like the song, so i guess you can count yourself lucky xD.
Cool map. the way some notes are organized and placed sound kinda cool sometimes, but just some spacings just feel awkward and hard to read sometimes... fun to play tho.

Star~

I must admit, I knew all about 00:57:373(1,2,3) and I intended to fix it, but never actually got around to it due to lack of highlighting and was soon forgotten. I apologize.

Thank you for your excellent modding. :)
I am impressed.

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Faust].osu
Venus
27 posts
Joined November 2010
Venus
nice map :)
Star~
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb

Gonzvlo wrote:

Lizzehb's Easy
  1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain -1. kay.
  2. 00:18:712 (1,1,1) - I don't like how these sliders are over each other, It looks really messy. Here's a suggestion. okay~
  3. 00:27:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is no consistent in this pattern, You need to keep spacing consistent if the notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, Fix spacing between (5)&(6). Fixed.
  4. 00:39:379 (X) - I was spacing a circle here, consider adding it to suit the drums.added
  5. 01:22:712 (1,2) - Sliders are over each other, You need to avoid things like that specially on Easy. Try this instead, It's not perfect but you get the point.done
  6. 01:48:379 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy imo. I highly suggest to replace it with a slider.Changed
  7. 01:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not following the rhythm correctly, select them all and move them 1/2 backward. done
  8. The end point of this diff is too random, I suggest to finish the diff here: 02:21:379 -
mkay~
Thank you again Gonz <3
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb

winber1 wrote:

Lizzehb's Easy

00:10:712(3) - I'm not an expert on combos, but it might work better adding a new combo here done
00:13:379(5) - ^ done
00:18:712(1,1) - make more symmetrical? done
00:41:379(1,2) - move up one grid done
01:54:379(1,2,3,4) - snap these on the white ticks. the red ticks don't make much sense done
02:21:379(x) - add note
02:22:379(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move 1 red tick forward. then readjust the new combo at 02:32:045 accordingly
02:48:045 - end the song here. it makes more sense to me.
I ended it where Gonz said to, thanks :3

Updates now btw.

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Lizzehb's Easy].osu
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Infinity_old
star firooo =)
Firo Prochainezo
2,140 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Firo Prochainezo
Thank you for all these stars / Grazie per tutte le stelle !
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
General
The maps lack in hitsound too much for my taste.
Try to make all maps end in the same place, except for Final of course. The place where Easy ends seems perfect to me.

Final
Ignored because for Approval

Faust
00:10:373 (9,10,11,12) - looks it it comes directly after the slider, but there's a small break inbetween... erm. I dunno.

Hard
Fine

Normal
Geh, boring grid mod.
00:42:712 (4) - 1 grid down
01:20:045 (3) - 3 grids left
01:57:045 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up, 1 right

Easy
00:18:712 (1) - 1,5x spacing? rotate 00:17:379 (4) - a little bit upwards to even the spacing out.
00:21:379 (1) - and not it's too low D: nubs will click the next slider right away.
00:42:712 (1) - too close
01:25:379 (1) - end this at 01:28:045
01:32:045 (1) - remove NC
01:46:712 (2,3,4) - too close
01:48:045 (5) - ^
01:54:045 (1) - too far
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

General
The maps lack in hitsound too much for my taste.
Try to make all maps end in the same place, except for Final of course. The place where Easy ends seems perfect to me.

Final
Ignored because for Approval

Faust
00:10:373 (9,10,11,12) - looks it it comes directly after the slider, but there's a small break inbetween... erm. I dunno.

Hard
Fine

Normal
Geh, boring grid mod.
00:42:712 (4) - 1 grid down
01:20:045 (3) - 3 grids left
01:57:045 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up, 1 right

Easy
00:18:712 (1) - 1,5x spacing? rotate 00:17:379 (4) - a little bit upwards to even the spacing out.
00:21:379 (1) - and not it's too low D: nubs will click the next slider right away.
00:42:712 (1) - too close
01:25:379 (1) - end this at 01:28:045
01:32:045 (1) - remove NC
01:46:712 (2,3,4) - too close
01:48:045 (5) - ^
01:54:045 (1) - too far
Thank you.
narakucrimson
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Hi!

[General]

Full submit again; I downloaded the beatmap and only got the [Final] and [Faust] difficulties lol.

For instance, I'll only mod those two.


[Final]
Argh, I was going to complain about the way you NC'ed, but hell, it's for approval - it's ok.


[Faust]
  1. 37:373 (1) - Why the new combo? I'd remove it xD
  2. 41:206 (1) - Ok, maybe a new combo pattern here would look better, it's a real mess in the following seconds, imo. Try removing this new combo, and adding it to the current (3). Then, add a new combo on the new (5) - a slider -, and repeat this pattern repeteadly. Like this:
    SPOILER

  3. 43:706 (2) - Nazi, but this isn't correctly stacked under the end of (1).
  4. 1:32:039 ~ 1:33:039 - Ugh, this is too confusing for my brain. I couldn't understand it while playing. I feel like it doesn't flow correctly. I believe that when you can't tell which circle comes after which, something is wrong. Try checking this.
  5. 2:18:798 (SP) - First, start the spinner here (on the blue line) Second, I like how the finish sounds on the spinner. Consider using it.

Dat's all I've got. Have a star :O
Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Thank you.
Thank you but no Kudosu? :<
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Thank you.
Thank you but no Kudosu? :<
Sorry, I forgot about that!
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
I can only download Faust and Final for some reason o.o

[Final]
So awesome orz

[Faust]
00:10:373 (9) - looks like it'd begin an immediate stream, but it's for approval, so it's probably intentional
01:22:706 (1) - yeah, probably is intentional

so awesome


woo
Faust
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Faust

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I can only download Faust and Final for some reason o.o

[Final]
So awesome orz

[Faust]
00:10:373 (9) - looks like it'd begin an immediate stream, but it's for approval, so it's probably intentional
01:22:706 (1) - yeah, probably is intentional

so awesome


woo
Only Final is for Approval, mind you.

Here is the file with the corrections made, including James'.

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Faust].osu
Last edited by Faust , edited 3 times in total.
OzzyOzrock
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edit: [wtf double post]

will use this double-post


I misunderstood, "Final for approval" as in, it's the final version, going for approval. Lol. In which case, uh, yeah.
James2250
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-I would expect at least 1 of the difficulties going for rank to be mapped until the end of the mp3..I guess the score would be too much
-Every difficulties needs more hitsounds included, they sound very empty at the moment
-I only get 'Final' and 'Faust' when I download, make sure to do a full submit after this
-I agree that Normal having a higher slider speed than Hard isn't the best idea
-Not the best difficulty spread but Final is going for approval..so..ok
-I see a 1280x768 background, resize that to 1024x768 if possible
-Do the easier difficulties really need half the BPM of the others?

lizzenhb's Easy:
-Some more of the patterns could be aligned to make it look neater while playing but I will assume most of them aren't meant to be
-Only this difficulty with tick rate 2?
00:13:379 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern
00:15:379 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:045 (4,7) - stack?
01:03:379 (3,5) - align these?
01:17:379 (3) - new combo
01:32:045 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:712 (3,4) - align?

Normal:
00:09:045 (2,3,2) - would be nicer if patterns like this didn't overlap
00:36:712 - add some notes here to continue flow
01:22:045 (4) - add a note here?
01:32:712 (3,1) - avoid overlap
01:55:712 (4,5,1) - ^

kevincela's Hard:
Apart from hitsounds these difficulty looks pretty clean
01:13:379 (5) - lower from HP Bar?

Faust:
-The offset is different on this difficulty? Make sure they are all the same (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)
-Probably has more streams than the difficulty for approval~
00:10:039 (8,9) - spacing compared to other streams
00:16:039 (1) - you could go through and make sliders like these smoother if you wanted to
00:42:373 (1,1,2,1) - kind of random new combos
01:19:873 (14,1) - either spacing or add a note in between these
01:22:539 (16,1) - ^
01:29:373 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - odd spacing changes

Final:
-I know it is for approval but still has to have spacing that generally makes sense to players
00:26:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - pretty bad idea even for approval
00:48:212 (6,1) - space out more
01:02:379 (6) - extend to white tick
01:02:795 (7) - move to red tick
02:37:212 (7,8,1) - keep spacing equal
02:40:879 (3,4) - random jump?
02:55:212 (5) - silent notes here doesn't fit
03:09:295 (2,3) - on the same tick
03:14:712 (1,2,3,4) - snapping errors or spacing
03:19:212 (5,1,2) - spacing

In general the difficulties aren't too bad but they become very dull to listen to with almost no hitsounds, also going through and trying to make a few of the patterns neater would help
Needs some more improvements before I can star this~
Firo Prochainezo
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Yeah yeah, when I'll get back home I'll full submit it.
W4kwk
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star
-kevincela-
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-kevincela-

James2250 wrote:

kevincela's Hard:
Apart from hitsounds these difficulty looks pretty clean
01:13:379 (5) - lower from HP Bar? Done.
Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [kevincela's Hard].osu
Yuzeyun
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[Final]

03:09:295 (2,3) - Those are on the same tick orz
James found it too.

[Faust]

00:08:039 (1) - It is not snapped, it's 2ms late.
00:59:706 (4,5,6) - This will look better if it starts on the same (x;y) as
00:59:373 (3).

For some reason I have only Final and Faust too :<
(It happened one time with my own map orz)
Faust
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Faust

Gezoda wrote:

[Final]

03:09:295 (2,3) - Those are on the same tick orz
James found it too.

[Faust]

00:08:039 (1) - It is not snapped, it's 2ms late.
00:59:706 (4,5,6) - This will look better if it starts on the same (x;y) as
00:59:373 (3).

For some reason I have only Final and Faust too :<
(It happened one time with my own map orz)
Oh man. You have an option to come back and mod the rest of the difficulties after she gets back to this.
Yuzeyun
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Yuzeyun
I'll do it, (I'm lazy to DL one by one those levels D: )
and when I'm done with all the maps, I'll display 1/7 if she dod not get back before I finish. ;)

(Or the game does not recognize them orz)
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo
Full submit.
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo
This is strange, it doesn't show the difficulties even though I full submitted.
Lizzehb
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Lizzehb

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Easy
00:18:712 (1) - 1,5x spacing? rotate 00:17:379 (4) - a little bit upwards to even the spacing out. Done~
00:21:379 (1) - and not it's too low D: nubs will click the next slider right away. Done~
00:42:712 (1) - too close Done~
01:25:379 (1) - end this at 01:28:045 Done~
01:32:045 (1) - remove NC Done~
01:46:712 (2,3,4) - too close Done~
01:48:045 (5) - ^ Done~
01:54:045 (1) - too far Done~


Thank you~
Lizzehb
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Lizzehb

James2250 wrote:

My first BAT mod, let's go!
lizzenhb's Easy:
-Some more of the patterns could be aligned to make it look neater while playing but I will assume most of them aren't meant to be
-Only this difficulty with tick rate 2? Needs more ticks on the sliders since I can't put notes there. It sounds okay to the beat of the song. But I will change if it's unrankable.
00:13:379 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern Done~
00:15:379 (1) - remove new combo Done~
00:33:045 (4,7) - stack? Done~
01:03:379 (3,5) - align these? Done~
01:17:379 (3) - new combo Done~
01:32:045 (1) - remove new combo Done~
01:52:712 (3,4) - align? Done~
Thank you. :D

Also, updates.

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Lizzehb's Easy].osu
eveless
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eveless
[Faust]
00:49:295 (6) - nazi spacing between 567
01:00:045 (5) - It's better New combo it because of the sv changed
01:52:379 (4) - wrong spacing?
01:56:629 (8) - i doubt with it

[Final]
00:48:712 (1) - too clear to 00:48:212 (6)
01:00:712 (3) - let it more far than now , it likes crowded
01:02:379 (6,7) - i cant understand it sorry
01:44:212 (1,2,3,4) - so random...
01:45:295 (4) - different spacing between notes :<
01:51:379 (x) - add a note here
02:10:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think they're 1/6
02:40:712 (2,3,4) - 4 is a bit far

[Easy]
Sound needs more working

open AImod then you can find some spacing wrong , some is need New combo , likes
01:02:712 (2)
01:46:712 (2)
Faust
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Faust
Thank you all for your suggestions and feedback. ;)

Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Faust].osu
ziin
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[lizzehb] (didn't use your updated version)
nothing wrong with placement or difficulty, I just wish you put a little bit more effort into your sliders.
And of course you need hitsounds. Seriously.

[final]
01:44:212 (1,2,3,4) - not feeling the jump here.
02:17:212 (1,2,3) - strange set of jumps
03:14:795 (1,2,3,4) - I completely missed this until I looked closer at it. I think you need ar9 or hard rock to pull this off.
03:09:295 (3) - double check with aimod please.

[faust] (didn't use your updated version).
you could make your triples a tad bit prettier by using as smaller grid/not using one at all.
the only time I got confused was on the hide and seek notes here:
00:25:295 -
doesn't mean I can pass it though.

I think you need a normal. 1.37 stars to 4.8 stars for hard is way too big of a step. There's ony 4 difficulties right?
Claudia_old
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Claudia_old
hi why hasn't this been ranked yet
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo
Done.
Shana
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<3
Firo Prochainezo
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Go go 50+!
HakuNoKaemi
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Kudosu Starred :D
Hitomi May
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Hitomi May
:P
Claudia_old
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Claudia_old
no BAT posts yet

tsk tsk
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wooow
Firo Prochainezo
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Finally changed BG!
Hushu_old
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Normal:
Ehh, I don't know what other opinion is on this, but I think the combo placment is quite weird e.g...
0:10:712 - This is where the new combo should start, not on beat after and at 11:379.
0:12:712 - because the ending should normally bring a new combo but can't because it is a slider, repeat 4th slider and place a note 1/2 and 1/1 later~ Then start combo at 13:379 and remove that of note after.
0:15:712 - Make this circle and add circle 1/2 later, new combo it instead of nc after 7.
0:24:045 - about 3 combos after are only combos of 3. so start nc here not on note after
0:29:379 - There just has to be a new combo here~

Is not good that ending of a true combo and start of a new one are linked by a slider each time, so, if you would like to fix that in your diffs? It can possibly stay as it is, is your beatmap in the end and people seem to like it AND im not a pro so this might be not the right mod~ Good luck~
Firo Prochainezo
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Hushu wrote:

Normal:
Ehh, I don't know what other opinion is on this, but I think the combo placment is quite weird e.g...
0:10:712 - This is where the new combo should start, not on beat after and at 11:379.
0:12:712 - because the ending should normally bring a new combo but can't because it is a slider, repeat 4th slider and place a note 1/2 and 1/1 later~ Then start combo at 13:379 and remove that of note after.
0:15:712 - Make this circle and add circle 1/2 later, new combo it instead of nc after 7.
0:24:045 - about 3 combos after are only combos of 3. so start nc here not on note after
0:29:379 - There just has to be a new combo here~

Is not good that ending of a true combo and start of a new one are linked by a slider each time, so, if you would like to fix that in your diffs? It can possibly stay as it is, is your beatmap in the end and people seem to like it AND im not a pro so this might be not the right mod~ Good luck~
Sorry, your post wasn't helpful to me. Still, thank you for having a look and for the star. :)
Inamaru
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Go Go~ Firo
Star~
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Many things fixed by ircmod:
SPOILER
21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : il BG è enorme D:
21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 1,55MB
21.42 <Firo_Prochainezo> : E' .png lol
21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : puoi farlo jpg intorno al mezzo mega massimo? non ne vale la pena sennò :x
21.42 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Lo faccio .jpg?
21.43 <Card_N'FoRcE> : poi mi diceva cesc che la Final ha un preview point diverso
21.43 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si, e' vero. Fammela cambiare.
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : alla kevincela manca il BG lol :x
21.44 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Che strano, avevo fatto fullsubmit.
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : effettivamente non c'è
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : nella cartella ho solo il BG.png
21.45 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oh una cosa, mi dicono che la canzone è 07th expansion, perché la tua è "dai"?
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Perche' l'artista E' dai.
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non 07th Expansion.
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : quindi le altre ranked
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : hanno artista errato?
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Sono sbagliate lol
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si esatto.
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : un po' come se mettevo Namco Sound Team su Lode Stone, insomma
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Come tutte le canzoni Touhou.
21.47 <Card_N'FoRcE> : cioè?
21.47 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Le canzoni Touhou hanno l'artista errato.
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : IOSYS non e' un gruppo, e' un gruppo che rilascia canzoni
21.48 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ma intendi quelle originali che usano ZUN?
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : ma non vuol dire che sono sue
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : No sto parlando dei arrange.
21.48 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ma comunque.
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non pensavo che dava problemi il BG
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : visto che non c'e' SB
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : intendi il fatto che è png e pesa 1,5MB?
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si esatto.
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Pensavo che non fosse tanto di problema
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : visto che e' l'unica immagine nella beatmap
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : beh, dai, è davvero tanto :x
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non sono così pignolo, però è davvero un mega intero sprecato
21.50 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ok, allora lo cambio.
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : [Normal] 00:39:379 (1) - oooooooh come sono sicuro che ti romperanno le scatole!
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : sinceramente, considerando che
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo spinner non è troppo corto e c'è il buco prima
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : per me non ci sono problemi
21.52 <Card_N'FoRcE> : però mi pare corretto dirtelo
21.52 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene.
21.54 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Cambiato BG. Si vede, percaso?
21.54 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non adesso, devo riscaricare tutto
21.54 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo faccio appena finiamo
21.54 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene.
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : [Normal] 01:22:045 - aggiungi beat?
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : mi suona molto naturale
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo metterei sotto l'1
21.56 <Card_N'FoRcE> : se lo aggiungi, rimuovi la nuova combo a 01:22:379 (1) - e mettila a 01:22:712 (2) -
21.56 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Fatto.
21.57 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ok, passo alla Final
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oddio
21.58 <Firo_Prochainezo> : ?
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : le nuove combo come le hai messe? :x
21.58 <Firo_Prochainezo> : In che senso?
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : i primi 15 secondi circa
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : secondo me le nuove combo sono distribuite molto male D:
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : anzi
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : rivedendole
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : credo di aver capito la logica
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : però
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:09:379 (6) - anche qui allora
22.00 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:28:128 (16) - errore, questa non esiste nella musica, quindi cancella
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:30:045 (3,4) - come mai la variazione di spacing? Non vedo cose simili nei dintorni :x
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:32:712 (8) - nuova combo
22.01 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non lo so, mi piace quel stile di spacing. :<
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : il punto è
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : che è isolato
22.02 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non so, vedere cose così che non sono male ma isolate mi lascia una cosa di incompletezza
22.03 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:39:545 (4) - si è resnappato sul 1/12 (che non esiste O_O), correggi allungandolo sull' 1/8
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:41:045 (1,2,3) - un'altra cosa isolata, questo antispacing
22.04 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Avevo in mente di cambiare quello slider in un altra roba, comunque :3 quindi puoi anche ignorarlo.
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oh ok
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oppure nota dimenticata in 00:41:212 - ? :x
22.05 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Aggiunta.
22.06 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:48:545 - anche qui, nota? Queste tue interruzioni sembrano troppo casuali e isolateeee ;_;
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:50:045 (1) - questo lo ho trovato leggibile però C:
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:02:212 (4,5) - oh rieccolo :x
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm, 30 secondi di distacco
22.08 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non so, secondo me isolarli così disabitua il giocatore portandolo su tutto un altro ritmo di gioco
22.08 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ecco fatto, aggiunta un'altra nota.
22.09 <Firo_Prochainezo> : http://puu.sh/16mu
22.09 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene cosi'?
22.09 <Card_N'FoRcE> : sì
22.10 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tanto poi ricontrollo tutto quando aggiorni anche le guest
22.10 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:07:212 (1,2,3,4) - uhm, nuova combo sul 3, almeno. Altrimenti è davvero difficile capire che succede, mi ci è voluto un po'
22.11 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Hai ragione, e' troppo difficile da capire. Meglio che lo rifaccio.
22.12 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:45:212 (6,7,8) - non errore, ma un po' bruttina la disposizione, secondo me. Centrare il 7 tra 6 e 8 sarebbe meglio
22.12 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:47:379 - nota mancante?
22.13 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:53:962 (3) - 1/4 prima, per forza xD
22.14 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:59:379 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ricorda l'effetto torre di pisa: forse sarebbe meglio spostare un po' verso giù-destra
22.14 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:14:045 (9,1) - yeeeee il 3° xD
22.15 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si, l'ho sistemata prima che tu lo notassi lol
22.15 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lol
22.15 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:14:545 - nota sollo la fine dello slider? pensavo ci fosse prima di notare che era mancante
22.16 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:34:962 (5,6) - LOLWHYYYYYY
22.17 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:45:045 (2) - togli una ripetizione e aggiungi una nota a 02:45:379 - che sarà la nuova 1 dello stream, poi
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:46:212 (10) - starebbe meglio al posto di 02:46:045 (8) -
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e con una nuova combo
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : poi correggi lo stream rimettendo i beat assenti, togli la combo da 02:46:545 (1) - e mettila a 02:46:712 (3) -
22.19 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:47:962 (8) - tolgi il finish, aggiungi un beat a 02:48:045 - e metti il Finish lì
22.19 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e con questo lo stream è corretto
22.20 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Avevo in mente di rifare questo stream, mi sembra troppo disordinato >_<;
22.20 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Era solamente che nessuno l'aveva notato allora pensavo che non dava cosi' tanto problema come pensavo io.
22.20 <Card_N'FoRcE> : per gli stream ci vuole una certa logica
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : solo che un sacco di gente non ci bada >_>
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tipo spesso è ideale fare quegli slider che rimbalzano all'inizio della stanza (sulla tacca bianca alta)
22.21 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Sto cercando di imparare gli stream alla Mystearica e un pochino ci sto riuscendo, ma questo era solamente un brutto esempio.
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : che sono moooolto intuitivi e al 95% seguono di sicuro qualcosa di buono
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non conosco molto le mappe della Myst, quindi non so dirti
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:55:254 - non ti passeranno MAI questo beat silenziato
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : se proprio non vuoi che si senta
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : metti almeno una tacchetta di volume
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ma comunque lo trovo davvero strambo anche io
22.23 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:57:879 (2,3,4) - omg what xD
22.23 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Cosa, beat silenziato?
22.23 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Che strano lol.
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 03:20:129 (1) - tecnicamente dovresti finirlo a 03:21:379 - :x
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e per la Final è tutto
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tu correggi, intanto finisco i modding
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e posto

Modding for guest diffs:

- Lizzehb's Easy:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:46:712 (2,3,4) - why the sudden change in spacing? °°
    02:17:379 (2,3,4) - kinda weird change of rhythm between 2 and 3, make a slider for these two instead?
- kevincela's Hard:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Wow I'm impressed. Simple diff yet so fitting and fun to play, great job!
    Really fun for me with HardRock :3
- Faust:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Faust's what? xD
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    Can you please check for streams like 01:03:212 (3,4,5)? While playing i noticed the tiny difference of spacing between the beats that make the stream, and it's a real pity to see something like this when the streams have a really nice flow rhythm-wise
    02:18:795 (1) - make this end at 02:21:379 ?
Final had some major things to fix, so I'll hold my star for the moment.
Lizzehb
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Lizzehb's Easy:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:46:712 (2,3,4) - why the sudden change in spacing? °° Orz, didn't see that. Changed.
    02:17:379 (2,3,4) - kinda weird change of rhythm between 2 and 3, make a slider for these two instead? That does look/sound strange! Changed.
Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Lizzehb's Easy].osu
Faust
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Download: dai - Final Answer (Firo Prochainezo) [Faust].osu
Firo Prochainezo
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Goodie. :>
Beren
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Card N'FoRcE
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Sorry for the delay of rechecking, but the training for the tournament drained a lot of the time i spend in osu!.

Anyway, muuuuuch better now :3

Some last little considerations and we'll be ready to go:

- Faust:
  • 01:30:045 (14) - new combo? You change the pattern to a new one with an increasing spacing and it will also fix the combo going up to 17 :3
- Final:
  • 00:18:712 (5,6) - really weird. How about this? (7 is stacked under 6):
    SPOILER
    00:28:128 (16) - i remember i told you that this should be removed :<
    00:35:212 (1) - remove new combo o_o
    01:45:379 (7) - why didn't you move this as i told you? I don't see any reason to keep it like that, unless you can give me one :<
    01:51:045 (7,8,9,10,11) - kinda bad looking
    02:28:712 (1) - 02:56:712 (1) - remove new combo?
    03:02:295 (5,1) - 03:04:045 (1,2,3,4) - 03:05:045 (1,2,3,4) - ???
    03:13:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - unintuitive
    03:20:129 (7,8,9) - same as 00:28:128 (16), i don't hear anything they can follow...
So yeah, Final still needs more work, the other difficulties are good.
If you have any questions about how to improve it, catch me on irc and I'll help you if i'm not hella busy with training for the tournament.
jnkinsu
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good!
star~
Shiirn
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Shiirn
whattheheckididn'tstarthisyet?


07th expansion, good friend, good map, obligatory STARRRR
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[Final]
00:26:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) WHAT IS THIS
WHAT IS THIS???
WHAAAT IIIS THIIIS??????
WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS?
WHAT IS THIS?????????????????

Star
Firo Prochainezo
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SapphireGhost wrote:

[Final]
00:26:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) WHAT IS THIS
WHAT IS THIS???
WHAAAT IIIS THIIIS??????
WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS?
WHAT IS THIS?????????????????
Your mom.
AppleSense
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I like this song ~ ☆
Claudia_old
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Tsk, why hasn't anybody come back to look at this map?

I am disappointed.
Faust
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Bump because bored.

HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY
Firo Prochainezo
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Faust wrote:

Bump because bored.

HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY
Jeez, I'll try. :\
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I love you both. Have my children.

starstarstar
Firo Prochainezo
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Bump
Claudia_old
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Claudia_old
Unloved map is unloved.

Somebody come and rank this.
Card N'FoRcE
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E-Hooker wrote:

Tsk, why hasn't anybody come back to look at this map?
I am disappointed.
Because Firo is a tsundere and she didn't tell me she fixed :<

This will probably be my last recheck. Also, since it's been quite a bunch of time since last recheck, i guess something new will pop out:

- Lizzehb's Easy:
  1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    No hitsounds D:
- Faust:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:10:045 (8,9) - kinda confusing, it may seem a 1/4 instead of a 1/2
    01:49:295 - not having a beat here is REALLY cruel and confusing.
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:24:045 (5,6) - there's not way to read this as a 1/2 due to the previous patterns.
Other than that, sorry but i have to give up.
I just can't understand "Final" and i can't find a good way to mod it without being really drastic and that's not my style.

If you'll need specific opinions for some pattern i'll gladily help you, but i just can't understand the logic of that difficulty therefore I'm not able to mod it.
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star- 8-)
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☆ * v*
Firo Prochainezo
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Planning on remapping Final. :V
Claudia_old
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YEAH YOU GO GIRL GO.

july 2nd: GIRL GET THIS RANKED GIRL
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